YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread2*ch.34 page.141 - Page 62

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Posted: 12 years ago
keeni meany i spammed 21 pages on this thread 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
u can see now how desperate i am for an update
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Posted: 12 years ago
i could go on to page 150 if i want to 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
so before i do that just give us an update pleeasee my sweety ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

P.S. i am still waiting for my gift keeni meany 😉

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100 pages :D :D
we deserve an update :P
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Back with heartbeat!!! 😃 Okay I'm thinking of just going forward to the New York trip in the next update, what do you guys feel? Let me know cause I'm running out of ideas for this story. Also please press like and comment!!! I'm more than happy to update and inform everyone, but please just drop in to say a few words. All the writers work so hard to write, and in return we're just asking for a few minutes of your time. Heads up this update was written with 0 hours of sleep, so if it's bad please forgive me 🤣 PLEASE NO RESERVING!!! MY TWO OTHER STORIES THERE ARE LITERALLY MORE RESERVES THAT COMMENTS. DO NOT DO NOT DO NOT RESERVE PLEASE

chapter 28

Viren was so busy in his work that he hadn't even remembered about Zaaine still sleeping. At 6PM he went upstairs to his room to see him still fast asleep. He knew he had to wake him up otherwise he would have a hard time feeling asleep tonight. He switched on the lights making Zaaine squeeze his eyes and making Viren smile at his cuteness.

v - "Zaaine time to get up. Come on its super late. You slept for so many hours"
z - "Daa sleep more please"
v - "Aren't you hungry? Remember we were going to get ice cream after dinner? And what if mommy wants to FaceTime with you? Maybe I should just tell her that Zaaine is sleeping"
z - "Nooo! me talk with mommy"
v - "Okay, lets go downstairs and eat dinner first. Come on get up fast"
z - "Daa two mins. Please"
v - "Okay two minutes. I'm waiting for you" he said walking out his room. Viren walked in his room to go change. He was still dressed up in his work attire. When he came out he saw Zaaine sitting on his bed with his iPad trying to FaceTime with Jeevika.
v - "Zaaine what are you doing?"
z - "calling mommy"
v - "She will call you when she's free. Let's go downstairs"
z - "Daa me try"
v - "Gosh Zaaine" he said going and sitting next to him on the bed. Zaaine kept trying Jeevika's number which he had memorized, but she wasn't replying.
z - "mommy no reply"
v - "She told me to tell Zaaine that she will call you before bedtime, okay?"
z - "Okay Daa, but me miss mommy"
v - "You always miss her" he said picking him up upside down. Zaaine was laughing as Viren took him downstairs.
v - "Okay what do you want to eat?"
z - "cereal"
v - "You want cereal for dinner? Is Zaaine a little crazy" he said smiling
z - "No crazy. Me want cereal please"
v - "Okay go grab your bowl and I'll put you cereal"
Zaaine grabbed his bowl and handed it to Viren who put his cereal and milk in. He put his bowl on the table while Zaaine sat on the table.
z - "Daa mommy eat"
v - "I'll message her and ask her. You finish your cereal fast"
z - "Okay daa" he said eating his dinner.
Viren looked through the fridge trying to find something to eat, but he didn't feel like eating anything. He brought his laptop next to Zaaine and sat next to him.
z - "Daa"
v - "Yes Zaaine"
z - "When we go see snow?"
v - "In a few weeks"
z - "Why no snow here?"
v - "Zaaine eat your cereal first"
Zaaine ate his cereal but couldn't hold it in longer. He had too many things to talk to Viren about.
z - "Daa why mommy no come home"
v - "She's on-call. So incase someone gets hurt at night time and they need a doctor then Jeevika helps them"
z - "But people sleep night time. Why they get hurt?"
Viren was about to slap himself because of Zaaine's questions. He really could not stop laughing anymore. Thank god, or actually thanks to Jeevika he finally stopped when he heard the iPad ringing. Zaaine quickly got out of his chair with the help of Viren and ran to get his iPad from the couch. He accepted the FaceTime requested and got comfy on the sofa to talk to his mom.
j - "Hi Zaaine, how are you doing?"
z - "Good mommy. Mommy you eat dinner?"
j - "I'm eating right now. Did you eat?"
z - "Cereal"
j - "Cereal for dinner. Why is Zaaine so silly"
z - "Me no silly mommy. Mommy you come home please"
j - "I can't Zaaine. But I'll come pick you up from school tomorrow promise"
z - "Pinky promise"
j - "Pinky promise. Okay you didn't tell me what you did in school today. Did you make new friends?"
z - "Me read two books" he said showing two with his fingers cutely' "Me also do coloring"
j - "And did you talk to anyone"
Zaaine nodded yes
j - "Who did you talk to?"
z - "Ryan"
j - "Is he nice"
z - "Yes. Mommy when we go see snow?"
j - "Soon. Where's Viren?"
z - "Daa here" he said taking the iPad to the table where Viren was sitting.
v - "Hey Jeevs"
j - "Hey love. What are you upto"
v - "nothing just finishing some work. What are you doing?"
j - "Just eating dinner. Did you eat?"
v - "Don't feel like it. I'll eat once Zaaine is asleep. By the way I talked to Virat and Manvi and they said they can most likely come"
j - "Oh yeah I forgot to ask Zoya and Karan"
v - "Already forgetting things huh?"
j - "Jerk"
v - "Just joking. Ask them and let me know"
j - "Okay. I'm going for rounds. I'll call you later tonight"
v - "Okay, take care. Zaaine say bye"
z - "Bye mommy"
j - "Bye Zaaine. Love you"
z - "Love you more" he said giving her a flying kiss.
v - "Okay should we go out for a spin Zaaine?"
z - "Where Daa?"
v - "Well we need to go get some groceries and then ice cream maybe?"
z - "I love you daa" he said hugging Viren.
v - "I love you more" he said giving him a kiss on his cheek.
z - "Daa me put my shoes on"
v - "Okay go fast"
Zaaine quickly put his shoes on and was ready to go out with his dad. Zaaine quickly got in the car and Viren buckled him up. The two of them drove around town first picking up some groceries. Then Viren drove to Ben and Jerry's ice cream in Downtown LA. Zaaine was super excited to be going getting ice cream. As soon as he got in he knew exactly what he wanted.
z - "Daa brownie fudge ice cream in cone please"
v - "Gosh you're just like Jeevika"
z - "chocolate my favorite and mommy too"
v - "Yes I know that"
Viren ordered Zaaine's ice cream and got one for himself also. The two of them sat down on the table inside the ice cream store enjoying their time.
v - "Zaaine you're so silly"
z - "Why daa?"
v - "Come here"
Zaaine walked towards Viren who took a napkin and cleaned his nose which had ice cream on it. Zaaine just ended up laughing.
z - "Me like ice cream on nose daa"
v - "Oh my god Zaaine. You're just like Jeevika. You know she used to say that also"
z - "Really?"
v - "Yup. When we were in college we would come over here and she would eat the same ice cream as you and then I used to clean her nose"
z - "Mommy and me silly"
v - "Very very silly"
z - "Daa me want more ice cream"
v - "You just finished an entire ice cream cone and you want more?"
z - "Yes please"
v - "Maybe on the weekend okay. Or you're going to get sick. On Friday after school me and Jeevika will bring you here"
z - "Pinky promise"
v - "Pinky promise"

