SS: Amita aur amit ki love story Part - 2, pg 1

SS: Amita aur amit ki love story

Well, I thought to script down story considering today's post "who will confess their love first?" I thought of jotting down a short story of few episodes'

Part - 1

Amit is happy dancing in his heart that finally their honeymoon is cancelled'

Amit: Amita sambhalke' chalo room me'

Amita is upset that her honeymoon is cancelled' while walking back to her room'

Amit makes Amita comfortable in room'

All family members tensed about amita '

Kirit bhai: Hemant bhai.. aaj aap aur bhabhi hamare yahi khana khaaake jaayiyega..

Amita's mother: nahi.. hum ghar pe jaate hai' maa babuji raah dekh rahe honge'

Hemant still in his thoughts' Amit kumar ko bilkul chinta nahi thi' amu ke bare me' woh toh amu ko uthaane bhi nahi aaye'

Kirit: Hemant bhai' and moves him'

Hemant: haan.. kirit bhai' aap kuch keh rahe the?

Kirit; Hemant bhai main aapke dard ko samajh sakta hoon.. lekin chinta mat kariye'amita ab iss ghar ki beti hai'

Hemant: haan' jaanta hoon kirit bhai.. lekin' thinks for a while.. and says.. kya main amita se ek baar mil lu?

Kirit: haan haan' Hemant bhai' chaliye main aapko.. leke chalta hoon'

Hemant: nahi.. aap bas mujhe.. raasta bata dijiye'

Kirit: right jaake last room'

Hemant: varsha.. main abhi aaya'

Hemant walks to amita's room' thinking about amita's fall and amit's and amita's conversation during pagphera's

In amit's room:

Amit: amita' kya acting kartiho tum! maan gaya tumhe'

Amita: ouch'

Amit: ab drama band karo amita.. main jaanta hoon.. ke ye sab naatak hai'

Amita: aapko sach me lag raha hai ke main naatak kar rahi hoon?

Amit: haan'

when Hemant interferes'

Hemant; waah' amit kumar waah' kitna acha khayal rakhte hai aap'

Amita: papa..

Amit: shocked.. papa'

when amita gets up from bed' and limps down to the door.. and looks around if any one is there and closes door of room'

Amit: papa.. woh'

Hemant: amit beta' mujhe tumhare aur amita ke rishte ki sachai pata hai.. amu ke kehne par maine.. usse pag phera ke baad yaha bheja.. kyunki main aapke rishte ko ek aur mauka dena chahta tha.. lekin.. aaj ke aapke harqat ke baad' nahi.. amu .. tu chal.. abhi isis waqt .. yaha.. ab main tumhe aur yaha rehne nahi de sakta.. chalo..

Amita: papa.. aap meri baat suniye'

Hemant: amu.. ab aur kuch nahi.. bas yaha se chalo' amit kumar ko.. tumhara dard bhi naatak lagta hai'

Amit: papa.. woh naatak hi hai ' aaj dopahar ko hi amita ne.. bataya tha'

Amita recalls her and Amit's discussion during lunch'

Hemant; waah amit kumar' waah' dekhiye.. amita ke chehre ko.. is me sirf dard dikh raha hai aur ye naatak nahi hai'

Amit looks at amita.. who pretends to give a smile' but amit observes tears dwelled in Amita's eyes'

Amit was confused' he recalls.. doc's words and looks at amita.. and says.. sach me. tumhe' lagi hai amita!!

Hemant: amit kumar'jab aap amu ke saath rehte nahi.. waqt nahi bitate toh phir aapko amu ke bare me kya pata chalega? aap kaise amu ke dard ko samajh paayenge? kaise?

Amita: papa' please chup ho jaayiye'

Hemant: nahi amu.. ab tu yaha bilkul nahi rukegi.. holds amita's hands and says.. chal.. abhi'

Amit: papa sorry'aap suniye' mujhe sach me nahi pata tha.. kea mu ko sach me chot lagi hai'

Hemant: amit kumar ab aur nahi.. chalo amu'

Amita: papa' rukiye'. please' aur main ab aapki amu nahi hoon papa' amita amit shah hoon'

Hemant felt as if the ground he was standing broke off' and leaves amita's hands..

Amit was shocked to listen to that'

Amita: papa..

Hemant: bas ' Amu.. nahi.. Amita Amit Shah' bas' and leaves room'

To be continued'

Part – 2

Hemant: amit kumar…jab aap amu ke saath rehte nahi.. waqt nahi bitate toh phir aapko amu ke bare me kya pata chalega? aap kaise amu ke dard ko samajh paayenge? kaise?

