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Hotel :

Maan sits next to Geet.. Geet gets nervous again..

All were chit chatting together and having fun.

Then the silent music starts.. so Meera, Yash, Aadi and Pinky runs on dance floor for the couple dance..

Now Maan and Geet were alone here, at this end..

Geet : aap bhi jaa sakte hai, apko yaha rukne ki jarurat nahi hai.

Maan : nahi thanks, m fine..

Geet : are aap sach me jaa sakte hai..

Maan : mere paas partner nahi hai..

Geet : yaha itni girls hai, koi bhi ready ho jayegi.. kafi saari to apko dekh bhi rahi hai..

Maan : tum mujhpe nazar rakhe ho? Ya firr jealous hori ho?

Geet smiles: nahi aisa kuch nahi..

Maan : maai jiske sath dance karna chahta hu, vo nahi karegi..

Geet : aap pucho to use, shayad haan bol de..

Maan and Geet has eyelock ( maaahhiii moment )

Utne me ek waiter aata hai: maam , any drink?

Maan : ja, Maam ke liye ek lemon soda with ginger.

Geet : apko kaise pata ?

Maan : maaine kaha na ki maai tumhe janta hu..

All 4 of them interrupts their conversation by coming back..

This time Meera and Yash were sitting back as both were drunk.

Geet was besides Maan..

Maan was looking at Geet most of the times..

Geet : aap samne dekh ke gaadi chalaiye, accident ho jayga

Maan : nahi hoga,

Geet : aap both jiddi ho naa?

Maan : haan , both.. apni baat maanvaa ke chodta hu..

Geet smiles..

Next day:

College me party ki tayari joro shoro se shuru thi.. all were excited.

Maan was standing besides Pari..

Pari : maan you rocked th show.. you are my true Hero.. baaki sab ne to thik hi gaya.

Meera and Yash laughs slowly.

Geet gets disturbed with the line.

Geet vaha se chali jati hai.

Maan notices this..

Two hrs later, after the lecture..

Geet was again standing in the same corridor.

Maan comes, : Geet kya hua ?

Geet : kuch nahi..

Maan : aage plz vahi maat bolna, pehle ho chukka hai, to chup chaap bolo ki kya hua?

Geet was silent and a tear rolls down from her eyes on her cheek.

Maan moves close to her

Maan : plz roo maat Geet, you don't look nice while crying..

Tum both sweet ho jaise tumhari awaz sweet hai.

Geet : aap jhuth maat bolo, maaine Pari ki baate suni.

Maan : vo, are tum dhyaan maat do, use kya samjhta hai music ke bare me.. use to bus fashion ka pucho..

Geet smiles..

Maan : tumne mujhse bhi achaa gaya.. tumhari awaz me ek alag si kashish hai.. tum logo ko diwana bana deti ho..

Geet : koi bhi diwana ho sakta hai?

Maan : haan koi bhi..

Geet : koi bhi?

Maan : haan koi bhi.. bus vo behra hona chahiye.

Geet smiles and hits Maan.. but Maan saves himself and hold Geets hand.

Maan : aise hi hasti raho, chalo ab thankz vagre jo bhi bolna ho, start karo.

Geet runs away from there..

Same day eve :

Geet and pinky were going home… Maan sees them both..

Pinky shouts a loud..

Pinky : maan…. Are yaar kaha jaare ho? Ruko to jara.. hume lift nahi doge kya ? dikhra nahi ki hum bichari do ladkiya akeli ghar aur vo bhi paidal jaari hai.. bade hi khudgarz ho yaar..

Maan : pinky tu nautanki band karr aur chalo baitho gaadi me..

Geet : are nahi jaane dijiye .. apko kahi aur jaana hoga aur hamaare karan late ho jaoge ..

Maan : aisi koi baat nahi..

Pinky : are yar Geet, vo bolra hai na ki " aisi koi baat nahi "..

To chal ab, bhav maat kha..

