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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Very Nice

well written
Chapters 22 and 23 were good
I m glad Yuddha's plans backfired
thank You for PM



thank you Anu 🤗 nice to see your comment after so long 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter Twenty Four

"yes, my sweet heart we are going to the airport' hum Shimla jaa rahe hain..sheher ke shor sharabe(Din and noise) se dur" Manyata said.

"Par aise achanak?" he was still suspicious.

"Veer tumhe dekh kar mujhe lag raha hai ki nayi naveli dulhan main nahi tum ho! Ab sharmana band karo..hum honeymoon par jaa rahe hain" she said with laugh.

"Manyata..tum aur tumhare plans bade anokhe hote hain..par gharwale hume dhoondenge..sochenge ki-"

Manyata said cutting him "Yahi sochenge ki hum phir se ek baar bhag gaye...don't worry main unhe phone karke batadoongi..waise bhi Mamma ko already pata hai"

He didn't say anything. Here he was thinking she had lost her marbles and she had completely surprised him. They reached the airport in 20 minutes and Manyata called the driver to come and take the car back to Jaigarh.

While Manyata went to collect their boarding pass, Veer waited at the lounge looking in wonderment at the surroundings. He had never been to an airport before let alone inside of an aircraft. There was a lot of crowd there; people going to different destinations. He thought he had spotted a familiar face when a woman clad in jeans and wearing a hoodie passed from there.

"J? airport par?" he thought of following her and started but she had already walked away.

"Veer...kise dhoond rahe ho?, main yaha hoon" Manyata said.

"tum aagayi? Main bas aise hi'" he stalled.

"achcha toh saare aadmiyon ki tarah, tumbhi dusri ladkiyon par dore daal rahe the? Main tumse baat nahi karungi" she turned her face.

"Manyata..main ladkiyon ko nahi dekh raha tha..sachchi" he said in all seriousness still looking over her shoulder to see if he could spot J in the crowd.

"mera Raj kumar kitna masoom hai...main toh tumhari taang kheench rahi thi Veer...tum par main kabhi shaq kar sakti hoon kya?" she said with an adoring expression.

"Ab chalo warna humari plane nikal jaayegi" he took her hand and they went to the departure gate.

Though Manyata had said jokingly, she couldn't kill the niggling suspicion that Veer was hiding something from her. On the other hand Veer was still in two minds about telling her that he had spotted J, of all people. May be she was someone else; J was in Mumbai with Akash, how could she reach here? Not possible.

They were safely inside the plane now and Veer felt the thrill of flying inside him. Manyata was awed seeing his innocence. The guy was supposed to be king of a state but he didn't have a single snooty bone in his body.

In 4 hours they reached Shimla and both were smitten by the place. Manyata had meticulously planned everything and had not left even the smallest detail. She called for a rental car and while they waited Veer got the question that he should have got in the beginning of their journey itself.

"Humara saaman kahan hai? Aur hum yahan kitne din ke liye aaye hain?" He asked sheepishly.

"Tumne kabhi shopping ke baare me suna hai? Hum yahan 1 maheene ke liye hain..aur maine tumhare liye ek surprise bhi plan kiya hai" Manyata said fingering her hand bag. Only thing she had brought with her.

After a journey of 15 minutes the car stopped in front of a lovely cottage in a suburban area. Veer had a feeling that somewhere in their marriage, there had been a role reversal. While he had been the docile, newly married shy spouse; Manyata had gone ahead and planned their honeymoon.

"ab toh batado surprise kya hai?" Veer asked as they alighted.

"Surprise abhi thodi der me aata hi hoga..tab tak hum andar chal kar ghar dekh lete hain..chalo" she moved ahead to open the door. The key was below one of the flower pots kept on the porch. Manyata went in first, followed by Veer. Would she never stop surprising him? never perhaps...

'The surprise' that was the English tutor arrived in an hour and Manyata introduced the two men. The tutor Mr. Sharma was thoroughly impressed by his student and he promised them that he would come for 2 hours each everyday till the end of the month.

"Veer tum thodi der aaram karlo..phir hum bahar jaayenge-" she stopped when Veer advanced towards her with wickedness clearly glowing in his coal like orbs.

