Hurt Zoya - pt 13,14-pg 19,20 ( May 23)

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HI friends

here again I m writing this. In this story I am going to separate ASYA but will have happy ending. hope you will like my second creation. and I promise I'll not end the story abruptly because I have written well in advance so here goes the part 1

It's a Nikaah day for ASYA. Asad is getting ready in his room. He still feels that he is not ready for the marriage but has to do it for his Ammi's happiness. On the other hand Zoya is also lost in thoughts. She is completely in love with Asad and well aware of her feelings. Zoya's Appi and jiju are also there and very excited for the marriage. Billo is thinking in her room how to stop this marriage but nothing is going as per her wish.

In the hall guests are already arriving and Nazma and Dilshad are very excited to receive everyone. Finally the moment has come and Dilshad is asked to bring the groom and bride. Dilsahd and Nazma goes to get Asad and Appi and Jiju to get Zoya.

Maulvi Saheb asks Asad " kya apko Zoya Farouqui ke sath Nikaah qubool hai. There is a pause in between and Maulvi Saheb asks again and Asad looks at his mom and she nods in yes and Asad says Qubool nahi hai. Everyone look at Asad in a shock. Zoay is already in tears. Dilshad is shocked and faints for real. Asad runs to his mom and says Ammi kya hua apko. He carries her to the bedroom and calls the doctor. Doctor says she is shock and gives her injection. Dilshad is awake and asking Asad why he broke his mom's heart. He says that he was going to tell her but before that only she fainted. He was going to tell her that he doesn't love Zoya but loves Tanveer and wants to marry her. And he will marry her in front of everyone today itself. Dilshad doesn't know what to say and tells him that if I knew about you and Tanveer then I would have choosen Tanveer not Zoya. You broke Zoya's heart. Asad says no Ammi for Zoya it's all a game she doesn't understand all these relationships and all. She has done this before also. She ran away from her own marriage and this time she knew that its all a game. Dilshad says but this time she didn't run away. Zoya is standing near the door and listening to all this and can't believe what Asad is saying. She has tears in her eyes and in the background the song is playing'

Zingdagi mein kabhi koi aaye na rabba

Aye to phir jaye na rabba

All the guests are still there and murmuring about all the fiasco they just saw. Nazma comes to the room and tells this to Asad and Dilshad. And Dilshad says that Nikaah will still happen . I had wowed that you'll be married in ten days then you'll be. I will get you married to Tanveer right now.

Asad and Tanveer Nikaah happens and billo is very happy and thinking that she just played her last card and won.

Scene in the past:

They show that Asad is getting ready in his room and Tanveer make noise outside Asad's room and Asad goes to open the door to see who's there and he sees Tanveer running to her room with tears in her eyes and she closes the door of her room with the bang. Asad gets doubt so he goes after her and knocks on the door but Tanveer doesn't open the door. Asad knocks again and asks her to open but she doesn't open. Asad thinks what happened to Tanveer why she's not opening the door when I know she just went inside, I hope she is fine, or didn't faint again. He breaks the door and sees that Tanveer is all ready to hang herself . He holds her hand and shakes her and asks her what is all this. Why she is trying to kill herself? Tanveer says Jammy leave me alone I don't want to live. I have no right live. Asad aks what happened Tanveer tell me. I am your childhood friend. Tanveer says no Jammy I can't tell you anything because you will not be able to do anything and she is crying, sobbing and faints in Asad's arms. Asad picks her up and puts on the bed and sprinkle water on her face. Tanveer wakes up and Asad says that you have to tell me the truth and Tanveer says ok then listen. I was raped in my own factory that's why I came from there. And now I found out that I am pregnant because of that rape. I don't want to go to police because I won't be able to face all that embarrassment. That's why I don't want to live. Asad says that killing yourself is not a solution. You should have told us in the beginning and we could have find a solution. He says that I will find you a good match for you asap and get you married. Tanveer says nobody would want to marry a girl who is already pregnant out of a rape. Asad says you are wrong Tanveer . Tanveer says no Jammy no one will marry me , no one will marry me and then says that would you marry me? And there is a big silence in the room. And Tanveer says see even you don't want to marry me then why you think some else who doesn't even know me would marry me. Asad tells her that have faith in me goes away from there.

Back to the present:


precap: Tanveer says to Zoya its not regarding me its regarding you and your Abbu and I think your Abbu is alive.


