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Thank you friends for the lovely comments. As most of you were in favor of songs I will continue them. For this update I have changed the song selection and I hope you will like it as well.

Anu – I did not mind your comment in fact welcome it. Sometimes, I get so lost in the story that I myself loose track so thanks to friends like you to bring me back. I maybe went a little too slow in building the bond between Meera-Anu with Maan-Geet as it will continue to play an important role in their lives. But now the direction is going to change and we are finally moving towards Geet's past and confrontation. Do let me know if you again feel this way as truly speaking sometimes as a writer, even we loose track.

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Chapter 39 – Tu Hi Mera

"Geet?"

Maan shook her lightly. She looked at him and Maan worried seeing her very pale suddenly.

"Kya hua Geet?"

She grabbed his hand with force and pulled him inside the lane – "We have to go Sir….yahan se chaliye"

"Lekin bangles aur abhi samaan"

"Sir..please…I don't have time to reply now…please let's go quickly."

Maan wasn't sure about what happened but she definitely looked quite shaken up. He just nodded and walked towards the car.

Suddenly Geet halted and her breath became uneven. Maan saw her staring at a group of three men who were now pointing at them.

Maan almost winced as her hold tightened and nails dug on his arm.

She just turned around and was scared to see two more men glaring at her from behind.

Maan heard a faint "Veerji" before she hauled herself and him in the passing auto and asked him to drive fast on the main road.

"What's going on Geet and who were those men and why are we running like this. Trust me and let me call police. We can handle this sensibly."

Geet was too distraught to answer him so he grabbed her shoulder and shook her.

"Geet…please say something and control yourself. Tum akeli nahi ho…I am there with you."

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Link – http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nG646BsP35M

Tere ishq mein dooba rahe din-raat yunhi sada
Mere khwaab se aankhein teri ek pal naa hoye juda
Mera naam tu haathon pe apne likhe baar haan
Aye kaash ke aisa bhi ek din laaye woh Khuda

Tu hi mera mera mera


She looked at him with wide eyes. What had she done? She had put him also in danger along with herself. What if they harmed him?

"No…."

"What?"

"No…you have to go sir…Bhaiya auto rokiye…Sir aap jaiye…I will manage."

"What? Are you mad? No…I am not going anywhere leaving you alone."

"Sir…aap samajhte kyon nahi"

"Geet, I am not going and that is final…bhaiya, you drive. Now tell me what is going on."

"Sir woh"

Suddenly a car bumped their auto from behind. Auto stopped and the same five men whom Maan had seen in the market came out from the car. One of them waived a knife at the auto driver who ran away leaving behind his auto in fear.

Maan looked around and noticed they were on the outer ring road and near ridge forest. Traffic was almost negligible in this part of Delhi suburban area as forest land started from here.

"Geet….kahan tak bachegi. Phone kar diya hai Brij ko…aata hi hoga woh. Pure pind ka naam mitti mein mila diya tune."

One of them lunged towards Geet but Maan came in middle.

"khabardar jo use haath lagaya…"

"Oh…jaan pyaari hai toh khisak le yahan se. Yeh humare ganw ka mamla hai…chal bhaag."

Maan held the man's hand which was flaunting a knife in front of him.

"Ek baar kaha na….use haath lagane ke bare mein sochna bhi mat."

Saying this Maan punched the man squarely on the jaw throwing him in the middle of the road.

"Oye"

All five tried to hit Maan but he punched and kicked them. But he knew he won't be able to stop them all from hurting Geet who was getting hyper and screaming at them to stop hitting him. Even as his heart filled up seeing how even at this time of imminent danger she was only worried for him, he had more pressing matter of her safety to consider than to follow his instinct of just hugging her tightly. He was worried that she may do something nave in order to save him and hence and even as the men regrouped, not giving them enough time, he clutched Geet's wrist and ran inside the forest.

Hai teri chahat meri zaroorat
Sooni hai tujh bin duniya meri
Naa reh sakoonga main door inse
Hai meri jannat galiya teri

Ummeed ye seene mein leke main hoo jee raha
Kabhi tu mile mujhse kahe ke main hoon bas tera

Tu hi mera mera mera



In the beginning trees were sparse with lot of grass but Maan almost dragged Geet deeper and deeper in the jungle. They could hear footsteps behind them but soon they faded as trees became so thick that sunlight penetrated barely making it darker and colder.

When he was sure no one was following he turned to look at Geet. Since they had started running he has been the one talking "Run Geet…faster…bas thodi dur aur." Whereas she has been well…just very silent.

But finally when he got a chance to glance at her and his heart wrenched seeing her state. Her breathing was shallow due to running and her face was covered with tears. Due to haste, few branches had scratched her arms and they were slightly bleeding.

He cupped her face gently and put little pressure to make her look at him

"Geet…you trust me right Geet….I promise kuch nahi hoga…mein kuch nahi hone dunga….bharosa hai na mujhpe."

Geet looked at his eyes which promised her. She nodded spontaneously. How could she not trust him? Forgetting everything, a small smile broke in her heart but it faded before it reached her lips. He had built a sweat and that sweat was mingling now with the blood coming from his temple. He probably did not even realize but he had been hurt…hurt because of her. She was a curse who had brought danger to his life.

