Guys im gna TRY and write Mondays story, its my first ever time, so it will be very crap, but im open to criticisms. Im not the creative type so be warned. I will be writing most of the dialogues in English as I don't speak hindi.
Gauri looks back and sees that it is DEVIKA
G: u? wat r u doing here? I told u not to ever come near me.
D: gauri, I've been trying to tell you, why I have been trying to break your marriage up, but u refuse to listen to me!!!! So I had to do this to shashank just to get your attention.
G: but why should I listen to you, after everything you did 2 destroy my happiness.
D: this is what u think gauri? Happy? Its ur borbadhi!!!! (mind my hindi) u think ur marriage to shiv is destiny and the family got you married to him because they sympathised u?
Ur WRONG!!!! It was all a plan. You were meant to get married to shashank…
GAURI INTERRUPTS
G: I was, but he left me!!!
D: he was forced 2 leave you. Before your wedding your kundali was shown to GURUJI, along with shashanks, shivs kundali was also shown, because the family were planning to get shiv MARRIED very soon after yours but a problem occurred in shivs kundali, he was going to face many problems in his life, however if he gets married these problems will transfer onto his wife and she will have to face them, which can also lead to her DEATH. If his 1st wife was to die then he may remarry and he will lead a happy life.
GURUJI then realised that, that your kundali is very strong and can protect shiv, but the big risk was that it could cost your LIFE.
GAURI IS SHOCKED
G: but why should I believe u?
DEVIKA BECOMES EMOTIONAL
D: gauri im ur nani not your dushman, I lost my daughter because of my stubbornness, I don't want to lose my granddaughter, I do understand relationships, but I will admit, I am a ziddi woman but after my daughters death, I promised my self that I will protect my near ones. That's all im doing. I don't want to harm you but think……. U getting shot, electrocuted etc….. these are all dangers!!
GAURI THINKS OF THE TIME SHE GOT SHOT, ELECTROCUTED ETC
MEANWHILE DEVIKA IS UNTYING SHANKS
S: its true gauri, ur relationship with shiv is all a farce (nokkli)
SHIV KNOWS ALL THIS, believe me.
GAURI SHOCKED FURTHER.
G: shiiivvv (in husky voice, tear rolling down)
D: another thing gauri, there are ppl in this family you cant trust…. You think they want to see you happy? Theyre not what you think they r. devika hinting, some r after money and LAND etc. You cant trust them, not even SHIV, he is part of everything.
ANOTHER EMOTIONAL DIALOGUE
D: gauri, ur just like ur mom, so nave and gullible and too nice that ppl will only try to take advantage of u. because of your good qualities ppl r out there to use u. these ppl dnt care about u. wake up gauri, the world is not a nice place, there r good and bad ppl and unfortunately you think ur near ones r good, but theyre not. Did they think about ur life or just shivs?
ALL THIS IS GOING INTO GAURIS HEAD, AND IS REALISING THAT DEVIKA IS RIGHT.
S: gauri I never wanted to hurt u, but for shiv I had to sacrifice you. I still love you….
GAURI PUTS HER HAND FORWARD TO STOP HIM FROM SPEAKING AND SLOWLY WALKS AWAY.
D: gauri remember what I said, I swear on ur mums life that wat I sed is true. My advice to you would be to leave shiv, hes not worth it, he doesn't care abt u.
GAURI IS IN THE GARDEN, DARK AND WINDY, GAURI IS REMEMBERING EVERYTHING AND REALISES THAT DEVIKA IS RIGHT!
GAURI COMPLETELY BREAKS DOWN, WITH MANY QUESTIONS IN HER HEAD.
SHE THEN WIPES HER TEARS AND MAKES A STRONG, FIRM FACE ( could gauris character b changing)
MEANWHILE SHIV IS IN HIS ROOM THINKING
I must tell gauri everything, I cant take it anymore, its not fair on her, she nearly died yesterday. I dnt want her to lose her life, its best if I let go of her. Im gna tell her everything now. I cant take it any more!!! HE HAS TEARS IN HIS EYES.
GAURI ENTERS THE BEDROOM.
EPISODE ENDS!!
What do u think guys? It was my 1st time, I mite continue, not so sure, but I will also be happy, if any1 else wants to continue. IM OPEN TO CRITICISMS!!!
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