Maan sochta hai ki Geet aage baithei to vo apna hath badhata hai use den eke liye.. but pinky Maan ka hath pakad ke front seat pe baith jaati hai..

Geet piche jaake baithti hai..

Pinky : Geet to kabhi bhi front seat pe nahi baithti kisi ke sath..

Haana Geet ?

Geet : haan , pinky..

Pinky was constantly chatting ( chutter fatter )

Maan in thoughts ( kitna bolti hai yaar, chup baithne ka naam hi nahi leti )

Pinky suddenly shouts.. Gol Gappeee….

Rooko rooko gaadi rooko..

Maan : nahi ab gaadi nahi rukegi..

Pinky : par mujhe aur Geet hum dono ko boht pasand hai gol gappe,,,

Ye sunte hi , Maan stops the Car..

Fir unke gol gappo ke baad, Maan takes his car on another road..{purposely)

Geet : are aapne to galt road pe le li, mera ghar yaha nahi hai.

Maan : so sorry.. maai turn karta hu.

Pinky : are ruko, ek min.. hum yaha aa hi gaye hai to plz thoda aage aadi ka ghar hai, to mujhe vaha drop kar do..

Geet : aur maai kya karu to fir..

Pinky: are Maan hai na, vo tumhe bhi ghar drop kar dega, dost hote kis liye hai?

Maan : dosti ki hai, to nibhani padegi… laughs..

Geet, maai apko sahi salaam at ghar chod dunga.. bharosa rakho..

Geet: hmmm

Pinky gets down.. Maan and Geet goes off..

Geet was sitting beside Maan..

Maan stops the Car..

Maan : Geet, ek baat puchu ?

Geet : aapne car kyu roki ?

Maan catches her chin, and maake her look into his eyes..

Geet was looking down..

Maan : geet meri aankho me dekho.. plzzz..

Geet slowly looks at him..

Maan : Geet, jab maai tumhare karreb aata hu to tum bhaag kyu jaati ho?

Geet : maai… maai kaha bhag jati hu.. aap gadi chalaiye naa..late hora hai.

Maan comes closer to her.. his right hand, he touches Geet's cheeks slowly ..they can feel each other very close.. ( Maahiii moment)

Geet shivers and was unable to speak anything..

Maan : geet bolo na.. mujhse baat karo.. atleast ek baar.. utne me Geet ka cell phone bajta hai..

Geet : hello, maa .. haan jee maa, maai bus aari hu.

Maan drives the car hearing this..

Night :

Maan and Geet both thinking about each other..

Maan in his own thoughts ( Maan ye tujhe kya ho jata hai, jab bhi tu uske paas jata hai, to itna kyu badal jata hai ?)

Maan in his thoughts :

"aankhein band karta hu to tum dikhti ho

Aankhein kholta hu to tum aas paas hoti ho,

Ye mere nazaro ka khel hai,yaa

kahi sach me tum mere itne kareeb ho"

Geet : geet, tu unke sawaalo ke kya jawab degi?

Chal ab soo jaa, jyada naa soch..

The day of party:

Party timings; 8 onwards..

Geet : hum ghar kaise aur kab jayenge?

Pinky : party ke baad.

Meera: hum log hai na, sab koi safely ghar pohoch jaynge.

Maan : koi tension maat lo.. he looks at geet

Then they all decides about dresses..

Pinky and Geet comes together to Party..

Maan was gonna come late coz he was busy with his dad.

Meera and Yash were also in Party.

Party me kafi games, couple dance, jam session and boht saare fun elements the..

All were too excited..

All were dancing and Geet was standing away from dance floor.

All the student sees Maan..

Girls starts shouting for him..

Girls: Maan sing a song for us… we want Maan, we Want Maan…

Meera also pushes him to sing a song..

Maan : ok ok gals… whch song do you like to hear ?

Gals : any slow number.. enough of fast music.. hume to bus tumhre awaz me kho jaana hai..

Maan closes his eyes..

Maan sings..

