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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
virat kabir know each other😲
poor virat phir se dil toot gya💔
i want virman together
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
chap 15
in
few
minutes 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 15
manvi : tum dono ek doosre ko jaante ho... ye toh shocking hai yaar...

kabir : shh.. let me talk to my friend mani...
manvi : chep tumne bhi mujhe nahi btaya...
kabir : kaisa hai tu virat... aur ghar pe sab kaise hai...??
virat : main theek hoon... how are you kabir...??
kabir : main bhi ab theek hoon... mani ke paas ho na... waise tu mani.. i mean manvi ko kaise jaanta hai...
manvi : arrey virat mera partner hai, meri di ke devar...
kabir : ohh... cmon guys come in first...
manvi : aao na virat... mera hone wala ghar hi hai ye...
virat looked at manvi n cursed his luck because he lost something that meant everything to him.
virat : hmm..
kabir : waise kisne socha tha ke jiss mani ke baare mein main tujhe kitna kuch btata tha woh teri partner ban jaegi... nahi...??
virat : haan... kisne socha tha... par maine kabhi dhyaan hi nahi dia ke meri manvi hi teri mani hai...
kabir : meri manvi...
manvi : kabir virat ka matlab hai uski best friens urff uski partner urff uski aur sirf uski ded futiya...
kabir : ohh i see... let me bring something for us..
manvi : main hoon na... u both chat.. i will bring something...
kabir : okk... n soft drink is in the refrigerator only...
manvi : okk..
virat was looking at the couple in front of his eyes n he knew how much kabir loved his mani n now he was looking at it himself only...
manvi came back with some snavks n cold drink...
manvi : chep tum yahan kaise... maya se bore ho gaye kya...???
kabir : maya aur tera patch up ho gaya...??
virat : yeah... we are back together... (with voice that was almost choking)
kabir : wow thats great...
manvi : n u know what kabir, they are getting engaged soon...
kabir : woww dude congrats... n i am very happy for u both yaar...
virat : thank u kabir... so when did u come back...??
kabir : a month back...
virat : hmm...
this single reply made virat understand all that happened... why suddenly manvi wanted to return to rishikesh... the phone incident...her crying that day in her room... her asking him about love n the pain that follows... everything...
manvi : partner... lo na..
virat : nahi... actually mujhe kuch kaam tha yahan... ab mujhe chalna chahie...
manvi : chalna chahie matlab...?? abhi toh aae ho... abhi nahi... ghar toh chalo pehle...
virat : i cant manvi... i have to leave asap.. maya is also alone there... try to understand...
manvi : ab maya aa gayi hai toh kya mujhe bhool jaoge partner...
virat : dekhna ab tum bhi mujhe bhool jaogi... tumhara kabir aa gaya hai na... (and he looks away to hide his tears)

manvi : hmm...okkk... chalo jao... but meri sagai pe toh aaoge naa...
virat : sagai...
kabir : actually virat...
manvi : kabir... ssshhh.. actually partner kya hai na...?? abhi kabir ke mom dad ayege baat karne, phir sab final hoga... but maine tumhe pehle bta dia hai, tum special ho na... iss liye...
virat : okk... bye guys..
manvi : bye kabir...
kabir : tum kahan jaa rahi ho...
manvi : virat ko see off karne...
kabir : okk bye...
manvi n virat came down from kabir's house n were walking to the car when manvi held virat's hand n rested her head against his shoulder. this made virat flinch a little.. he alway wanted this, but not like the way it was happening...
manvi : i m very happy... now i feel complete partner... remember i asked u one day that why love hurts so much... now i know every answer to such questions... i have kabir now... n i love him way too much... jab woh nahi tha na, toh lagta tha ki main marr hi jaungi... par uske pyaar ke mujhe himmat di har ek pal jab maine khudko kamjoor mehsoos kia tha... main nahi jaanti ke kab humari dosti pyaar mein badal gayi but main itna jaanti hoon, ke ab main kabir ke alag ho kar nahi jee paungi... woh mera sab kuch hai... aur pta hai kya... aaj kal na mujhe ajeeb ajeeb sapne aate hain... jaise humari shaadi ho gayi n wohi pati patni stuff nok jhok... ufff i am loving it partner... tum bhi aisa kuch hota hai kya...?? i mean tumhe bhi kuch toh hota hoga...
virat : hota hai na... jab bhi wo kareeb hoti hai na, toh duniya rukk si jaati hai... dil jor jor se dhadhakne lagta hai... dil karta hai uski bahoon mein saari zindagi bitaa doon.. bas usko apni bahoon mein bhar loon aur har pal usse batun ke main usse kitna pyaar karta hoon... usko ye bta doon ke usse alag ho kar main marr jaunga... usko kisi aur ke saath dekh ke mera dil jalta hai aur mann karta hai ke puri duniya ko aag laga doon...
manvi : haaye... poora hindi film types... nahi... tum itna pyaar karte ho maya se...???
virat suddenly stopped walking the moment he heard maya's name.
manvi : kya hua...?? chalo na...
virat : tum dono bahut pyaar karte ho ek doosre se...
manvi : haan bahut jyada...
virat : car aa gayi...
manvi : kash tum ghar chalte...
virat : kabhi aur partner... bye...
manvi : bye.. n drive safely...
virat : hmmm...
virat drove the car at a very high speed for a long time. he switched on the radio to distract his mind a little... but the song being played made it all worse for him to do so...
ra ra ra...
ishq ishq ishq ishq
ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye - (2)
ye bana hai -4, kisi kisi ke liye
ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye - (2)
(pyaar ke afsaane yaar tu kya jaane
ishq toh karate hain diwaane) - (2)
oh..(hai jaruri, hai jaruri -2) zindagi ke liye
ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye - (2)

