TaaRey FF : Love In ZombieLand Chptr4 uptd..page29 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AndyTaarey

inspired by Go Goa Gone haa...πŸ˜†

Yaar mere bichare Goa ko kahi nahi chodha!!
But yet m so excited for ur update!!! High hopes!!! Its gonna be a fun ride... supa excited!!
Jaldi update karooo!!!
And Shivam?? hez playin Boris role oh wat??πŸ˜†
Well.m really curious to know hw this story will proceed!!


:D Yes,..Inspired By Go Goa Gone...(y) ;) :)
nd u live in Goa ? nd it won't be same ...as the movie...
nd yes shivam is Boris here :D :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Hello ⭐️ Thank u so much for such a good response ⭐️ m here with first update...nd ya,..some of u told me to add swayam,..so i have to,..:) so look at his character please ! :)

Swayam Shekhawat :


Very sweet,innocent type boy,..but tough sometimes,...Reys nd Vicky's BFF...Taani's Cousin,...but he lives away from hi family,...in rental cottage,...will join all,..in the goa trip !

Chapter 1 :
*Its About when,..Rey,vicky nd swayam r already in goa,...they reached today morning,...while the girls,..I.e Taani,Sharon,neha will land to goa,...Now,...*

The Soft Breeze Was flowing,..The Huge Tides were clashing with the sand again nd again,..all people were taking the sun bath,..peacefully nd alll the surroundings were silent,..The Crabs were Taking Steps,..on the hot sand by digging the land dot by dot !


But When He made enty on the beach,...All the girls got up from the chairs,...nd they all were unable to move their eyes from his hot shirtless body,...all the sand paricles,..near by were mor hotter by now,...The Heat on the beach got increased,..with his each step,


(Rey's Body πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† )

..when some jealous boy spoke...
Vicky : Kya Yar ! Yahan bhi sab ladkiya tuje hi dekh rahi h,..:( Humara kya hoga...:/
Rey : πŸ˜† Ab isme me kya kru yr ! Me hu hi itna sexy,..πŸ˜‰
Swayam : Can u guys shut up ! Ab ye batao k raat ka kya plan h ?
(one girl was passing from near by,..when she went near Rey,..)
Girl : Hey Handsome,...what r u doing tonight ?
R : Nothing great Darling ? How can i help ! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
Girl : Lets spend a night toghether..!
R : Sure Beb !,..πŸ˜ƒ Meet me today night at 11:30 pm,..at X-X-X Hotel !
Girl : Ok,..sweetie ! Bye,..c u :*
R ; Le swayam,..mera to aaj raat ka plan ban gya !πŸ˜† :D
V : Huhh -_- ab humara kya swayam ?
Sw : :/ Dekhte h,..abhi k liye to tum hotel chalo please,...
V nd R ; Ok,..Lets Go ...

At The Hotel :
R : M just tired of that sun bath,..can we swim here ,..for some time,..please !
V : Sidha Bol na,..Tujhe Ladkiyon ko apni taraf attract krna h !
R : Come on vicky !,...its nothing like,,.Rey K pass 1000+ girls h 😎 i just want some refreshment,..nd also yahan ko mere type ki nhi h,..all r ugly cheeks :/
V : :o (he stood in an O shape mouth seeing behind rey,..)
R : Abe Kya hua ?
V : Wo dekh,..:O (he pointed finger toward HER,.)

* Her Hotness Made all the boys at hotel go wild,...Their Eyes,..were freezed at her,..with her every soft step,..the land was getting hotter nd hotter,...every boy was looking at her with bed intensity,...all girls were jealous seeing her,..hotness,..Taani Came In Bikini for the swim,..nd her every action had made evry Boy Go Wild,...*




(Taani's Dress nd actions :P ;) )