Hey Zu Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm
Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey
Ab Mujhe Raat Din Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain
Ab Mujhe Raat Din Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain
Kya Kahu Pyaar Mein Deewano Jaisa Haal Hain
Deewano Jaisa Haal Hain Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain
Ho Ho Aa Ha Ha Ha La La La La La La
Ab Mujhe Raat Din Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain
Kya Kahu Pyaar Mein Deewano Jaisa Haal Hain

He roams around everybody..

Maan shakes hands( hi-fi) with Yash.. then he dances a step with Meera.. ( song is on)

Then he comes to pinky and uske cheeks khichta hai( friendly sign)

Tum Ko Dekhe Beena Chain Milta Nahi
Dil Pe Ab To Koi Zor Chalta Nahi
Jaadu Hain Kaisa Dil Ki Lagi Mein
Dub Gaya Hu Is Bekhudi Mein
Ho Ho Aa Ha Ha Ha La La La La La La
Ab Mujhe Raat Din Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain
Kya Kahu Pyaar Mein Deewano Jaisa Haal Hain

Maan goes round Geet..

Maan ki speed kum ho jaati hai.. he takes another round.. he closes his eyes and at that same moment Geet closes her eyes..

Maan slightly touches her hand and feels her presence..

With That touch, Geet also shivers a bit and she also feels him..

Har Pal Dhunde Nazar Tum Ko Hi Jaanemaan
Had Se Badhne Laga Mera Deewanapan
Dil Mein Basa Lu Apna Bana Lu
Ya Phir Nazar Mein Tumko Chupa Lu
Ho Ho Aa Ha Ha Ha La La La La La La
Ab Mujhe Raat Din Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain
Kya Kahu Pyaar Mein Deewano Jaisa Haal Hain
Deewano Jaisa Haal Hain Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain
Ho Ho Aa Ha Ha Ha La La La La La La
Ho Ho Aa Ha Ha Ha La La La La La La

Then Maan comes infront and ends His song..

Maan gets a big round of applause…

Then again the music starts and everybody gets dispersed

Maan comes and stands behind her and close to her.

Maan goes near Geet and fans his breathe near her ear with this Geet shivers and Maan whispers her name very slowly n sensuously

Geet turns back..

Geet: arre aap..

Maan: haan to tum kisi aur ka intezaar karri thi?

Geet: nahi maai to kisi ka bhi wait nahi karri thi..

Maan: to tum dance floor pe kyu nahi ho?

Geet: mujhe dance nahi aata aur pasand bhi nahi.. aapne song boht..

Pari enters their conversation..

Pari : maan , lets go for the dance .. plzz

Aur vo Maan ko khich ke le jati hai..

Maan looks at Geet but till that time vo dance floor pe pohoch jata hai..

Couple dance :

Pari and Maan dances, aadi and pinky, Meera and Yash..

Geet was again standing out alone talking to some other girls of their college..

Song starts …

Kahin To.. Kahin To.
Hogi Woh
Duniya Jahan Tu Mere Saaath Hain

Chaha Mein Chaha Tu
Aur Jaan Bas Tere Mere Zajbaat Hain
Hogi Jahan Saba Teri
Palkon Ki Kirano Mein
Lori Jahan Chand Ki
Sune Teri Bahon Mein...

[Jane Na Kahan Woh Duniya Hai
Jane Na Woh Hai Bhi Ya Nahi
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse
Inti Kafa Nahi ]2

Saasein Kho Gai Hai Kiski Aahon Mein
Mein Kho Gai Hoon Jane Kiski Baahon Mein
Maanzilon Se Rahe Dhondte Chali
Aur Kho Gai Hai Maanzil Kahin Rahon Mein
Kahin To Kahin To Hai Nasha
Teri Meri Har Mulakat Mein
Hoton Se Hoton Ko
Chumti O Rehete Hai Hum Har Baat Pe
Kehti Hain Fiza Jahan
Teri Zaameen Aasmaan
Lyricsmaasti
Jahan Hai Tu
Meri Hasi Meri Khushi
Meri Jaan

Jane Na Kahan Woh Duniya Hai
Jane Na Woh Hai Bhi Ya Nahi
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse
Inti Kafa Nahi…2

Geet looks at Maan but at that time, pari tightened her hold on Maan .. Geet gets jealous a bit..