he stopped the car near a desolated place. he got off the car n punched the bonnet of the car with his fist...
virat : kyun...??? kyun hua aisa...?? kyun...?? mere saath hi kyun...??? kya galti thi meri...?? kya galti thi...??? yahi ki maine pyaar toh kia par uska ehsaas karne mein der ho gayi... kyun manvi...?? pehle toh meri har ankahi baat samajh jati thi tum... toh iss bar kya ho gaya... iss bar kyun nahi samajh payi ke main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon... kyun manvi...?? mere pyaar ko kyun nahi samajh payi tum...
(ishq aisa nagama hai, ishq aisa jajaba hai
jab bhi andhera badhata hai) - (2)
ho.. (jalata hai dil, jalata hai dil -2) roshani ke liye
ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye - (2)

virat was shattered... he had nothing worth living in his life... the girl who could become the light of his life, herself pushed him into darkness. virat's thoughts were disturbed by the ringing tone of his mobile. he picked uo the phone n call that it was viren's...

viren : so kya news...??
virat : sab khatam ho gaya...
viren : chal oye... majaak mat kar... baat karwa meri manvi se... mujhe pta hai woh maan gayi hogi...
virat : wo kabhi nahi manegi... kyunki wo mujhse pyaar hi nahi karti... woh kisi aur se pyaar karti hai...
viren : manvi sirf jeevika se pyaar karti hai, phir mujhse , phir apne ghar waalon se aur aur ab tujhse...
virat : nahi bhai... wo kabir se pyaar karti hai...
viren : kabir...?? koi punter hoga uska...
virat : boyfriend hai uska... mera dil toot gaya bhai... bahut dard ho raha hai... main jee nahi paunga... main marr jaana chahta hoon...
viren : nahi virat... rukk,,, tu kahan hai...?? main abhi aa raha hoon... tu wahin rukk... wahin rukk... bta mere bhai... kahan hai tu...
virat : sunset point... highway ke paas...
viren : tu kuch nahi karega... main abhi aa raha hoon...