More tears welled in her eyes as she took the dupatta and dabbed his forehead wiping the blood. Maan meanwhile kept on looking into her eyes not even flinching with pain.

"Thik hai Geet…it is ok. Dekho tumhein bhi chot lagi hai."

Saying this Maan removed his one hand and took her dupatta from her and wiped her arms.


Tu hai qismat tu hi hai rehmat
Tujhse judi hai meri har khushi
Tu hi mohabbat, tu hi hai raahat
Lagti bhali hai teri saadgi

Paata hoon khud ko har ghadi tere bina tanha
Mujhe thaam le, mujhe rok le, bhatka hoon main bhatka

Tu hi mera mera mera

"Come, let's find some water."

Geet was too stunned to even ask how they were going to do it but Maan kept the conversation alive.

"I love camping and so many times just wander around in jungles. There are some tools and techniques though I wish I had my backpack with me. But no worries. See my watch….it has a built in compass. We entered the forest at it's south most corner, so let's follow south east direction. There should be a way out towards east Delhi."

Maan walked slowly now, gently guiding Geet by holding her hand. She was very quiet but Maan knew she was in shock. He just continued to say soothing words softly as they walked in a particular direction to avoid getting lost.

After some time they reached a forest ranger check post. There was no one inside but Maan decided to stay there for the night. They collected some twigs and branches which he placed in the fireplace. A hand pump was outside using which he washed his face and then helped Geet in cleaning herself. Using two stones, he lit the fire and made Geet sit on haystack bed lying in one corner.

"Geet, it is quite dark outside. We will continue in the morning and find our way back. This check post being here means that we are close to an entry point."

As Maan sat down near the fire, he finally grimaced with body ache which came with relaxing muscles. He looked at his knuckles which were turning blue. It has been some time since he had punched anyone bare knuckle like he did today.

Geet's eyes flickered as he inspected his damage. Finally consciousness was settling in as adrenaline rush got over.

"Geet tum thik ho na…kahin chot toh nahi lagi."

He was startled as he felt her very close to him. She held his hand gingerly and rubbed the blue marks softly. A tear drop fell on his hand and he whispered her name "Geet"

"Meri wajah se hua yeh sab…"

A soft sob racked her body and overwhelmed by her emotions and the situation, she just hugged him. Maan gently calmed her "Shhh…Geet…it's ok"

"I am sorry Maan sir…I am so sorry"

"Nahi Geet…you haven't done anything wrong so don't say sorry and I am fine. Chalo, thoda rest kar lo. There is nothing to eat and it will not be safe to eat any wild fruit so let's wait till tomorrow…hmmm…go and sleep"

"Mujhe aapke paas hi rehna hai"

"Mein yahin hoon Geet"

"please"

Maan's heart melted with her pleading and terrified eyes. He nodded and walked with her to the hay bed and half sat with back to the wall along her side.

He waited for her to fall sleep but alas she couldn't.

"Geet…agar tum na bhi batao toh koi baat nahi but agar share karna chao toh kar sakti ho….kaun they woh log."

Geet looked at the cracks in the ceiling for some time silently trying to answer the question. It was a strange night. There was absolute silence only broken by sound of wind and buzz of the insects. Dark, far from the artificial light, just slightly illuminated by moonlight. There was sense of calmness as if world had stopped in that moment. Yes, today she wanted to share…share all of her with him…to let him know her…who she was and why. She wanted to bare everything in front of her…after all he was the only one whom she had given this right by her choice. She loved him and he had right to know why they could not be together ever.

Precap – Karoge Yaad Toh

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow,Her past is going to open up.Loved the way Maan protected her not bothering about the consequences.Update was thrilling specially running in the woods.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, mind blowing part
loved it
so there is geet's past came out
both maaneet r thinking for each other
Geet's trust on maan something beautiful
Waiting for geet's past
guessing her past is so painful and it's make her shiver now
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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nice update

geet was so scared for maan tat she even pushed him to go away from her just to save his life
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Past meets the present
Superb one Ritzy
The way in a moment all her happiness transformed into fear
the journey she begun came to a standstill
Her past stood face to face
bringing back the painful memories


The fear in her not for herself but her Maan
so much that she could do anything to keep him safe
Maan putting up a tough fight but didn;t loose focus as his first priority was to keep Geet safe
shayad yehi pyaar ki taaqat hain
jab apne aap se zyaada apna maayne rakhta hain😳

They escape in a jungle and luckily find a refuge too
Their emotional movement was so touching
so much care, pain and trust for each other

So time for the past to come out
a much needed outburst for Geet
😳


Kehte hain na dukh baatne se ghatta hain
aur ek sahi humsafar
sukh ko doogna aur
dukh ko aadha kar deta hain

Hats off to u Ritzy
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Already waiting for the next one
😃



Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Amazing update ...Ohh she is so scared for maan ready to pushed finally her past going to reveal .looks how maan help her n take it

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I was bit busy so late in reading updates...

will do detailed comment after reading...

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