Raesha FF: Pehla Pehla pyar hai. Pg143 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
loved raesha scenes
the beginning of new friendship
thanks
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand


commentary?? meaning???


Commentary match mein nahi karte let me give you a view😉

Ye aya ACP Sameer ki taraf se ghabrata huya sawal or uske jawab mein Aisha ne kardiya ACP ko la jawab😆

Aisha andar se ghabrayi huyi hain par phir bhi khud ko confident rakhe huye hain or ye kiya unho ne dosti pe sawal...

Acp saab clean Bold🤣


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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part..:)
loving the little progress and change of equations btween them... 😉
liked when she inquired abt the rathod -rawte friction... i always thought she was the best person to approach this matter... wud like to read more on this front... atleast in your ff..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello...back with a new part...hope u like it...

errors hoga...pls excuse them...

Part5:

Aisha replied back "good night Sameer…"

That "Sameer" from her couldn't have sounded better! It somehow seemed to be a start to break the ice barriers that stood between them….perhaps barriers of an official formal relationship they shared!

She walked into the building bidding him bye once more….He kept looking at her till she was out of his vision and then resumed his drive…..

He didn't know why he felt so different today….and today, for the first time in his life, he seemed to think seriously about a partner with whom he could share his whole life…..and his heart kept whispering back to his mind…."isn't it her for whom you had been waiting for so long?"

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Next few days breezed away….

Though there were initial difficulties, Aisha had made herself get to call him Sameer while they were together out of office ……

The barriers due to the formal relationship between them was slowly melting away with each such errand together…but still there were hiccups in opening up completely which was mostly due to the strong aura and personality that both the officers adorned….

The image that both had formed within themselves about the other was so powerful that they couldn't erase it away easily even though they wished for it….

It had also become an unsaid routine that he would drop her back home….at times, Shree and Liza also tagged along but they kept their trespassing minimal…they were the only ones from the team who were silent witnesses to this budding friendship or like Liza calls it a budding breezy romance!

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However subtle be it, someone else wasn't failing to notice this too…..

Anything missing his sharp eyes was next to impossible…..

During the case briefings and discussions, Arjun had caught Rathod glancing at Aisha many a times….

Once, while on a discussion….

Arjun had stated his views and as always turned to Rathod "humein uss pe bhi nazar rakhna hoga Rathod!"

That's when he saw his chief, his lost friend in a dreamy lost state gazing at their female cop for a long moment while she was immersed into the proceedings of the case!!

The sight actually made him chuckle but he controlled himself and looked away raising his eyebrows wondering "yeh chakkar kya hai?"

But he never made it evident or voiced it out that he knew that something special was brewing between them!

That happened a few more of times…..Then one day, Aisha's tongue slipped and she referred to her chief as "Sameer" instead of her usual "sir"…..But both Aisha and Sameer were oblivious to the slip!

None in the room except the hot cop's sharp ears had grasped it bang on…..

Arjun was plain amused when Sameer also responded to her without showing any kind of surprise at her changed way of addressing him which could only mean that he was accustomed to her calling him like that already…..

In no time, he had added 1 and 1 as 2….

Arjun always had the ability to look beyond the obvious….All these instances made him notice Sameer's growing closeness to Aisha….He also was quick to realize that it wasn't just plain friendship but was heading towards something more special…..

In fact he had sensed this orientation from Sam's side long before when he had seen his ever balanced stable chief screaming out "heyyy usse choohna matth.." to the poacher when he had thought of hurting Aisha….

Arjun had seen something more than just concern for his team member in those eyes and the voice!

Arjun was more than happy for his lost friend but yes never showed it out once….he was happy that his ever single friend would now have someone with whom he could share his life and all the colors of the life! Arjun couldn't help thinking about the good old times….well he always went back down the memory lane when his best friend was always with him but never once exhibited his true thoughts before anyone….he was reminded of how girls used flock behind Sam and Sam being Sam used to escape all their prying clutches!

Never once had he dated or got involved with a girl before….He had never once felt that kind of attraction towards a girl…..

Arjun couldn't help appreciating his choice for a life partner….Aisha was just perfect for him….they would make an ideal couple!

But Arjun knew his Sam real well…He was a man of very few words…..even love wouldn't change that side of him…shy he was and would ever be in matters of love…..He would never be able to say his true feelings to his lady love if he wasn't pushed a bit!

To test waters, Arjun locked his horns with the chief one night…..Casually when the team was being split for the different tasks to be done, Arjun snapped Rathod and took the lead…"Aisha, tum mere saath chalo…"

It was a bit dangerous spooky place that Arjun had to go looking for a clue and so, as Arjun had expected, Rathod immediately opposed to the whole idea…."Nahi Rawte, tum Chotu ko saath le jaao...Aisha aur main uss club owner ke ghar jaakhar pooch taach karenge…."

