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Me too @Meenu
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M acting like an insane druggy :/ :/ god save me! Actlly Muskan di se bacha lo baba ji she is making me a druggy now :/
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THANKS SHRUTHI FOR THE SPECIAL EFFECT BANNER
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Part 23
She was an enigma..he knew that but after seeing her dance like that, the naughtiness in those hazels..his heart longed for forbidden.
Next day was haldi in morning. Geet was busy in the morning talking to daadi. She was in a good mood. She had told Daadi about Pari's wedding & her trip. She even felt very shy to tell Daadi that she actually danced.. she never danced even for Devs wedding. But then that was different. Here no one knew she is a widow & so nun would mind her presence. But back home everyone knew abt her.. & she was not even welcomed into such rituals. Daadi was very happy for Geet.
Geet ' Daadi, maanav ne kal kyun nahi phone kiya, I was waiting
Daadi ' actually Dev had to drop Meera to her place
aur mujhe comp teehk se on nahi karna aaya

Geet got worried ' aap aklen ho
Daadi smiled ' main teehk hoon, Dev aur Maanav kal aajayengen
Geet ' abhi tho deleivery ke liyen time hain na
Daadi ' nahi beta thoda complication hain dr ne bed rest kaha hain
Geet ' sab teehk tho hain na Daadi
Daadi smiled warmly ' aab tho humari chinta chod pagli. Yanha sab teehk hain
Geet was planning to visit them by May. By then her Phd would have got over too. She had already got a good offer from the college she was studying. She had everything in place. She would spend some time with family before she move permanently to US. She didn't want to become a burden on Daadi & Dev. Now with second child coming they have lot in their life to take care. Her being around will only make them think for her second marriage & all. They already have given her everything.
She couldn't wait to meet Maanav & now the little one. She shied the little one will be few months old when she will go home.
Mk was so lost in her thoughts he totally forgot his fight with Sam. Through out the morning he was looking for her. His heart was anxious with every little moment. While having lunch he saw Sam having some argument with Azaan. Thats when he realized how silly he has been. He totally lost focus. How could he.. he just let Sam without sorting out their misunderstanding. It has never happened with him. He is running behind something which could never have a future. Why is his heart being so restless.. so out of control. He just wants to have a glimpse of her. Just want to speak to her.. he is behaving like a teenager.. wat is wrong with him. He went to his room & had a heart filled talk with self.
He probably slapped himself. He needs to focus on Sam.. he knows she gets senti seeing frds wedding. She needs him more than anyone else. Dam he has to be there for her.. & here he is like some majnu roaming around. He inhaled sharply clearing his mind. He changed into a shervani Sam had picked for him.

Geet was scared to attend the wedding. Her heart beat raised when she went down to the muttap. Rahul & Niti were getting over excited & decided to get married in the same mattap. The whole place was filled with fun & love... happiness. As the wedding began Geet was reminded of only memory of his togetherness. How they sat together for an hr together. Her heart ached to live every moment again. The touch of his hand while kanya daan. She could still feel the warmth. The fire that made them one.. failed to make them one.. she stared painfully at the hawan kund. She couldn't bare it anymore. She ran to the lawn & cried.
Mk was looking for Sam every where. He was ready to do anything for her. He would give her all the happiness she ever deserved. She will understand his plight. Only she could.. he was convincing himself. he was making up his mind to break that confusion that had been lingering between them.
Azaan finally got Sam alone in the garden
azaan ' give me chance to explain Sam
Sam ' just leave me alone. I understand we both got carried away. I am not blaming u,
just leave me.
Azaan ' lekin sam meri baat tho suno
sam ' it was mistake... it was big mistake. I thought of u as my frd. & I know
azaan cut her ' but I love u Sam.. I don't think it was a mistake
she looked at stunned
azaan cupped her face ' I love u, I love u a lot
sam ' but u know I love mk
azaan pulled her closer ' aapni dil ko poocha sam!!! kya tumhe ek pal ke bhi nahi laga uss raat
she tried to look away
azaan didn't let her run away this time.. not from their possible togetherness
ek bar Sam.. ek bar aapne dil se poocho
sam ' nahi..nahi ..kabhi nahi hosakta..this is insane.. but her heart was already feeling so lost to his touch, this feel of love that she longed for.
He leaned closer & took her denying lips. She struggled initially & then gave in with tears flooding washing away her barriers.

Thats how Mk saw them when he came around the garden looking for Sam. He felt his body divide itself into a hotness & a coldness, a strange feel strange emotions, mixed a softness to render the happiness of a frd & a harshness of a loser, a quiver of defeat & a strength to withstand it all, the two halves grinding one upon the other. One blaming the other for this. He lost the only relation he thought he had. Only happiness he had.. he lost it because of his own battle within. The struggle within him... didn't let him move on. The wows bounding .. he didn't want to believe but couldn't let his rationality to rule.. guess his constitution didn't let him.. like some one said.
Thanks for the lovely comments
lots of love
muskan
- PART 22 PREV NEXT PART 24 -
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Me frst again :p actually tukke se :p ab padhne do baate baad main chooo!

~~~EDITED~~~

me frst me frst me frst for the THIRD TIME ON UR WORK M FIRST!! N THAT TO CONSECUTIVLY FOR 2 DAYS! HAILA! Can I ask for a hatrick next time? Baba ji help kario please! :p :p

~~~COMMENT~~~
chalo now back to commenting! Dhinka chika dhinka chika he he he!! Iss update k hero heroin...SAM N AZAAN!!...aweee I Love Them to the bits in this update specially! Hehehe m i nt bcuming selfish day by day? Hell yaa! N I luv that fact ;) sometyms kaminapanti is good na ;) hehehehe! Sachi bolu? M nt at all affected by Maan's heartbreak! Kehte hai na apne karmo ka fall issi janam main milta hai!...he did the same! Actually the worst wid Geet atlst he isnt getting that!...he will have Geet by his side! Geet b garden main hi hai na :p :p ab bolo Sam to Azaan k sath busy hai ab Maan ko to Geet ko hi sambhaalna padega :p :p aweee m sooo selfish at tyms :p :p

I hate to see Geet in such states! I wana see the happiness the deserved on calmess of soul, the pece of mind the lusuries and spcly the love she deserve back in her life but at the same momnt I dread on thing will she accpet! Will she acept Maan aftr know everything? I dont know! Bt i wnna know! N that too soon! Spcly I wnna see that expression on Maan's face the momnt they cums to know who actually Geet is...I wnna know


shit! One thing came in mind...helll dont I MEANS DO NOT LET MAAN ACCUSE GEET FOR THIS AS WELL NOW! saying he lost his last relation because he lost his focus in her! Shit! This man is insane wont wondr if he says this to Geet as well :/ bt wish he dont!

Now waiting fr next :p
Edited by dazzlingdivz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
For the first time I am confused by the last part, not that I want you to rush the story or clarify it for me. I am enjoying it just the way you are presenting it. Does he remember his vows and feels himself bound to them?
Does he know that it was Geet? I am sure the answer to that is no.
Her pain is a constant. Loved the sweet moments with Dadi.
Sam finally sucumbing to the love she deserves. Chalo kuch toh bhala hua bechari ka.
I wish he would try to sort himself out and understand her a bit.
Thanks for the update..
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update

still geet in pain,,,,,,n maan too


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