May Angels Lead You In (reader vs writer) - Page 4

Aroma, you described their bond beautifully, and made me fall into tears. Flawless and stunning OS. Par-Excellence!

What is this? Is this a dream? Aro, really, have YOU written this? Sorry for saying this, but your grammar was actually very poor, for which I had written an essay in your 'Learning' wala fiction. But I see wondrous progress. No unnecessary continuity, no unnecessary full stops and right punctuation. I can't believe it, believe me. I just started reading this without paying any heed to who was the author. But when that Kria's confrontation came, I saw 'r' instead of 'd'. That's when I startled up, I scrolled hurriedly up just to see your user_ID. You have improved a whole-lot, aro. Keep it up.

Originally posted by: Kesha1234

Wow! Such a wonderful story! The way the story flowed, it was wonderful. This was for the story, your imagination, which I don't doubt at all.

What is this? Is this a dream? Aro, really, have YOU written this? Sorry for saying this, but your grammar was actually very poor, for which I had written an essay in your 'Learning' wala fiction. But I see wondrous progress. No unnecessary continuity, no unnecessary full stops and right punctuation. I can't believe it, believe me. I just started reading this without paying any heed to who was the author. But when that Kria's confrontation came, I saw 'r' instead of 'd'. That's when I startled up, I scrolled hurriedly up just to see your user_ID. You have improved a whole-lot, aro. Keep it up.

And a special mention to the quotes, I loved it.

Best,

Kesha

😆 😆 😆 😆...i second dat...she improves wid evry attmpt...i truly believe she wud be d 1 of d bst writers vry soon of our times...aru i really want to see u in d top ..always...nevr let ure strength i.e. ure writings..ure imaginations...most importantly nevr dout ureself...n dis was her best of d best! 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳...lu my bccha aru..

bt ha me naraz wid u !! 4 not replying me!!!

Originally posted by: Kesha1234

Wow! Such a wonderful story! The way the story flowed, it was wonderful. This was for the story, your imagination, which I don't doubt at all.

What is this? Is this a dream? Aro, really, have YOU written this? Sorry for saying this, but your grammar was actually very poor, for which I had written an essay in your 'Learning' wala fiction. But I see wondrous progress. No unnecessary continuity, no unnecessary full stops and right punctuation. I can't believe it, believe me. I just started reading this without paying any heed to who was the author. But when that Kria's confrontation came, I saw 'r' instead of 'd'. That's when I startled up, I scrolled hurriedly up just to see your user_ID. You have improved a whole-lot, aro. Keep it up.

And a special mention to the quotes, I loved it.

Best,

Kesha

😆 😆 😆 i second dat...she is an amazing writer who improves herself wid evry attempt...n dis was her best of d best...

aru nevr let ure strngth...dat is ure writings n ure imaginations dwn...n most importantly nevr dout ureself...

aru u really r 1 of d finest writer...n i really want to see u in d top...give ure best always..

luv u soo mch bacha 😳 😳 🤗

bt still m angry wid u!! 😡 😡 😡 u no reply me na so!!

super story...& ...after parents...friends are the most lovely gift given by god...

Wow, what wonderful nd sad story.

👏 awesome os..awesome os.. vry well written.. luvd it..