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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

the best part of ur FF's is the characters look very real to the daily life

i can claim i hv a met a khushi like the one in this FF as well as the Khushi in ur other SS..

and ya such kind of arnav also does exist.

the dialogues u hv used for Khushi are very much the ones we talk normally.

Her annoyance, her mocking at others is so relatable to daily life

so well done...

But wud certainly like to see ur story writing to experiment.

u tried Uncoventional characters in ur stories..

so ahead will wait to see if u write the general path of this forum that is

arrogant, cassanova ASR and the simle, principled ,cute Khushi in stories of intense love -hate.

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BubblySanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Update soon...Want more of these Rabba ve's now... :)

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BubblySanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

i demand an update right now !!!!
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BubblySanaya

@BubblySanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Arre yar...wen are you gonna update?

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BubblySanaya

@BubblySanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

😭
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You very well know y !!!!

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BubblySanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Unable to send PM to you.

it says your inbox size limit has exceeded !!!!

Is all ok with you health wise? i hope so... :)

y are you delaying the update so much?

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

That was awesome update...👏

The scene where Khushi runs to Arnav reminds me of the scene in the show...You have described it so beautifully...

I didn't think that Khushi will open up to Arnav so soon...n the start of the update with Arnav's perspective of his life was a bit sad though...

Thnx for the PM and do continue soon !!!!🤗

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

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Edit:

What a fantastic update! I loved the fact that you went into Arnav's past. It really explained so much about him, his values, his personality and what drives him.

One of my favorite scenes from the show was the "Hospital Hug" and I loved reading it in your update. I'm glad you wrote about Arnav's feelings when Khushi came into his arms, it really reminded me of how Barun displayed just those thoughts with his expressions.

This was so touching, very unexpected and I truly appreciate the length of it.

Really looking forward to seeing how these two manage their relationship after undergoing such a difficult situation.

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago