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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Well done!!..It is very well written!!..Loving the new form of RaDev!!..Keep it up!!..Do continue and Pm me!..

Thank u vishaka dear...
loved to read ur comment ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sushmavina

please update fast too eager to know

i will sis, by the way hows ur summer vacation
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandiniraizaada

very nice update ๐Ÿ‘

Thank u so much nandini, love to read ur comments always ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 27 - A tiff ??

Chaya:Dev... Dev./////

Dev came out in a rush :Kya maa...

Chaya:Challo, naha ke aao, mandir jaayenge

Dev"Maa mere man nahi hain

Chaya: arey baba, main mera serial bhi chodke aa rahi hoon, chalo na๐Ÿ˜†

Dev:Maa... abhi itni jaldi mandir jaane ki kya jaroorat hain

Chaya:Mng, tumne hi bhagwan se ye prarthana kiya ki, agar aaj exam achi tarah likha toh mandir jaayenge...

Dev:Haan, toh

Chaya:Isliye chalo...

Dev :Maa...

Chaya:Dev...

Dev finally agreed and went in to get ready...

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Sumithra came in to see Radhika, she was practicing her veena, Sumithra continued to listen it, but suddenly she broke out into laugh

Radhika:Kya hua maa

Sumithra: Tum western dress pehen ke veena baja rahi ho

Radhika looked ta her self, she was wearing a black Capri and a red colour top, and her hair all open.
Radhika;Toh, did any one made out a rule that, veena should be played only when we wear a traditional dress...

Sumithra: No , any way chalo we need to go to temple.

Radhika:Toh tumne bhula nahi

Sumithra: Nahi...

Radhika;Okay one minute.

Sumithra;Haan apna dress toh badlo

Radhika:Kyun badlo, is dress ko kya hua

Sumithra:Mandir par aisi, dress mein.

Radhika:Chill daadi... what matters is the belief in god , not our attire

Sumithra shook her head off...

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At Mandir...

Pandit ji:Kaisi ho betiyaan..

Radhika:thik hoon pandit ji, aap kaise hain

Pandit ji:Kanha ki krupa se sab kuch acha hain...

Radhika smiled and pandit ji continued... "Acha aaj kal ke din pravachan ke samay mein, aap kyun nahi aa rahe hain"

Radhika: Thoda sa kaam mein pad raha hoon pandit ji, maaf kariye na, aaj se pakka aavungi.

Pandit smiled and they cotinued their talk for some time. When Sumithra gave the thali for pooja, feeling bored Radhika went to a side and was listening to the music class going on there...

The one who was teaching them saw Radhika and smiled to hsi old student. Radhika too smiled and then joined them singing... Guruji smiled and signalled others to stop. Others stopped and then Radhika stopped her singing too...
Guruji: "Radhika, tum gaao, tere voice sun ne ke liye hi, maine in sab ko rokha"

Radhika smiled and started to sing some song, when she felt some one familiar passing by... she opened her voice and looked every where but she doesn't find anyone she know.
Guruji:Kya hua Radhika...

Radhika:Kuch nahi guru ji,
saying that she closed her eyes to start singing...

The song continued like this...

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki

Gale Mein Baijanti Mala, Bajave Murali Madhur Bala
Shravan Mein Kundal Jhalakala, Nand Ke Anand Nandlala

Gagan Sam Ang Kanti Kali, Radhika Chamak Rahi Aali
Latan Mein Thadhe Banamali
Bhramar Si Alak, Kasturi Tilak, Chandra Si Jhalak
Lalit Chavi Shyama Pyari Ki
Shri Giradhar Krishnamuraari Ki

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki x 2

Kanakmay Mor Mukut Bilse, Devata Darsan Ko Tarse
Gagan So Suman Raasi Barse
Baje Murchang, Madhur Mridang, Gwaalin Sang
Atual Rati Gop Kumaari Ki
Shri Giradhar Krishna Murari Ki

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki x 2

Jahaan Te Pragat Bhayi Ganga, Kalush Kali Haarini Shri Ganga,
Smaran Te Hot Moh Bhanga
Basi Shiv Shish, Jataa Ke Biich, Harei Agh Kiich;
Charan Chhavi Shri Banvaari Ki.
Shri Giradhar Krishnamuraari Ki...

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki x 2

Chamakati Ujjawal Tat Renu, Baj Rahi Vrindavan Benu
Chahu Disi Gopi Gwaal Dhenu
Hansat Mridu Mand, Chandani Chandra, Katat Bhav Phand
Ter Sun Diin Bhikhaarii Kii
Shri Giradhar Krishnamuraari Ki

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki
There as Dev listened the song , he felt some thing familiar , he can listen Chaya saying him how beautiful the song is, but he wanted to see the one who sang that song, so he left every thing and rushed to wards the side where the song was going...

