Ariya::AASHIQUI-Tom & Jerry's Love Story(completed - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Read next part...
ohh poor riya arjun n arjun angry look..
but like the way riya handle all this...
chip vishal stil hv a guts to tace alll...
nice update update soon n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
just read the last two parts...!!
superb updates...!!!
wow ariya married...!!!!
loved shree and riya convo...!! sonali convo was nice...!!!
omg feeling bad for riya... how could her parents say like this?😡
arjun sam convo was lovely...!!! very heart touching...!!!!
fb scenes were amazing./...!!!!
wow dono ne ek sath hi ring nikali haan cool...!!!
ooo arjun isn't even talking to riya...!!! omg how could he forbid her to use teh kitchen... glad riya stood up to him...
loved shree's concern for riya/... sam riya convo about not filing complaint against vishal was nice...!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
awesome update
loved the way both got the ring at the same time
arjun sang the song for roshini😲
he forbid riya to use the kitchen😲 really??? omg
loved the way she still stood up for her & didn't give up in front of him
loved rathod & choree so much😛 their concern for riya is awesome👏
vishal is not going to leave etf hehe jealousy track is on the way😆
update soon
thx for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Ab is kamine ko do din ki chutti kyun chahiye?!

Aur I want more of Riya V/S Vishal!!! And i want to see Arjun V/S Vishaal 2!!! When Vishal tries to apologise to Riya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Thanx 4 pm me dr
I am missing some part becz of ur index I got it easily
Kya Tom and Jerry story hai
Songs selection Ashi THI
Superb mind blowing dr
Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
brilliant update :) loved it
love the way they welcomed her in arjun's house
ring game was lovely
arjun and roshni's flashback was awesome
awww riya got the ring
love how arjun was singing song for roshni
feeling so bad for arjun and riya :(
love the way riya answered arjun
awww so riya doesn't want to file any complain against vishal just for arjun :) how sweet
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Waooo what a beautifulll update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

They all are going to crime spot which is on Mumbai-pune highway..they all are in ETF SUV..

Rathod is driving..Arjun is sit next to him..Riya,chotu & Shree are sitting behind..

They all are quite..Arjun is still fuming in anger..

Shree(slowly):-Ritz..tu itni chup kyo he..?Tu ne Arjun sir se zagada kiya he kya?

Though Shree asked her softly but Rathod & Arjun also hear it..

Riya(angrily):-mein kya tuze pagal dikhti hu..jo sabse zagada karte firu..aur meine unse zagada nahi kiya..unhone muzse zagada kiya..

Chotu:-are par hua kya tha..?

Before she can answer..

Arjun(angrily):-shut up..bakwass band rakho apni..itana dimaag kabhi kaam me bhi lagaya karo.."Samaze ya Samzaoo.."

The trio stared each other..suddenly an idea hits in Riya's brain..

Riya:-Arjun sir..mein aapse ek sawal puchu..?

Arjun(take a deep sigh):-agar meine mana kiya toh kya tum muzse sawaal nahi puchogi Riya..?

Riya:-nahi..mein to kisi na kisi tarike se sawaal puch ke hi rahugi..

Arjun:-toh jaldi se pucho..taki tumhara dimaag shant ho jaye..

Riya:-sir..jaise..Amitabh ka favorite dialogue he na..(she make act as Amitabh) " Ristey mein toh ham tumhare baap lagate he..naam he Shenshah.." (all are looking to her suprizingly..Arjun & Rathod looking back to see her act..)

aur jaise Dhermendra ka dialogue he..(she make Dharmendra's mimicry) "Kutte..mein tera khoon pi jauga.." aur Rajkumar

(she make Rajkumar's mimicry) " Jaani..jinke ghar shishe ke hote he woh dusaro ke ghar pe phattar nahi maara karte.."

Aur Shahrukh ka(she make sharukh's mimicry) "k..k ..k..Kiran.." aur woh Amrish puri..(she make his mimicry also).."mogambo..khush hua.."

Waise hi aapka (she mimicry of Arjun) "Samaze yaa samzaoo "

Favorite dialogue he kya.?

They all started laughing..even Arjun burst into laugh..but control it somehow & turned it to smile..

Riya(laugh):-sir..batayiye na..?

He turned his face to window..put his hand on his mouth..(so that no one could see him laughing )..he is laughing so much..cant control it..

Chotu(smiling):-are nahi muze aisa lagata he sir ka favorite dialogue he.."Kuch toh chut raha he.. Rathod.."

The trio & Rathod started laugh..