Amita: papa… please chup ho jaayiye…

Hemant: nahi amu.. ab tu yaha bilkul nahi rukegi.. holds amita's hands and says.. chal.. abhi…

Amit: papa sorry…aap suniye… mujhe sach me nahi pata tha.. kea mu ko sach me chot lagi hai…

Hemant: amit kumar ab aur nahi.. chalo amu…

Amita: papa… rukiye…. please… aur main ab aapki amu nahi hoon papa… amita amit shah hoon…

Hemant felt as if the ground he was standing broke off… and leaves amita's hands..

Amit was shocked to listen to that…

Amita: papa..

Hemant: bas … Amu.. nahi.. Amita Amit Shah… bas… and leaves room…

Amit: papa… papa…

Amita: papa..

Hemant enters… living room.. full of anger…

Kirit : Hemant bhai.. aajao.. aaphika ntezar kar rahe the… aayiye chai peete hai…

hemant; ab is ghar ka paani tak mujhe nahi peena… kirit bhai..

All stand in shock.. at Heman'ts words…

Varsha: kya hua?

Hemant; looks back… and sees Amita.. standing indicating her promise…

Hemant: looks at all.. and says.. kyunki ye ab amu ka… mera matlab amita ka sasural hai.. aur beti.. ke sasural ka paani.. tak… hum nahi pee sakte…

Kirit: arre.. Hemant bhai… apne bte amit ka ghar samajh ke chai le lijiye…

Amit: haan papa…

Hemant: gives a stare to Amit… nad takes tea… he drinks tea with great difficulty… and tells varsha.. ab chale…

Amita: main papa ko .. chodke aati hoon..

Amit: main bhi chalta hoon amita..

Amit supports Amita till the door.. and before they reach… Hemant and varsha had left…

Varsha: kya hua Hemant.. aap pareshan lag rahe hai..

Hemant: kuch nahi varsha.. aaj.. samajh aaya ke.. shaadi ke baad.. beti ko kyun paraya kehte hai….

Varsha: aap aise kyun bol rahe hai hemant?

Hemant: controls his emotions and says.. dekho naa.. varsha hamari amu ko.. chot agai hai.. aur hum uske paas bhi nahi reh sakte.. uski dekh baal bhi nahi kar sakte.. kyunki ab woh… amita amit shah ho gayi hai naa… amita patel nahi hai…

varsha: amu ne kuch kaha Hemant aapse?

Hemant: woh.. usse ghar pe le jaane ki baaat ki… toh kehti hai ab aapki amu nahi hoon.. amita amit shah hoon varsha.. and cries on her shoulder… sach kehte hai betiyaan shaadi ke baad parayi ho jaati hai….

Varsha: hemant… hame jitna dard ho raha hai naa.. amu ko bhi utna hi dard ho raha hoga... usne apne dil pe pathar rakh ke woh baat kahi hogi Hemant… main bhi ek aurat hoon naa.. ek aurat ka maayka kabhi nahi chutta Hemant… bhale hi woh.. apne sasural me dhal jaaye.. apne maayke se alag kabhi nahi hoti aur naa hi kabhi ho sakti hai…

Hemant: cries.. and controls himself.. he looks outside and thinks.. amu.. itna paraya kar diya apne papa ko.. ke ab tumhari bhalai ke baareme soch ne ka haq bhi nahi raha…

hemant and varsha go back to home..

Atul: papa amu gayi Kashmir..?

Hemant leaves to room without answering atul's question…

Atul: Maa… kya hua? papa aise hi kyun chale gaye?

Varsha: woh atul beta.. amita sediyon se gir gayi.. aur uske pair ka ligament tear ho gaya hai…

Atul; kya?

Varsha; haan beta.. ab woh thik hai lekin… usse doctor ne kuch dino keliye kahin bhi jaane se mana kiya hai…

In amita's room;

Amita is crying..

Amit: amita… rona band karo please… dekho.. mian jaanta hoon.. ke tumhe.. pair me bahut dard ho raha hai...

Amita: pairon me dard…! Amit aapko kya lagta hai.. main pair dard ke wajah se ro rahi hoon?

Amit: haan kyun?

