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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: honeey95

already loving it !!!!!!!!!! :D



thank you so much dear 😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: rajkumaripari

i feel it will be interesting..any how very very much fed up with current track...hope everything set right soon...update soon...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ray1998

ya continue please even i dont like d present track !!!!!!!!!!!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: aparabosecarmel

di concept is interesting
i m bit confused
plz post chap 1 soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
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------------------------------------PART -1--------------------

taani- [ in straight tone ]----rey aaj aapko choose karna hi hoga...

rey- [ in soft voice ]-- taani ye sab tum kya keh rahi ho tum janti ho you both equally important for me...

taani- nahi rey mujhe aaj sirf aapka jwaab sunna hai kya aap elm's mai participate karenge ya nahi or aapko kya chahiye mera sath ya apne frnds ka sath aaj aapko hum dono mai se kisi ek ko choose karna hoga ...

rey- [ in angry tone ]--okk fine tum yahi chahti ho toh yahi sahi ye sach ahi ki mai tumse pyar karta hu but dance is not only my passion it's my life too , i live for dance or my friends are my strengthso i choose them [ held her shoulder ] i am sorry taani but mere friends ko meri jarurat hai ...

he goes from there without waitingfor her answer , now she completely broke down she can't stand more she goes from there too straight to her house , tears continously flowing from her beautiful innocent eyes , she goes in her room and locked it from inside , start crying like hell from her heart out , with a great difficulty she rushed to her cupboard and open it , she saw all his pictures and in next second she tore all his photos and gritting which he gift her on their first valentine , then she about to throw a locket which rey gifted her but something stop her , she look at the locket and his words start echoing in her ears !!! " taani ye hamesha hume connected rakhega "!!!!! she keep it close to her heart , sat on floor , his words again start echoing in her ear !!!!!!!" i am sorry taani but mere friends ko meri jarurat hai .."'!!!!!!!!!

taani- [ while crying ] --- kya rey mujhe aapki jarurat nahi hai kyo rey kyo kiya aapne mere sath aisa aapne toh kaha tha ki aap mere bina incomplete hai fir kyo aaj aapne mujhe iss tarah akele chod diya kyo aapne ek baar bhi janane ki khoshish bhi nahi ki ki mai kehna kya chahti hu kyo aapne mere answer k liye wait nahi kiya or bina ek baar bhi meri taraf dekhe uhi chale gaye ,,why rey why aapne kyo hamesha mujh mai se or apne frnds mai se hamesha apne frnds ko choose kiya , jab aap sab mujhe bina bataye goa chale gaye the tab aapko pata hai ki mai kitna hurt hui thi or jab aapne kaha ki vaha jo bhi hai ussne apne dil ki baat suni hai or maine kaha ki mai aapke dil mai nahi hu tab aapko pata hai my heart break into thousand pieces but fir bhi mai aapke khatir waha gayi but rey tab mai sahi thi , mai sach mai aapke dil mai thi hi nahi tabhi toh aapne mujhe bata jaruri nahi samjha or shayad ab bhi nahi hu varna aap apne frnds ko choose nahi karte , mai hamesha se hi aapke liye less important rahi hu tabhi toh jab sharon ne cs ki position se resign kiya tha tab aapne mujhe kitni jaldi missunderstand kar liya tha or mujhese kitna kuch kaha tha , aapke liye aapke friends hamesha mujhse jada important rahe hai ye sab dekhte hue or samjhte hue bhi maine hamesha apni feelings ko side rakhtehue hamesha aapke point of view ko understand kiya but aaj jab mai chahati hu ki aap bhi mere point of view ko understand kare tab aap mujhe understand kyo nahi kar rahe kyo rey kyo [ again she start crying but after sometime she wiped her all tears ] baas ab bhoot ho gya bahut roli mai or bhut rula liya aap sabne mujhe bas ab or nahi mai kyo rou jab meri koi galti nahi hai or unke liye jinki life mai meri kuch importance hi nahi hai , [ she stand up ] abhi tak aap sabne hamesha ek chup rehne wali or dusro k liye jeene wali taani se mile ho but ab nahi , ab aap sab dekhenge mera ek nyaa avtar ...

