The Seven Year 'Hitch' - Thread 2 link pg 1 - Page 87

Originally posted by: sweetkj

yaar tera mazaak udd raha hai...

kabhi toh kuch naya bol mariyum.

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Tum log wahi purana trick use karte ho. I mean mera mazaak udate ho toh main bhi wahi purana dialogue bolti hoon. 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Sweety ne toh meri baat ki thi and you continued in the same motion. Mujhe toh aisa hi laga ke mera mazaak uda rahi ho. 🤔

Originally posted by: Onir

me toh Sweety ka mazak uda rahi thi as yeh bahut rare ho pata hai aur tujhe defend kar rahi thi... lekin tum toh offend ho gayi

Originally posted by: sweetkj

lol onir..

mere mazaak ke chakkar me tera hi udd gaya.!!😆

Originally posted by: Onir

me toh Sweety ka mazak uda rahi thi as yeh bahut rare ho pata hai aur tujhe defend kar rahi thi... lekin tum toh offend ho gayi

Originally posted by: sweetkj

lol onir..

mere mazaak ke chakkar me tera hi udd gaya.!!😆

Originally posted by: Onir

jyada has mat ... 🥱

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Present now! 😆

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You know, in this one chapter, there was a spark of hope. There was a new form of excitement which Maan felt and it kind of reached out to me.

Hope never dies you see... 😉 On a serious note I wanted Maan to feel some excitement while planning something for his Geet.

Adi is a friend who is an essential requirement for someone like Maan; someone who doesn't normally talk and express what he feels but when he's angry, he easily jumps the gun and only later realises how hurtful he's been. The way Adi dealt with the situation at hand, I really liked it. Though he was angry at his friend was making such a big blunder, he decided to kick him in the back and then give the advice he was in need of. It was indeed his push that made Maan finally think harder and come up with something.

Glad you liked Adi as a friend here. I was thinking that would he be accepted so. Each one of us need friends like him, I guess we have at least one such friend in our lives. The ones who can kick us yet show us the right path, give their advice without being prejudiced just for our own good. Its rare & very diificult to find such friends. Its more of a blessing to treasure such friendships.

With the renewed zeal that Maan is planning to make his wife happy, it does make my annoyance with him a little less. Even though I wasn't angry on him earlier as well, I was miffed with him not actually doing something to set things straight, he was only thinking on the lines of having made a mistake and of thinking that he will do something. Now that he has made some effort, I appreciate him for that. But I'm really amazed that it's been seven years of their marriage and he never planned a surprise before.

Hmm, Maan still has a long way to go. He needed a push from Adi to try & come out of his own guilt & take some actions.

Bold: That's something that you keenly observed in the update. I wanted it to be subtly brought out in this part. There's more to it & their relation... 😊

Now that he is doing something, it's good, but I think all the efforts he's making are not what are needed at the moment. His wife is most probably not the kind of woman who'll have a big fight with her husband wherein he accuses her of things she could never dream, and then be all happy to get a diamond ring, forgetting all the hurtful words. Nope, I don't think it's going to be as effective as Maan talking his heart out to her when she's ready to listen. But I'll wait to see how you unfold the extent of the damage done and the following, much needed sewing back of wounds.

This I guess will be answered in the next part. I hope I can bring that out as percieved. 🤔

Thanks for updating Onir! 🤗