VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146

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Posted: 13 years ago

#941

Originally posted by: keertu
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Aa gayi aap beta...dn't worry main aaj hi update karun gi juz wait 2 more hrs 4 me...😃

Edited by Artii159 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#942

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only two hours.k🤓

Thnk u 4 waiting...updating in few mins..😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey guyz m bck wid a new update, m extremely sorry 4 da delay...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments guyz, n 4 da lyks..hope u'll lyk dis part as well..Myvirman, I've started working on ur suggestion, hve a look, hope its up 2 ur expectation..EnJoY...Sorry 4 da delay...Dis is 4 ur Keertu Beta n Meri Partner Anjali..

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 27...

~Recap~

And the night faded away with their, cute little fight, or you could say, with their nokh jhok.

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~Next Morning...VirMan's Room~

Viraat: (pouts) Maanvi..?
Maanvi: Hmm?

Maanvi was busy packing her bag, while Viraat was sitting on the sofa, looking at her frowningly.

Viraat: Maanvi..?
Maanvi: Hmmm?
Viraat: Maanvi...?
Maanvi: (irritatedly) Kya hai Viraat?
Viraat: (pouts cutely) Mat jao na please.
Maanvi: (looking at him) Viraat not again.

Viraat got up from the sofa and walked towards her.

Viraat: (little tensed) Main tumhe bahut miss karunga. Aur pata nahi kyun, mera mann nahi maan raha hai, tumse dur jaane ko.
Maanvi: Viraat tum na pagal ho, main bas do dino ke liye jaa rahi hun. (palm on his cheek) Tumhe pata bhi nahi chale ga aur main aa jaungi.
Viraat: (pulls her hands down) Aise kaise pata nahi chalega. (holds her hands) Maanvi main tumhe every second miss karunga.
Maanvi: (smiles) Main bhi Viraat.
Jeevika: (shouts from the living room) Mannu, chal. Hum nikal rahe hain.
Maanvi: Aayi Di. (looking at Viraat) Viraat, ab mujhe jaana hoga.

Maanvi turned around to leave, when Viraat held her wrist, frowningly.

Viraat: Mat jao na please.
Maanvi: (turns towards him) Viraat.
Viraat: Acha theek hai, but promise, mujhe ek ek mintue par call karogi, call nahi toh message karogi.
Maanvi: (smiles) Promise. (cutely) Ab jaun?
Viraat: (still holding her hands) Mujhe har ek second miss karogi. Mujhe bhulo gi nahi.
Maanvi: Haan baba, har ek second miss karungi aur bilkul nahi bhulungi.
Viraat: (sadly) Maanvi, I'll miss you.
Maanvi: I'll miss you too Viraat.
Viraat: (cutely) Toh mat jao na.
Maanvi: Viraat..
Viraat: Acha theek hai. Apna khayal rakhna aur Bhabhi ka bhi. Aur haan, agar mujhe tumhari bahut zyada yaad aayi toh main aa jaunga tumhare paas ok.
Maanvi: (laughs a little) Hmm, ab chalun.
Viraat: (nodded sadly) Hmm.

Viraat's eyes filled with tears as Maanvi wrapped her hands around his neck and hugged him.

Viraat: (hugging her back tightly) I Love You Maanvi.
Maanvi: (smiles) I Love You Too.

Viraat kissed on her cheek as they pulled apart.

Viraat: (hands on her cheeks) Take care.
Maanvi: Tum bhi.
Viraat: Chalo main tumhe neeche tak chodh aata hun.

Maanvi smiled at him, he wrapped his hand around her waist and walked out of their room. As they reached near the car, they saw Viren sitting on the drivers seat and Jeevika on the passengers seat.

Viraat: Bhai aap bhi jaa rahe ho? (disappointed) Mujhe kyun nahi bataya?
Maanvi: Haan Jiju aap bhi jaa rahe ho?
Viren: Haan, main Rishikesh jaa toh raha hun par kisi kaam ke silsiley mein. Aaj meri meeting hai wahan, toh socha tum dono ko aise chodhta chalun.
Viraat: (smiles) Main bhi chalun bhai?
Viren: Tu kya karega jaa kar, main bas kaam lipta kar aa jaunga you don't worry.
Viraat: (frowns) Hm, ok.
Jeevika: Mannu, chal baith na.
Maanvi: Huh..haan Di. (smiles a little) Bye Viraat.
Viraat: (giving her a sad smile) Bye.

Viraat opened the car door for Maanvi and made her sit on the seat. He leaned in towards her forehead and place a soft kiss.

