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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG yess MAAN is gonna come :)
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Part – 22

It's festival time at Geet's college……

Geet is incharge of computer departments stall……

They have some fun games & some quiz….

Maan comes…..

It's so nice visiting college after such a long break…..

As he is the popular face of his batch most of the juniors are fond of him…..

Specially they like his romeo avatar….

Jaise seconds mein ladhkiyon ko patatha….

They want to learn that art from him….

This year too they have a hot chick….

She is in the computer dept…..

She is Geet's junior……..

Sare ladhke usse baat karna chahathe hai…..

They just want to hang out with her atleast once….

She is so lovable & dreamy…..hare hummare Pari…..

She is the one helping Geet at the stall….

The boys tell Maan about the new girl in the campus….

Maan too is eager to see her….

Sab Pari se milnne jaathe….

Maan is surprised to see Geet with her…

Ye toh aur bhi aasaan ho gaya….

Issi bahanne Geet ko bhi ched saktha….

Geet ke saath aaise masthi karkke kitne din ho gaye hai….

Maan ki sharaarat shuru hothi….

Maan goes to meet them….

Geet is pleasantly surprised to see him….

Maan Geet ki taraf dekhtha hi nahi…

He just keeps staring at Pari….

Hare ye yahan? Mujhe koi kabar bhi nahi?

Geet: Maan?

Maan: hare Geet, tum?

Geet: kya? Aapne mujhe dekha nahi?

Maan: sorry Geet, itne smart ladhki ke samne toh tum dikhthi hi nahi

Geet: kya?

Maan: hi, may I know your good name please

Pari instantly likes Maan….

Pari: I'm Pari

She shakes hands with him…..

Maan: you look like an Angel, tummare parents ne tumme sahi naam hi diye hai, Pari

Pari: thanks

Geet bas dekhthi hi rehthi…..

Ye yahan mujhse milnne nahi aaye?

Geet: haan, Babaji ye teek nahi hai

Maan: Geet tumne kuch kaha?

Geet: nahi, ab aapko mere aawaaz bhi nahi sunayi degi

Maan: that's right

Geet gets angry…..

Maan: coffee?

Pari: sure

Maan: toh Geet, hum chalte hai

Pari: excuse me

Geet: lekhin Pari, tumme yahan rehna haina?

Pari: I'm sure you can manage this Geet

Geet: kya?

Maan: lets go

Maan turns back & winks……..

Geet is very jealous….

All the boys are heart broken……

Hum yahan kitne din se wait kar rahe hai…

Ye Maan ko dekho ek hi din mein Pari ke saath coffee?

They come back after a few minutes….

Geet is still angry……

Maan: toh Pari, mujhe dher ho rahi hai, mein chaltha hoon

Pari: hare, itne jaldhi?

Maan: haan, I have to catch the evening plane

Parii: wow you are so cool

Maan: bye

Pari: Maan

Geet: kya? Maan?

Maan: haan

Pari: phir kab aayenge?

Maan: we will meet soon

Pari: aapka number

Maan: Geet ke paas hai

Pari: kya?

Maan: hare mein toh bhool hi gaya, meet my girlfriend Geet

Geet: kya? Mein kissiki girlfriend nahi hoon

Maan: chalo koi baat nahi, ye meri girlfriend nahi hai, mein isska boyfriend hoon, ab teek haina?

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geet aaisa hi chaltha toh mujhe koi aur GF doondhne padegi, jaise Pari

Pari: I'm waiting

Geet: kya?

Maan: isse kuch seekhlo, Pari takecare

Maan looka at Geet……

Pari: my pleasure

Maan: Geet, mein chaltha hoon

Geet: abhi?

Maan: mein Annie se milnne jaa raha hoon

Pari enjoys this very much….

Geet ka boyfriend? Woh bhi Maan Singh Khurana? How lucky?

Geet ab wahan kaise rukhegi?

Woh bhi Annie se milnne chale jaathi….

Maan Annie se baatein kartha….

Geet waits for him……

Annie: toh teek hai bhai, mein chalthi hoon

Geet chup chupkke Maan ko hi dekhthe rehthi….

She is hiding behind the tree……

Annie leaves…

Maan has seen her….Maan usska haath pakadkke bahar keenchtha….

Maan: yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: woh Annie se milnne aayi thi

Maan: yahan pedh ke peeche?

Geet: aap baat kar rahe the, toh?

Maan: toh? Tum chup chupkke hummare baat sun rahi thi

Geet: nahi

Maan: achcha chalo mere saath

Geet: kahan?

Geet: itne dhoor aahi gayi ho toh chalo saath mein lunch karthe hai

Geet: nahi

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya haha? Chalo mere saath

Maan raises his voice…..

Geet: hmm

They go out & have lunch…..

Aaisa hi Geet Maan se dhoor rehke bhi bahut kareeb aagayi….

Ab toh donno ko ye ehsaas ho gaya ki ye ek doosre ke bina nahi reh sakthe….

Par ye Geet issko khulke nahi bhol pathi….

Hamesha ki tarah Maan Geet ke aankhen padkke sab ko jaanletha……

He just knows his Geet…..

