YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread2*ch.34 page.141 - Page 72

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww too cute
zaaine is jaan of this FF :)
tooo good
luv this family
luvd the way viren is taking care of jeevs n zaaine
zaaine questions are superb cute like him :)
nicely written
thanxs for the PM
cont sooon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally got a chance to read it was damn awesome
Awww my Zaine is so cute i love him his questiond
Were so sweet god bless viren having to answer them
All my poor baby was sacred on the plane
Update was superb loved it to the core specially
cause of my Zaine

Ps sorry for my late reply you know why
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Posted: 12 years ago
You better inform me of the updates so that i don't miss out!

This was super uber cute! I do remember how Jeevika felt sick and painful when Zaaine used to kick her, aww, and the way you portrayed it!
Viren saying her that she won't ever change, that was one cute part I couldn't stop smiling at!

Zaaine as always, the energetic, and his questions, OMG. they are way too hilarious too hehe!
Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update
aww...missed my cutipie Zaaine so much❤️
he is such a sweetheart
n his non-stop questions😆...He is so adorable..love him to core
loved hw viren handles his questions
poor jeevika..hope she feels better
continue soon n thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Finally Finally!!!!😊
I am back.😊
First of all SORRY.😔
Thanks for the pm.😊
Actually pm's.😆
The update(s) were amazing.😊
Loved little Zaaine.😊
By the way. I should let you know that my brother's name is Zain.😆
But Zaaine is way more cuter than my brother as he is older then me and always bugging me like Viren does to Veera in your story "WE FOUND LOVE".😭😭
Looking forward for the great New York trip.😊
Viren is so so so so responsible.😊
He knows very well how to handle little Zaaine and her pregnant mommy.👏
Zaaine's non stop question is so scary.😆
God knows how Viren and Jeevika handle their "Question Bank."😆
Anyways loved the update.❤️
64 likes done and 6 to go.😊




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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating before 70 likes because its my heart hackers birthday 😆 Also updating for my PENGUIN, Charu!!! Everyone please pray she gets well soon, she just got a surgery yesterday 😔... Make sure to comment and press like for further updates!!! And guess what??? THIS IS THE 30TH CHAPTER... 🥳 🤪 WOHOOO... THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR LOVING THIS STORY!!! AND MY ZAAINE ❤️ 😳 ❤️ This is a super long update so please DO NOT LEAVE ONE-LINERS!!!!

