REVANGEFUL LOVE #4 UPDATED PT 36 pg 113 19/7/2013 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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cngrats ds 4 d new thread
intrestng tsr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wating for the update
Yaar teasor to bohat chotu tha pata bhi nahi chala ki kab shuru huva aur kab khatam
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Posted: 12 years ago
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don't worry shona sb theek ho jaye ga
have faith
take care
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PART - 31

TIME is very strong. By the time passes old wounds starts recovering. Same with both Maan and Geet. Geet is now recovers properly. She can able to do her all works now without taking anyone 's help.


Though the distance between both is needed time to fill,but still they share a strong bond. Bond of untold emotions. Bond of their new developed friendship, bond of care for each other. Unknowingly Geet too resiprocrate to their relation. Her wound is heeling. She able to understand Maan's situation and position in his own family. Most important she can able to feel his lonliness,his frustrated life and emptyness. Thats why she get comfortable with the way he is.

Both talk very little as not have much to discuss,but feel good around each other. One's presence gave pleasure to other one.

Life taking a new shape in their lifes. One morning Samarth told everyone about a party and instruct everyone to get ready on time as the invitation is came from one of the political leaders. All nodded and put his instruction in their minds. In evening all get ready. Geet wear bright ornage saree and when she came in that form Maan whole body lignite a fire deep inside. His all desires burn him dreadfully. He adored her and wats to grab her,but his concious mind stops him.

Now its becom tortreous for Maan to fought daily with his feelings. He daily cursed him and burn himself in fire of regreat. All the time he only thinking how he remove that night and his sin from their lives. Because if he dont commit that,then today there relation is not suffering like that. He himself distruct everything for both. He gave her a lifetime wound whose reversing is next to impossible.

All went to venue and get involved themselves with the guests. Maan is the only one who is alone being standing in this huge high profile mob. He is standing alone in a corner. Mixup with these hypocrates is not for him. He doesnt like this atmosphere. Scanning everyone in party he feels disguest and wants to ran away from there. Soon he found her absence. Though all the time his eyes struck on her only yet she got a chance to made an escape. His restless eyes searching her in whole hall and found her dancing with someone. With a flip of sec his fist clenched hard and jaw too. His blood boiled seeing someone touching his Geet. He immediately went to dance floor and snatch her from that stranger's arms. Geet saw him in astonishment. Maan scan litle panic in her eyes and calmed his furious eyes and sharp breathing.

'Geet go mumma calling you.',he instruct her and send away from there. Geet obeyed him.

The stranger dancing with Geet trying to get friendly with him and raised his hand towards Maan. He compressed stranger's hard as much that that he start wincing in pain.

With great difficulty Maan trying to hold his anger and made move from there. He still wincing holding his hand. One more come to that person.

'what happened why you stand holding your hand like this?',he enquired.

'yaar he is so wild. Who is he? He compressed my hand badly,which is still aching.',he hissed in pain.

'He is MSK,SSK's younger son and trust me he is completely mad,so its better you stay away from him.'he advised.

Geet went to her MIL and asked for the reason she summoned her.

'mumma u called me?'

'no beta',she revealed.

'but Maan told me...'before she able to complete Maan came there.

'mom i not feeling comfortable there. I want to leave.',he cribbed

'ok then take Geet with yourself. I think she too need some rest. Maan sighed. Thats what he exactly wants to take her away from all eyes,glueing to Geet.

Both returned to KM. As they entred in their room Maan felt peace. Now no one can see his Geet. She is all his.

Maan settled himself on couch and start working on his laptop. Geet still wants to know the reason behind his lie. When she get overed with her patience she asked deliberately.

'Maan i want to ask something?'

he nodded and siglned her green sign.

'why you lied to me in party that Mom is calling to me?',she asked sharply.

Maan squiremed first then overpowered and get stick to his lie.'i m not lied. She called you.'

'no she wont. Maine puchh tha unse or unhone mana kar diya.',she raised her voice.

Maan fummbles,'wo... wo...'

'Maan you getting jelous seeing me dancing so well..',she taunts.

'no way. I m just helping you. He is not a good man.',he lied again.

'if this so they why you don asked me for dance first?',she threw her doubts and leave him speechless.'tell me Maan?' she raised her questioning brow,'tume main pasand nahi hu dance?'

'nai wo baat nai hai.'

'then'

he heistated telling her,but when she forced he trying to open up.'ok i tell you but first you made me a promise that you wont laugh.'

Geet dont get him but she made promise to him.

'actually i dont know how to dance.',he confessed in one go innocently and leave Geet astonished for few secs but later she burst in laugh
Watching her making mock of him Maan pouts.'Geet thats not fare. You promised me',he complaints.

Geet trying controlled her laugh putting her palm on her mouth.'sorry sorry. Ok ab main nai hasungi.but tumne baat hi aisi ki to,i couldnt stop my self. I mean remember on our wedding night you told me that you spend whole night in disc. To jab tume dance aata hi nai to waha kya karte ho,yahi soch k mujhe hasi aa gai'.