scene shifts
jeevika : kya hua viren ji...?? virat theek toh hai na...??
viren : kabir kaun hai...??
jeevika : kabir toh... woh mannu.. kabir...
viren : pehle hi pta tha toh kyun nahi btaya...?? agar mere bhai ko kuch ho gaya na, toh tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga jeevika...
jeevika : viren ji meri baat toh suniye...
viren : main virat ko lene jaa raha hoon... tum se aake baat karunga...
jeevika : please mujhe bhi apne saath le chaliye... please...
viren : chalo...
on the way
jeevika : viren ji please... ek baat meri baat sun lijiye...
viren : kya suno... ke tum jaanti thi ki tumhari behen kisi aur se pyaar karti hai aur yahan main khud apne bhai ko aisi khai mein dhaka de raha hoon jahan usko dard ki siva aur kuch nahin milega...
jeevika : viren ji... kabir toh 3 saal pehle hi chala gaya tha par mannu hi usse bhool nahi payi... aur mujhe kuch pta bhi nahi kabir kahan hai iss waqt...
viren : woh rishikesh mein hi hai... virat mila hai usse... ab please viirat ke saamne kabir ka topic mat shuru karna...
jeevika : viren ji main kyun
viren : bas...
virika reached that place n found virat sitting on the car. viren knew how much his brother was shaken up from all this n like a father he needed to console his son n bring him out of all this...
viren : virat...
virat : bhai...
viren hugged virat and rubbed his back...
viren : sab theek ho jaega... main hoon na... kuch nahin hoga...
virat : woh mujhse pyaar nahi karti...
viren : bhool ja... sab bhool ja... woh tere layak nahi hai... bhool ja uska bhai...
virat broke the hug n looked at viren with tears in his eyes...
virat : bhai main usko nahi bhool sakta...
viren : dekh... apne bhai ki baat sunn... kya hua ke woh tujhse pyaar nahi karti toh... tere liye koi aur hogi jo sirf tujhse pyaar karegi... tujhe dhokha nahi degi...
virat : bhai manvi ko galat mat samjho... uski koi galti nahi hai... pyaar koi galti nahi hai...
viren : tu ab bhi uski side le raha hai...
virat : shayad hi kabhi main usse alag ho paun bhai...
viren : chal ghar chalte hai... ghar jaa kar baat karenge...
virat : bhia aap ko pta manvi jis kabir se pyaar karti hai na, woh mera dost hi nikala.. london mein hum saath padhte the... woh apni mani se bahut pyaar karta tha, kuch banna chahta tha uske liye... bahut kuch btaya tha apni mani ke baare mein... aur maine bhi uski har ek baat suni thi par kabhi dimag mein hi nahi aaya ke manvi hi toh mani hai... main jise apni kismat man raha tha woh toh kisi aur ki chahaat nikli...
viren : virat...
virat : bhai mujhe khud pe hi gussa aa raha hai... main jaane anjaane unn dono ke beech aane waala tha... do pyaar karne walon ke beech aa raha tha... manvi aur kabir ke beech aa raha tha... unn dono ke beech toh virat ki koi jagah hi nahi hai...
viren : bas virat... bas.. khud ko aur takleef mat de yaar... teri koi galti nahi hai... manvi ko humse sach nahi chupana chahie tha...
virat : ghar chale bhai... mujhe sab kuch theek karna hoga.. taki manvi ke liye koi problem naa ho... mera dil toot gaya toh kya hua... main manvi ka dil nahi tootne dunga... usko koi dard nahi pahunchne nahi dunga...
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next part will not be posted instead it would be pmed to the ones who like the update n to the one who comment...
love
naina
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
owww nooo
they know each other, this will be more difficult for me to chose one of them 😊

felt sad for virat,
he is so heartbroken , cant see him in this way..

love viren how he is there for his brother...

im so excited ...

great work naina 😉
Edited by hangok - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
POOR VIRAT.😭 I FELT VERY SAD FOR HIM.😭
WHY VIREN BLAME MANVI?😡
EMOTIONAL UPDATE THA YAAR.😭
AWESOME WRITING.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thos update was WOW. I felt soo sad for virat. Plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

owww nooo
they know each other, this will be more difficult for me to chose one of them 😊

felt sad for virat,
he is so heartbroken , cant see him in this way..

love viren how he is there for his brother...

im so excited ...

great work naina 😉

difficult for u, so think of manvi n her condition 😉
everything would be fine... 😊
thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

POOR VIRAT.😭 I FELT VERY SAD FOR HIM.😭
WHY VIREN BLAME MANVI?😡
EMOTIONAL UPDATE THA YAAR.😭
AWESOME WRITING.

dnt wrry... sab theek ho jaega 😊
i know it was emo Cry
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi246

Thos update was WOW. I felt soo sad for virat. Plzzz continue soon

thank u soo much 😊
will continue after exams now
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwmere viru ka dil tod diya woh b itni buri tarah! he was so happy! Here also I love my Viren "the Supercool Bro' my VV bros rocks! Mjhe ye kabira ni pasand bhagao ise! My Virman always!

Ps DMg????? plzzz

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