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Posted: 12 years ago
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This edit makes me cry while making it a thought raced my mind scene arnav just burden with the bitter and also the present truth of loving his wife ,with a lot of turmoil he is sitting in his mother's garden and that point a flashback is shown where his mother gets pricked by a rose and breaks the whole pot of roses as he couldn't bear. To see his mother hand bleeds story gets connected when the same scene played before him where he is about to crush the rose (khushi unconscious on the cliff comes to his mind) but then he realizes that his rose depiction khushi is waiting for him and because of this bitter truth he will not harm this beautiful rose instead he decides to wed her and bring her home where they love will blossom and bear fruits yes his mother made him get all his answers.




The raw feeling of the Emotion Called "LOVE" (Sequentially)
In the morning she is playing hide and seek as she does not want to have a glimpse of him...
Sick and weary he comes to the kitchen she panics and tells him to leave...
Smiles to herself on the thought that he listened and left...
when she turns round she is shocked to see him on the floor,
she runs to him ...
he is on the verge of fainting tires her best to revive him
feeds him jalebi as his sugar level drops takes great care of him...
helps him stand and is there positioned in front of him so he does not fall...
she introspects and feels bad for shunning him away,
she finally thinks to the apologize, feels so sorry and is really feeling sorry for the way she behaved in meantime is decorates herself with flour and he LAUGHS FOR THE FIRST TIME"(she makes him laugh),
coincidence has fixedly set plans for them...
On their way to Nainital her innocent ways irritate her
he gets irritated with her as she was the main culprit in removing the petrol from the car,
then they reach a place to eat ,he is unhappy here,
plans to leave ,she is very worried as he hasn't eaten anything and stops him as she is too worried about his health by creating a racket there(CARING HEART FOR SOMEONE CLOSE),
the bug of Misunderstanding bites him and he ill treats her...
his words possess a sense of rigidity and firmness he tells her to leave and he is not interested how she will reach home,
He sleeps soundly and she is left fearing the dark and then falls ill,
Its dawn he fresh minded and searches for her
A flashback spooks up and realizes he behaved so rudely,
walks out of his room too see her fainted ,
he looks after her ...
he regrets deeply for how he behaved and apologizes for his act

TOO CONCERNED ABOUT HER
He holds a gentleman nature and soft with her ...
then the two confronted by goons as if they also in the inclusive pack of destiny
Due to mistaken identity the goons hurt her,
the feeling yet raw finding its first root of the concealed emotion,
he fumes and starts whacking that goon mercilessly,
she is confused...
enveloped with rage and hidden affection he realizes,the same odd feeling which she felt in the beginning ,yes he was falling for her .
the sweet poison of love had already entered his veins,
just realization was awaited...



Participated in a play on forceful request,here they faced the best times of living the characters of heer and ranjha, relative to their lives he expresses his love for her silently,at the climax of it the girl dies he gets all teary shows a full screen of emotion on his face,he runs holds her in his arms and repents camouflaged in character, the girl listens with closed eyes and is shocked at his words because he leaves a trace of loving her unknowingly through his words,after the play he is confronted by her and questioned ,he just brushes her away and tells her this was a play come back from wonderland,change in emotion atmosphere gets a anger tinge,she lends helping hand to her sister_in_Law and gets fired by him, unnecessary accusations, screaming mishandling her terrified her ,but yet she never gave up ,she retaliated back asking him why he married her,in midst of anger a caring side was seen of him when she was going to fall off a step,he changed according to situation ,he was certain yet uncertain that he loved her,but at this point his brain was the rule master and his heart was in confused state.

We both out of our senses,love gets stronger and it feels to have an outlet expression, fights are nipped in the bud, beautiful flashbacks memories becoming alive, the need to be with each other is increasing,feeling the pangs of being with each other again is getting stronger, unsaid yet said your actions convey it all.