Arjun immediately refused "Rathod, humein uss dance bar pe zyaadha focus karna chahiye…..aur Aisha toh aise jagah se waaqif hai….isiliye usske wahaan jaana case ke liye zyaadha accha hoga…..samjhe ya samjhaavum?"

[He was meaning that a girl could get out clues from the suspected people there easily]

Rathod: [annoyed by his logic] tum mujhe matth samjhaavo Rawte….I am the chief here and I decide things…..aise khatarnaak jagah pe Aisha ko tumaare saat bhejna……nahi…yeh risk main nahi le saktha….

Arjun let a sarcastic grin meaning "I knew it" at that and turned away as he already knew that this would be the response from his chief….

He just spoke up "seedhe seedhe apne mann ke baath kyun nahi kehthe Rathod??" [he added after a pause] "yeh kyun nahi kehthe ke tumhe apne team par bharosa nahi hai!"

The first part had multiple meanings or rather taunts to Sameer's hesitance to speak his mind to Aisha…..

Sameer glared at Arjun for what he said when Arjun pretended to ignore him and added "teek hai….chalo Chotu"

Saying that, he stormed out of the office with Chotu tagging along….

Aisha stood there perplexed with the strong verbal and even stronger war of glares between her senior officers….

Rathod snapped out from his thoughts about what had just happened and turned to Aisha "let's go!"

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Later that night, as they drove along to Aisha's place, she broached the topic which she had literally postponed to this time when they were out of the case investigation…..

Sameer appeared disturbed and was unusually quiet too….Aisha cleared her throat to grab his attention…

He sensed that she wanted to say something and enquired "tumhe kuch kehna hai Aisha?"

Aisha nodded "haan….kuch hai"

Sameer mellowed down and spoke up "bolo…"

Aisha replied instantly "mujhe lagtha hai ke Arjun sir ne teek kaha tha"

She added when he glanced at her once "matlab mujhe unnke saath uss bar mein…"

Sameer cut short her words "Aisha, main tumhe wahaan nahi bhej saktha tha….it was quite a risky place and you know that"

Aisha replied "but Sameer, its part of my job…..risks toh hoga hi….I cant keep hiding away from that!"

Sameer: haan risks hoga parr jab tak possible hai, I want to keep you safe from it Aisha….

When Aisha continued to argue again, Rathod flared up suddenly "Why don't you understand Aisha? I cant risk anything when it concerns you…"

He stopped the SUV suddenly to the side when he said that…..she was a bit terrified seeing him so angry and she voiced in the impulse "sir….aap aise kyun…."

He turned to her side…it was time he told her what his true feelings were….it was now or never perhaps….

He spoke up immediately in the same or even more annoyed tone,

"kyun ki I love you dammit!"

[To be continued]

so how was it??? phewww made him spell that out somehow...

continuation will be purely based on the response! 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipppeee me first😆😉
Lovely and i had guessed right😉
i loved the way Arjun made Rathore say his feelings to Aisha😆
Poor Aisha maybe she also had never guessed this would come her way😳
i wonder what she'll say now?😉
Please update soon😉
Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
uddi baba...😲 sameer damsingh rathod se confess karwa liya aap ne di..😲😉😆😳 wow wow wow...

iss mein arj ka bhi bada haath hai..😆 woh push zaroori tha 👏

loved it..❤️

ab aaega maza..😃 shree or liza ko toh pehle he doubt tha ab toh woh ayesha ka jumm k leg pulling karenge..😉

cont soon.

and thanks for the PM.
Edited by CrAzYaRjUnIaN92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres
dhinka chika
arjun bhaiya wow
playing cupid
n
thanx to u dat he is able to put d sense lol
yahan bi dammit lol
ayesha bhabi ha kh do pls
me sing
oh goriye me to sehra band ke aaya re rofl
lovely di
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
*Edited*


My romance queen...😆 I have to say this first, I loved the update, I adored it, it was fantastic, wonderful and any other adjectives you want to use.😉

Anyway, of course, Aakhir Arjun, Arjun hai, nothing or no one can escape his sharp gaze, chahe woh ek criminal ho aur uska best friend and lady love.

I loved the way he handled the whole situation and manipulated the situation so that Rathore was forced to confess in his style.

I just love that "I love you Damn it"😉😆

I can't wait to see how Ayesha responds. Please update soon.
Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
arjun the supercop...😆 😆

finaaalllyyy he proposed!!!..

and dat too in his stylee..

wah sameer babuu wah!!!

superb dii

update soonn!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haye such a lovely story 😳
Loving your updates and plz PM me the next part :)
Do continue soon 😉

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