chapter 30

v - "Jeevika I got some food"
j - "viren I really don't want any food right now. You eat"
v - "Jeevika eat a little. Zaaine must be hungry too"
j - "Let him sleep. I'll feed him when he wakes up otherwise he will be cranky without his sleep. All day yesterday he refused to take a nap. "
v - "Okay, but can you please take a bite. You want a sip of coffee?"
j - "No coffee. Just give me a bite of the sandwich"
Viren fed her a bite and then took a bite himself.
v - "Want some more?"
j - "Yes actually. It's good"
v - "See I told you" he said feeding her again.
j - "Viren can you hold Zaaine. I need to go to the restroom"
v - "Yeah" he said standing up and picking Zaaine up.
By the time Jeevika came back from the bathroom it was time to board the plane again. The three of them headed inside. They put Zaaine at the windows seat where he was still asleep. Viren sat next to him buckling him up and covering him up as well.
j - "We have to take plenty of pictures of him. He's going to remember this trip forever. Even after going back home he will bombard us with questions on when we're going next and if we can take him to see snow"
v - "Maybe we should take him to Big Bear. It's barely two hours away pus he can see plenty of snow"
j - "Yeah when we have time we can. You should actually take him snowboarding"
v - "Yeah that would be fun. But you won't be able to snowboard"
j - "Not for the next few months anyways. Remember our winter break we would go to snowboarding for like 3 days straight"
v - "Those were the days. We even went to Tahoe and remember how much it snowed"
j - "And we weren't able to drive back so we had to get a hotel room and spend the night. We sipped on hot chocolate and watched old movies on our laptop"
v - "Now we can sip on hot chocolate with our little monkey in the middle"
j - "We'll have two little monkeys soon"
v - "One little Zaaine and one little angel who we need to start thinking names of"
j - "Too early Viren"
v - "It's never too early"
j - "Yes it is. I'm just wondering how Zaaine will react especially if he sees my stomach huge. He'll want to know everything"
v - "So if he asks why is your stomach big, we'll just say you have a baby inside you"
j - "And if he'll be like how do you make a baby then?"
v - "You must say the truth" he said sarcastically 🤣
j - "Oh shutup Viren. Viren I'm getting hungry"
v - "I have another sandwich"
j - "Can I have it"
v - "Yup" he said getting it out from the Starbucks bag.
v - "We should be reaching in another few hours"
j - "I need to catch up on sleep before going anywhere"
v - "Where should we go tonight?"
j - "Just dinner"
v - "I want to go shopping"
j - "What is wrong with you? You don't like shopping"
v - "Yeah well I want to go shopping. Plus we have another little one to shop for"
j - "Viren I really hope we have a girl this time"
v - "Me too"
j - "Viren I'm kinda stressed though because we don't have another room for a nursery"
v - "I know. I was just thinking that. Plus we can't keep a newborn in the same room with a then 5 year old"
j - "Exactly. Plus we can't make the office into a room because you need your space. And even if we give Zaaine that room I'm always going to be worried about him being downstairs by himself"
v - "so then we're stuck with two options. Either we have no nursery and we keep the baby in our room with us or we have to start finding new place"
j - "A new home or condo"
v - "Well depends which area. I mean we need something not too far away because our condo right now is pretty central to everything. Your work, my work and Zaaine's pre-school"
j - "But this condo is so special. It was my gift for our 2nd anniversary"
v - "I know this place is very special to us. I mean Zaaine's first home, our first home together but think about it"
j - "I don't want to give this place up Viren"
v - "I know I don't either. But even if we keep the baby with us Zaaine will want to move to our room. And eventually the baby's going to need her own space and room right?"
j - "No we can make Zaaine and the baby share a room. I mean after a year she will be sleeping 7 hours at night. So it won't be bad. And Zaaine's room is big enough"
v - "So for one year you're going to keep the baby in our bedroom"
j - "Yes"
v - "Jeevika we're going to have to move one day. We can't stay here all the time"
j - "Not now though Viren"
v - "We can move in a few months"
j - "A few months? When I'm big and fat and can't do any work at all"
v - "So what"
j - "I'm not moving from here. Our baby can sleep in our room" she said laying down back on Viren's shoulder
Zaaine started moving from his seat. Viren and Jeevika both started looking towards him as he was rubbing his eyes.
z - "Daa snow?" 😛
v - "A few more hours Zaaine. Go back to sleep"
z - "Mommy lap"
j - "Come here"
Zaaine moved his seat going towards Jeevika. He got on her lap and went back to sleep on her.
v - "You know once we start buying everything again for the baby, you're going to have to room to keep it anywhere and you're going to start panicking"
j - "I'll figure it out"
v - "We will see" he said smiling
j - "How much longer Viren. I'm getting impatient now"
v - "Uhmm around two more"
j - "I'm getting bored"
v - "Shall I dance for you?" 😆
j - "No thank you" 🥱
v - "Idea!!!"
j - "What?"
v - "Let's watch a movie on Zaaine's iPad"
j - "Lol is there any other movie besides CARS in that iPad" 🤣
v - "I think so"

Finally they landed in New York...

v - "Zaaine wake up. Look we're in New York now"
z - "Daa sleep"
v - "You want to stay on the plane and sleep? Fine then the pilot will take you back home while me and Jeevika go play in the snow"
z - "Noo Daa. But me sleepy"
j - "Viren you just hold him. I'll hold the bag"
v - "No let him get up and walk. He's been sleeping the whole time"
j - "Fine whatever. Make him more cranky"
Zaaine rubbed his eyes and clung onto Viren's hand. They waited till all the passengers to leave and then got up so Jeevika wouldn't be claustrophobic. The three of them got up and walked out the plane with Zaaine holding Viren's hand.
z - "Daa cold"
v - "I'll get your jacket out. Hold Jeevika's hand"
Zaaine was excited to just get out of the airport already and to see snow everywhere. He was getting impatient as he held onto Jeevika's hand waiting for their luggage to come.
z - "Mommy snow"
j - "Zaaine please hold on. Let's get out bags first and then we'll go to our hotel"
z - "But we play in snow"
j - "We will play in snow promise. Just be patient please"
v - "Okay got all our bags. Ready to go?"
j - "Yup. Come on Zaaine lets go"
The three of them walked outside, but only to get to see Zaaine disheartened. There was no snow right now. It was just really really windy and Viren and Jeevika looked at each other concerned knowing how upset Zaaine was probably going to be now. Viren quickly got a cab and started putting all their stuff inside while Jeevika and Zaaine sat inside the taxi. Once the driver started heading towards Viren noticed Zaaine starting to cry.
v - "Zaaine whats wrong?"
Zaaine didn't answer. He hid his face not wanting to see anyone. Jeevika picked him up in her lap and hugged him.
j - "Zaaine it's okay it will snow soon okay. I promise. We're going to be here for a few days and before you leave you will get to play in the snow for however long you want okay?"
Zaaine started crying more and Jeevika couldn't help but smile a little.
v - "He's tired. After he takes a nap and eats he'll be fine. Zaaine look at that building. Look at how tall it is"
Zaaine wiped his eyes and looked through the windows. He moved to sit on Viren's lap as he was sitting near the window. He just dozed off looking at the huge buildings and the huge crowds walking everywhere.
Entering the hotel, Zaaine was just observing everything or at least trying to because he was very sleep still. He wanted to just lay down but he patiently waited sitting on the sofa watching the baggage as Viren and Jeevika went to get the keys to their room.
v - "Zaaine" he said trying to wake him up
j - "Zaaine lets go upstairs to our room. Come on" she said helping him get up.
The three of them walked upstairs as Zaaine clung onto Jeevika's leg as he was tired. The elevator doors opened and Zaaine woke up again. As soon as Viren opened the door he climbed onto the bed and closed his eyes.
v - "Zaaine no sleeping please. Come on let's go eat downstairs"
z - "No daa sleep please"
v - "Zaaine, Jeevika hasn't eaten either. Do you want her to stay hungry" he said laughing knowing Zaaine would never say no now...
j - "oh my god Viren"
z - "Daa five minutes please"
j - "Okay five minutes. Close your eyes"

