Virika SS- Second shot to love *COMPLETED*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HEY GUYS!!!!! me again ! For all those who do not know me iam AASHNA and this is my second story on if! its a concept that hit me suddenly and has not been copied orplagiarizedfrom any where ! please tell me if i should continue!!!!😃😃😃

jeevika was spotted waiting for her boyfriend to come and have dinner with her as a birthday treat ! she waited hours in therestaurant but he did not arrive..in the end she was the last person there waiting for him .. the people in the restaurant needed to close up so they politely asked her to leave.
she apologized and even though she was furious she tried to keep her calm as she walked up the stairs to his house. she rang the doorbell and when he opened the door he was greeted by a hard slap from his ever-so-calm girlfriend. Absolutelyin shock viren came out and shut the door behind him to try and calm her down. but jeevika was on another level of anger today, she just kept screaming and sobbing and dint even notice how stressed and tensed viren was. By the end she was just to exhausted with this relationship and did the thing that she never thought she would do, She broke up with viren.
viren on the other was shattered and he tried to stop her but she was adamant on leaving, leaving him .. leaving his life...
TO BE CONTINUED
~aashna

part 1 -page 3
part 2 - page 5
part 3- page 7
part 4- page 11
part 5- page 13
part 6- page 15
part 7- page 17
part 8- page 19

part 9- page 22
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MehakGera thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Luvd it so mch yaar
Gr8 concept
How cajeevs broke up on sucha small thing
Update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love the concept..
plz continue soon...
want to know how viren pacifies jeevs.. 😉
plz pm me when u update... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cotinue very soon...great cocept..
thnxxx fr the pm...
waitn fr next update...n plx pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab loved it
Want to know whats Viren's excuse
Continue soon babe
oh yeah plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds absolutely brilliant cannot wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing cont soon plz :)
thnxs for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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concept is amazing
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Concept is nice...
Continue Soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Greattt !!!!!
Lovely start...upDte soon...n ya pm me olways...

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