Guruji: Radhika, bahut achi tarah gaa liya tum ne...

Radhika:Thanks guru ji...

Guruji;Acha music class kab join karoge phir se...

Radhika:Ghar mein, maa ko ye promise kiya ki jab tak mujhe medical seat nahi milti , tab tak music ke baarein mein nahi sochunga. isliye dekhna hain..

Guruji:All the best

Radhika;Acha mujhe jaana hain guruji,

He nodded and she stood up and started to leave... Her thoughts automatically drifted to abhay... "Kaash abhay is samay yaha hotein" She was going thinking like that when she felt her self hitting some one and falling down.

Dev looked at the girl whom he dashed, he felt him self weird to see a girl in mandir wearing western wear.. "I am sorry"

That girl stood up, she didn't see his face, she was turning back to him "I am really sorry... Its my fault I am lost some where in thoughts"

Dev: Acha, lekin mandir mein sirf bhagwan ke baarein mein sochna chahiye...

Radhika felt her self bored to listen his pravachan... she just wanted to turn back and tell him that she now it better, but she left it off and walked away.

Dev:Strange girl...

Dev went to the place , where the music class was going and he tried to find the girl who sang it, but there are every one children below 15 years age.. feeling dissapointed he came back.

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Sumithra:Pooja ko chodke, jaakar music class mein baitha..

Radhika:I sad I will come to temple along with u, but i didn't say I will do pooja along with u na. chill maa..

Sumithra:Radhika...

Radhika:Yes maa...

Sumithra: Tujhe bhagwan par vishwaas hain na...

Radhika:Haan maa... mujhe kanha par bahut vishwaas hain, lekin tum jo pooja kar wa rahi ho na, vus par mujhe vishwas nahi...

saying this Radhika left to sit on steps/// while she was leaving she looked a old man sitting at a side on steps... she looked at him and went to him and gave him some fruits from what sumithra brought to offer to kanha...

The old man looked at Radhika and said :Radhika..

Radhika felt surprised to listen her name from him "Ji, aapko mera naam..."

That man smiled and said " Main ne , ek baar tera haath dekha beti"

Radhika didn't understand beause, she never showed her hand to any one, even though she believe in palmistry,..

That man as if reading her thoughts.. "I thought it will be my last wish then, and i kept it, from then i never saw any other hand... but today again I wish to see ur hand"

Radhika gave her left hand to him , he looked at it and said " Ur journey had not yet started... it won't be smooth, but just remember a thing the relation which u are thinking to be forever, was not true, it isn't ur relation. u will get ur life mate in coming years. u may deny ur relation with him, and he too. but u both are meant to be together, it should be like that, don't deny ur feelings on him. and again I am teling u the words which I said u already..."tere paas dan doulat sab kuch hain, lekin teri ek dosti ka fiquar hain tujhe. Tum vus dost ke liye intezaar kar rahe ho. lekin vo thik nahi hain, pehle vuse thik kardo aur vuske baad tujhe ek sacha pata chalega. shayad tum vusse door jaane ke liye kosish karungi. lekin kanha kabhi aisa nahi karne doga. Kanha ne apni Radhika ke liye kishankannayya banakar aaya tha"

Radhika: Pandit ji, lagta ki, aapko mere baarein mein kuch jyaada hi jaante hain, aap hi mujhe bata de, mere pyaar kya successful hoga,

That person smiled and said "Beti, main ye nahi bolunga ki, tera ye pyar sacha nahi, lekin, ye toh tera pyar nahi hoga. jab tera sacha pyar milega, vo toh jaroor successful hoga, lekin tujhe toh bahut sehna padega. "

Radhika:Pandit ji, main aap ko apmaan karna nahi chahti hoon, lekin main abhay ko sach mein pyar kar rahi hoon

He smiled and said " I never said it na... any way all the best for ur life"

Radhika gave the fruits she brought for him,
he smiled and said " Main ye phal ke liye aapko ye sab nahi bhola beti"

Radhika:Maine ye phal aapke liye hi laaya..

He smiled to her and said "Aapne nahi badla, aapka vesh badla lekin aap nahi" saying this he took them and went away...

Radhika sat there lyk that only staring at the way he went... She felt some ones hand on her shoulder and looked up to see sumithra standing there

Sumithra:Chaley..

Radhika:Haan, ek minute...

saying that she rushed up to temple, did one final pranaam to Kanha and came down.

At the same time...

