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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

nicee start👏

continue soon😃

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Thank you 😊
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Done with the replies. Will update right now if possible!
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Prologue

"Wake up Midge, will you?" shouted Mrs. Macphee waking up her 14-year-old sleeping daughter, Midge. She shook Midge fiercely which resulted in Midge falling on the fluffy carpet beneath her.

"What the heck mom! Is this some way to wake up anyone?" groaned Midge as she ascended lazily to her bathroom.

"Yea it is if this is the way to sleep," complained Mrs. Macphee coolly she went down.

"Oh yea..Whatever," said Midge from the bathroom as she freshened up. Midge wore her hair band obstructing her little hair in the front and splashed water.

Midge was a pretty girl with shoulder-length straight blond hair. She read lots of books having fantasies and creations. She was very imaginative.

Midge rushed down wearing her school dress. She sat on the dining table as her mom served her breakfast. Midge looked at the sandwiches on her table and frowned.

"Midge, look dear, we are to go for a party at 7.." her mother tried to inform her but was cut off.

"Hold on mom. I am going out right now to school which ends at 3. We have extra classes so I'll leave at 4. After that I'm going to the woods to find something suitable for my Science project. So I will surely be exhausted. And what will I do at your doctors' party? Better I stay home."

"Well, okay. That is your choice. Then order some food as our chef, Becky is on leave. The keys will be with Mrs. Klump." said her mom. Carrying her purse, she left for the hospital.

"Talking about food, can't you give me something else than these?" Midge complained pointing at the sandwiches, but her mom was long gone. She never got much time with her mother, as she was a doctor. She was usually busy. The whole burden of the house was on Mrs. Macphee. Midge's parents had divorced. She had a brother too, but he went with his dad.

She finished her breakfast, grabbed her bag and left or school.

*~*~*

At the bus stop, she met her best friend, Sandra.

"Hey Sandra!" Midge greeted her.

"Hey Midge!"Sandra replied

"What are you doing for your science project? I'm doing one on algae."

"Actually, I have not decided yet. I'm going to the woods to find something exotic and suitable. Want to join me?"

"I'll be glad to help, if you help me.."

"What help?"

"I've to buy a new pair of sneakers. After school, can you come with me to the mall?"

"Why not? Sure."

"Do you remember our plan? I've brought it."

"Oh have you? So today, at lunch break."

They both winked and hi-fied each other. The next moment, the bus arrived. They got seated and went to school.

*~*~*

It was 6th period. The lunch bell rang. All the students left the class. Midge and Sandra were left behind. They packed their bags and Sandra removed a plastic bag with some powder.

The both showed each other thumbs up and ran down the school stairs secretly. They entered the watchman's cabin as the watchman was on a visit to the gate, and added sleeping powder in his coffee. They both rushed outside and hid behind a tree. As soon as the watchman dozed off, they went to his cabin and pressed the green button for opening the door. They both ran outside. As the door was automatic, it closed soon.

No one had a hint of this.

*~*~*

They rushed to the mall giggling and giggling. They climbed escalator and finally stopped.

"We did it. Finally! Gosh."

"Yup. And I'm exhausted. Let's keep our bags there," said Sandra pointing a table outside a shop. They placed their bags there. Sandra took out her bottle and sipped water. Midge looked at the shop. It was named: Einstein's Antiques. Midge had never seen this part of the city mall.

"Don't eye this shop. It may say 'Einstein's Antiques', but it truly means 'Einstein's Antics'."

"But the shop is named Einstein, so has to something scientific.."
"Actually, the shopkeeper of this shop is a crackpot. He says his name is Einstein [No insult to Albert Einstein.] and he is some relative of Albert Einstein. He says he is a retired scientist and keeps all his old inventions for sale here."

"Whatever you say, I find this cool. And what is the harm in checking out?"

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes," said Midge and pulled a reluctant Sandra inside. There was standing in an old chap, Einstein, in stupid green jumpsuit; big round glasses a smile with crooked teeth. His frozen hair in the air made him look silly.

"Welcome madams! What would you like? A vocal pen by which whatever you speak will be written and also recorded speech be written in future time or.." the chap kept on saying about his crazy inventions. Sandra was sighing and Midge was continuously staring at a point.

"..or an automatic brush with all the equipme-" the old man was cut off by Midge.

"Give me that," said Midge pointing to the showcase behind. Sandra and Einstein looked at the point.

There was a six-cornered star there. Actually, there were two stars connected to each other. A small white star was on the top of a little big cobalt blue star. The borders of the stars were silver and there were some wires popping out from behind.

"This?" said the chap reaching the star and handing it to her.

"Yea, this," said Midge as she observed the star.

"What is this?" asked Midge pushing a lock of hair behind her ear.

"This is a part of an invention. It was my dream invention. Without the other part, this star is useless. See the wires there? It was connected with a band. But, I broke it as it caused a lot of trouble. I just couldn't control this device, which I called Norah. As it was my baby cousin, Norah who inspired me to this. Norah was perfect, but I couldn't control it."

"What did it do?"

"It could.."

"Midge. I'm getting out of this crazy workshop. Buy this if you want or come.."

"Okay-okay. Sir, what is the cost of this star?"

"I'm still telling you it is useless.."

"Correct. It is useless for me, so you may have it for free."

"Oh thanks sir!"

As they went out of the shop, they went to by sneakers for Sandra. The shopkeeper smiled to himself.

"It could make your imaginations true, my dear. I hope you don't find the band. Or else, you are in for a disaster," he sighed as he remembered the memories of his with Norah, the device.

*~*~*

Edited by Kesha1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
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unres...

it's really amazing prologue sis...

u describe it really very well...

it's really intresting...

i eagarly want to know k aage kya hota hai...😛

plz update it soon... n thanks for PM...
Edited by .....pujan..... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomeee prologue cherry👏

well written👍🏼

waiting for d nxt part😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Nice prologue
Thnx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome prologue!!!
enjoyd reading itt..
was grippd till da end.. waitng fr da next part!
thnks fr da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice...thanks 4 the pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
woww loved prologue 👏👏 superb n interesting concept do upd soon 😳

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