Viraat: (pushing some of her hair behind her ear) Apna khayal rakhna Maanvi, hmm, aur mujhe call karna mat bhulna.
Maanvi: Nahi bhulungi. Bye.
Viraat: (hold her hand) Bye. (looking at Jeevika) Bye Bhabhi.
Jeevika: (turns towards him/smiles) Bye Viraat.
Viraat: (smiles) Apna khayal rakhna aap bhi.
Jeevika: Haan, zarur.
Viraat: Aur Chutki ka bhi.
Jeevika: Ok Devar Ji.
Viraat: (thinking) Aur...aur..aur...
Viren: (smirks) Aur Maanvi ka bhi. Yahi kehna tha na tujhe, woh khayal rakhle gi, ab hum jaaiye?

Maanvi looked down, blushingly.

Viraat: Haan, haan, jao na Bhai. (looking at Maanvi) Bye.
Maanvi: Bye.
Viraat: (kisses on her forehead yet again/whisperes) I Love You.
Maanvi: (smiles) Main bhi.

Viraat unwillingly left her hand. Viren smiled and drove away, leaving a sad and tensed Viraat behind.

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Dabbu: Kya hua Maanvi Di, aap itni chup kyun ho?

It has been six hours, Maanvi, Jeevika, and Viren reached Rishikesh. Jeevika and Maanvi were sitting in the living room of the Chaudhary house, with the Chaudharys, where as Viren went for his meeting.

Maanvi: (fake smile) Kuch nahi Dabbu. Mujhe kya hona hai?
Dabbu: Toh aap itni shant kaise ho? Aur itni udaas kyun lag rahe ho?
Jeevika: (teasingly) Nayi Nayi Shadi ka asaar hai Dabbu, samjh na.
Badi Beeji: Oh ho, toh kisi ko yaad kiya jaa raha hai.
Pinky Chachi: Haye rabba, woh kaunsa gaana tha uss movie mein...haan..Main yahan tu wahan, zindagi hai kahan.
Maanvi: (blushing) Chachi Please.
Madhan Chachu: (teasingly) Kyun Mannu, Viraat ki yaad aa rahi hai?
Maanvi: (shocked/surprised) Chachu aap bhi?
Beeji: (smiles at Maanvi) Arey aaye gi kaise nahi, abhi abhi shadi huyi hai dono ki aur humne isse yahan bula liya.
Badi Beeji: Bechara woh wahan kitna tadap raha hoga. Yeh tune theek nahi kiya Chudail. Apne Pati ko chodh kar aa gayi.
Maanvi: (blushing all shades of pink) Badi Beeji, bas kijiye.
Jeevika: Aye Haye, meri Mannu toh sharma rahi hai.
Dabbu: Jeevika Di, Jeevika Di..Maanvi Di ki photo utar kar Viraat Jiju ko bhejun?
Maanvi: (stands up/hands on her hips) Dabbu ke bacche, abhi batati hun tujhe main. Ruk tu.

Maanvi started chasing Dabbu, while everyone laughed looking at them running around in the house.

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~Vadhera House~

Viraat was pacing back and forth in his room, thinking about something.

Viraat: Kya karun? Kya karun? Bhai ke saath hi chala jaata toh yahan bore nahi hota. Kamse kam Maanvi ke paas toh hota. Ab yahan kya karun, usski itni yaad jo aa rahi hai. Kya karun?

He sat on the side of the bed and picked up a photo frame of their wedding.

Viraat: (talking to the frame) Do din ke liye jaana zaruri tha, ab main kya karun? Tumhari yaad mein pagal hua jaa raha hun, abhi tumhe gaaye huye sirf che(6) ghante huye hain. Mann toh karta hai abhi aa jaun tumhare paas.

Suddenly his lips curved into a wide smile. He placed frame back and got up.

Viraat: Haan toh roka kisne hai. (wide smile) Rishikesh, main aa raha hun.

He quickly took out his clothes for his wardrobe and ran towards the washroom.

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Jeevika just entered her room and found her phone ringing.

Jeevika: Haan Viren ji.
Viren: Kaisi ho?
Jeevika: Main theek hun, aap kaise ho?
Viren: Main bhi theek hun, aur humara Baby?
Jeevika: Humara Baby bhi theek hai.
Viren: Good. Woh maine yeh batane ke liye call kiya tha ki woh meri meeting khatam ho chuki hai, toh socha ki kyun na thodi der ke liye wahan aa jaun.
Jeevika: Toh aaiye na Viren ji, kisine mana kiya hai kya aapko.
Viren: Nahi woh...acha toh main thodi der mein pahochta hun.
Jeevika: (smiles) Theek hai, bye.
Viren: Bye.