Then everybody forces Geet to come on Dance floor.. A student of their college asks Geet to dance with him..

He brings her on dance floor..

Slightly that boy brings his hand on Geet's waist to hold her..

Maan : excuse me, may I dance with the lady ?

Boy : ya, sure..

Geet feels a it secured when Maan comes there..

Then another music starts..

Geet holds his one hand.. now Maan brings his Hand slowly down to hold her.. he slowly touches her waist. He takes her close to himself..

Suddenly Geet ke baal uske face pe aate hai.. Maan apne hath se uske face pe se unhe hata ta hai,

Maan: tumhare Baahoo ko bhi haq nahi ki vo hum dono ke nazaro ke bich aye..

Geet looks at Maan at the same moment..

Maan : tumhe mera gaana kaisa laga?

Geet : haan, mujhe apka song boht acha laga.. aapne boht achha gaya..

Maan : firr ye tumne kyu nahi kaha,mujhe puchna pada..

Geet : nahi aisi baat nahi hai, vo Pari bich me aa gayi thi, aur firr vo apko leke chali gayi..

Maan again brings his hand back to her waist..as soon as he touches the waist of Geet, she closes her eyes and her breath goes heavy with the proximity … Maan dances with her slowly and continuously stares her n didn't remove his gaze even for a second…

Then Maan caress her neck with his fingers to give a sensuous sensation to her and giving goomebums too then maan bring little more closre to him and both feel their breath on each other n still geets eyers were closed with his touch…

Maan: Geet, tumhe farak padta hai na, jab Pari mere paas aati hai to..

Geet : mujhe nahi pata, par haan kuch jarur hota hai..

Maan : mujhe jarur farak padta agar koi ladka tumhare itne paas aye to, maai bardasht nahi kar pata..

Geet : kyu?

Maan : mujhe bhi nahi pata, bus itna janta hu ki mujhe farak padta hai.

Geet, aaj vo ladka tumhare paas aya to mujhe ajeeb si jalan hui..

Geet looks into Maan's eyes.. and Maan takes her more close..

Maan : Geet…

Suddenly lights on hoti hai, aur Geet piche hatt jati hai..

Everybody claps for all the couple on dance floor.. but Maan Geet abhi bhi apne khayalo me hi rehte hai..

(Geet realizes ki aaj shayad thoda jyada haq de diya usne Maan ko.)

(Maan realizes ki aaj usne shayad apni hadd paar kar di..)

Then there was a game for all the participants..

It was compulsory for them to participate in it with their resp partners.. ( was a rule)

1st round ( ques ans round )

Questiona and answer will be asked about each other.. two pairs will be eliminated..

Certain ques were asked..

Meera and Yash were the winners of this round..

Meera: Maan, dekha itne saal ki relationship kuch to kaam me ayi.. she gets happy..

Maan and Geet gets selected on 3rd position.. but pinky and aadi gets eliminated in this round.

Ball dance ke wakt jo hua hota hai, us wajah se Maan and Geet thode uncomfortable hote hai ekdusre ke sath..

2nd round: paper dance..

Every couple has to dance on folds of paper..

Music starts .. all starts dancing..

While dancing, Maan and Geet thoda dur dur hoke dance karte hai..

Pinky shouts: Geet , itne duur khadi rahegi to haar jayegi.. Maaan ke paas jaa na aur thoda..

Meera looks at them both.. Meera ko kuch dino se unpe shak hota hai ki they both feel for each other,.

Meera: haan maan, u both have to win, for me.. plzzz

Maan aur Meera boht ache frnds hote hai.. maan Meera ki koi baat nahi taltta..

Maan moves close to Geet.. Geet looks down.. she thinks about their first dance( few mins ago wala)

Then nw in paper dance, paper ki fold itni choti hoti hai, toh Maan geet se poochta hai

Maan : maay I pick u Geet, if u permit.. only then

Geet idhar udhar dekhne lagti hai..