Amita: kahi aapne apne papa ko ye kaha hai ke woh ab unke bte nahi hai? kabhi socha hai.. ke kitna dard hua hoga papa ye sunk eke main unki amu nahi amita amit shah hoon… maana ke maine shaadi ke liye haa kaha apne parivar ke liye… lekin… aaj main apne hi papa ko dard de baithi hoon… ab toh ab bahut khush hnge naa.. ke hum honeymoon pe nahi jaa rahe…

Amit: amita.. I am sorry.. mujhe nahi pata tha ke papa ko hamare rishte ki sachai pata chali hai.. aapne bhi nahi bataya…

Amita; batane ke liye… aap mere saath ho toh batau naa.. amit…!din bhar office me hote hai aap, baaki time hum ghar waalon ke samne naatak kar rahe hote hai… aur raat ko.. hum dusre ke saath ek kamre me kabhi rehte hi nahi hai.. aur aapne toh mujhe aapka koi kaam bhi karne se mana kiya hai.. kab batati amit ko?

maana amit.. ke hum ek dusre se shaadi karke khush nahi hai… lekin.. kya ye baat har waqt jatana sahi hai… dard hota hai amit… aapko pata hai.. maine papa ko kaise manaya hai jab unhe ye baat pata chali.. roz 100 baar phone karke puchte hai… ke beta tu kaisi hai, thik toh hai na… aur aaj .. maine unse.. ye haq bhi cheen liya… sorry papa… and cries…

Amit: touched by Amita's words.. sorry… amita mujhe nahi pata tha… ke…

Amita: gets up.. from… bed… and tries to go to wash room.. and says.. ooucch… her leg was hurting her.. and is about to fall… when Amit holds her..

Amita; nahi… aapko.. mujhe sahara dene ki zarurat nahi hai… amit… infact aapko mere liye aur kuch bhi karne ki zarurat nahi hai.. hamare rishte me ye sab zaruri nahi hai..

Amit recalls his dialogues to amita.. and takes his hands back…

Amita goes to washroom…

when falguni enters…

falguni: amita .. amit amita kaha hai?

amit; woh wash room me hai maa…

Falguni: gopal kaka… khaana leke aayiye..

Amita comes out… and sees gopal kaka… bringing food…

Amita: mummyiji.. main khana bahar hi khana chahti hoon…

Falguni: lekin amita beta…

Amita: mummyiji please.. yaha is kamre me mera dum ghut raha hai please.. main aapke sab ke saath khana chahti hoon please…

Falguni; thik hai beta… amit.. amita ko leke aao beta…

Amita: nahi.. mummyiji.. main abhi chalti hoon.. aapke saath…

Falguni: thik hai chalo beta.. sambhal ke…

Amit sits on bed… closes his eyes… he recalls.. amita's words.. it was hitting him hard… he didn't know what to do… and thinks.. maine aise kaise maan liya ke… amita naatak kar rahi hai..

when.. gopal kaka comes in.. amit baba.. aapko.. mem sahaab bula rahi hai… khane ke liye…

Amit; haan main aata hoon…

At dining table…

Amita was recalling hemant's words… she could not have dinner…

naani: amita beta… khana khao..

amita lost in her thoughts does not respond…

Falguni: amita beta…

Amita: no response

Falguni; amita… holds her hand… kya hua amita? khana khao..

Amita: woh mummyji… bhuk nahi hai…

Falguni: amita beta.. tumhe tablets leni hai.. beta… ye khana kha lo…

Amita: controls her tears.. and says.. ji mummyiji… she has her bite.. somehow amita manages to finish her food… but she could not forget the day's incidence…

when Tina enters their room..

tina: amit beta.. agar raat ko amita ko takleef ho aur agar tumhe hamari zarurat lage toh aake hame utha dena beta ok..

amit: ji kaaki…

Amit: amita… I am sorry…

Amita: turns andswitches off light… and drifts to sleep…

Amit: amita aapko toh andhere me neend nahi aati naa..

Amita: zindagi hi andhera ho gaya hai toh.. lights ka kya matlab amit…

Amit: aaj main yahi so jaata hoon.. aapko zarurat padi toh…

Amita: maine kaha naa amit.. aapko mere liye kuch karne ki zarurat nahi hai.. waise bhi hamare rishte me ye sab ki koi zarurat nahi hai…

Amit, Amita try to sleep.. but cannot…

Hemant tries to sleep.. but he cannot…

TO be continued...

Originally posted by: sravz23

hey continue sooon.it is nice to see some ff on a &a.