THE LOCKET (4) - Page 31

Originally posted by: sweetkj

oye heytal... tu kahan se laati hai??

Originally posted by: heytal

Mujhe koi pic acchi lagti hain toh apne paas rakh leti hoon

kuch mere friends bhi de dete hain

kisi ko woh chahiye toh de deti hoon

😳

Originally posted by: heytal

Yeh le Avi

😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

Heytal, shukriya, aabhar...

I so wanted it for the scene...

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Originally posted by: palindrome

I truly don't have words to say anything after reading the chapter..

Itna bura tha?😆😆To be honest I struggled with this one. I was not happy with it until I put in the love/ego parts in.

Whole Love v/s Ego portion portrayed the depth of your thoughts and you have described it perfectly in your words..I could feel maan's anguish,his pain because of her indifference and ignorance,his decision of ignoring her and then his helplessness of not being able to stop himself from looking at her face and standing infront of her hostel room..!!!

Love and ego will be a battle that plays on with him until the end. That was the part of HP Maan that I really liked, egoistic, self reliant person that he was in the show.

Throughout the chapter was sad and "your choice of music"was aiding the sadness perfectly...Kudos to your music selection dear..

Thanks Palin. I am surprised that a few people had not heard it.

End brought sweet relief for me..Finally he got to know some of her personal problem by chance and His will to help her overpowered him...😃

One day he would walk with her, for now he would just walk her path and help her reach her destination.

End of the chapter can't be more beautiful than this...!!!!

Love you avi for giving us such wonderful piece of writing...🤗

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

what shuold i say abt this update??

for starters...i thoroughly enjoyed the song...it just synced with the part...for one moment i was picturing maan in that song...and i can see the path he strolled...his torment...his pain of her ignorance...it hurts nah..when we love someone unconditionally and they wont give us even a glance ...but we dont understand the other person pov...but im glad..the MU is over..and the way he is supporting...

i was emotionally connected to this part 😳...partly i can connect with geet here...it hurts us when u knowingly hurting ur love...but its a compulsion...

Avi 🤗 i wish to quote few lines...but the essence of this part is nothing infront of those words...

Im glad i read this part 😳...Thanks for such beautiful and emotional part...😊

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

I should listen to what the logical side of my brain says, at least once you know. I should stop listening to your music selection because your words when clubbed with the gems of music you select, which seem as if they are dished out for the story, for the particular scene make my heart flutter. I feel as if someone had dropped my heart in a mixer grinder and switched it on.

The beauty of the music intensified your words or if it was the vice versa, I have no idea but Avi, I will tell you this, both of them together is a lethal combination. See now I still am in the trance. I can still see Maan's bleeding hand, his restlessness, anger, confusion, her prompt reaction and searching for First aid box, the rejection, his standing outside the window, she watching him from the other side, her heart paining for him.

Why do you create characters like these and make me wonder if such people exist? Why do you make me fall in love with both of them Avi?

There I go, getting emotional again. I hate you for doing this to me every time with your updates.