MG FF- *Love Story* #3 Pt 13_pg 66.. IMP NT pg77 march20 - Page 37

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(Another cutoo edit by my very own Angel di [Dazzling Divz] 😃)

This update is verry special as it is a treat from me to all and the reason is that on 26th i completed whole one year in this forum 🥳. It feels too great to have been a part of this beautiful world full of love for almost an year now. That time i was just to fascinated to make new-new friends here and to know the awsomn writers here, whom me the pagal considered as celebs and me thier fan 😆. But still my respect for all writers is the same.

IF gave me some verryy beautiful relationships to cherish, of friendship and gave me verry wonderful friends cum Sisters cum mothers at times 😆
And I feel blessed to have been part of this wonderful world.
Thank you alll maneetians for the love you gave me and for accepting me wholeheartedly 🤗 love you awl MANEETIANS ❤️

NOW heres the update

PART-13
Once the teacher left after warning Yash that he wont be spared if this happens again, he turned to face Geet who raised a finger at him warningly "Agli baar hume tang kiya toh dekh lena" and then Maneet left the class leaving Yash baffled.

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He turned to face Ved and asked him sharply "Tune jhoot kyuu bola ma'am se?"at which the boy just shrugged his shoulder "Meine kaha jhoot bola, sach hi toh bola. Tum hi toh uss ladki ko tang kar rahe the" "Pehle hi wo ma'am ne use itna darayaa.. kitna ro rahi thi wo. Aur uska haath bhi red-red kar dia wo teacher ne. Agar mei uske place pe hota toh mei class mei reh hi ni pata uss sab k baad. Aur tumne ulta uska mazaak udayaa, toh usko gussa ni ayega toh kya ayega?" Yash suddenly went quiet at this.. He somewhere now felt that he did wrong with her. So what if maan didnt have lunch with him, or he didnt sit with him in class, he shouldnt have behaved this badly with her. But his bestest buddy avoided him the whole day only becoz of her' his brain countered back, but still usske sath aisa nahi karna tha' he thought rationally in mind, pouting sadly..


Here as maneet were out of class Geet suddenly sniffed her nose, trying to control herself from crying. Maan looked at her alarmed "Geet.. kya hua tumhe? Tum ro rahi ho kya?" she sniffed again shooking her head denying "Nahi, hum kaha ro rahe hai.." though the tear that slid said something else which she hastily wiped before someone could see it.. Scared of being mocked yet again, and being laughed upon just as sometime back "Toh phir?" asked maan confused "Nangu hume ghar jana hai, hume nahi rehna yaha. School ganda hai.. Sab gande yahaa. Hume koi pasand nahi karta. Hume maa k paas jana hai" she wimpered, pained by all days experience.. unable to bear more of it. Her will power weakening to stay back..


Maan felt bad for her, and tried consoling her softly "Geet, hum bass abhi jayenge na ghar.. bass thodi der aur, phir chutti ho jayegi. Aur yeh wrong hai, aisa nahi hai k koi tumhe pasand nahi kartaa. Wo teacher toh thi hi gandi, unko toh waise hi koi pasand ni karta tha" "Aur wo yash?" she asked him "Yash ki baato ka tum bura mat maano.. wo toh waise hi thoda buddhu hai. Wo bura nahi, sacchi.. bass thoda cranky hai" "wo appka friend hai na?" she asked further, listening to him keenly "hmm wo mera bachpan ka dost hai, best friend.. hum dono playschool sey sath hai. Hum school me sab cheez ek saath karte hai, khelna, padna, lunch, sabb kuch" he said proudly but then with a small voice he continued "par ajj meine yash ke bina lunch kar liaa.. wo bhi first time, issiliye usko bura laga aur usne gusse me tumse wo sab kah diya" "kyu nahi kiya unke sath lunch appne?" geet asked curiousely "wo tumhara mood kharab tha na, aur tum uspe gussa bhi thi na, toh mujhe laga tum naraz ho jaogi" maan said pouting "arre, wo? wo toh hum us teacher k karan udaas(sad) they.. yash k karan thodi" "umm, yash ko bohot bura laga hoga naa" maan's innocent heart felt concerned for his friend, for sometime totally forgetting about the last incident in class, and little geet too couldnt help but feel concerned over his concern.. This is what friendship is afterall, all the fights, anger seem meaningless in front of one flinch on our dears face...



