Taarey: 'Aashiqui' an unconditional love (Promo) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Hey! Tasha! That's an interesting promo dear...

But, is it TaaRey's conversation or someone else speaking to Taani????
Plz.. Make TaaRey meet really soon ...
Can't wait for them to come face to face..
Plz. Update soon...


Well u will have to wait to find who is talking to taani n yes will surely make taarey meet sooner 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice promo
update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: flicka

nice promo

update soon😊


Will we updating today hopefully 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Okay guys before you read. I wanted to tell you all that part 1 was Rey's POV of his day and Part 2 is Taani's POV of her day and please note that it's the same day and not two different days. Okay. I hope it doesn't get confusing. For those who wanted to know who Nats is? Nats (Natasha) is a random girl.

Part 2

Monday Morning 9:00a.m:

A girl of age 25 was sitting in a local train by the window. Sun's ray is making her beautiful face shine more. Her hairs strands are coming to her face she putted them to the back of her ears. Mumbai, a city of dreams, I had always dreamt of coming here. Not to become something but to meet bhai, and join his college. But we don't get what we want, destiny always plans for us and we don't even realize when it takes decisions of our lives. I had never thought few years ago that I will come to Mumbai and will not be able to meet my own bhai. I am feeling very helpless after many years. The decision I took few years ago was right for which I never regretted, but today I wish my life was just like before so I would have been able to meet bhai. I wonder what he is doing now and what about his love interest. Did he win her over? Oh Krishnaji, just make sure that all my family members lives happily wherever they are. She soon came out of her trance when she heard that her station has arrived.

After struggling through the crowd she managed to take an auto and reach her first stop. She was here to give audition for the dance teacher. She went in and was shocked to see the view of that place. She saw girls with short clothes roaming around like it was a club. She felt uncomfortable but managed to talk to the receptionist as she was in need of a job. The receptionist after looking at her from upside down advised her to leave as she didn't belong here. She looked around and decided to leave but was stopped by a fat man "Excuse me?" he said. She turned around to face him. He had a huge stomach, a thick gold chain was around his neck and he was chewing pan due to which his entire mouth was red. She saw her staring at her in a cheap way which caused her to shudder and she felt disgusted. "Yes" she managed to say. "You are here for the dance teacher post?" he said in a mocking tone. "Yes Sir but I was just leaving" she was about to leave but he stopped her again by saying "if you can wear such dresses" he pointed to the girls wearing short dresses "you are in as you are damn beautiful" he said. She was now fuming with anger "no thanks. This place doesn't deserve me" she replied and ran out of the building while tears were flowing from her eyes continuously.

She ran for a while and then stopped as she couldn't move anymore. She was feeling so helpless and alone. She wanted to scream and cry out loud but she couldn't. No, you can't do this to yourself. You have to be strong. No one can break you anymore. You have to do this. You have to find a job for yourself and for jaan. You can't survive in this city without a job Taani. You have to be strong. She motivated herself and wiped her tears.

Ek zarra josh mein jo aaye
Chaand ko bhi woh zameen pe laaye
Woh bhawar mein jo kabhi gir jaaye
Ek tinka aadmi ko bachaye
Jung abhi jeeta nahin hain yaaro
Main bhi haara nahin hoon yaaro
Jeena kya jeevan se haar ke
Jo har saas ji gaya marne ka usko gham nahin

She then looked at the watch; it was 2:00p.m. She took out the newspaper from her bag and looked at the circle she had drawn in the morning for the job. It stated "A versatile dance teacher is needed for the D3 Academy. The auditions are taken through CDs and the last date is Monday by 3:00p.m." She walked and got in the auto and reached the place at 2:30p.m. She walked in the building taking out her CD of audition as it was the requirement. She was looking for the marker to write her name and contact info on the CD. She finally found one from her purse. As she was walking she took the CD out of the case and THAD and she fell on the ground.

"Uff…" she said while feeling the pain due to fall. She rubbed her elbow. She looked for the CD that was in her hand a few seconds ago. She finally found it but it was in pieces. She was fuming with anger as it was the last on and the auditions deadline was today at 3:00p.m. It was next to impossible that she could back to her apartment which was half an hour away and come back with a new CD. She was totally frustrated as her day was turning from bad to worse. She heard a concerning and polite voice saying "Need a hand?"