Gazing at the beautiful dame in front of me, her beauty stills away my breath,she kills me with her beauty,she looks like a beautiful jewel seated in the oyster bed, her eyes so gleam I can see my face glittering in them, her smile mixed with shyness drives me crazy, staring at her completes my day , can spend my whole day staring at this mystical beauty ,She looks like a sleeping beauty,It's dawn and she opens her eyes to find her prince gazing at her,she feels shy and like newly wed bride she reacts, princess and her prince share an eye-lock,their silence is has a gleam atmosphere ,their trance was bliss, just lost in each other, stares get longer promising ultimate love and togetherness for a lifetime

Bride awaits you on the beautifully decorated bed,you snub her because your mind is facing a traumatic situation,you can't bear as she is breathing in the same room, you snarl at her with your daggers eyes send her near the cold poolside, teary she gazes at the man she loves,obeys him instantly,shivering like a poor bird in the corner she bears it all,your mind takes you to flashback when she was ill after a deep thought you throw her a blanket which she refuses still your fierce look doesn't change to a concerned , love to hate ,hate to love both confused which way to go

His cruel punishment led her in this state, of no fault of hers he tortured her,but when phone call comes that the dilapidated building where he send this girl was going to fall down he panicked,he rattled his car along the way and stopped at that building,he was searching for her all over,but no sign of her ,he even called her by her name but no reply,finally he finds her saves a plank from hitting her,poor girl is in a confused state,but when she realizes who saved her she fumes at him,she retaliates in fury asking him what kind of person he is ,she tells just like you have a finally I too have mine,how could you be so ruthless,he feels guilty for his misdoings and he is trying to explain to her,but she like a stuck record goes on accusing him,finally he manages pin her to the wall,she is frail and exhausted,he then holds a hand so tight that a bangle pierces her tender skin and that moment a tear falls on his hand and the exhausted girl faints in his arms,he is holding her stunned at his own cruel behavior,she oozes innocence,she is gentle,true definition of being beautiful,he repents inwardly for his bad deeds,he cradles her in his arms takes her to her home,while clean her cut the girl fringes she is in pain as she is wounded ,but he is all teary as destiny had something beautifully in store for these two lovers.

Sipping his tea peacefully, a nudge makes him scream,as the cup falls from his hand and breaks,the terrified soul picks up the glass pieces and tear droplets are just falling from her face,his angry tears have a immediate transformation into calmness,when sees those tears,he questions her ,but the poor thing is caught in a web of telling the truth or to conceal it, finally she cries and breakdown on is shoulder,she can hear his soothing words asking to reveal the problem,but she flees from there leaving him worried and confused

Misbehavior for no fault of hers, the horrible words he used can't fade away, he stated to her to not appear in front of ,him he regrets but doesn't know how to ask pardon,he ears her pouring her feelings to the goat ,misses her and his eyes searching for her, her words which see said in narrative way to the tuition kids ,makes him think he is a real monster, still in deep thought both peer at each other and even after a big fight both wanted to make certain that the other got sound sleep.







Mr challenger grinning through it all, his demands have to be met come what may, stern his attitude and perfected to his rules of winning, he worries the poor little girl who wants her ring back ,she doesn't relent to obey him, she wants her ring back and agrees to bow down by catching her ear,he melts when he sees a tear trickling from her eyes,two emotional eyes meet and stretches his hand stops her from holding her other ear, his nature became soft and helping hand stretched out to give that ring as he couldn't see her broken , even his mighty attitude mellowed down cause feelings were brewing between two , instantly his voice lost the cunning tinge and he became gentle towards here, love was present between them yet the expression strategy didn't work for this business tycoon




Controlled emotions finally have reached its limits,rules were followed without a word uttered of complaint, pain visible yet went unnoticed ,only accusation were passed on her innocence,strong she stood by keeping every aspect pent up,the strength of bearing anymore was fading away,yet she held herself together lied to her mother ,as she couldn't see her worried,she constructed a fake picture of a loving and caring husband ,fighting her tears she hugged her mother and reassured her,she kept her mother's smile restored ,but she faded her husband's smile with her words, he was filled with guilt listening to her showering praises which he didn't deserve,as he was a monster in garb of a husband,her silence broke and left him introspecting about his deeds








Clues of losing you,my heart anxious to find you,let you go alone ,but now my eyes searching for you,the anxiety is rising as I am unable to find you, the emotion of love like uninvited visitor making my insides tremble, can't see you prove me wrong hope your safe , I am falling for you ye. Cant believe its actually happening





