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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 10

( toofan se pehle ye khamoshi >>)


Dreadhun , india

The two ladies are packing their suitcase in the hotel

1st lady says/ vaishali : kya mr rai hamein pune ya Mumbai milenge promilla ( still packing her bag )

2nd lady says/ promilla : mr rai hamein pune mein milenge aur phir hamara kaam shuru !!! kaam aasan toh nahi hain par mushkill bhi nahi just wait n watch vaishali jab hamara kaam khatam hojagyga humein kitne paise milenge ( smiles with a wicked smile on her face >>>)


Scene shifts

The kapoor house

Nitin in his room when he sees gyanesh coming out of rehaan's room

Nitin calls out to gyanesh the servant

Gyanesh comes

Gyanesh : says haan nitin baba aap ko kuch chahiye

Nitin :kuch nahi chahiye gyanesh dada par aap rehaan ke room mein kyun gayye apko pata ki koi rehaan ke room pe jayye rehan ko pasand nahin hain (with a smile )

Gyanesh : ( smiles) nitin baba actually who rehaan dada ne hi mujhe ijazat di thi unko apna moblie phone repair ke liye dena tha par maine har jagah dekha par unka mobile phone nahin mila mujhe

Nitin : confused pata nahi kaha hain ye rehaan bhi na par don't worry gyanesh dada lagta hain rehaan khud mobile phone repair karne gayya hoga

Gyanesh : theek hain nitin baba and he leaves

Nitin 's chacha hears this outside in the corridor and has wicked smile on his face and says in his mind

Nitins chacha: says in his mind nitin beta uss rehaan ka phone maine aise jagah daala hain koi aur aur khud rehaan bhi nahin dhoond payega ( with a wicked smile on his face gooes away )

Mean while in the otherside of pune


HUDA Market shop.pune

Raashi stands up and "sorry aunty "and doesn't see anybody

Raashi : arey ye aunty kahan gayi ( looks confused )

Her mobile rings and she picks it up

Sunny is on the line

Sunny : hello raashi di aap kahan ho mein intezaar kar raha hoon app kab aayogi

Raashi : sorry sunny , main abhi aarahi hoon

Sunny : ok

Rasshi keeps the phone and looks around just nods her with a smile head and leaves

On the ortherside of the shop in a small alley the shadow man talk to the mysterious lady

Shadow guy ( angrily ) kya kar rahi ho mana kiya hain ghar se bahar nikal ne ki

Mysterious lady : (confused n scared ) mein mein !!!

Shadow man disgusted

Shadow man (thinking in his mind ) aaj to baal bachey agar wo ladki iske samne atti toh kya kya hota who mein hi jaanta hoon

Gaurav hears this conversation from thre backside and leaves !!!!!!!!!!!



Scene shifts to the business man house

Businessa man sitinhg on the counch and is remembering

In blur white n black flash back scenes

A man with his family is standing

The man saying

Tum usse nahi leke ja sakte ho kyunki who idhaar nahi hain

Young man

Main use le jayounga aur who bhi aap sabke nazaron se

Papaji a voice says and all them turn around and see

Another young man and a young woman in married clothes

The other young mans says hesistantly

Papji humne shaadi kar li all of them are shocked

Flashback ends

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Businessman says mein tumne nahi chodunga ( angrily) dials a number on his cellphone says

Businessman : kaam shuru karo ( in an angry mood )

Voice : ok boss !!!!

Business man open the cupboard and says looking at the big photoframe ( not shown to us)

Business man : kaun keh sakta tha ki hum pakke dost nahi par balki pake bhai jaise the ( says in sad tone but is also angry )

And hits his hand on the desk

Jaiswals house , pune

Mr ritesh jaiswal at home , in the other room mukul/sunny n ginny are playing and talking

Mr ritesh talking to a client on the phone

Mr ritesh : haan mr mittal jo iss haft eke profit 60%hamare companyne kitna munaafa kiya aur aapne bhi mr mittal ( talking happily).