R : OMG ! Hottiieee !!!
Sw : Taani ! :O Yahan ?
R : Taani ? is that her name ? wah swayam,..tu sirf dikhne me sidha h..itni jaldi ladki k baare me pta kr diya ,...!
Sw : Stupid,..wo meri behen h ,..!
V : Shittt !!
Sw ; what ?
V : Nothing,..
R : what ? ur sis ? she is super hot,..
Sw : Bustard,..control ur tongue,..
R : shut up,..she is grown up now,..bachpan me jab tere ghr aata tha,..tab to ye bahut chhoti or ajeeb thi,..i never thought that she will be so sexy,...wow ! Hotneesss :*
Sw : Shut Up Rey !,..dont u dare to,..she is innocent,..!
R : we will see that how innocent is she,..!
V : shut up rey,..wo swayam ki behen h,..!
R : swayam ki h na humari to nhi na,..:* HOT kitni h dekh to zara..MMuuhaaa :*
(swayam went to Taani ! )
Sw : Xcuse me !
T : (she turned to him ) Yes,..(after a sec ) Bhaii ⭐️ aap yaha ? wow ! what a surprise,..!
Sw : Yes,..me yahan,..waise tum yaha kya kr rhi ho ? i mean kiske sath aayi ho,..!
T (she pointed her finger to a girl ,..she was sharon,..swayam kept looking at her for 5 mins ) : Oh Hello ! Kahan Kho Gye,..meri frnd itni achhi h kya ?
Sw : kya ?
T : Kuchh nhi ! πŸ˜† To Bhai,..ap yahin ruke huye h,...?
Sw : Yes,..😊
T : Great Then it will be fun !
Sw : Hm,..aao na me tumhe apne friends se milwata hu...
(Taani wore her coat,..nd went to boys )
Sw : Vicky,..ye h taani,..Taani, ye h vicky,.!
T : Hello Vicky ! 😊
V : Hello Taani 😊
Sw : Nd he is Rey,..Rey, she is Taani !
R : Hello Beautiful Lady,..(forwarded his hand for shake )
T : Hello Rey,..(shaked his hand with her :) )
T : Hey girls,..(to neha nd sharon ) yaha aao...
(they both came nd taani introduced the duo to all -_- )
Sh : Guys u know aaj raat ko party h,...couple dance,..food nd much fun..
V: wow thtz great !
R : so, for couple dances we will need couples,.right ?
All : Yes,..
R : so swayam...tum sharon k saath,..nd me,..
V : Taani k saath,..πŸ˜†
R : yes,..nd u
N : mere sath 😳
R : Ok,..all set,..But sharon where is the party,..in the hotel itself,..!
Sh : There,..( she pointed her finger to a horendous silent island )
T : what ? there ? no way,..me nhi chalungi,..mujhe daar lagta h !..
R : Tab To Or Bhi maza ayega...πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ 😳 !
T : what ? did u spoke something ?
R : No,..i haven't !
T : Ok o.O !
Sw : O.o Rey,.thtz too much,..can we have a word,..!
R : Sure,...
( they went in the corner )
Sw : Rey,.what is this ? tu mera dost h isliye me kuchh nhi bol rha hu,...but behave sincerely with my sister,...
R ; swayam please ! i cant control myself,..she is so hot ! ..I love her..
Sw : what ? Love n u ? r u out of ur mind ! i know u ...what do u do with the girls u like,...!
R : Ya,..but i wont do liike that with ur sister,..please ?
Sw : no,..or ab tune aisa kiya na to i will kill u !,..watch my words "KILL"
R : Ok,...πŸ˜•
(At evening they hired a boat,..nd reached that island..)
V : wowww what a party,..
Sh : Fantastic,..
N : yes,..bahut maza ayega πŸ˜ƒ !
Sw : Lest Go guys,..?
T : Bhai,..muje daar lag rha h ! πŸ˜’ 😭
R : Daaro Mat ,..Me Hu na,..πŸ˜‰ ( he held her hand in his )
T : (slowly ) : what r u doing ? bhai ne dekh liya to he will kill u,...leave my hand ! 😑 !
R : Hey Gorgeous,..Chill Ok,..Tumhara bhai ka sara dyaan sharon me h,..LOL ! nd also, Ain't that bad guy,...Trust me,.nd u r lucky to have a guy like me...who held ur hand..otherwise 1000s o girls r craving to touch me...😎 !
T : whatever,,,Leave my hand..
R : as u wish darling...!


Precap : Next Morning !
One Russian : imao kahhswdgjhdc lieowjedjdss (people r turning into zombies )
V : abe, ye kya bol rha h ?
R Pta nhi,...
Sh : Guys,..chill nd try to understand what he saying...!
R ( to russian ) : English please..
Russian : Hnugds thaydhedfhcchn ( People r turning into zombies )
(suddenly 3 zombies came n russian ran to kill them ,..but he failed nd that 3 zombies..eaten that russian 😲 😲 nd they 3 took a step forward..towards the group...i.e our d3 cast..)


Taani : Aoooaaanooo >_< Bhaiii 😭 😭 😭 😭😭😭 Bachaaaoo !


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i know its a boring nd short update,..but introduction to all characters was necessary ..nd how is the precap ! 😈 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† hahaa...please like nd comment Thank u :D

Edited by Karan_TaaRey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
what a concept mind blowing... loved it continue soon
lovelysweet thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Amazing very different update soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
awesome...
nd karan pls update jaldi...
was waiting a lot fr this!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
awesome... and precap is scary... plzzz update soon... thanks for the pm...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Omg Rey is a conceded womanizer lol, he is too much
Taani entry was nice and Swayam always the protected brother so sweet, love his warning to Rey lol. And him saying he is in love omg that's a joke lol. Aww Taani is scared and ppl during into zombies omg its scary. Karen amazing intro plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice intro of all d charactrs...
again possessv bhai swayam on action...
wow... too gud...
precap s really scary...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Wow Karan...loved it...!!!!
Loved Swayam's warning to Rey...πŸ˜†
People turning zombies...😲
[I'll make a point to never read at night warna nightmares hongeπŸ˜†]
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
hey it was nt at all boring n really luvd d concept its amazing πŸ‘πŸΌ continue soon n do pm me really eager to read d nxt part πŸ˜ƒ

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