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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
part 8
thanks for continuing this...
plz pm this FF too...
cont soon...

PS - om me this one too...since the original writer cant update the title and it wont be easy to follow this FF's updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
nice update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
hi jasminerahul thanks 4 da pm n fab emotional update...well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Its lovely ff dear... So, hope finaly maaneet wil meet... Thnx 4 d pm... Cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome, nice part
loved it
geet gave birth baby girl
she is replica of maan.
here maan become stone hearted but taking care of rano
and later maan -arnav met
waiting for more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Awesome..
wow arhi planning to reunite maneet..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Thanks for the pm
Awsome blossom update
Loved the whole concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Afsana Part 9


After a week Maan and Khushi went to Sri Lanka.Arnav picked them up and took them to the Guest house.

In the evening they all went for the dance show.

A group of students started dancing'

Ore Piya'(Aaja nachle).

Maan was shocked.


Flash back'.

Geet was out of mood.

M:What happned Mishty?Why do you look so dull?

G:Maanu'I am not getting a good song for my new dance item.

M:Such a small thing?I will compose a song for you.

Geet was very happy:Really?

M:When your Maanu is with you no tensions.

Within 2 days he composed a song and sang it before Geet.

M:
O re piya haye (3)

Udne laga kyon man baawla re
Aaya kahan se yeh hosla re
O re piya haye (2)

Tanabana tanabana bunti hawaa haaye bunti hawa
Boondein bhi to aaye nahi baaz yahan

Sagish mein shaamil sara jahan hai
Har zare zare ki yeh iltiza hai

O re Piya
O re Piya haye (2)
O re Piya

Geet's body moved automatically.She danced beautifully.


Present

The dance got over.Maan had seen the dance properly as his mind was in their past moments.

Maan rushed to Mr.Mittal.

Mittal:How was the performance Mr.Khurana?

Maan was restless:Nice. Who is the choreographer?

Mi:Geet Handa.

Maan became very emotional.

Arnav and Khushi smiled watching this.

A:So finally our plan is working out.

Khushi smiled:Ya..

Geet who was on the wheel chair in the dressing room was nervous as she had come to know that the programme's chief guest was Maan.Geet's helper lady Sandhya came.

S:Geet'Mr.Maan Sngh Khurana is really impressed with your choreography.He wants to meet you.

Geet was shocked.She thought:No.Maan should not see me in this condition.He won't be able to bear it.

Sandhya came out.Muskaan was near Geet.

G:Muskaan'Maan should not see me.So please take me home immediately through the back door.

Mus:But Geet'

G:Please take me back home Muskaan'I beg you.

Muskaan became upset.

Mus:Ok'


Maan reached the room with Sandhya.No one was there.

M:Where is Geet?

S:I don't know Sir.She was here only.

Maan ran out restlessly searching for Geet.

M:Mishty'.

Maan cried out of pain.

Suddenly a girl kept her arm on his shoulder.He looked at her.He was emotional and surprised.

M:Mishty!

It was Geet.
G:Maan!

He cupped her face.

M:My Mishty!Why did you leave me?After you left me I have never slept peacefully.

Geet walked away.Maan followed her.They reached an area which was decorated with lights.

M:Mishty!

He pulled her towards him.
They shared a passionate eye lock.


Suddenly he realized that it was only his dream.

Arnav-Khushi came out.

A:Muskan's car is missing.That means she took Geet home.

They saw Maan breaking down.

A:Maan'no need of calling Geet.She is not here.I will take you to Geet.I know where she is.

Maan was surprised:You'?You hid her from me?

A:Maan'wait'you will understand everything when you see her.


Arnav,Khushi and Maan reached Arnav's house.

Arnav pointed his finger towards a room.

A:That is Geet's room.

Maan rushed to her room.

M:Mishty!

He was shocked to see Geet on the wheel chair.Geet was shocked to see him there.
Arnav-Khushi looked at each other as they were tense about Maan-Geet's reaction.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hope to see them back together
in next update
waise nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Well written!

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