Yash: its just a game Geet, nt to worry..

Pinky : haan Geet..

Maan to tha hi flirty.. to bus usne utha liya Geet ko..

Maan ne Geet ko uthaya tha aur dance chalra tha music pe..

Maan thoda natkhat tha, to vo fir Geet ke Baal phook maar ke udaa raha tha.

Maan bich me se hi aankh maar raha tha Geet ko..

Geet was getting shy with this all..

Music stops..

4pairs bach jate hai, baki ke eliminate ho jate hai..

Maan – Geet, Yash-Meera and other two pairs..

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Continued...

All decided to not participate in other activities and remaaining participant won the games i.e.

Maan-Geet

Yash-Meera

N other two pairs of their college.

Sab koi cold drinks and hard drinks lete hai..

Geet takes coca-cola.. then Maan was talkin to some girls of their college and flirting with them .. utne me Geet vaha pohochti hai..

Geet : mujhe kuch baat karni hai apse..

Maan was shocked to hear that.. but use kuch galat laga.. usne Geet ke taraf dekha to, Geet kuch thik nai lagri thi Maan ko..

Maan : Geet, tum thik to ho naa?

Geet : tum mere sath chalo..

Maan : haan , par kaha ?

Geet takes him out of that hall, in an dark and silent corner..

Maan (jokes): mujhe pasand hai girls ke sath aise dark corners me jana, bt tumhare sath ' yaha ?

Geet keeps her finger on Maans lips and says..

Geet : chup bilkul chup.. maai bolungi aur aap sunenge..

Maan checks her properly.. he gets to kn ki, Geet is drunk..

Maan : Geet, tumne pii rakhi hai? Are you drunk ?

Geet : maaine kaha na ki, I ll talk only..

Maan gets quiet.. and laughs a bit..

Geet : why are laughing, maaine koi joke crack kiya?

Aap mujhe ek baat batao, aap baar baar mere itne paas kyu aate ho?

Maan : tumne piii rakhi hai Geet, hum baad me baat karte hai..

Geet: nahi mujhe aap abhi batao..

Maan gets closer to her.. he moves close to Geet..

Geet sticks to wall behind her.. Maan keeps his one hand on wall and other around her..

Maan : tumhe koi aiteraaz hai, agar maai tumhare kareeb ata hu to..?

Geet: ans me first..

Maan touches her cheeks upside down..

Maan : tumhe kuch mehsus hora hai ?

Kuch bhi alag saa, kuch speciall saa??

Meera disturbs their conversation with a phone call..

Meera on phone: Maan kaha ho, jaldi aao naa.. last songs chalre hai.. lets dance .

Maan : haan meera, aata hu..

Maan and Geet returns to the party..

Maan was concerned about Geet

But as all knows he is a flirt too.. vo Geet ke sath dance karta hai, coz he knows ki Geet us halat me maana to karr hi nahi sakti..

Party finishes..

Pinky wanted to go with aadi for a ride.. so Maan decides to drop Geet home .. He was also knowing ki her mother was not at home.. only her cousins were der..

Maan maakes sit in car on front seat.. Geet was constantly saying..

Geet : maai akeli chali jaungi, mujhe aapke sath nahi jaana.. maai chali jaungi..

Maan : sshhh Geet..

Geet : mujhe aapke sath nahi jaana naaa..

Maan keeps his finger on Geets lips..

Maan : chup Geet, bilkul chup..

Ther starts the eye lock between them two.. ( maahiii moment)..

Maan takes her home..

Maan gets out of the car and goes other side to help Geet to get out of the car.. but He sees that Geet was already asleep'

Maan looks at her and keeps on looking.. He looks at Geet in such a way that, ( geet was the most innocent girl he has seen, Geet has the most beautiful smile, and Geet is the purest of all )

Suddenly He ealizes its too late..