Dev was coming down along with chaya, when he saw some one running up fast... He turned back to see the same girl... "God ye ladki"

Chaya:Kya hua..

Dev:Kuch nahi, seeing some one wearing western wear to temple made me laugh.

Chaya: U know of todays girls.

Dev: Obviously..

Chaya: Don't even dare to get me a girl like this, i want a daughter in law, not a fashion model

Dev:Lolz...

Chaya:Chalo

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Radhika came home and opened her fb, to see some messages... She replied all of those messages and by then she got another inbox message. sighing she opened it and saw it was from dev Purohith..

"Hi"

Radhika:Hi

Dev: Does I know u ?

Radhika:I doesn't know, but I don''t know u

Dev: How come u are my friend

Radhika: Well its u who send me add request//

Dev: well then, may be i sent it out by mistake

Radhika:Okay shall i unfriend u then

Dev: its ur wish, but i feel ur name familiar. Don't take me wrong, but truly i does

Radhika:Its okay, indeed I too feel the name a bit familiar, any way i won't unfriend u

dev:Lolzz

Radhika:So what are ur hobbies

Dev:Reading, cricket and going to near by vilages to do service.

Radhika : Great... so, i guess ur college have some group for service ryt...
Their convo continued like that for time unknown, but every thign about philosophy and service...

For the few months their friendship continued like that, but as both got busy in their lives, FB lost its prominence for both of them and they both parted their ways

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After 2 years...

Delhi Medical College..

Radhika was rushing for her first class, when some seniors stopped her on way... Radhika looked at them and they asked her "U are a fresher right"

Radhika:Yes sir..

"Kaha jaa rahe ho"

Radhika:Class ka time ho raha hain sir..

"Toh"

Radhika:Mujhe jaana hain

"Kuch baat nahi rokho, ek class miss karne par, tera kuch nahi bigdega"

Radhika was losing her patience, but she managed with the most polite voice "Please sir... Mujhe jaane digiye na"

As they saw Anatomy HOD coming for rounds, they said her to go and feeling relief she went off to her class room...

As she entered the class room, she searched for place, and by her luck she had a place in first bench..

She took her seat and sat silent when she found some one behind her laughing a lot, she turned back to see a girl smiling a lot talking, she liked that smile a lot, but she remained silent.

She turned front and sat silent when she felt some one touching her shoulder, she looked back to see the girl smilign to her. Radhika:What?"

"I am Bharka, aapka naam"

Radhika:Radhika...

Bharka smiled and then joined her in first bench... Radhika felt the girl to be nice, so spoke to her nciely...

Bharka: I am from Chandanpur...

Radhika:oh... i am from Delhi only, by the way where are u staying

Bharka:College hostel

Radhika:Okay... but do u people have ragging

Bharka:Ofcourse , i am getting ragged a lot..

Radhika:What are they asking.

Bharka:They are asking me to sing.

Radhika imediately coughed...

harka;Kya hua

Radhika:Nothing, if u know how to sing, then u can sing na, whats big matter in that.

Bharka:Hmmm... easy to say

Radhika smiled but remained mum... she just got glimpses of abhay, this is her first day and she was missing abhay a lot...

Radhika came out from her thoughts as the class commenced and through the way in the college what she got to know was, its difficult to be peacce ful.. But Radhika loved the practical hours a lot as she feel to learn more then, and it make her interact more with teachers, and make her their favourite.

Finally One day Radhika opened her FB when she saw a message from the id Dev Purohith, for now she wasn't in touch with the person for nearly 1 year but still she remember him , why she only doesn't know. but she feel soem adrenaline rush of talking to some one more familiar when she chat to him. Radhika sighed to herself and replied his message that she joined his college only... and to her surprise he replied her, and she checked her watch its 12:30am... Radhika chat with him for some time and finally they decided to meet the next day at lab


Dev: well bring some of ur friends too with u, it makes the work a bit easier...

Radhika: Are u on a plan to get a new girl friend sir...

DevL Lolz... may be

Radhika:Then i won't bring any of my friends

Dev:Don't worry , i won't . just to get in touch with my juniors...

Radhika:Congratulations, well i have very few friends I will bring them

Dev: Its a seniors order, u has to follow

Radhika;If u also start ragging me, i will jump off from this window.

DevL:Lolz... meet u tomorrow

Radhika: Bye..

DevL: See u

Edited by harianjana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update hari so in next update we wil get radev meeting want to know how wil dev react
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update. Hope to have more of RaDev meeting & their friendship.Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice so dev is kind of remembering is his past life
lets see when they see each other again
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice

keep it up๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update can't believe she is radhika who is in choti bahu but can't wait for more please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice waiting for the next one

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