Mr mittal : party toh banti mr jaiswal ( happily says on the otherside off the line )

Mr jaiswal : ok and keeps the phone when the doorbell rings

Ginny comes out

Ginny : uncle mein door khol deti hoon ( smiles ) ginny opens the door its rocky

Mr jaiswal : rocky beta gokul kya tumahare saath hain

Rocky : nahi uncle uska phone bhi try kar raha hoon par lagta switch off hain (confused)

Mr jaiswal : ok ( worried )

Mukul n sunny also confused

Suddenly somebody enters the jaiswal house , its gokul he is angry and has something in his hand ( ginny , mukul,rocky,sunnya nd mr jaiswal turn around to see gokul standing angrily there )

Rocky: says arey gokul where were you tum kahan the yaar aur tumhara cell bhi off tha ( enquires) aur ye tumahara hatth mein kya hain ( confused )

Gokul : smilies sylily sorry rocky par mein apne dad ka asli karname sun ke aur dekh ke ayya hoom!!!

Everybody shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Rocky : kya matlab gokul , tum anpe dad ke bare mein aisa kun bol rahe ho!!

Gokul : angry job bol raha hoon sach bol raha hoon!!!!!!!(angrily says )

Mr jaiswal :(angry ) kya bakwas keh rahe ho gokul!!!!

Gokul : yeh koi bakwaas nahi hain mr ritesh jaiswal jane mane business man bribe lete hain aur who bhi politician seh !!!

Rocky n ginny ( together say ) whaat??

Ginny: (calmily) jaroor koi galat phemi hain gokul bhaiya uncle aisa kucch nahi kar saakte!!

Gokul ( smile slyiliy to his dad ) trust me ginny who bahut kar sakte ,dad ye dekhe and throws the pictures!!!!!

Everybody see the picture and are shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Gokul : dekh liya aap sab ne ( shouting )

Mere dad ek baade nikamme hain woh guss khatte hain!!!!!!

Mr jaiswal : ( angrily) gokul and slaps gokul hard

(Ginny rocky sunny n mukul all shocked )

Tum doosron kei baat seh apne papa pe shak kar rahe hoo ( says angrily )

Gokul in tears

Gokul : mein sach bol raha!!!!

saying this gokul angrily runs out of the house is still running angrily on the road

Rocky goes after gokul while ginny wipes away mukul tears and mr jaiswal goes to his room and closes door with a bang)

Rocky on the road shouting

Rocky : gokul gokul yaar ruk gokul !!!!!!!!!

Episode ends on rocky's worried face ''''.



Precap : promo 2

Raashi in the hospital '' doctor says khoon zyada behe gaya hain aap jald hi ab negative blood ka imtezaa kaare ''''''. warna raashi coma mein challi jayegi >>>>>>>>

Family members shocked '''''''

Edited by lizzie1765 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Very good update lizzie.👏
I wonder what those two Aunties gonna do.🤔 And what's their plan.😲
And looking forward to Rehaan and co. plan too.
Raashi ka accident hone wala hai?😲 Anyways, excellent update. Waiting for the mahaepisode.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
sorry guys for the very late update internet was down 😡

Chapter 11

( Pareshaan )


Kapoor House


Vineet kapoor ( nitin chacha and nitin fathers older brother ) talking on the phone to his son akash kapoor who is 28 years old nitin's older cousin brother )

Vineet chacha : akash beta tum kab aa rahe ho beta u.k. se pata hain ki wahan k business improvemenyt ho gayyyi hain

Akash ( on the orther line ) : haan dad sab ttheek hain aap ye batayo nitin aur rehaan kaise hain

Vineet chahcha : ( hearing rehaans name he smirks and says ) : haan beta nitin toh theek hain new school join kiya hain

chote ( nintin dad ) ne ye bada accha decision lliya hain nitin puttar ko doosre school mein daalne ko

Vineet chacha : so tum kab aa rahe ho india wapas

Akash : dad thode legal documents sign karna hain and then straight back to india mom kaisi hain

Vineet chacha : tumhe bahut mis kar rahi

Akash : ok dad meeting ke liye jana hain india aake apko sab business ke bare mein bata hoon bye