next day--

whole day rey busy in rehersals and taani in her work , rey try to call her twice but she didn't pick up his phone he thought that might be she is busy in her work or today is big day for her , in evening d3 team performed well in elm's and they all choose for NDC , rishi also present there , he is judge of the elm's but took a fair decision , after their performance whole team on back stage celebrating their won , taani and her tauji came there , tauji move towards rey ..

taau ji- [ in angry tone ] -- how did you do this rey , are kya samjha tha maine tumhe or tum kya nikle , apne bete se jada pyaar kiya tha usse jada vishwas kiya tha maine tum par or tumne mere sath kya kiya , apne dancer hone ki baat chupayi mujhse , arre maine socha tha ki tum ek honest or hard working guy ho , but tum ... thank god taani ne tumse shaadi karne se mana kar diya varna pata nahi kya ho jata [ now this line of tauji made him to look her but she didn't look him once she start looking here & there ] uski taraf aise kya dekh rahe ho vo meri beti hai jo achi tarah se janti hai ki uske liye kya sahi hai or kya galat , mai toh usse manane ki koshish kar raha tha par usne hi mujhse saf saf keh diya ki vo tumse pyaar nahi karti ...

rey-[ cut him in mid and shouting in top of his voice ] ---- nahiii ye sach nahi hai [ move towards taani , and hold her hand & his eyes start weting] taani .. taani batao na taauji ko ki ye sach nahi hai tum or mai ek dure se kitna pyaar karte hai r hum ek dusre k bina nahi ji sakte batano na ki ye sab maine tumhare liye kiya humare pyaar k liye kiya kuch toh bolo na ...

taani- [ looking at her taau ji ]- haa taau ji ye sach hai [ now he took sigh of relif , a smile automatically appear on his face he knew that taani is always on his side but soon his smile disapear when she hold his hand and remove it from her hand ] haa taau ji ye sach hai ki mai rey se pyaar karti thi [ she snatch the word """"thii""" more ] but ab nahi , ab mujhe pata chal gya ki kon mera apna hai or kon praya [ she said this line to looking at him and narrate whole story to him ] plz taauji i am sorry plz mujhe maf kar djiye shayad ye aap se juth bolne ki hi saza hai jo mujhe mili hai but taau ji i promise mai ab aa se kabhi juth nahi bolungi...
rey came there and hold her by her upper arms ...

rey - taani ye sab tum kya keh rahi ho , tum hosh mai toh ho...

taani- pehle nahi thi but ab aa gayi hu rey or mai jo bhi keh rahi hu vo bilkul sach hai , mai ab aap se pyaar nahi karti , maine aapko choice di thi rey but aapne apne friends ko choose kiya tha , toh ab rahiye apne frnds k sath , ab aapke pass apke dost or sab kuch hai bas aapka pyaar ab aapke pass nahi hai [ now he completely broke down but taai looking towards the gang ] or inn show off wale dosto se acha toh akele rehna hai ,, ab nahi mai aap sabki dost hu or nahi rey ki girl frnd ab mai apni life jeungi or rey jaise aapke liye aapki priority dance or aapke frnds hai vaise hi mere liye meri priority meri family hai toh isiliye ab mai aapke sath ab or nahi reh sakti good byee ...

she goes from there with her taau ji and rey set on his kness and start crying like hell ...

precap-------
entry of taani's new frnd
sharon- enough is enough taani...
taani- [ in attitude] - i am not talking with you so it's better for you t stay away from this matter hogi tum kahi ki diva but for me you are just a nobody ... a nobody...

swayam- [ shouting] ----- taaniii...
taani- ohh i am scared how could i forget that sharon ka lover boy oops sorry correction laila ka majnu yahi par hai...


guys i am really hope hat it;s up to your expectations and don't worry taani's best frnd will be a guy tab tak do comment and hit like...

p.s nikki-----

dear shivam later join the story but don't worry he will be in positive character or tumhare liye maine ek or story likhi hai jisme sirf shivam , rey or taani hai but ussme shivam pehle negative hai or baad mai positive ovo bhi mai jaldi update karungi...😊

link of my another two stories---




Edited by taareylove - 12 years ago
Lavender_Luna thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
👏 very well written...
pls update soon!!!
waiting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
update the next part soon.Well plz change the name of shivam.Can u Plz use 1 dashing guy name If u dont mind.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

😊really awsn soon update


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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
OMG!!! LOVE IT!!! Love the new Taani she rocks do continue quickly!!!

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