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i hope maan ko jald hi sab pata chal jaye...
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nice update. felt bad for both geet and maan. geet wanted to save her father and maan anger made the big mistake
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Originally posted by: preeti.1

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W8ing..100 years to you. Missing you n you are here
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W8ing..100 years to you. Missing you n you are here


100 years di i will be dead by then..marwoge aap toh
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Very painful...😭
Waiting for d next part...
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Originally posted by: singh24




Very painful...😭
Waiting for d next part...



thanks posting next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii ...

here is the part 9..

thank you for your support ...





LIMITS OF UNCONDITIONAL LOVE




PART 9

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preeti di this update is on your demand...


The money was transferred to her account at that moment only …. Here maan was all lost in her thought… he looked at the place where he was cruel and even the sin that he had done today was no less than any malicious crime… he looked at the signs of her surrender ..she lost herself to him… that was visible from the stains on the stark white bed sheet..the red blood stains were there..maan knew that it will be difficult to mend what he has done..he had literally snatched her innocence from her he was truly a evil spirit who unleashed his demons on the angel making her to burn…

Maan was having tears for the first time he had misunderstood her words..she did sold herself ..but why he still didn't know since all the money was transferred in her account…maan looked at the room he had searched her at all the places but she was no where that's when he looked at the signs of her pure surrender..the purity he snatched from her will now not live him peace….

The dark and gloomy night passed .. bright shining shreaks of sunlight made her to get up..she was al lost…her eyes were red..though she slept but the restlessness was there..her eyes were searching for something may be the soothing glance of someone… for someone she wanted to see… the rain had finally calm now…. But the wetness of her tears was still there in her eyes..geet looked at herself..she without even thinking got ready …. Here maan immediately left the place making sure that there will be no evidence of what happened last night….

He reached KC at the earliest and immediately called adi.. he needed geet's address..he somewhere knew that he could get her ..she cant run after whatever was done..he needs to apologize and more needs to know why did she ruined her life her self respect he was eager to know…

It was only six when maan called adi to KC.. his voice was blazing he was looking angry and his eyes were filled with rage… like he will kill everyone who in come in his way now… he roared when adi was not able to get geet's file…

Maan: what the hell is this adi…why are you not able to get her file…bring all the details of miss geet handa asap..i don't want any negligence on your part….

His cold demeanor was the result of his guilt and the lack of maturity..she was more practical and mature her eyes never betrayed her they were the mirror of her condition that he failed to read..TH E MAAN SINGH KHURANA was a biggest looser and a failure that he was not able to get through what she meant…her venerable state he couldn't see… her tears those unshed tears he was not able to see…

Maan looked at himself in much remorse and disgust… she was an angel a pure and innocent girl..and he tarnished her that innocence..he was mush horrible what he had actually thought….

Maan: why didn't I saw your genuine eyes geet .. why didn't you said what was there ..the truth you actually hide that … I knew there must be some reason that you have to kill your self respect your self esteem…. The girl who was pure as milk I am responsible for her tears now..geet just once you have to say me what was the problem..why were you lying why didn't you tell me the truth..the truth of that B**** the reality that you hide from me….

Maan was sitting on his chair…his eyes were burning with rage ..he certainly wanted to punish himself but for now he needed to know her whereabouts…she was alone..and he needed to know her state..he was a monster who didn't understand her…

His anger and self guilt was much visible in his eyes..his fist was tight..he probably wanted to hit himself..maan held the glass that was kept on his table…geet's words were ringing In his mind..her unshed tears the humiliation she underwent just because of him….

Geet: just do what you want… I need money….

Maan smashed the glass… her cruel words were like poison to his ears…

Maan: you didn't need money geet..atleast not at the cost of your self…. Why didn't you tell me what was there in your mind….

His hands were bleeding but the pain his heart was having for hurting her was not something that can be measured…she innocent..but his anger went on her words she very cleverly had moulded her words…. She never wanted him to know what was the truth….

Maan in certain anger….

Maan: whatever you did geet…I will make sure that you have you tell me the truth..maan singh khurana is not that weak who cant accept his mistakes and I need you to punish me for the sin… I will find you geet… you cant get away after what had happened….

Adi knocked maan's cabin..

Maan: come in…

Adi: here is the file sir…

He hand over the details of geet to maan…without wasting any second maan took the file and look at the details and address of geet… it pained him to know that she was working under him since all these years..she was first working as part time…

Maan rushed towards her home..to meet her he had somewhere made his mind not to delay anymore he will ask her to forgive him..and will ask her hands from her parents…. And even if she will deny he will not loose hope…

Here at geet's place she was ready to leave for hospital … dressed in pink color suit she was looking beautiful but the pain and glow on her face was missing..her dull eyes were telling about the loneliness she was feeling ….

She gathered her self..she was feeling extremely tired and was having slight fever …. Being in wet clothes and the last night what all that happened had made her extremely low,… her mind was only on her father…she wanted to submit the money …. And make her father allright…. When she should have felt disgusted on herself..for selling her self..she was feeling nothing a daughter had overshadowed a girl self respect and self esteem…she just want her father to be with her…..

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Next: leave me alone.. her eyes were red …she was thin , pale and looking like she was waiting for her death

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Posted: 12 years ago
very very emotional
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try to update next part soon

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