TARREY FF- After the Breakup ;P

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Posted: 12 years ago
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GUYS, THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT WRITING A FF..
so hope you like it...
PS - do comment. i would love to know your views..


The story starts from rey avoiding taani.
Taani-Why is he avoiding me? What must have happened? Did I do something?
As Taani walked through the corridor, she was consumed by a pool of thoughts. Things were almost falling apart for both taani and rey. For taani, she coudn't understand why rey was avoiding her. For rey , he had to be away from the person he loved the most- his Taani.
Taani entered the class and found the seat next to rey empty. What a good opportunity to talk to rey! She sat just next to rey. As soon as rey saw her,his face brightened. He had missed her sooo much. Suddenly rey felt pain in his arm.
"Oucch" he shouted. Bt he soon realized it was sharon and by this she meant to tell him "stay away from taani or u'll spoil d plan!"
Taani- what happend?
Rey- none of ur business (as soon as he said this he felt a pinch in his heart. God why were circumstances so complicated?)
The whole gang looked rey as if the world was on fire. Well,taani had the same expression but HURT added!
Rey- woh..nuthin guys..it's just...umm...
Suddenly the peon entered.
Peon- someone has sent something for the GS of d college. Where is ... Oh dere she is..
Taani took the papers puzzeled. First rey and nw these papers.god Is surely playin a prank on her ..
As soon as she saw the papers she was hell sure world was fallin apart...she startd searching for her phone.
Rey and the gang saw the expression on her face and knew something's fishy.
Taani- OMG...
Gang- wat's up taani?
Taani- um.. Tauji wants me to ...
As she soon as she said this the proffesor came in and startd his lecture. The whole time taani had a dazed expression. Rey was realllyy woried nw.
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Taani got a text from rey "meet me in the fire exit"
Taani got hell excited. Maybe he wants to sort our things . She childishly thot not knowing wat trouble was on her way...
Rey- taani, I want to tell u something!
Taani- me too but u continue..
Rey did not noe how to say this. How could he ever think of being apart form taani-his taani. But he had to say it
Rey- I m breaking up with you!
He felt as if he just signed his death certificate! And taani felt as if she had died...
Taani- wHAT? U're kiddin right? Temme you are kidding .
U can't do that! U just can't.I mean how can u? I love u rey. Please don't do this to me.
Rey turned to a aside trying not to face her. He can't say this while looking in her eyes. He might just melt...
Rey- I am and u bettr get that. I don't care about you. U're so stupid. U arnt even ambitious n u jst wanna become a fu*'ing housewife . Now get the hell outta here!!
Taani was totally numb. She just uttered a sentence.
"My tauji wants me to go to US and become a SURGEON and aftr this, I have said YES."
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by riddhi06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes i am first yeppie
now now now
coming back to ur ff
its really wonderful dear!!
taani a surgeon wow!! just wow!!
loved it to core...
such a awesome concept...
ha thodha breakup dekh ke rona aaya but
taani getting ambitious is amazing!!!

pls update soon
n do pm
Edited by shriya_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one dear...
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ! Taani a surgeon really awesome ... I can't wait for ur next update !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear!
do continue soon
nd plz add me to the pm list 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriya_taarey

yes i am first yeppie
now now now
coming back to ur ff
its really wonderful dear!!
taani a surgeon wow!! just wow!!
loved it to core...
such a awesome concept...
ha thodha breakup dekh ke rona aaya but
taani getting ambitious is amazing!!!

pls update soon
n do pm



i know.
i thought everyone except Taani is ambitious so why not her?
an thankyouu soo much ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

nice one dear...
plz continue soon...



thankyoou so much...
i will definately continue. =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Awesome ! Taani a surgeon really awesome ... I can't wait for ur next update !!



thankyouu soo much. and I will update ASAP ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

nice start dear!

do continue soon
nd plz add me to the pm list 😊



thankouu so much.
i will continue ASAP...
and i will add u to the pm list ;)

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