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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AndyTaarey

Thanks ya!
m happy u read ma FF!! inspite of ur busy, schedule!!
Yea i wil update soon and pm u asap!!
was seriously missin ur comments!!



Oppss.. sorry dear..I know thodi toh gussa hain mujhpe...
Bt can't help it yaar...
actually busy schedual matlab me mera drawer clean kar rhi thi..
I know.u dun belive me..
bt seriously..
I didn't clean my drawer from 8th std.
and itna sab cute wala work kiya tha na mene apne frnds ke saath..
toh u knw.. bhot himmat juta rhi thi...
use out karne me! 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 3

The alarm starts ringing, Taani faintly opens her eyes, She gets ready, and comes out of her room,

Khushi: Aare Taani, acha hua aap jaldi uth gayi, humne nashta banali hai, chaliye nashta kijiye!

Taani: Nahi khushi wo, muje jana hai toh..

Khushi: jana hai ??kaha?

Taani: St. Theresa's orphanage School mein, jaha main sikhati thi pehle? Ab wapus Mumbai aye hai toh kam to karna padega na? main dean se baat kar li, unhone aaj hi join karne ko kaha hai. Wo tum bhi kahi interview k liye jane wali thi na?

Khushi: haan, lekin kahi aur apply karne k liye pehle muje Raizada group of industries k mallik se resignation letter sign karwana hai, jab tak waha se istifa nahi leti, kahi aur job kaise milega!

Taani: (tensed) toh tum waha jaogi?Arnavji ke paas?

Khushi: (sadly) Aur koi chara bhi toh nahi hai! Ab nachahte hue bhi unka chehra aur baatein sunni padegi. (folds her hand) Par hum bhi Khushi Kumari Gupta hai! Hum unki har baat ka jawab denge! Chup nahi baitenge!

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Scene Shifts

Reyam's Apartment

Swayam: (tensed)Rey jaldi kar yaar, kitna time lagayega? Hume aaj St. Theresa's me jana hai, humari classes hai waha , yaar Sharon 10 baar call kar chuki hai, wo pohochne wali hai, agar main aaj late hua na, toh.. You know wo kaise react karegi. Please Rey!

Rey: Ok ok fine! Relax.. chalo, lets go, tu bhi na kitna darta hai Sharon se!

Scene shifts

Raizada Group of Industries

Arnav in his cabin typing something on his laptop. Khushi directly walks in his cabin, Arnav looks at her and directly stands up. Khushi keeps an envelope on his desk and stands folding her hands and looking in other direction. Arnav looks at the envelope.

Arnav: (with a straight face)Ye kya hai???

Khushi: humara istifa hai, ispe dastakat kijiye, hume iss company se humesha k liye chutkara dijiye taki hum kahi aur kaam kar sake!

Arnav takes the envelop and opens it, he reads the letter, looks at Khushi, keeps the letter on his desk.

Arnav: fine! tum bahar wait karlo,

Khushi: (upset)kya? Aap abhi sign kijiye! Humare paas waqt nahi hai baitne k liye! Humara interview hai aaj.

Arnav: time mere paas bhi nahi hai ye letter sign karne k liye! Tume bahar jake wait karna hai ya nahi ye tum deciede karlo, jab muje time milega main sign karlunga.

Khushi: aap humare saath aisa nahi kar sakte, aap (Arnav doesn't let her complete)

Arnav: (points his finger to the door and yells) out!!!

Khushi stamps her feet angrily and walks out and sits on the seat outside. Arnav stares at her as she walks out

Arnv: Aaj bhi knock karne k aadat nahi hai, bina knock kiye andar aa gayi! Kabhi nahi sudregi.

Scene shifts

St. Theresa's school for Orphanage

Taani gets off from the rickshaw and opens the school gate. This was the place she had realized her love for Rey, they spent so much time here, as she walked through the corridors she could hear their conversations, as she climbed the staircase she remembered how they would sit there after classes and chat, she holds her locket tight and walks inside a room. The room was next to dance rehersal hall. It had a two way mirror-a mirror that is reflective on one side (the side you see), and transparent on the other (the side that's observing.

Taani's heart skipped a beat, she starts breathing fast and heavily, she just keeps walking towards the mirror. Infront of her in the other room was Rey with Vicky and Nil teaching students some popping and locking steps. She reaches near the mirror. Rey walks towards the mirror, Taani was seeing rey after a year! On the other side, Rey looks at himself in the mirror, he keeps staring at himself, on the other side taani was looking straight in rey's eyes, She lifts her hand and keeps it on the mirror, moving it over his face, tears just start flowing, Rey fixes his hair, Taani couldn't help but smile, she was crying and smiling at the same time.

Sharon: Taani??

Taani gets startled and quickly wipes her tears and turns, Sharon was standing inside the room, shocked, surprised seeing Taani. Sharon looks through the mirror and notices Rey there. She looks at Taani again

Sharon: Tum kab ayi? I mean, tum bina kisiko kuch kahe aise chale gayi? And now all of a sudden your back. I know Raizada mansion mein kya hua tha. (see's Taani sad, takes a deep breathe) Ok fine, Chalo now that your back, Chalo Rey se mil lo and tell what exactly happened(holds her hand)

Taani: (nervous) nahi, (leaves Sharons hand) Main Rey k samne kabhi nahi aungi, Rey muje dekhna bhi nahi chahta.