*Part 2 Ends*

Do comment guys. For the stanza in the middle, it is part of the song "Jeena kya Jeevan se har ke" from the movie Om Jai Jagdesh. You might see me adding such stanzas from different songs in different places throughout the story instead of using the entire song. It will be used as needed. I hope you like the songs and they don't bother you guys.

Important announcement guys as you know summer is here and I can update more frequently as no schools and no studies. So if you guys want updates sooner then I need you all to comment and not spam. The next update will be posted as the number of comments reaches 30. So, all those silent readers and those who only like my updates start commenting as my updates from now on will rely on them. Also, FYI part 3 is ready so, be quick and comment you guys.

The promo is here as well so you will not have to wait for the update as soon as the number of comments hit 30 part 3 will be posted. So enjoy the promo as well 😃

Promo

"You are impossible and …" before she could say something else she felt a strong grip covering her mouth and another around her waist protectively.

*Promo Ends*

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Posted: 12 years ago
👍🏼i didnt understand one thing dat why was taani not able to meet her brother after cuming to mumbai???
otherwise i liked it
i want to know whom does taani encounter now
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

👍🏼i didnt understand one thing dat why was taani not able to meet her brother after cuming to mumbai???

otherwise i liked it
i want to know whom does taani encounter now
update soon

Dear her decision and reason behind it will be revealed later in the story. This part was just to introduce her and her sufferings as of now.
You will find out all the answers to your questions as the story will developed and more updates will come. So till then stay confused 😆 and read the coming updates and keep commenting 😃
Love
Tasha
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update dear... u wrote taani's pov really beautifully... bt ye kya aise moment par en kar dia!!!!!! thts nt fare... bt the precap sounds really interesting so plzzz do update soon nd yes nxt tym lambawala chahiye... 1 more thing taani said she has 2 b strong 4 herself nd 4 her jaan!!!! nw who is this jaan???... hopefully nxt updates me pata chal jayega...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey! it was an interesting update...
Poor Taani, It seem s she has suffered a lot...

Though, I have some questions unanswered and they are haunting me...
Like why couldn't she meet her brother...
What had happened, etc, etc...

But, It seems, I'll have to wait for the further updates to clear up my confusion...

That man was so cheap and disgusting..
I hated the way he looked at her and spoke to her...

But I loved her answer to him...
Very well said...

Poor Her,, It really seems to be a bad day...
Her CD broke into pieces...
Now what will happen????

But, I am so eager for the TaaRey meet...

The Promo is really very exciting...
And, I think It's TaaRey...

Plz. Update soon..
Eagerly waiting for taaRey meet...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samiha_taarey

nyc update dear... u wrote taani's pov really beautifully... bt ye kya aise moment par en kar dia!!!!!! thts nt fare... bt the precap sounds really interesting so plzzz do update soon nd yes nxt tym lambawala chahiye... 1 more thing taani said she has 2 b strong 4 herself nd 4 her jaan!!!! nw who is this jaan???... hopefully nxt updates me pata chal jayega...

Hmm sorry but this update was needed next part will be Taarey meet for sure and the jaan will be revealed later in other updates. till then keep guessing 😆.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Hey! it was an interesting update...

Poor Taani, It seem s she has suffered a lot...

Though, I have some questions unanswered and they are haunting me...
Like why couldn't she meet her brother...
What had happened, etc, etc...

But, It seems, I'll have to wait for the further updates to clear up my confusion...

That man was so cheap and disgusting..
I hated the way he looked at her and spoke to her...

But I loved her answer to him...
Very well said...

Poor Her,, It really seems to be a bad day...
Her CD broke into pieces...
Now what will happen????

But, I am so eager for the TaaRey meet...

The Promo is really very exciting...
And, I think It's TaaRey...

Plz. Update soon..
Eagerly waiting for taaRey meet...

Yes you are right you will have to wait to get answers to your questions 😃. and Taarey meet in next part and yes she has suffered a lot. Stay tuned

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