'wo to maine tume tang karne k liye yu hi keh dia tha. Na to main akbi disc gaya hu or na intrested hu. Geet i dont like noicy places'.Maan share his feeling with her. Indeed this was first time he tell someone about his feelings.

'hmm so you lied on that time too. Waise wo ladki wali jo tumne fenki thi na wo to mujhe tabi samjh me aa gaya tha. Because i knew tum jaise sadu k sath koi survive nai kar skti.',she said without thinking and realize later when she glance his angry face. 'sorry wo aise hi muh se nikal gaya.'

both turned silent and glance here and there. After short a while Geet broke the awkward silence between them.'Maan i can help you. I mean if u want i will teach you how to dance. Seekhoge mujhse?',she enquired.

Maan think and said yes.

'then lets start'

'abhi?'

'why not? Tume konsa abhi sona hai'

'ok',he agreed and both stood up. Maan went closer to her,but at some distance.

'Maan idhar aao,or paas.',she instructs and Maan felt hesitation but steps more towards her. He stood straight in front of her and made her mad.

'lagta hai life me har cheez mujhse hi sikhani padegi hath pakad k. Give me your hand.',she said bossily.

Maan obeyed. Geet hold his one hand and placed another on her sleek creamy waist. Maan hissed silently. His long fingers clamping her and made him shudder through spine.

Geet start instructing him and he follwed her
Both taking steps holding each other. Maan is new for all this so in hurry he patted his foot on he and she screamed in pain. Both loose balance too and falls on bed.

Geet was laying on him and glance in each other's eyes for a while. Then both laugh madly.

'i think aaj k liye itna kafi hai.',she said fussily.

Maan agreed. She lifts her up from him and Maan took his pillow. He moved from there and laid on his couch. Geet turn off the lights.

'good night Geet',he wished her.

'good night Maan',she too replied and both slept peacefuly.

Next morning Geet is sitting on her bed relaxing,when Maan came half nude from washroom. He only wear his jeans and his chiseled torso is bare and wet. Before wearing his shirt he roamed in whole room,merging his assesories at one place.

Suddenly Geet's eyes struck at him and roamed at all places where he moved,without a blink. Maan reached to his wardrobe in last,showing his bare back to Geet. Maan's wet hair dropping water droplets and roaming on his muscline back.

Suddnly Geet stood up from her place and moved mesmerised towards Maan. Her hands deliberately moved around him. Her soft plams stroking his rock hard chest and she rubbed her cheek against his back. His cold body gave her burning sensation. She is feeling him,clenching her almond eyes. She opened her hazled and start sucking the droplets from his back. Her plum lips stroking his back delightfuly.

'Geet i m leaving for office tum breakfast kar lena time pe ok?',Maan told her before leaving and broke her trance.

Geet looked around and found her on their bed. She came back to her sences but not fully.

'Maan why you wear shirt?',she asked in her trance moment.

Maan gazed her in amusement and she realized her words.'mera matlab hai ye wali kyu pehni hai?',she fummbles and coverup herself.

'kyu ye achhi nai hai?',he asked softly and she nodded no. 'tell me then konsi pehnu?'

'wo black wali,usme tum bahut ho...',this time she stopped herself on right time.'i mean wo achhi hai wo pehno. That colour suits u.'

'ok',Maan said with a smile a changed instantly.

Maan leave after his change and left her behind in confusion.

Geet is repenting on her thoughts and imaginations. She wont even ready to accept that she really think in that way.'ye kya ho raha hai mujhe. How can i feel like this for Maan. We are rivals then why my heart betraying me? Kahi mujhe...nai aisa nai ho skta.'

she left herself uncompletes and trying to divert her mind to other thing inorder to get rid from her thoughts.

NOTE:-NEXT TO AB TARGET COMPLETE HONE K BAAD HI MILEGA. WAISE B MERE PAAS TIME NAHI HAI AAJKAL. UPAR SE ITNE KAM LIKES PE MAIN NEXT NAHI DUNGI.200+ PE NEXT AAYEGA.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeee me first

Lovely update maneet getting comfortable with each other and restless in absence of other
Maan j because geet is dancing with some one
Geet confused with her feeling
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on new thread...
nice part...
loved it...
maan got jealous seeing his geet dancing with another person...
he went their and told her that mumma calling u...ha ha...
that poor fellow ka haat toh gaya...
maan doesnt know dancing...
geet wants to teach him dance...
poor geet he steeped on feet while doing dance...
oh geet is getting wild imaginations about maan...
she doesnt want to think in that way that she in love with maan...
ab nahi toh baad mein sahi she will realise ur feelings for maan...
waiting for nect part...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear😊

maaneet has feelings fr each other👏

geet drollls on maan⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab ud dr
maan got j seing hs geet dncng with sumone else
geet caught maan,s lie
maan told hs feling to geet
nd geet openly droling maan
geet is also feling 4 maan
nd dr take yur time
nd ud only whenever u get time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely cute update.. te way my maan ki jealous and lieing to his geet and geet asking him and my maan saying he dont know how to dance was so lovely.. te way geet teaching my maan was lovely.. te way geet drooling on my maan and her dream oh god..i love te update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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j maan is always my favrt

n their dance is icing on cake
plzz geet accept ur feelings

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