Riya:-are nahi..sir toh ETF me abhi abhi aye he..toh isase pehale woh "Rathod "ki jagah kiska naam lete honge..nahi..ye dialogue toh unhone ETF me aane ke baad develop kiya he..

Arjun cant control his laugh now..

Arjun(with laugh):-enough Riya..

She gives hi5 to Shree & Chotu..

Arjun looks back to her..& give smile her..

She winked to him & smile..

He nodded negatively..& mutter " iss ladki ka kuch nahi ho sakta.."

The trio starts chatting about her mimicry..

After sometime..

Riya:-oh shit..mere mobile ki battery down ho gayi he..Shree tera tab de na..muze songs sunane he..

Shree:-pagal ho gayi he kya..?agar mera tab discharge ho gaya na..toh Arjun sir muze kachha khaa jayege..

Riya:-haa..ho bhi sakta he..waise bhi unhone subah se kuch nahi khaya..

Arjun smiles her dialogue..& said.." shut up Riya.."

Rathod is enjoying Arjun's behavior change..

Riya:-Rathod sir..ham kam se kam radio toh on kar sakte he na..plz..

Rathod:-ok..

He on the radio..

The song is started now..

Shree:-are ye song muze pata he..sad song he..

Rathod is about to change the channel..but Arjun stops him.."Rehane do.."

The song started

Milne hai mujhse aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui


(Arjun closed his eyes..& remember Roshni..)

Khud se hai ya Khudaa se
Is pal meri ladaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui


Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot-te bante vishwaas ki..
O.. Milne hai mujhse aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui

(he thought..he also betray Roshni by marrying Riya..he betray her love..her faith on him..)

Jaane kyun main sochta hoon
Khaali sa main ek raasta hoon
Tu ne mujhe kahin kho diya hai
Ya main kahin khud laapata hoon
Aa dhoondh le tu phir mujhe
Kasmein bhi doon to kya tujhe..


(suddenly he realize that the trio are quite..he remember Vishal breaks Riya's 'Vishwaas ' she must be sad after hearing this song..he look back..Chotu & Shree keep quite..& Riya looking outside the window..)

Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot-te bante vishwaas ki..
Milne hai mujhse aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui

(he adjust mirror in such away that he can see her..he look her through mirror..tears are slowly rolled down from her eyes..she wipe hurrily so no one can see her while crying..he get upset to see her like this..)


Tuta hua saaz hoon main
Khud se hi naaraz hoon main
Seene mein jo kahin pe dabi hai
Aisi koi aawaaz hoon main
Sun le mujhe tu dil kahe...
Kab tak khaamoshi dil sahe...

Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot-te bante vishwaas ki..
Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot-te bante vishwaas ki..


(he though she was laughing before some minutes..& he made her cry by playing this song..he off radio suddenly.. but no one react why he off it..because everyone realize the tensed situation..)

They all remain quite..Rathod change the mirrior direction..now Arjun can't see Riya..he look somewhat angrily to Rathod..

After sometime..

Shree:-hey Ritz..woh Dharmendra ka dialogue fi se bol na..?

She smiles..& make the act again..

Arjun look back..she was smiling to Chotu & Shree..he smrik..& turned to look forward..

The next 8 days were so hectic for them..they were handling some tough cases..& have lot of work to do..Vishal also joined them..

They all are doing their paper work..suddenly Riya's phone started ring..she suprized to see the number..& received it immigiately..

Riya:-hello..kya..?aur ye sab kaise hua..?kis hospital me he woh..? ok..

Riya was very upset..everyone is staring her as they hear her talking about hospital..

Rathod:-what happened Riya..?

Riya(teary):-dad ko heart attack hua he..city hospital me he woh..

She was searching her cheque-book in her drawer..

Riya:-sir kya mein..?

Rathod:-haa Riya..jaldi jao..(looking to Arjun)Arjun..tum dekh kya rahe ho..usake sath jao..

Both Arjun & Riya leave..they reached to the hospital..enquired about the doctor who is giving treatment to her father..

They meet to doctor..

Arjun:-doctor..Mr.mukherji ki treatment..?

Doctor:-haa..mein hi kar raha hu..?aap kyon..

Riya:-I am his daughter..woh kaise he ab..?

Doctor:-dekhiye..unka urgent opration karna padega..usake liye meine unki wife ko paise jama karne ko bola tha..par abhi muze pata chal he ke unhone sirf 2 lakhs hi paid kiye he..aur puri fees 5 lakhs he..mein unhe yahi batane ja raha tha ke pura payment kiye bina ham operation suru nahi kar sakte..