Part 2 : page 2 Part 13 : Page 19

Part 3 : page 2 Part 14 : Page 20

Part 4: Page 4

Part 5 : Page 5

Part 6 : Page 7

Part 7 : Page 8

Part 8 : page 10

Part 9 : page 11

Part 10 : page 13

Part 11 : page 15

Part 12: page 17

Edited by Neets - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...nice start...initially thought asad love tannu W*F then u revealed it all.

update soon
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nice start
keep goin...👍🏼
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great start! can you PM me when you continue??
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OMG WHAT! - Okay this just makes me hope that Zoe gets married to someone else as well, I do not want her to be wallowing when Asad has a freaking wife, I want her to move on with a nice husband and have a beautiful family.

Appi and Jeeju will be so pissed when they find out, maybe they'll put up a challenge of their own. Asad is going to regret this so much!
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continue soon
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Part : 2

Dilshad is not happy with the outcome but still happy because she thinks her son is happy with this marriage so she wants to do all the rituals but Asad says that Ammi you are not well so I won't do anymore rituals. We have entire life to do those rituals and right now your health is more important to me. So just rest in your room and Tanveer & Nazma will handle everything. Zoya in her room crying and takes out her bag and starts packing. Her Aapi is helping her and her Jiju have gone out and do the arrangements to go back to New York. Zoya's packing is done and she is all set to leave the house. Suddenly her phone rings and name is flashing Robart but Zoya disconnects the call. She thinks that before she leaves she need to say Good bye to Phuphi atleast. She stayed in this house for so long so she can't go without informing phuphi so she goes out of her room to go to Dilshad's room. Tanveer is working in the kitchen and sees Zoya and says to herself that I need to kick her out today so I should reveal to her that she is the daughter of Siddiqui. She stops Zoya and says that Zoya I need to tell you something very important. Zoya thinks that its regarding the marriage and she says that it's ok Tanveer you don't need to explain to me anything. Tanveer says its not regarding me its regarding you and your Abbu and I think your Abbu is alive. She says you wait here I will bring something for you. She quickly goes to her room and comes back and gives her one envelope and says that I am sorry Zoya I already opened it and says that 2-3 days ago someone came and gave this envelope for you and said that is very important for you and its regarding your past. That's why I opened but didn't give it to you because I thought I shouldn't spoil your happiness and was waiting for your Nikaah to happen. But then this all happened. I never tried to steal Jammy from you'.. Zoya says please Tanveer I need no explaination and hurriedly opens the envelope and it has the recent picture of Mr Siddiqui and the old one which Zoya had and the letter says that don't you want to know why your mother was killed. Zoya could clearly tell that Mr. Siddiqui is her father.

Zoya is in disbelief what she is reading . She goes to her room and her phone is ringing its Robart again. This time she takes his call cries a lot. Robart (Ayaan) gets worried and aks her Mona what happened. Zoya says I need to meet you Robart. Ayaan says ok in hr at some restaurant. Zoya says ok Zoya picks up her bag and come out of the room her Aapi is behind her she is unaware of all this. They come to the living room and Asad is there and he sees Zoya. They both stare at each other he can clearly see that Zoya has cried a lot and feels guilty. He stops Zoya and asks where are you going and Zoya says Mr Khan please don't show your fake concern to me. I don't want to disturb Phuphi this time so you can tell her that Zoya has moved out of the house. And she leaves.

Asad feels empty inside his heart. He knows that he has no right over Zoya now but why his heart still wants to stop her. He can't understand his own feelings.

Zoya meets Ayan and shows him the pictures and tells him that he is my abbu and my mother was killed. Ayan says he my mamu. Zoya says yes know and I want to know why he did all this to us? Who killed my mother? Robart I need your help. I need to find answers to all these questions. I was leaving for New York today but now I think I will have to stay back and find all the answer. Robart says don't worry Mona I will help you like always and together we will achieve this mission. Let me think. Zoya says but first of all I have to find a place for myself because I moved out of my house. Ayan asks why you moved out from bhaijaan's house. Zoya told him the whole story about the Nikaah and started crying. Ayan feels bad and says that anyway you were doing that marriage only for Dilshad Ammi's sake na so its ok. I didn't know that bhaijaan loved Tanveer that's a news to me. He always said that Tanveer is just a very good friend of him and now you are saying that he loves Tanveer wow. Zoya is listening to all this and remembering her moments with Asad and tears are rolling down from her eyes. Ayan looks at her and asks what happened Mona don't tell me that you love bhaijaan. And Zoya nodes her head in yes and says I don't know how and when I started liking him. I cann't believe that I fell in love with Mr. Khan. But now he is a married man so I will have to try to forget him which is impossible for me. Anyways right now my priority is my Abbu and my mom's killer so lets focus on that. I need to find a place for myself and reason to stay in India because my Mr. Dhurendar will be after me and deport me.

