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PART 31

meren bhai ki zindagi barbad ki kaafi nahi.. u r playing with my life? He threatened her .. but this time u chose a wrong person to trap!!!
Maan Singh Khurana
I will make sure u r out of all her lives. She closed her eyes wondering if there was anything left to bear!!
he held her arm & dragged her out to the main door ..thats how Daadi saw him.
Maan yeh aap kya karen hain.. chotiyen issen
yeh koi tariqua hain Geet se baat karne ka
I will not tolerate her in this house Daadi ma he roared
Geet iss ghar ki bahu hain!! main nahi jaanthe thi aap itna gir sakten hain Maan.. Daadi spoke disheartened. It was her pain.. her one wrong decision spoiled Geets whole life. Had Maan given a slight hint abt his love life Daadi would have never interfered.
Daadi did know all the hardship Maan faced bringing up Dev alone. Losing parents at such tender age would have been so difficult. So Daadi wanted him to get a life partner who could pamper him.. give him all that he missed all this years.. not that a girl of his choice wouldn't have.. but she was worried after seeing wat Dev settled with. Daadi had seen Dev suffering with Nt. She didn't want Maan to make a choice & regret like Dev was. Moreover she was not sure if he could find such brides in US.
Daadi how could u support her
Daadi was already heart broken.. all this just made her week & vulnerable to another attack. Geet got really angry seeing daadi's plight.. plz aap chup hojayin she told him in a very calm voice
her eyes pleading yet spitting fire.. even though at this moment he hated himself but still obliged. He could have slotted his heart to still feel for her.. still his heat beating for such a women. Dammit she is ur brothers wife!!!! he cursed himself.
He just left straight up to his room.. the room that was his since childhood. He was the only kid who had a different room. He was pampered then.. Daadi.. him, dad & mom. It was their cute little family.. he had very few memories of those days.. he was very young when they had moved to US. Even back then Daadi used to take care of business so he hardly had much time with her.

The room looked painfully dull.. but it screamed her essence.. but there was also a very strange loneliness.. sadness that lingered. Painful ..heartbroken.. just complementing his plight. He looked around.. the place had completely changed. No bed.. no furniture.. simple curtains.. his portrait from school graduation was missing. He punched the wall in frustration.
Dev stormed into the room & hugged him from sideways..bhai.. bhai.. bhai.. he screamed like a small kid.. breaking down.. seeing him in skin, in real was over whelming.. & the fact that he still knew his bhai !! he still knew bhiaya would come to kick his butt. Bhai.. I missed missed u missed u so much.. u don't even know hum sabne aapko kitna miss kiya.
His words didn't mean anything to Maan. If he really missed him so much all this years wat stopped him from calling him.. wat stopped him from dropping a mail.. Maan stiffened trying to compose his weakening heart. Even Maan longed to be loved.. to be belonged!! but Dev chose to leave it all, leave his brother for that b****h.. his hatred grew..


Dev could sense his brothers anger. Bhai he said after breaking from the hug & wiping his tears. He knew his bhai was angry with him for that legal paper, thingy.. but in heart he knew it is just matter of time.. the moment bhai knows it was just a prank to get him here.. he will forgive him.. not before kicking him.. he grinned inwards..
when he felt a sharp sting on his face
& another.. & another.. & another.. & another.. Maan didn't seem to stop.. he was busting out his anger.. how could u play with someone life?
Tumhe yeh sikaya hain humne?
Ek bar nahi soucha papa-mama ke baren main
wo sab kaafi nahi tha.. tum aab mera saat bhi

Geet held Maan's hand ' aap ko koi haaq nahi banta
Dev ' Geet its ok
Maan ' mujhe haaq nahi.. he roared.. mujhe haaq nahi.. yeh kahne wali tum kaun hoti ho
she looked away snapping his hand in anger
aap ko koi haaq nahi banta
aab aaken ussen kuch kahne ka

tumari himat kaisen himat hum bhaiyion ke beech aane ki
where were u all this years ?
tum tho thi na uske saat, tum ne kya kiya?
Dev ' bhai
Maan raised to hit him again.. Geet held his hand again.. stop it Mk
meren hoten huin aap aisen kuch nahi karsakten
he held her hand & dragged her out to the door... tumhari jagah idar hain.. humaren ghar se.. humaren zindagi se bhahar, & shut the door on her face.
Dev came running & opened the door.. bhai .. plz.. & he painfully looked at Geet..
Geet plz.. tum room main javoo, let me talk to bhai first
Maan threatened ' u have to chose between me & her Dev
Dev ' lekin bhai.. that's not a choice.. she was here because of him he felt choked at the irony
Maan ' I don't want her in our lives.. she has already ruined everything. If u have a little bit of love left in ur heart for me.. just leave her
Dev was totally lost & didn't understand how to handle.

Geet would have left at once but her ticket was booked for 2 days latter & Daadi 's health was also scaring. She wiped her tears & sat next to Daadi.
Daadi ' hume maaf kardijiyen Geet ..daadi cried
Geet smiled weakly ' nahi Daadi aap aisen mat khaiyen
Daadi ' Maan
Geet fluttered her lashes & looked away.
Daadi's health deteriorated to worse. They had to rush to the hospital. Dev rushed with Geet.

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Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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me first for the first time
maan is still not ready to listen truth
he wants geet to leave the house
plz maan just once listen to them😔
continue soon Di
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maan still living in his assumptions don't want to listen anything waiting for geet truth open infront of maan



Edited by tamanna1391 - 12 years ago

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