Taarey FF : Mera Mann Tujse Juda

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guyss this is Me(Sana) and Tarey_forever(Rhythsy) starting a new story in Guju because we both r gujarati and we both think to write in Gujarati But we know here r some few people who can understand guju very well but don't worry guys we give u also a Hindi\English translation so plzz support us and try to read in guju here is the 1st time in IF a guju story enjoyy guyss

N ya dis stry starts frm wen rey n tauji went 4 lunch...

Chapter 1:-

(Tauji ane Rey moti hotel '"IMPERIAL PALACE" ma jay che.Ae alishan mehel thi kai ochi nathi.ek motu building khubsoorat lili na fulo thi sajayelu hatu,safed ful and gana badha fulo tene khub j sundar banavta hata...te bilkul raja na mehel jevu lagtu hatu...tyare shreeman. shekhwat ane Rey khub j moti safed car ma pravesh kare che...badha j khub j atur hata ae jova ke andar kon che...pan jeva j 45 varshna shreema.Shekhawat bahar avya badha na modha padi gaya...thodi j var ma bijo darvajo khulyo ane badha na dhabkara vadhi gaya ane jova mate...pan khali ane pith j dekhti hati...pan jetlu pan dekhtu hatu chokrione ane jova mate atur banvtu hatu...chevte te pharyo ane chokrio behosh thava lagi ana lal boot ane mast chasma joine...ane chokrao tena shirt na button khula joine jalta hata...ane ha ej j hato apdo Rey...pan aa badha ma ek vastu khovayeli hati ache ane muskan (Smile)...

ae ahi hato pan anu dil ane magaj bije kyak j hatu...ha anu magaj ana dosto sathe ane dil Taani sathe hatu...ane khabar che k ae ahi Taani ane teni khusyo mate j ahi che pan tem chata te ana yaad karto hato...tethi tene Taani ne phone karvanu vicharyu pan ahi Taani tention ha te Gang mate tention ma hati...jo vp sir ne khabar padi jase ke Gang kya che to te loko muskeli ma mukase aa vat thi te khub pareshan hati ane ek pachi ek badhane phone karti hati pan koij teno phone updatu natu ...pan Gang na dance pachi Swayam tene phone kare che...)

(tauji n Rey went 4 lunch in a huge n awesome restrunt named "IMPERIAL PALACE"...it was nt less den a palace...a huge building decorated wid flowers of lili, white roses n many other...meking it more den beautiful...just like a dining room of king...wen Mr. Shekhawat n Rey nters wid a huge car of shining white colour...looking so decent...every1 was so xited 2 c who was in...bt as Mr. Shekhawat come out every1's smile faded seeing a man of almost 45...just den opp door also opens every1's heart again starts biting fast...d guy came out bt unfortunately his back was visible nly...bt wat ever was visible was making gals xited 2 c his face...finally he turns...gals started fainting seeing his red branded shoes of puma...dashing sun glasses...n his white shirt wid 1st 2 open buttons were making boys damn jealous...yes it was our rey...bt 1 thing was missing which was his smile...

he was here bt his mind n heart was somewhere else...ya his mind was wid his gang n heart was wid taani...he was knowing tht he was here just 4 taani n her happiness bt still he was missing her a lot...so he decides to call her...bt here taani was in tension...yes in tension 4 gang...if vp sir will come 2 know abt wer dey r den der will b a lots of troubles 4 gang...she was continuously calling dem 1 by 1...bt no 1 was answering...she was so tensed n was calling dem continuously...n aft a min of gang's dance swayam answered d call ...)

Swayam : Taani shu thayu tara 17 missed calls che... [ ha taani bolo kya hua...tumhare 17 missed calls hai...]

Taani : Bhai ae...ane am Taani Rey na call miss kari de che [bhai wo...(n dey were talking...so taani missed rey's calls)]

ahi Rey sathe [here with Rey]

Rey : aa Taani atli var sudhi koni jode vat kare che ano phone kyarnoy buzy ave che [ ye taani itani der se kissase baat kar rahi hai...kabka busy aa raha hai...]

Mr.She : shu thayu Rey koni sathe vat kare che??[kya hua rey kissase baat kar rahe ho???]