Jo bhi baat ho apne dil mein hi rakhthi…..

Geet is very happy……

Maan wapas chale jaatha……..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 22
awesome dear...
yeh Maan bhi na...
hope one day Geet makes him feel so J...
and then he stops all this naughty things...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gud one
Maan is annoying Geet that is too funny
Waiting fr next update
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Part – 23

Exams are over….back to Hoshiarpur….

Maan is already there…..

He comes to pick them up from the station….

Maan is eagerly waiting for this…..

Aaise mokke pe hi ab Geet se thoda kuch baatein kar saktha….

Annie saath hai…..…par woh abhi bachi hai…..

Geet Maan se baat kar karkke thoda mature ho gayi hai…..

Ghar pe toh Maan ko ek ajnabi ki tarah dekhthi….

She is afraid her secret would come out in front of her family….

Specially her mother….

She still has a lot to study….

This interest in Maan may annoy Ranno…..

Agar aaisa kuch ho jaatha toh Ranno Geet ke padayi katam karkke ussko bhi shadhi karkke kahin dhoor bhejdegi……

On the way…..

Annie keeps on chatting….

But Geet is very quiet……

Maan: Annie, tummari friend ko aaj kya ho gaya? Woh itni chup kyun hai?

Annie: woh toh mein kehna hi bhool gayi, bhai Geet

Geet: Annie…..chup

Geet closes her mouth…..

Geet: tum kuch nahi kahogi, samji

Maan: ye kya ho raha hai?

Geet: kuch nahi, sab teek hai

Maan looks at Geet….

She tries to look outside……

Maan: Geeet

Geet: aaise koi baat nahi hai, mein teek hoon

Maan: Annie tummari friend toh hamesha joot hi bolthi

Geet: kya?

Maan: Annie, tum kaho, kya baat hai?

Annie: bhai Geet ki bracelet kho gayi

Maan: kya?

Annie: haan bhai, woh hum donno college join karne ka samay ek hi jaise khareeda thana, aap bhi aaye the, yaad haina?

Maan: haan, mujhe yaad hai, tum toh zidd karkke waise hi lekhe aayi

Annie: ye dekho, same to same, just like this

Annie shows her bracelet….

Maan: toh kya hua? Naya kareedh lena, ab toh isse bhi latest designs aagaye hai

Annie: par Ranno aunty Geet ko daantegi

Maan starts to laugh…..

Maan: hare Geet, tum abhi bachi nahi ho, tum major ban gayi ho, India ki head ko chunne ki haq bhi milgayi, abhi bhi tum apne ghar ke head se darthi?

Annie: bhai, mazak mat karo, Geet pehle hi pareshaan hai

Maan: teri friend haina, tumme hi madat karna chahiye

Annie: mein? Kaise?

Maan: dum donno ko toh akal hi kam hai, patha nahi college mein kaise sambalthe ho

Annie: bhai ye aap keh rahe ho?

Maan: chodo woh baat, Annie tum apna bracelet Geet ko dedo, mein tumme naya khareedhkke detha hoon

Geet: nahi, mujhe nahi chahiye

Annie: haan Geet, maa ko toh Maan bhai sambal sakthe, haina bhai?

Maan: haan

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geet apne friend se lenne mein kya problem hai?

Geet: aaaise kaise ? nahi, ye teek nahi hai

Maan: Geet, meinne pichle do saal se tummare b'day pe koi bhi gift nahi diya haina? samjo yahi tummari b'day gift hai

Geet: par last b'day pe toh aapne…………..Geet stops…….

Usskke aage kuch nahi keh payi…….

Maan ko bhi Geet ki first year b'day yaad aathi…….woh pappiwali….

Maan: toh woh gift tumme abhi bhi yaad hai? Meinne socha tumme pasand nahi aayi

Maan looks at her ……..

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh pasand aayi

Maan smiles……

Geet blushes…..Maan looks at her lips….

Geet bows her head…..

Annie ko kuch samaj mein nahi aaya….

Ye donno kya baat kar rahe hai?

Geet feels better now…

Now she can manage Ranno…..

Sam hothi toh wahi aaise mokke pe Geet ko bachathi….

Ab Geet ko hi sambalna haina?

Maan ke paas hone se Geet ka confidence badjaatha….

Patha nahi kyun?

Shayad Geet ko lagtha ki someone is there for her……

Maan has always been special…..haina?

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love it please continue soon
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part 23
awesome part...
lovely...
cont soon dear...
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part 22 n 23
awesome updates...
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Part - 24

Maan iss bar kuch din rukhnewala hai……

Abhi se apne papa se apne kudh ka business shuru karne ki batein karthe rehtha…..

Mr.Khurana kehthe hai ki ab ussko aur experience ki zaroorat hai…..

Kyunke Mr.Khurana bhi business ke barein mein zyada kuch nahi jaanthe….

Kehthe hai ki business bahut bada risky mamla hai…..

Achche se achche bhi haar jaathe….

Ye toh mamooli log hai…..bas apne khethi se hi kush hai….

Lekhin agar Maan ko business hi karna hai toh Mr.Khurana is ready to support him…..par pehle Annie ki shadhi karwathe hai, phir koi bhi pareshaani hogi toh bhi sambal sakthe….