"Tumne mujhe surprise diya hai toh ab meri baari..chalo main tumhe le chalta hoon..ek nayi jagah..ek nayi cheez dikhane" He kissed her nose. "k-koun si jagah?" her breathing came out shagged.

In answer he left butterfly kisses all over her face...leaving out her lips, enticing her to crave for more. She clutched handful of his hair in her fist.

"nayi cheez?" She asked. Her mind was becoming hazy with him being that close.

'triiing...triiing...'the door bell rung in urgency, like some one was so desperate to get in. "uff'! which idiot decided to visit at this hour?" thought Manyata. The spell induced by Veer's sweet breath was broken. She went ahead and opened the front door.

No one was there...strange. Well there was a letter there on the porch.

'Great, this is all so filmy'' thought Manyata. Veer followed her and he too was confused like her. She read out the letter and it only left her more confused. It was neatly typed, not handwritten; in a bold red font.

"I love you jaan...im coming to get you...you are mine" it was written, with big heart drawn below and an arrow piercing it.

No name, no address, and no indication of gender too. Who was the kill joy? Manyata's mind instantly thought of Yuddhaveer. Could it be him? But no it couldn't be him because love letters and him didn't go with each other. Did the letter contain an element of threat? Was that what the writer's intention was? To create fear?

'This must be handiwork of J' that was Veer's first thought after Manyata had explained him what was in the letter. He was sure now that the letter was for him only. Manyata had taken extra pains to ensure that their getaway remained secret...was anyone continuously following them?

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Well that was all for today people😳 i know i know some people might be hating me for bringing in suspense at the end of every chapter...😉 but trust me next chapter wouldn't be like that..i promise😊

Thank you all who commented and 'Like'd the previous chapter🤗


Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Part Vibha
Manveer convo was funny and cute
Now Veer can finally learn english... this J is such a despo she came all the way to Shimla.. if J is here Majnu must be there too oh no J-Majnu villans are here too
Cont Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update Vibha. Awww Uday giving butterfly kisses ,i was imagining hw cute dt is!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update Vibha 👏. I loved the surprises Manyata planned for Veer. Right from planning their honeymoon to arranging an English tutor for him😳 ... it was all so cute! It was odd picturing UDAY as the "shy , docile spouse" 😕 ... but it made a nice change😊. Now , correct me if I'm wrong ... wasn't Jai and Akash in jail?
How did they get out to cause more trouble😡?
And if they got bail ; isn't the bail-stipulation , that they aren't supposed to leave the country😕?
I'm certain that the person Uday saw at the airport was INDEED Jai & and she must be the person behind the anonymous letter!
And I also think , that the "accident" Manyata has on the slopes (as per your previous promo) ... is the doing of Jai🤢! To conclude ... the kissing scene was the best ☺️!!!! (OBVIOUSLY😉) Please continue soon, thanks for the PM😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
very cute update.loved whole
chappy very much.

loved manyatas honeymoon
surprise for veer.

where is d promo part dat u
gave in last part.

continue soon.will b waiting
for ur next update.

😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
manveer scene so cute n lovely
bt j alwys follow uday n creat problem betwn manveer
thnx 4 pm n cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
res! will be edited on monday (i am out of station)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the updt
Poori ki poori Manveer thi na issiliye😆
Just loved Manveer😳
and I am confused...coz I thought the chapter of Jay was closed.
Then how the hell did she manage to give a guest appearance in this particular chapter?

Update soon...

Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey VIBHA!!!!🤗
How r u dear ?????
i know u must be really surprised seeing me here on this post after really a long time, but i guess u already know the reason of my absence...😊
U know wht, for the time being i m reserving this post😳
coz i still have to raed all the cachapters starting frm the update whn Uday nd manyta both were about to gt married to each other.
After i raed all the chapters, thn only i will be able to give a proper comment.
Actually the thing is vibha, whnenevr i gt an update pm frm ur side, i always used to press the like button.

I treally need to catch upon lots of updates. So for the time being i m 'RESERVING' this post.
will comment as soon as i read all the updates😳
but really hope, ki mere unreserve karne se pehle tum aur updates mat de dena😆

RESERVE😉😆

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