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After so many difficulties, finally Maanvi entered her room and locked the door. She heaved a sigh of relief and walked towards her bed, where her phone was kept. She picked her phone up with a smile and sat down on the bed, while dialing Viraat's number.

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Viraat was driving his car, when he heard his phone ringing. He smiled widely as he saw the name on the display. He immediatedly picked up his phone, pressed the speaker bottom and placed it on the passenger seat.

Viraat: Hello Mrs. Vadhera, ab aayi aapko meri yaad.
Maanvi: Sorry na Partner, woh sab saath mein the isiliye.
Viraat: (smiles) Acha theek hai. Pehli galti maaf karta hun.
Maanvi: (smiles) Thank You Mr. Vadhera.
Viraat: Mujhe miss kiya?
Maanvi: (blushes) Haan kiya na.
Viraat: (smirks) Jhut kyun bol rahi ho?
Maanvi: (frowns) Main kahan jhut bol rahi hun, (smiles yet again) yeh toh meri Dil ki awaaz hai.
Viraat: (laughs) Acha?
Maanvi: Haan. (laid back on the bed) Waise kya kar rahe ho tum?
Viraat: Main?
Maanvi: Haan tum.
Viraat: Main driving.
Maanvi: (shouts/sits up) Kya? Aur saath mein mujhse baatein bhi. Viraat tumhe pata hai yeh kitna dangerous hai, chalo bye main phone rakhti hun. Tum jab pahoch jaana tab mujhe call karna.
Viraat: (smiles) Uski koi zarurat nahi padegi, main Rishikesh hi aa raha hun.
Maanvi: (surprised) Kya? Viraat tum pagal ho kya?
Viraat: Haan hun na, (smiles) tumhare pyaar mein. Aur bhi pagal ho gaya hun tumhare intezaar mein. Maine kaha tha na agar tum mujhe bahut zyada yaad aaogi toh main tumhare paas aa jaunga.
Maanvi: Tumhara kuch nahi ho sakhta. Chalo ab main phone rakhti hun, drive karte waqt baat nahi kiya karte phone par.
Viraat: Par main karta hun, aur main nahi rakhunga.
Maanvi: Viraat pagalpan chodho aur phone rakho, tum yahan aa jao ge tab hum araam se baatein kareinge.
Viraat: No, mujhe tumse abhi baat karni hai.
Maanvi: (cutely) Viraat please. Mere liye phone rakh do.
Viraat: Theek hai, magar ek shart hai.
Maanvi: Kaisi shart...
Viraat: I Love You...kaho.
Maanvi: Viraat...?
Viraat: Kaho warna main phone nahi rakhunga. (cutely) Sachi.
Maanvi: Urghhh Chep...Theek hai...

Viraat smiled, looking at his phone, lost in her thoughts.

Maanvi: I...

He turned his gaze towards the road and saw a truck coming straight towards him.

Maanvi: (blushing) Love...

He tried controlling the steering wheel but it was too late, the truck collided with his car, with a thud.

Maanvi: (screamed at the top of her lungs) Viraaattt?

Maanvi was standing up on her feet, her eyes had tears, and her hands where trembling with fear, while holding onto the phone near her ear. Everyone, including Viren came running towards her room as they heard her scream Viraat's name.

Jeevika: (worried) Mannu kya hua?
Viren: Maanvi kya hua?

Everyone gathered around Viraat, who was lying on the floor, covered with blood all over his face. His vision were getting blurred, but he was just looking at his phone, trying to grab it, which was lying two feets away from him. He smiled with tears, as flashback of his Maanvi's smiling face, came in front of his eyes.

Viraat: (smiling/reaching his hands out for his phone) Maa..Maan...Maan...vi...

And his eyes closed.

Dat's it 4 2day, added a new twist, hope u'll lyk it..thnks to Myvirman..please leave ur comments n hit lyk 4 me..Thnk u...Luv Aarti...:)

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Edited by Artii159 - 13 years ago

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 13 years ago

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artii kya jhatka diya hai end mein yaar 😲😭
sab kuch kitna acha jaa raha tune nazar laga di unke jodi ko nai maaf karungi tujhe jab tak hai jaan 😭
aww virat iss update mein kitna cute full of besabri and tadap to be with manvi ...bechara kitna cute lag raha tha...adorable
awesome update arti with full of love👍🏼 2 din ke liye bichadne wala dard i guess ab life long ka hogaya...😭
accident ke baad bhi smiling just coz of manvi virat kitna pyaar karta hai manvi
update next part soon 😊
and iss baar plzz jaldi karnaaa

Edited by kulsum_virman - 13 years ago