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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start amezing concept why Priya leaved Ram plz do open secrate & update next fast fast waiting...
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Originally posted by: leena04


awesome start amezing concept why Priya leaved Ram plz do open secrate & update next fast fast waiting...



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ram searching for priya
priya is hiding in 1 corner
ram is feeling priya presence
but unable to locate her
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Originally posted by: sangeethagupta



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hi to all my readers
thank u for ur comments which made to continue this ff ❤️
thank u all of u all 🤗
thank u for sparing ur precious time for reading my ff 😛
this part is dedicated to all my readers and especially alya 😃

so sorry becoz the first 2 parts of this ff contains sorrow but after that it will be interesting
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part 1❤️ part 2 ❤️ part 3 ❤️

part 1:


scene 1:

raya are married when ram was 25 yrs old and priya was 22 yrs old
after 1 yr of marriage priya left the house
ram got a letter in room which priya has left for him

ram was reading the letter with very much pain
23-4-13

dear,ram

i know u would not allow me to leave you but i have to take this decision without involving u i apologise for this but i had to take this situation a small sorry will not make u forgive me but i want to apologise becoz iam leaving u am sorry but i have leave u for our family and ur good
plz forgive me and forget me i know its difficult for u to forget me but still u have to forget me and move on in ur life plz ram for our family u have to move on in ur life and dont try to search for me ill never come back to ur life again but where ever iam ill living in ur memories but u have to move on in ur life with another sweet girl i know any girl after knowing ur behaviour will love u and dont want to leave u iam sure that girl will take care of u plz ram forget me forget that a girl called priya came to ur life
main apkey sab kuch hothey huey kuch na honey wali
priya

after reading this ram shouted so loudly telling priya why u left me i told u and made u understand but why u took this decision how could u leave me and tell me that i can live without u
ram fell down on the floor like a non living thing he caught priya photo and spoke to that photo how could u tell that i will move on in my life with some other girl forgetting u how can i live without breathing and heart u r my saas and dhadkaan
ram was going through mixed phase of emotions like hurt painful anger sad all this feelings after this ram was shattered completely it looked like his life was ceased for a while his life become dark there is no reason for him to live becoz his love and shadow went away from him. he is alive but not living. he takes priya photo into his palms and touches it and speaks to photo plz come back priya u know me that I cannot live without u for a while plz come back.

suddenly he realizes 1 thing he looks into clock on the wall and sees it is 8 am the ink on the paper is damp it means this letter is written just few hr back still I have time I will search my love and get her up into my life a ray of hope came into his heart and he decided that he is going to get back his love into my life back


scene 2:

ram left home till know no one knows abt this issue that priya left the house.ram struggle started to search priya he started his car with a destiny to reach his love he drove so fastly without caring for the traffic just to reach his life he searched many railway stations,bus stations and even airport he was very exhausted but was searching with a hope that he will meet his love at any cost he did not want to waste a single sec to reach his love inspite of tiredness he searched finally it was the only bus stop left to search he reached this stop with lot of expectations that in this stop he will see priya and take her to his life back .

ram is enquiring everyone taking priya photo and asking everyone

ram: bhai sab apney is ladki ko kahi dekha ye meri biwi hain

person:no bhai sab humney nahi dekha

this person is taking to his family chalo is bus Bhopal jarey chalo jaldi chado

ram asked many ppl this way he saw a lady with dress just like priya wore

ram got life in his eyes his eyes rejoiced with a hope that it might be his love he wink and keeping each foot step that he is gonna get his love back and he will never let his love go away from his life never again this time he would give her all the happiness that she will never ever think to leave him at any cost but just waiting to perceive her with his eyes he reached the place and put his hand and called her she turn to her back and saw him

she was not priya he apologized her he had a hope that was completely hampered at that moment his hope broke into fragments and his heart could not believe the fact that his love went away from him he could not digest the fact it was heart wrenched like a volcano he left the place he drove the car so fastly that he does not want to live in this abondoned world where he has many people to call his but lost the one who is everything to him he did not want to live he drove so fastly that he was waiting for any vehicle to hit his car so that he can give his last breathe but he stopped his car when a baby girl along with her mother was injured on the road becoz they were hurt by some car

he got down to help them when he got down his car and helped them his heart could sense his lovely wife presence and he called an ambulance and after the ambulance arrived and took the mother and baby who are injured he started to search his wife

ram searched and enquired everyone abt her priya was hiding in a corner and watching his better half searching for her so badly tears rolled from her eyes like the water flowing from himalyan ice mountains he came very near to her she is going very very far from his site she did not want to hurt him and cause him pain but the situation made her take that decision of leaving his better half she weeped and weeped but those tears are only the support left for her throught the remaining life.

an old woman was asked abt priya by ram who showed her photo

ram: apney iss photo main ladki ko dekhey hain

old woman gave an expression showing she saw that lady in photo but unwillingly told

old woman: nahi beta mainey iss ladki ko kabhi nahi dekhi

ram was disheartened very badly his brain is telling that priya is not there in this place but his heart is telling him that his love is her itself

he was struct up btw heart and the brain answers he could not decide wt to believe his heart ya brain

ram searched listening his heart but priya moved and moved from his site he broke off completely and left the place when he was moving his heart became very hard that he was sensing like he is leaving his most valuable part of life in that place he was not willing to leave the place but had to leave to police station so that he can complain abt his missing love and find her through the cops


scene 3:

priya : thank u maa ji apney meri baat mankar apney jhoot bola

old lady:kyu puttar kyu tum apney ghar se bahar aye

when the old lady asked her this questions she could not answer ya open her mouth and her lips quivered with painful truth that made her take the decision of leaving her better half to move on in his life for his good tears roll down like a throttle

priya: she was stameering and telling ki main apko iss sawal ka jawab nahi de sakthi aur mujhey help karney ke liye bohut dhanya vaad main apki is upakar ko kabhi nahi bhulungi

agar apko meri madhat ki zarroratt hotho main zarror apko madhat karungi

priya leaves the place and catches an auto

scene 4:

priya auto was moving exactly in opposite direction to ram car

when she saw him in his car she hided her self from bending and ram car moved away

while priya auto was there ram could sense her presence but he was helpless and left the place

priya reached the same bus station where ram hope were crashed and left him an alive person whose heart is lost

priya got into a bus which is leaving for Bhopal

she got into bus after taking tickets from the bus counter and sat into the bus like a hard hearted woman who is wantedly suppressing his heart emotions which are telling her to get back to her better half

scene 5:

ram reached commissioner office ram speaks to commissioner

ram: commissioner sab meri biwi ghum haogaye who pink colour ki chdhi dhar aur brown colour ki hand bag pehen chuki hain

commissioner : ok ram sir we will surely find out her at any cost he asked from which time she is missing

ram: since last night I don't know exactly the timing becoz she was not in room when I got up

commissioner : ok sir u file an fir saying atleast she is missing from 18 hrs becoz we cannot take any missing complain before 18 hrs of missing

ram:agrees and thanks the commissioner

commissioner calls the cops

commissioner: ranjith is sir ka fir lelo

ranjith: yes sir sir aap ayi ye complain likehwaney us kamrey main

ram and ranjith leaves to that cabin

ram files an fir that priya was missing and gives the cop priya photos

ram is thinking that he never thought that this day would come into his life where he should search for his love who left him to live alone


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Edited by sangeethagupta - 12 years ago

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