"Mei na, yash se baad me sorry bol dungaa.. usko mana lunga mei. Haina?" maan nervousely questioned her, more of assuring himself, at which geet too just nodded her head in agreement, the fights and yash's behaviour still fresh in mind but she did it just for maan..



Geet was feeling much better after maan's words and after washing their hands and geet's face they both returned to the class, as the recess was going to be over. Once in class, they both saw yash, already sat in his place. Geet expected the same irritating behaviour from him now too but was ammused to see him looking away from them, avoiding them.

Shrugging she sat beside maan who himself looked li'l nervous and scared, looking here and there,wondering how to face yash. Soon enough their teacher came and they yet again got buzy with studies. This time geet too could concentrate with her much better mood.


One hour passed the same way, with the teacher teaching them. Maan the whole time was the same, nervous and anxious.

And wierdly, when geet turned back to take books from her bag, she looked at yash from corner of her eyes and found him in exactly same condition as maan's.


The bell finally rang and it was the time of their daily sports time, which usually is of half an hour, i.e.from 3:30 to 4, untill their departure.

The kids reached the huge play area, which consisted of diffrend playgrounds, and one swing area with many different colourful and cute swings for the toddlers to enjoy upon..


Geet was standing there in one of the grounds all alone waiting for maan's arrival, who have gone to bring his waterbottle left in the class. As she stood beneath one of the large mango trees, a squirrel by mistake jumped down from the bushes, zooming past geet's face. Geet's breath stuck that very second followed by a huge scream as she ran ahead in a panicked state still yelling and jumping.. And then she collided with someone with great force which caused the person and her to stumble on their feet and fall down on the grass.



Yash didnt understand what happened, as he lay on his back with hands stretched out.. someone just collided with him and he fell! Now who that stupid person coul be, thinking he pulled himself up in a sitting position with legs still spread.. "Oyyee dikhayi ni deta ky..." his words stuck as he saw the person lieing on her back in front of her. It was none other than geet who lay with eyes shut and hands tightly clasped on her chest. By face she seemed totally freaked out.



Yash called out to her seeing her so scared and she snapped opened her eye at him. "Geet kya hua? tum chilla kyu rahi thi?" he asked with a frown. Geet sat up and pointed back at her "wo..wo waha koi tha, wo humpe gira." she said yash scared "kya? kon tha? peeche toh koi bhi
nahi" "nahiii, wo upar se humpe gira neeche.. dekho wo wahi hoga" yash looked behing her and squeezing his eyes he saw the 'wo' that scared her. He smiled looking at it and asked geet amused "tum usse dar rahi ho? woh toh kitna chota sa squirrel hai, wo kya darayega tumhe" he chuckled, geet too turned around confused and crawled on her knees towards the tree and saw the same squirrel casually enjoying the nut there at the foot of the trunk, but as geet approched it, the squirrel jumped seeing her dangerously furious face and hopped up the trunk as soon as possibleto save her life.


Geet shouted at it fuming in anger whereas yash laughed in the background at the scene he just saw. She turned to look at him with a frown while he continued to laugh "Geet, pehle usne tumhe dara k bhagaya, abb tumne use dara k bhaga diya" Geet fumed more at him "oyyee haso mat" she yelled which shut him at once. Geet turned her face now again sitting properly on the grass. Yash realised he yet again annoyed her and smacked himself mentally.



"Sorry" she heard from back and confused she turned around to see yash on his knees, holding his ears with a cute puppy face. Geet squeezed her eyes at him eyeing him suspectedly..