Riya(give him cheque):-doctor..ye puri amount he..ab aap jaldi se operation suru kijiye..aur haa..unhe ye mat batayiga ke payment meine kiya he..they wont like it..

Doctor leave from there..they were sitting far away from operation theater where her father's operation going on..

After almost 3 hours..Doctor comes to them..

Doctor:-aapke dad ab out of danger he..unhe abhi hosh nahi aaya he..lekin agar aap chahe toh unhe dekh sakti he..

Riya:-thank you doctor..do me the last favor..dont tell my parents that I were here & paid all money..

Doctor:-ok..(& he leaves..)

Riya:-chale sir..

Arjun:-Riya..par ham tumhari mom se toh ek baar..

Riya:-no..they don't want to see my face..I know..

She started walking..Arjun also start walking behing her..

They reached to Office..

Rathod:-Riya..ab tumhare dad ki tabiyat kaise he..?

Riya:-he is out of danger..

But now she can't control herself..& run out of conference room..

Shree also runs behind her..he make her sit on a bench which is infront of conference hall..& sit next to her..she hug him..& started crying..he give her some time to control herself..

Shree:-Ritz..dont cry..ab sab thik he na..so why you are crying..he will fine..

Riya :-I know..but I can't control my tears now..

Shree:-you meet him ..?you must stay with him for sometime there..why you come back..?

Riya:-no..he don't want to meet me..he don't want to see me..they don't love me..I know..they don't..

She started crying..

After sometime..

Shree:-chal mein tuze abhi ghar drop kar deta hu..tu thodi der aaram kar..

He droped her to home..& come to office again..& told everyone that he drop her home..

After sometime..Arjun also leave to go home..

He reached to home..

Arjun:-Riya..Riyaa..Riya..

She come out from her room..her eyes are too red..anyone can say she had cried a lot..

Arjun:-Riya..mein dinner ke liye..parcel le aaya hu..chalo..dinner kar lo..

Riya(sadly):-muze nahi karna he..

Arjun(softly):-dekho Riya..meine hospital phone kiya tha..sab thik he..

Riya(worrily):-kya kaha doctor ne..?

Arjun:-woh thik he..aur unhe jald hi dischare bhi kar denge..

Riya look sadly..

Arjun:-accha ek kaam karte he..chalo..abhi unse milne jate he..tumhe accha lagega..

Riya:-nahi..mein unse nahi milugi..

Arjun:-Riya..shadi ke waqt unhone job hi kaha woh gusse me kaha hoga..tum abhi bhi ussi baat ko lekar baiti ho..?

Riya:-nahi..mein unhe bahot acche se janati hu..

Arjun:-Riya..ho sakta he woh apne kahi hui baat pe 'sorry' feel kar rahe ho..woh tumhe bahot miss kar rahe ho..issiliye shayad unhe heart-attack hua ho..

Riya:-nahi..unhone medicine time pe nahi li issliye unhe attack aaya..muze servent ne bataya..aur bachapan se aaj tak meine kabhi unhe apne liye sorry feel karte nahi dekha..toh aaj kya sorry feel karege woh..aur rahi muze miss karne ki baat toh woh toh yahi chahte the ke mein unke ghar me naa rahu..they don't like me..they don't love me..

Her eyes again become teary..

Arjun realize that he has to stop this subject here..

Arjun:-chalo..khana kahlo..

Riya(sadly):-muze nahi khana..

Arjun:-gr8..kyo na aaj hum dono milake 'fast' rakhe..

Riya stared him..

Arjun:-agar tum nahi khaogi..toh mein bhi nahi khauga..kyo ki mein tumhare liye chinise laya tha..well muze chinise accha toh nahi lagata..par mein sirf tumhe company dene ke liye khane wala tha..ab agar tum bhi nahi khaogi..toh..

Riya(suprizingly):-really..chinise..

She run towards dining table..& making arrangements for dinner..

Arjun smrik..

She start eating hurrily like a small hungry child..he smrik to see her..

After 2-3 days..she got a call from her servent..& come to know that her father is fine now..& discharged from hospital..

This news made her feel relax..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Nice update.
Riya's mimicry was awesome.
She made arjun laugh.
Interesting.
The song was nice.
Arjun remembers roshni and riya remembers vishal.
Her father was hospitalized due to heartattack.
Love arjun concerned for riya.
Shree is such a darling.
He is very good friend.
Love arjun buy chinese food for riya.
Amazing.
Continue soon.
And pm me also.
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Posted: 12 years ago
The mimicry was awesome
loved when arjun took care of riya
update soon

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