Rey : Sir kothi nai...vo papa no phone hato [ sir wo...kisi se nahi dad ka phone tha...]

Mr.She : kadach tari jem Swayam pan mari sathe avi rite vat karto...chodo...chalo bethte hai [kash tumhari tarah swayam bhi apane dad se ache se baat karta...kher chodo...baith te hai...]

Rey : ha chalo sir...te jeva bese che Rey Taani ne message kare che "hu tane premkaru chu" [ya sure sir...(as dey sit rey MSG taani "I love u")]

Mr.She : Rey shu khaish??? [Rey kya khaoge???]

Rey : Kai pan [kuch bhi]

Mr.She : shu khyal che chinese vishe??? [ok so what about Chinese??]

Rey : ha chalse...hu washroom jaine avu chu ...[m k wid it...mai washroom hoke aata hu...]

Mr.She : saru [ok]

(Rey washroom ma jay che pan phone lai javanu bhuli jay che ane Taani Swayam sathe vat karine Rey no message vachine sharmine replay kare che "hu pan tamne prem karu chu")

[(rey goes 4 wash room bt forgets 2 take his mob...here taani aft talking wid swayam reads rey's MSG n blushes n replies " I love u 2"...)]

Jevo MSG moklay che tevo Rey no phone vage che ane Mr.She guchvai jay che ke jovu k na jovu pan pachi te jove che ane ekdam choki jay che jane putlu bani jay che jane emne koi ae goli mari didhi hoy [As MSG was received by rey's mob it rings...Mr.s sees it n thinks utha l bt den thinks nai its bad manners...bt den goes near fone n sees tht it was taani's MSG so thinks n opens it n wat he reads his eyes was out as if some1 had shoot him...he was sitting like a statue...]


So dis was d chap 1 hope u all like it...and plzz hit like and comment Mene or Rhythsy ne bahut mehnat se likha hai so plzz😊😊




Chap 1 :- UP
Chap 2 :- Page 9
Character Sketch :- Page 17
Chap 3 :- Page 30







Edited by Ria_Taareyfan - 12 years ago

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rakhiankita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay me first😆😆

Omg i loved it wow yeh bikul hatke hai dii i mean i also luv gujrati and gujju and wanted to learn so happy i'll get to know it and the storyline omg dii nd rhytsy wow guys love you are kabhie nahi socha tha ki taauji ke baare mein aise bhi pata chal sakta guys you rocked i truely loved it very much yaar so plzz update asap i'll be wating eagerly yaar👏😳🤗

Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Amazing start can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wohhh ... Something out of the blue ... I mean Tauji finding out about TaaRey this way was really unexpected ... I don't understand gujju but I really want to learn so this good way to learn Gujju ! I really enjoyed the first part ... It's a really intersting concept so do update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it!!! a very nice concept!! vese in this way muje gujju pakka aa jaegi... update soon!! that was brilliant! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lvd it👏👏
eager to read more😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start dear
guju style was awsm
really loved it yaar plz plz update soon and pm me
thanks alot 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lolz really nice one yaar!
and ya thank you so much giving the translation for gujarati as i hardly understand that!
thank for the pm!
oh god ab rishi taarey ka kya haal karega?😉
(hey iss guj. mei kaise bolte hai?)😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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<font oye hoye gujrati taarey ff...and its awesome...

sana and rythsy...wow...great ff yar...shu vat che...hawe to tame eva point par ff end karyo che k next update mate wait j nathi thato...bane to jaldi update karjo...

mane e to khabar hati k rythsy gujju che but sana tu pan gujju che eaje j khabar padi...

btw its really really nice ff...jaldi jaldi update karjo...
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nuckts

lolz really nice one yaar!

and ya thank you so much giving the translation for gujarati as i hardly understand that!
thank for the pm!
oh god ab rishi taarey ka kya haal karega?😉
(hey iss guj. mei kaise bolte hai?)😊


Hey bhagvan aa Rishi ave Taarey nu shu karshe??😉😉and thanks we know yaha pe bahut kam log hi guju jante hai so translation to dena hi tha😊😊

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