"Umm wo mei tumhare upar hasa na, toh uske liye sorry" he said pouting.She looked satisfied and almost smiled but then resisted and pointed a finger at him and asked with a straight face "agli baar hasoge hum par?" at which yash vigurousely shooked his head in a no "pakka?" he nodded "theek hai phir maaf kiya" she said delighted with those cute dimples.



Yash seemed a bit relieved but then he had more apologizes to make, clearing ihs throat he said "Wo mujhe aur bhi bolna tha" geet looked at him curiousely now "Umm, wo ajj tumhe class me tang karne ke liye bhi sorry, aur uske pehle ke lye bhi" at this Geet felt the anger and saddness rsurfacing but yash was quick "mei pakka agli baar tumhe tang nahi karunga, sacchi" she twisted her lips "Pleasse" "ok" she mumbled and yash rejoiced smiling brightly. This time it was her turn "Wo me bhi sorry punch ke liye" she said but Yash smiligly forgave her. Now that all things were cleared between the two Geet held out her hand to him "Toh phir friends?" she chirped with a huge smile, he too held her hand shooking it "Yess, Friends". Both newly made "Friends" smiled and now looked quiet satisfied.



When Maan came back he was really amused and shocked to see Geet and Yash happily enjoying the seesaw, laughing loudly. He reached them and then Geet happily told him about their talk and them becoming friends. Yash and Maan too sought everything out as Maan too said sorry for avoiding him at which Yash first pouted but then smiled it off forgivving his buddy. The three friends then played happily around the swings and playgrounds and then bid godbye to each other as the school came to and end. Yash waved both his friends bye and Maneet too did the same.


After that Maneet sat in their car the driver bought and discussed about their day in school, where Geet kept blabbering to him about how that bad squirrel scared her and Yash and her became friends. Maan just listened to her smiling, really happy to see her back to herself. At night too geet was the only one blabbering complaining to Rano and Daadima listened to her calmly, feeling agitated at first at the cruel teacher but then happy knowing about Yash-Geet's friendship. Rano lovingly fed her daughter feeling calm on listening to her bakbak, she really missed her the whole day. It felt like the whole mansion had been put on mute mode without their little toofan. Daadima laughed at her cursing session for the squirrel.



At night Rano applied the haldi paste to her reddened arms, blowing at it softly, feeling her baby's pain. They all retired up for the night after the two babies wished each other gud night. Maan slept in his room after Rano tucked him while Geet went with rano to their's.



Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Awsome blossom up
It was too good
Finally yash nd Geet are friends
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yash cutie I luv u😆

kitni acchi tarah se understand kiya that he hurted geet😊😊😊

I loved maaneet also... Maan he is so mature😊😊..
How well he understood yash...


"Mei na, yash se baad me sorry bol dungaa.. usko mana lunga mei. Haina?" 👏

Maan really care of his loved one..

Geet scared of small squirrel..😆😆😆
Iska kuch nahi ho sakta.. All the time she acts as she tigress aur
squirrel se dar gayi...



"Geet, pehle usne tumhe dara k bhagaya, abb tumne use dara k bhaga diya" 🤣


How cutely yash apologies geet..But geet toh bhao khane me expert hai😃😃

And wow finally they become friends👏

I loved the whole update...
Hats off to you!!!!!!!⭐️ so well written it was...

Continue soon...


Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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fabulous and cute
friendship has blossomed between them
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant FF. Love Maaneet and Yash, there are soo cute. Can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
atlast yash n geet became frnds...its really cute...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
update love it geet yash finally friends



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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

so geet and yash are friends nw
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lovely update
good tha geet and yash become frnds
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wow lovely cute update.. te way geet ki cry baby and te way yash realizing his mistake and te way my maan ki nervous was so lovely.. te way geet is scared for squirrel and te way yash and geet making friends and te way three together were so lovely cute..i love te update

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