Sharon: What? You know that's not true! Chalo Taani.

Taani: no Sharon! Rey mujse ab Nafrat karte hai. Unhone muje ghar se jane se pehle ek bar bhi nahi roka! Unhone khud kaha muje jane k liye.

Sharon: but now tum dono ek hi sheher me ho, Rey yaha har din ata hai dance classes k liye, tum kitne din chupogi Rey se?

Taani keeps looking at Rey from the mirror, he was busy teaching his students,

Taani: rey khush hai Sharon, ab main unke samne ake unhone waise dukhi aur gussa nahi hone dungi, kabhi nahi aungi unke samne!

Sharon was feeling bad for Taani, she hugs her,

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Scene shifts

Raizada group of industries

It had been four hours now Khushi was sitting outside arnavs cabin. She keeps glancing at the watch

Khushi: (tensed)Hey devi maiya, humare interview k liye sirf 15 min baki hai, par ye Arnav Singh raizada muje mera istifa dene ka naam hi nahi le rahe, kabse baiti hu yaha pe!

Arnav walks out from his cabin talking to his manager, Khushi stands up and walks behind him, trying to talk to him but Arnav ignores her, he keeps talking to his manager,

Khushi: Arnavji humara istifa dijiye hume, humare paas waqt nahi hai, aap sun rahe hai na hum kya keh rahe hai? Arnavji?

But Arnav doesn't pay attention to her, he keeps walking, they reached outside the company and Arnav sits in his car, Khushi just looks at him angrily. He opens d window and puts on his glares,

Arnv: driver, lets go, humara kaam ho chukka hai, gaadi ab seeda ghar jayegi.

Khushi was standing there with her mouth wide open,

Khushi: kaam ho chukka hai? Lekin apne humara istifa nai diya. (annoyed)humara naam bhi Khushi Kumari Gupta hai, hum apko humara istifa diye bagyear ghar nahi jane denge,

She goes and Stands right infront of Arnav's car, The driver gets confused what to do. Arnav looks at Khushi with a straight face. Khushi was looking at Arnav with both her hands on her waist.

Arnav: driver, chalo, apni jaan pyari hai toh khud hatt jayegi.

Driver: par sabji,Khushiji nahi hategi, aap jante hai unhe,

Arnav: main janta hu use, nautanki k alawa aur kuch nhai ata use, aap chaliye.

Driver didn't know what to do, he swallows his saliva and looks at khushi. He turns back and looks at Arnav. Arnav gives him angrily look, driver nervously looks at Khushi again.

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Precap

Taani: Hey bhagwan, ey main kaha aa gayi, boys locker room!!!

She turns to leave but see's someones shadow, she realized someone was about to open the door, she runs in one changing cabin and locks the door.

Rey: Yaar Nil chal, ab muje mere dance academy jana hai, lets change na.

Taani recognized his voice, her heart starts beating even more. She gets even more nervous.

Rey goes in the cabin which was next to hers, Nil tries to open Taani's cabin. She covers her face with her palm.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Res.
me back..😆
Unres...
Wow.. Lovely update.
Arshi part...
I am badly missing..IPKKND.😭
LOL...Aaj bhi knock karne ki addat nhi hain...😆 😳
Taarey scene..
Mirror one was lovely...
Taani was seeing Rey..Aww...
Precap!
*Excited*
Update soon!
PM Me! 😃
Edited by Curvmars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
feeling really bad for taarey n arshi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its a very emotional update I feel so sad for Taani and Khushi. Arnav can be so damn rude but I love Khushi spirit she will not give up. Recap is very exciting wow cant wait for u to update. U did a beautiful job
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow wow wow!!
Aapko pata hai is update ko padne me muje ktna dar lag raha tha... Ki pata nahi kitna painful hoga... N me kahi ro na du... But wow i mean it was perfect!! Arshi's nok jhok is still the same and taarey's scene was also amazing!!
Just love you for this superb update!!
Khushi ka to jawab hi nahi... Aj bhi arnav se ladte hue kya attitude hota hai...
And taani looking thru the one way mirror.. It was awesome...
Sharon still supports taani... So nice of her...
Please nxt part jaldi update karo... Precap ne bohot excited kar dia hai... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful lines ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
" This was the place she had realized her love for Rey, they spent so much time here, as she walked through the corridors she could hear their conversations, as she climbed the staircase she remembered how they would sit there after classes and chat, she holds her locket tight"

Glad that at least Sharon will be nice to Taani in the school.😳 You can't help but go aww at Taani when she still loves him so much. ❤️ Precap looks exciting. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read the parts till now...they are awesome dude!!
👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it loads
It was amazing update
Specially the precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was brilliant as always, the taarey scene broke my heart, what taani was feeling looking at him, awesomely written

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