Don't dare to ,can't deny you love accept me too,rudeness is that in my voice,its urge to have you back the way you were, replayed your tactics on you to see that reaction of awe, my unique style to make you mine,planning on and getting processed,want to see you smile and what my clumsy yet lovable baby back,crude my ands work causing red marks on your arms,trust me time don't want to make you sad , I am very sure I will be triumphant in winning my sweetheart back and she will coil in my arms and accept me as her husband






Pelt all your worries on me, pour them out entirely,speak your mind I am with you,don't let this load of emotions overwhelm you,I am there beside you as a rock,can't see you fighting it all alone,let all your anguish leave you and heal you,hope my firm hug of support makes you express the unseen pain within you, set your shelf free from this web of trauma,tell me your worries, we both will fight it together .







Smell the emotion of love lurking around the corner, a bangle bore a wound in a hand and he flinched angrily as he cared for her, then plans to gift her bangles, care and affection takes a disguise in the form of his actions and reactions,he watches his love from a distance giving a illuminating smile looking at those bangles














Burying all misunderstanding for a while,the two love birds enact a play related to their life , the emotion of love finds its right path, the act is enacted in fury,as the play influences the two ,there is dreamy trance,the realization of deep emotion shows its tiny face,anger fades when the play is on the verge to end when the death of female character ,he pours his heart unknowingly that he loves her and if the don't meet on earth,these love birds will surely unite in paradise far away from all, with the end of this life related play silence also finds its voice and guts to express.


Ipkians a tit bit of my feelings after a long, words are falling short to explain how deeply I was in love with our beautiful show , their everlasting reel touched the real, still I switch on YouTube to relive every emotion which was well scripted by our awesome writer , he lifted up his quill and wrote beautifully and so meaningfully ,this script came to life when every actor played their respect roles to perfection,still after so long when we watch a video or see an old pic ,our mind goes back to those days which we every ipkian cherishes till date, we must have seen each scene soo many times but still we want to watch it more times yet not getting bored of this mesmerizing saga ,we miss it soo much and it can't be compared to any show on the tube,its unique and has set its own trademark in our hearts.



It doesn't go in forgotten memories it lives on YouTube is our only way to still live ipk from the start witness the transition of a arrogant man to a loving husband

mixture of different emotion seen, the uniqueness is the heartbeats brings each other near and they can feel each other when they are near


the awesome show it just had the magical touch which sprayed its brightness in our life , in the first time a sentiment of anger made our eyes pop out and gaze at the screen , his soft side made us gleamy ,when he cried our eyes watered simultaneously , his crude ways had a stint of love care and affection, he realized his folly and apologized to his love ,seen his apology all passed wounds got healed instantly, his love for his di and plants had a great significance in his life


Fought every trial and came out victorious he was a winner ,he fought evil , his gate and style of speaking made us to go in a trance







My perception of the look and scene saw that bubbly smile in response to all my gifts I gave what u like the best simple things in life which gives u lot of happiness as u open my last gift a tear escaped from your eye I cant see u this way my steps take me towards u and hug u tight just to tell you your sufferings are mine ,when u put the chain for me I CRIED as I missed u the significance of this chain showed all the fallen beads all my miss doings are nullified and want to trying to replace them with happy moments which every bead on your neck makes u feel that I Have trying my best to stitch your pain and heal you completely



your warnings of dying took lightly ,you will become the brightest star rings in my mind,jokingly said words on the verge to become ultimate reality ,but I will revive you, cant leave me and go,your pulse will return,have faith on our love

Past recollection of he caring about her comes to mind, her face lights up at the recurring thought of it, he declares that she is his as he loves her and he feels no rituals needed to prove how much he loves her,he goes on a longdrive of thought,his silence is a proof that he loves her damm it , no manmade rituals can even measure his possessiveness and care for her






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Posted: 12 years ago
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Eee u r a newbieee..welcme sharon..nd u knw rite um a big diwani of ur wonderful lines..loved it
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U r amazing..beautifully written all..really loved it all..thnx alot for sharing.. I love ur write ups
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Well written 😊 loved it 😊

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