Breakfree...

Breakfree...

Searing pain..
Of guilt and unworthiness
Tears the soul apart...

Torn apart ...
A battered being ..
He lies...in ruins..
Of his hushed conscience..

Silent screams..
Of the pained heart
Remain unheard....

Mocked , he stands..
As the dark mask,
Looks on , gleefully...
Mocking him..
Of a life..
Borrowed and unworthy...
As his guardian angel..
Bleeds in agony ...

Own reflections..
Mocking...
As his angel lies...
Bleeding...

His bleeding heart
Screams in agony...
Echoing..
In silence of ..
The dark truth...

As he plunges,
Into the depths..
Of dark freedom..
To breakfree...

-Sareeta

-Based on Shiv's outburst about his ill fate and kundali... to Gauri ....(6th Dec)

absolutely spot-on...beautiful expressions of the scenario...makes me feel Shiv's pain all over again

Originally posted by: mona05

absolutely spot-on...beautiful expressions of the scenario...makes me feel Shiv's pain all over again

Thank you sooooooooo much Mona!!! Glad you liked it and related to it so deeply! 😊

i will second what mona have said...

these lines makes you feel the pain of shiv again..

very well penned down sareeta... 👏

ohh ho sareeta too good
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thanks a lotttttttttttttttttt

Like what Mona said, ur words explain Shivs pain and we also can feel it. 👏

Oh Sareeta, you wrote it down so well.. 👏 👏 👏 As Mona said, it makes one feel Shiv's pain again..

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10000000000000000% right Shiv's heart is shouting of pain & no 1 can hear it. Neither even Gauri as she's too under a deep shock.
👏 Good Writing 👏

You alwasy seem to amaze me....I love it!

haiiiii 😳 ! very aesthetic and very true 👏 👏 👏 , sareeta only such men existed in reality, hai na! 😳 😉 , i luv the title! i wish only i can breakfree from this addiction of kaa and IF i mean i am trying to study MIS and i just keep coming to if or watch the video mixes of shiv and gauri! 😳 well-done janu! 👏 👏 👏