Precap : Humeira brings breakfast for Zoya in the room


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Part 3 : below

Edited by Neets - 12 years ago
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Part 3:

Ayan and Zoya are thinking and sunddely Ayan gets up in excitement and says idea. Zoya says what. Ayan says we both can get married and then you have a place to live and reason to stay in India. Zoya is angry and says don't even think of that. I need your help but I won't do that. Ayan says Mona Mona this marriage won't be real. We will not do proper Nikaah. We will just do the marriage in the court. So that you can enter my house to find the answers to your questions. Zoya says do you know by doing this how much you will hurt Humeira. She loves you a lot. She will break down after hearing about your marriage. I don't want to cause any pain or sorrow to her. Ayan is again back to thinking mode and says that we might need Humeira's help for you so why not involve her in all this. I will call her right now.

Ayan calls Humeria and she comes to the restaurant. They explain everything to her and Humeira cann't believe this. At one hand she is happy to find out that Zoya is her sister but on the other hand she cann't believe what she is saying. Humeira says that I have always seen my dad very sad and quiet. May be that is the reason. Something is buried in his heart and we need to bring it out and I will help you out in all this. They tell Humeria that this secret should remain a secret between 3 of us only. You will not discuss this with anyone else. Not even your ammi. Because we don't want anyone else to know about this and will make our task difficult. And if your ammi is anware of all this she won't be able to bear the pain at this age. Humeira understands this and says that ok. They decide to hide Zoya in Humeira's room for tonight. And decide to got to the marriage registrar's office the next day ( it's a fiction world so court marriage can be done in one day ). Zoya convinces her appi and jiju and they say ok and decide to postpone their flight until tomorrow and go to another relatives house. Zoya doesn't want to go with them because she doesn't want to face anyone's questions and comments.

At Khan Villa Tanveer has moved to Asad's room and very happy that finally she is Tanveer Asad Ahmed Khan. Asad is sitting on the sofa and thinking all his past moments with Zoya. Tanveer sees Asad and starts her emotional drama and says sorry Jammy I know you did a very big sacrifice for me. Please forgive me . Asad says no Tanu don't say that I can do anything for my child hood friend. But I won't be able to give you anything more than this. Please don't expect anything else from me. Tanveer thinks in her mind " you watch I will make you dance on my tunes". Tanveer sleeps on the bed and Asad sleeps on the side couch.

Next day morning Humeira brings breakfast for Zoya in the room only. And tells her to have her breakfast and get ready as she has to go with Ayan to marriage registrar's office. Zoya quickly gets ready and they bring Zoya out from the back of the house. Ayan is waiting for her. They go to the marriage registerar's office and get married. Appi and Jiju were also there to sign the witness.

From now onwards they call be calling each other with their first name: Ayan ' Zoay not Robart ' Mona

Ayan and Zoya comes home. Razia opens the door and shocked to see Ayan and Zoya at the door and both of them are wearing wedding garlands. Shireen is also present and shocked to see Ayan and Zoya. Shireen asks Ayan " what is this Ayan " Yeh sab kya hai Ayan beta" Ayan says Ammi we got married. I love Zoya not Humeira so I got married to her. I want you to accept Zoya as your daughter-in-law if not then I will have to move out with Zoya. Shireen is in disbelief and says no beta I will accept her. Tumhari khushi mein hi meri khushi hai. Razia says no I don't accept this marriage. She can't stay in my house. But Humeira comes in and says Ammi please don't say anything. She tells her Ammi that Ayan never loved her it was always one sided love so if she forcefully gets married to Ayan then she will never get Ayan's love. Shireen brings Zoya and Ayan inside the house. They all sit in the living room and Shireen tells Ayan you have done paper marriage and we don't believe in this. I will do your proper Nikaah with Zoya and till then Zoya will have to stay with Nikkhat and Nuzzat only. Ayan and Zoya agree to it ( as they both know this is what they wanted) Shireen says that I will fix the wedding date soon and then realizes that Rasheed is out of town for 3 months and want him to be present for the wedding also. So she decides that after 3 months on Aug 3 they will get married as per the proper muslim rituals.

Zoya thinks to herself perfect 3 months are more than enough for her to find out everything.

On the other hand Razia is very angry. She thinks how can Ayan marry Zoya. They have spoiled my daughter's life. She will never love anyone else. She will never get married to someone else. She will have to do something within 3 months and get Humeira married to Ayan and she will do exactly same thing with Zoya what she did with her mother ' get her killed.



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Edited by Neets - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its getting interesting with each chapter. Asad is such a fool he is hurting Zoya for that evil Billo😡 please update soon and if possible pls pm me...
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each chapter is more interesting than the previous one!! asad is a total idiot!! please continue!

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