He picks her in his arms.. she was still asleep.. she lays her head on His shoulder and catches him tightly with her hands.. Maan was walking ahead but his eyes were on Geet's face..

He Keeps her on her bed.. but he was totally into her..

He was not able to control Himself. As she was sleeping on her bed but her hand was on Maan's hand.. she had catched his hand and was not leaving.. he tries to leave her hand.. then He keeps his hand on Geet' cheeks.. vo apna hath uske gaal pe sehlata hai.. fir uske udte hue julfon ko uske chehere se hatata hai.. aur uske aur kareeb jata hai. Fir vo use ke itne kareeb hota hai ki use mehsus karta hai apne aap me..

Aur jab vo Geet ke itne paas hota hai to he notices that he is too near of her lips.. her lips were very beautiful and attaractive. He was constantly looking at her face and then her lips.. fir vo apni finger uske lips pe ghumaata hai.. kuch iss tarah ki vo unhe pyaar kar raha hai. Fir vo aur paas jata hai.. to vo Geet ke saason ko mehsus karta hai..

Maan boht tempt hota hai, Geet ko kiss karne..

Maan goes more close to her lips.. un dono ke lips me bus hardly kuch duri hoti hai.. infact Maan ke lips geet ke lips ko halke se touch karte hai aur utne me Maan duur ho jata hai..

Maan in his thoughts ( ye maai kya karr raha tha, maana ki maai flirt hu aur baki ki girls ke sath boht flirt karta hu but ye GEET hai maan.. ye baki ki girls ki tarah nahi hai.. )

Maan, devil thought: ( but tu use kiss karna chahta tha, aur aaj tu use kiss karta to use pata bhi nahi chalta.. to kyu ruk gaya Maan tu ?)

Maan's good thoughts: ( koi aur ladki hoti to mujhe farak nahi padta aur use bh nahi.. but ye Geet hai)

Maan, devil thoughts: ( Geet hai to kya hua.. tu use pasand karta hai..)

Maans good thoughts: pasand karta hai isliye to tune use lips pe kiss nahi karna chahiye.. ye to speciall hota hai.. first kiss is always the speciall one.. aur vo abhi hosh me nahi hai, use to yaad bhi nahi rahega.. to kya special baat hui,,)

Maan apne dono thoughts ko bhaga deta hai aur firr Geet ke taraf pyaar se dekhta hai..

Maan closes his eyes .. He feels her into him and then moves close to her.. He kisses her on her forehead.. he kisses her with full love and care.. his eyes were closed during the kiss.. He was totally into her.. the feeling for him while kissing was like,

" maai akela hu tere liye,

Tu akeli hai mere liye,

Iss maatlab se bhari duniya me ,

Hum dono hai sirf ek-duje ke liye"

( maahiii moment..)

Then he gets away from her, once again uske gaalo pe hath ferta hai aur vaha se nikal jata hai.



Next day in college..

Pinky , aadi, Meera and Yash were sitting in canteen.. Maan enters there. He also sits with them.. he was impatient becaoz use Geet nahi dikhti vaha pe.

Then he thinks ki shayad washroom gai hogi.. all of them gets up to go to the class.. he waits there for Geet to come.

Meera: maan chalo, class nahi jana hai kya ? maasti khatam, ab exam time hai boss

Aadi : jamke padhai karni padegi..

Pinky : tum to hamesha padhte hi rehte ho, tum chup raho..

Maan : haan, chalo. Parr'

Meera: par var, kuch nahi Maan.. chalo ab..

Meera takes him to class.

Maan thinks that Geet will come directly to the class.

Lecture starts but Geet dint appeared.. Lecture gets over.. He was playing with his contact list, he was uneasy,, he was unable to call Geet coz he dint had her num..

Whole group was standing..

Prem( the one who asked Geet to dance with him in college Party)

Prem : Pinky, aaj Geet nahi ayi?

Pinky : no prem, tumhe dikhi kya vo? Nahi na, yane vo nahi ayi aaj college.. she laughs..