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Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 😉
*edited*

Anyone gonna guess that who is first?
Guess, guess,
haha ITS ME!
SQUIGGLE'S PENGUIN! 🥳 🥳 🥳

THANK YOU SO MUCH SQUIGGLES FOR MAKING ME FIRST! 🤗
LOVE YOU SO MUCH! ❤️

THIS REALLY CALLS FOR A CELEBRATION!
FIRST I'M FIRST, AND SECOND WE FINALLY GOT AN UPDATE AFTER AGES!!!

THIS IS BETTER THAN THE LAST UPDATE, YOU KNOW!
THAT WAS SHORT...
PENGUIN LOVES THE UPDATE! ❤️


ZAAINE LOVES TO SLEEP! 😆
AND ME TOO 🤗
BUT NOW I'M HAVING SLEEPLESS NIGHTS!


LOVED VIRIKA'S CONVO ❤️
I REALLY ALSO WANT THEM TO HAVE A BABY GIRL!
AND I ALSO WANT THEM TO SHIFT TO A NEW PLACE TO MAKE EVERYBODY COMFORTABLE!

AWWW , MY POOR ZAAINE DIDN'T GOT TO SEE THE SNOW!
MAKE IT FAST FOR HIM! 😡

ALL THE BST FOR THE EXAMS, 1000% SURE YOU'LL DO WELL, MY LOVE ❤️

CONGRATULATIONS FOR CHAPTER 30 👏
THIS STORY HAS LONG LONG WAY TO GO!
CONTINUE SOON! 😳
Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG 🤣

where Should I start from? 😆

I can't wait to have a new baby in heartbeat 😆 awww I wonder what it could be, either a boy, a girl or both 😛😆

I hope there will be snow soon before they leave 😭 or else my zaaine will be very sad 😭😭

j - "Yes it is. I'm just wondering how Zaaine will react especially if he sees my stomach huge. He'll want to know everything"
v - "So if he asks why is your stomach big, we'll just say you have a baby inside you"
j - "And if he'll be like how do you make a baby then?"
v - "You must say the truth" he said sarcastically 🤣

I hope Zaaine ask this 🤣 I wonder what he might think of it 😆

And no house moving please 😛 they all have so many memories within that house plus new baby can share 😆

As usual without my zaaine cuteness it's incomplete 😆 ❤️


Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved. *heart broken*🥺
Unreserved. me wanted to be first😭, u broke my heart keeni meany😡


Whoop whoop finally an update after a century!!! u dnt know how i missed my zaaine ❤️

This was really long compared to ur last updates...and guess what keeni???

Marzi lllooovvveeesss long updates😆 thanks for making it longer

Awee my Zaaine always wants to sleep, just like me haha

We have a lot in common..i love sleeping too, just like Zaaine especially when i travel lol

Enjoyed Virikas convo..i really want that they have a baby girl this time, am sure they will

Zaaine didnt see snow??? and he cried😭 whenever he cries i cry too peenii

Loveed the update a lot...u made my saturday night my love ❤️ thanks a lot

Best of luck on ur exams..am 500% sure that u will get A+ pluses like always

Congo for the 30th chapter..This story of urs is my fav story./thanks for writing it

Here in canada its still 11th may so Happy Bday Tacker my love..i love u lots and ur mine 4ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever🤗❤️ 😆

P.S. Partner hope your better, get well soon🤗 so we can start spamming again 😆 ❤️


Edited by jeevi7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayee such a fantastic update...loved it to core
my lil cutipie zaaine just loves to sleep..just like me😆
omg when virika were discussing what if zaaine ask hw to make a baby🤣...I so want zaaine to ask this question now
aww...my poor zaaine didn't get to see the snow...can't see him crying
hope he gets to see n play in the snow

Wohoo..Kays congratulations for Chapter 30 n best of luck for ur finals
aww...Charu take care n get well soon
Edited by vishwa94 - 12 years ago

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