ASYA SS : TERI MERI PYAARI PREM KAHANI ch 2 upd 16/4/14

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Hi friends i have decided to write a story on asya . It is different from original story line . I will post the story line and character sketch by tomorrow eve . so shall i continue .

FOR PMS PLEASE BUDDY ME .

AND THIS IS NOT A TRIANGLE LOVE STORY



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STORY LINE
ABOUT ZOYA

IN THIS STORY ZOYA'S BACKGROUND STORY WAS THE. SAME SHE CAME T INDIA IN SEARCH OF HER FATHER . BUT GUFFUR WAS NOT HER FATHER . HER FATHER NAME IS SANJAI KHAN .

ABOUT ASAD

SAME AS THE SHOW . HE LIVES WITH DILSHAD , NAJMA ,AND AYAAN . BUT AYAAN WAS HIS OWN BROTHER (NOT HALF) . RASHID LEFT HIS FAMILY FOR A GIRL CALLED SAMEERA JOSH WHO WAS SANJAI'S (ZOYA'A FATHER'S
BUSINESS PARTNER ) REASON WILL BE REVEALED AS THE STORY PROGRESS .

ABOUT SANJAI KHAN
A VERY CRUEL MAN WHO KILLED HIS WIFE BY SETTING FIRE TO THE HOUSE SHE LIVED . BUT HER DAUGHTER SURVIVED SOME HOW IT WAS OUR ZOYA .


PRESENT STORY
THIS STORY STARTS FROM THE FIRST DAY OF ZOYAS AARIVAL TO ASAD HOUSE . AND AYAAN IS ALSO PRESENT THAT TIME .




I WILL POST THE CHAPTER 1 BY TOMORROW .



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THANKS A LOT DEAR . 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waitinngg eagerly ! plzz update soon ! nd pm me wen it's updated ! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting :) Like that Ayaan is the real brother. :) and really relieved that Gaffur isn't her father, although feel bad for her that her father is still evill. Maybe she can change him =P Can't wait! :D
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                                                       chapter- 1
It's been 2 months zoya came to asad's  house . she is sharing a good bond with dilshad, najma and ayaan. it's been 3 weeks after najma's hair cut and asad is still angry on her for this .


As usual one fine evening. zoya is watching don with ayan and najma .


zoya : u know what najma SRK is the best . no one can beat him in his action or his beauty.


ayaan : haan zoya par meri action aur beauty ki samne tumari SRK  tohdi kam hai😛


zoya : bas ayaan . don't u remember what happened in the park that day .

ayaan : woh that day muje fight karniki mood nahi hai isliye mein fight nehi kiya.


najma : bas bhaijaan  . mei aapki fightinging skills se woh din college mei deeka  woh din muje patha jalla  aap ki fighting skills ke barimei .


ayaan: kis din ki baremei tum baath kar rahi ho tamatar?



najma : woh aap neha se propose kiya na ...

zoya : kya huva propose ki baath


najma : woh kya ha na ...


ayaan : w.o...h  me...in. meri phone meri room mei hi. mei abi aati hoon... 




Najma and zoya gives hi5 and starts laughting .😆😆😆😆


dilshad : kya horahai aap dhono kyun has rahiha


zoya : woh kya ha na poophie ...


before she could complete a voice came from her behind . it's none other than MR ASAD AHAMAD KHAN



ASAD: MISS FAROOKI



ZOYA: YES MR . KHAN

Asad : aap kaise meri permission ki bina meri laptop use karsakth . kisne aap ki woh hug diya . aap ki janthe aapki yeh mistake ki wajaise meri ek contract cancel honewale hai.


zoya : par mr khan  meine aapki laptop se haath bi nehi raaka .


asad . jooth math boliye kal raath aap ne muj meri laptop se ask kiya use karnekilye .


zoya : han par aap ne muje use karne ki mana kiya han na . phir kaise yeh merivajaise hoo saak thi.

najma : baaijaan ...


asad : bas najma mei miss farookise baath karahan hoon .

asad : miss farooki today morning i have seen u keeping my laptop back in my cupbord



zoya: haan mr khan i have kept it back . par...



asad: please miss farooki aur jooth math boliye.
meine ek aur bal boolraha hoon please meri aur meri family se dhoor rahiye.aapki vajaise najma ne first time hair cut kiya isbe bina meri permission se  . i don't want u to influence ur character on her. aur newyork jaane ki bath tell ur mom and dad to tach u good charater .

zoya had tears in her eyes and she runs back to her room and looks her room . ayaan sees this  goes to zoya and  knocks the door


ayaan: zoya darvase kolo please kya hoogaiya. please darvase kolo .



zoya : please ayaan please leave me alone for sometimes


ayaan : par zo...


zoya: please ayaan ...

ayan goes to the hall to know what happenD


PRECAPE:

ASAD: MISS FAROOKI I AM SOR...


ZOYA : MR KHAN  I AM GOING TO SHIFT TO HOTEL TOMORROW.




SO FRIENDS I HAVE POSTED IT. I AM SO SORRY FOR MY BAD HINDI I JUST KNOW  HOW TO UNDERSTAND HINDI. SO I AM SO SO SORRY FOR IT . SO PLEASE LIKE AND COMMEMT  .


FOR PMS
NO PMS FOR THIS CHAPTER . FROM NEXT ONE I WILL PM FOR THOSE WHO LIKE AND COMMENT FOR THIS CHAPTER.
BOTH POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE REVIEWS R WELCOME .SO PLEASE COMMENT.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rkbala

waitinngg eagerly ! plzz update soon ! nd pm me wen it's updated ! 😊

THANKS DEAR🤗
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Originally posted by: risingsea101

Sounds interesting

Continue soon :)

THANKS DEAR🤗
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Originally posted by: mochhug

Sounds interesting :) Like that Ayaan is the real brother. :) and really relieved that Gaffur isn't her father, although feel bad for her that her father is still evill. Maybe she can change him =P Can't wait! :D

THANKS DEAR 🤗

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