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Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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#unres

Guess whose at first AFTER AGES?
Its meee Kanu's Charu ❤️ 🥳🥳
*BE JEALOUS PEOPLE* 🤣
Thanks to my Partner, Marzi for this!
She's such a sweetheart!
LOVE YOU PARTNER ❤️

Oh My Goodness!
Look who gave us Zaaine after a whole century!
Last time I read Zaaine I think I was 19 but now I am 91 reading the new update! 🤣 😆 🤣 😆

The update was full of Zaaine..
I LOVE IT TO THE CORE! ❤️
Oh boy! Zaaine is getting cuter update by update!
And I SWEAR TO GOD, SOMEDAY I'LL KIDNAP HIM FROM HIS SCHOOL AND LEAVE VIREN & JEEVIKA WITH THEIR NEW BABY!
Zaaine would be with me 😳
HAPPY TOGETHER ❤️ 😆

I was actually laughing holding my stomach when Zaaine asked those silly questions to Viren! 😆
People around me would have thought I'm mad coz I was in college canteen reading this! 🤣

Why did Viren & Jeevika say my Zaaine silly? 😡
I sometimes too each Cereal!
Thats a big deal!
I love the fact that now MORE THAN VIRIKA LOVE ZAAINE ❤️
He's sooo adorable!
He got so excited on the name of ice-cream!
I wanna ask him that could I share his ice-cream with him? 😆

The cutest was the Jeevika-Zaaine face time!
My poor baby miss his mommy!
I want his mommy to come to him n hug him tightest soon! 🤗

He too loves chocolate?
WoW!
I love that too 😳
We are same-same!
Send his to me!
I can bet that we'll be HAPPY TOGETHER ❤️

At the end Viren told him about his college days with Jeevika!
Adorable!
Can this family be for PURFECT than this?

Kanuu, I can't wait to read more! 👏
Thank You sooo much for making it bigger than the pm ❤️
Now, I'll spam you for update NOT Navya...
She is super mad at us and I won't bug her now! 🥺

But I know my Kanuu would NOT AT ALL mind if I do that with you!
So UPDATE SOON BEFORE I AND MARZI PARZI COME TO YOU!! 🤣

Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

UNRES#

Oh My Gosh keeni meany, finally we get Zaaine after a century!!!
well actually the wait was worth this...full of Zaaine which most of us want
aweee why does he become more cuter update by update??
i just want to pull out his cheeks, and kishi kishi him😆
i actually laughed outloud when he was asking zillion questions
and cereal for supper?? i sometimes eat cereal for supper too
and me loveee chocolate like zaaine and jeevi
so me and zaaine have a lot in common keeniii, be jealous😆😆
thanks for making it longer than the PM one 😃
jeevis and zaaines facetime was the cutest
n the end where viren told him about theyre college days with jeevs
just to cutee..i dnt think i can wait any longer
so be ready for spammin keeni peeni 😆
Navya is very angry at us, i dnt think i will spam her story anymore 🤣
will only spam urs and others haha,, i dnt wanna be murdered by Navya LOL
update fasssttt otherwise ull see me spamming in no time with my partner Charu ❤️
big big big huggy from marzi parzi and zaaine to keeni meeni peeni teeni seeni 🤣
Edited by jeevi7 - 12 years ago
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I LOVE YOU KANU ❤️
I'll give you all the update tomm I promise my love 😳

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