Vinnet :ok bye beta and keeps the phone down n smiles

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Meanwhile on the road

Gokul is still running its is night he stops next to some side of the road the side of the road is deserted

He rememebers what happens back inb his house and cries angrigly

In flashback>>>>>>>>>>>>

its revealed how a stranger calls gokul on his mobile phone tells him a shocking news gokul goes to meet that stranger when he reaches that deserted place the stranger is not there but there is a envelope on the envelope its written GOKUL JAISWAL on it

He opens the enevelope and gets shocked

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

Rocky sees gokul sitting on the otherside of the road on a big slab stone

Rocky comes to gokul where he is sitting

Rocky : gokul yaar tum kitna bhagogey marathon mein participate karna hain ( teasingly)

Gokul doesn't say anything

Rocky : I know gokul tum upset ho yaar but im sure uncle aisa kuch nahi kar saakte

Uss picture mein kyaproof hain ki uncle bribe le rahe thein aur agar who le rahe the inmn sure kuch mmajboori mein rahe the

Rocky : theek hain gokul tum aur mukul mere saath hamare ghar mein raho 10 days ke liye uss time hum pata lagayenge ki why uncle took the bribe

Gokul nods his head and they leave for gokuls home to pick up ginny sunny and mukul …………

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Ahluwalia House

Raavi and sweety talking to mrs dave neighbor

Mrs dave says : sweety apko pata hain crime ktna zyada ho gaya hain

Sweety : haan mrs dave

Raavi goes into the kitchen to get biscuits

Raavi in kitchen

She remembers ginny telling her about the silver box

Suddenly her mobile rings

Its deepika raavis friend on the other line

Deeipka says : hey raavi 10 deys ke baad mere farmhouse pe party don't forget yaar ( smilingly)

Raavi : sure deepika hum sab aayengey( smiles n says ) don't wory and hangs up

Raavi says to herself mujhe silware shop jaana chahiye warne uss box ka raaz kabhi nahi pata chalega ( says thinking)& goes out side ……

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Jaiswals House

Rocky and gokul enter the house

Mr jaiswal with two suitcase in his hand

Tells rocky

Rocky beta mein 20 days ke liye Bangalore jaana hain kya tum gokul and mukul ko apne ghar mein daal sakte ho

Rocky : a little surprised says of course uncle ( with a smile on his face)

And with that mr jaiswal hugs mukul and leaves ……………………

Rocky tells gokul

That's great know we can get proof (gokul doesn't say anything but smiles sadily )

With that rocky , goukul , mukul, sunny and ginny leave for ahluwalias house ………….

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Pune Mental Asylum

A lperson screaming in her room

Mein use mar doongi ( laughing hysterically )

(the room not shown )

two ward males speaking

ward new man 1 says : ye kaun hain

ward man2 : says : pata nahi ye paagal aurat ko kya problem par doctor saab keh rahein ki isse koi khatranaak bimari hain >>>>>>

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The Scene Shifts To Singapore

a small little apartment

jeet and pinki sleeping

piknki gets up to drink water she goes to kitchen but accidentley the glasss breaks

pinki shocked jeet goes in the kitchen and sees the broken glass and pinki shocked & nervaous

pinki says ( to jeet ) kaanch ka tootna ye accha shagun nahi hain jeet , kuch bura honealla hain ( says with fear )

jeet says : pinki bas kaanch toota hain kuch boora nahin hoga ( says assuringly )

the episode ends on pinkis worried face ……>>>>>>>>>


precap 1: ginny see ayush taking drugs😲 , mysterious girl hugs shivam😲😕 >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>



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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
well what's FF ??! i'm still a newborn baby at IF!! 🤣
Edited by PritamDas01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: PritamDas01

well what's FF ??! i'm still a newborn baby at IF!! 🤣


its a fan fiction😳 you can write stories regarding your fav show the way you want want the show to be like 😛
you have to read my ff from the beginning i hope you like it 😉
other forum shows also have ff 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
will read soon 😊


Thanks Lizee for the PM :)

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