Usskke pehle toh Mr.Khurana kuch nahi kar sakhte……

Beti ki shadhi hi sabse badi zameendari hothi hai, haina?

Maan ko bhi yahi teek lagtha, waise woh bhi abhi abhi kaam seekhne laga hai….

Thoda time lagega hi…….he just wants his father to make arrangements for the money that he might require later…..

Maan apne rishtedaron se bhi isske barein mein baat kartha…..

Sab Maan ke enthusiasm ko dekhkke bahut kush hothe hai, aad they are ready to help him….

Maan toh Geet ko apne plans ke barein mein bathana chahatha….

Lekhin yahan toh Geet se milna bahut mushkil lagtha…..

Kabhi kabhi Geet samne aathi toh bhi koi baat nahi karthi….

Agar Maan yahan bhi shuru hotha toh kamakaam Ranno pereshaan ho jayegi….

Aur agla saal Geet ko akhele hi college jaana hoga…

Ab buaji Annie ke shadhi karwana chahathi hai….

Jab dekho Ranno ke saath kissi na kissi ladhke ke barein mein hi batein karthi hai…

Jaise shadhi ke alawa ladhkiyon ki zindagi mein aur koi bhi kaam nahi hotha?

Geet ko ye sab pasand nahi hai, woh chahe Maan se shadhi karna chahathi, lekhin woh housewife bankke ghar mein beitnewali nahi hai…..

Maan bhi aaisa nahi chahega?

Geet ko shak hotha, agar shadhi ke badh Maan nahi mantha toh?

Maan se abhi baat bhi nahi kar sakthi, par Maan Geet ke baat ko kaise nahi manega, aajtak aaisa kabhi hua hai kya?

Geet sochne lagi, jahan tak ussko yaad hai, Geet ne hi har bar Maan ke baat ko maana hai, aur Geet ne kabhi bhi Maan se zyada batein nahi kiya hai, ab Maan ko kaise patha chalega ki ye kya chahathi? Pehle Maan ko yahi confusion hai ki ye Geet Maan ko chahathi bhi hai ya nahi, par itna toh jaantha hai ki woh abhi aage padna chahathi hai, Maan is also happy with that…..

Maan pehle jaise Geet ko terrace pe lekhe jaatha …….

Geet: ye kya kar rahe ho? abhi hum bache nahi hai

Maan: toh?

Geet: toh, sab kya sochenge?

Maan: kya sochenge?

Geet: hummare barein mein bahut bhura sochenge

Maan: aaisa tum sochthi hogi, tum itna drama karthi toh zaroor sabko shak ho jayega

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tum bas pehle ke tarah mere saath batein karo aur paas aakke

Maan gets near……

Geet steps back…..

Geet: paas aakke?

Maan: mera seva karo

Geet: seva?

Maan: haan, tabhi toh sabko lagega ki hummare beech mein sab kuch teek hai

Geet : nahi nahi, ab aap bahut badal gaye ho, pehle jaise nahi rahe, jab dekho shararat karthe rehthe ho, mujhe bahut dar lagtha

Maan: toh ab tumme mere saath akhele rehne mein dar lagtha hai, mujhpe barosa nahi hai?

Geet: aaisa nahi hai

Maan: toh phir kaisa hai?

Maan gets angry…..he stares her….

Geet: ab meinne kya kiya?

Maan: Geet, hum chote bache nahi hai, bade ho gaye hai, ab toh hummari shadhi ka umar bhi ho gaya hai, samji tum?

Geet: toh?

Maan: ab mein bas tumse apne business ke barein mein baat karna chahatha hoon

Geet: pehle mere baat suno

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, mein aapki seva karnewali nahi hoon, samje, mein bhi kaam karna chahthi hoon

Maan: shadhi ke baad

Geet: haan

Maan: hummari shadhi ke badh

Geet: nahi, meri shadhi ke badh

Maan: toh mujhe kyun batha rahi ho? apne maa se kaho ki koi aaisa ladhka dhoonde jo tumme shadhi ke badh kaam karne detha ho

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, woh tere liye ladhka dhonndh rahi hai

Geet: mere liye?

Maan: tujhe toh kuch bhi patha nahi hotha?

Geet bahut pareshaan ho jaathi…..Maan se toh kabhi bhi baat kar sakthi, pehle Ranno ko rokhna padega, haina babaji?

Geet wahan se bhaag jaathi….

Maan: Geet, mere baat toh suno

Maan ne apne pheron pe kudh hi gulati mardhi…..

Ye ladhki ko koi samjao, pyaar karna toh dhoor ki baat hai, pehle aaram se batein toh karthi…..lekhin jab dekho koi na koi bahane banakke aaise bhaagthe rehthi…..

Yahan bhaagnne se behthar Olympics mein bhaagthi toh India ko ek do medal miljaatha….

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yeh maan kab sudhrega jab dekho geet ko darata rehta hai bechari kya karti bhagne ki alawa. Maan babu jaldi apni dil ki baat bol warna geet ki shadi kisi aur se hojayegi

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