Prem : actually mujhe use kaam tha, to isliye opucha maaine..

Pinky : ohhh , vo aaj nahi ane wali hai..

Maan gets a bit disturbed by listening 2 things.. 1st ki aaj Geet nahi ane wali college ..and Prem wanted to talk to Geet..

Maan was a cool guy and was never possessive about anybody, but he got jealous this time.

He decides to go to her house and meet her.. He just rushes to his car.. but at the same time, Yash calls him..

Yash : ooyyy kaha jara hai?

Maan : kuch nahi yaar, thoda kaam tha, ata hu maai.

Yash : ok.. jaa but 5 baje taka a jana, aaj hum log bahaar jare hai.

Maan goes off..

Maan reaches to Geets home.. He stands out for a while, waiting for Geet to come out in her balcony or window.. but she doesn't appears..

Maan : maan, tu andar chale jaa, darr kyu raha hai ?

Utne me use Geet ki ek jhalak dikhai padti hai..

She was with her wet hair.. she was dressed very simple but beautifully..

Maan wanted to see her more n more.. so he decides to go in and talk to her..

Maan goes to the garden of her house..

Geet just passes from there and sees shadow of someone..

She comes out to see..

Maan uska hath pakad ke use apne taraf khichta hai.. Geet darr jati hai, but maan use chup karata hai..

Maan : geet, maai hu..

Geet : aap aur yaha ?

Maan : haan, tum aaj college kyu nahi ayi ?

Geet: tabiyat thik nahi '.

Maan beech me hi tokta hai Geet ko..

Maan : kyu, kya hua? Tum thik nahi ho.. to tum yaha kya karri ho? Jao andar jao.

Geet : arreee ruko' meri nahi, mere maa jee ki tabiyat thik nai hai..

Maan : ohhh, ab kaise hai ?

Geet : ab thik hai.. par aap yaha kaise aa gaye..

Maan catches her hand..

Maan : ek baar bata deti kisi ko..

Geet : pinky aur meera ko pata tha..

Maan takes her more close and catches..

Maan : mujhe nahi pata tha,

Geet : har baat apko batani jaruri hai?

Maan : agar maai haan kahu to ?

Geet looks at him and smiles..

Geet : acha baba ab ap jokes band karo..

Maan : Geet, kya tumhe meri awaaz se lagra hai ki maai maajak karra hu?

Maan pulls her towards himself.. close, very close.

Geet : ye aap kya karre hai?

Koi aa jayega.. hume dekh lega..

Maan teases her : achaa to agar kisine hume nahi dekha to tumhe chalega..

Geet: maai nahi samjhi..

Maan : agar maai tumhe akele me aise paas bulau yaa fir aise pakdu to chalega?

Geet again looks at him..

Maan apne hath uske baalo pe le jata hai aur uski lat jo uske gaalo ko chu rahi thi, use Maan hatata hai..

Suddenly Geet closes her eyes..

Maan : ek sawaal puchu?

Ek awaaz ati hai, koi andar se Geet ko bulate hai..

Geet : mujhe jana padega.. hum baad me baat karenge..

Maan : aaj raat maai aunga, tumse milne..

Geet : nahi, maai nahi mill paungi.

Maan : par maai jarur aunga..

Precap : Maaneet moments and Ratta maar

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Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago
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wow awesome , superb and mind blowing
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wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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res😆 😆 😆😆
unres😆 😆 😆
nyc parts...😆
tw updates..👏 👏
it was a surprise di⭐️ ⭐️
jus loved both the updates..😳 😆
slow n stedy win sthe race the same way this couple gonna fall for each other slowly but steadily😃
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Loved the way maaneet are falling in love dheere dheere hi sahi
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awesome u-pdate
maaneet are slowly falling for each other
hope ki jaldi fully fida hojaye ek doosre par😆
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part 7
woww longgg update
love u di...
beautiful update
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hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update...superbly written...emotional update. Maneet win the competition. Maan talks to Geet. Pari der n Geet j. Maaneet dance

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