ARHI FF-THE MIRAGE -Thread 3 Chap-37,p 146 - Page 68

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Posted: 12 years ago
un-res-ed my comments on page 104 & 105 di...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow an awesome story...

give a pm for future updates
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Posted: 12 years ago

And the plot thickens!! I am just terrified to think, but what if one of the family members, or someone close, is involved?

well we will see...and you Arnav and Khushi are sooo hot! I mean they literally go up in flames!

I like how Arnav tolerates Khushi's stubbornness to an extent, but also knows when to stake his claim...and absolutely loved the angry khushi, he really deserved it!...oh and the 'cooling off' in the lake had me in splits!

so overall, love the plot, there is happinness, but always a lingering eerie feeling...

keep up the great work!

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Posted: 12 years ago


THE PURSUIT-21

(THE MIRAGE-II)



Pic Credit: SS NAIR

"Jai Devi Mayya Rani saa! Chalsa key MLA aaye hain!" the durbaan announced

( Hail the goddess! Your Majesty The MLA of Chalsa is here for an audience!)

Arnav asked him... "kaun... kaun hain unkey sath?"

( Who... who is there with him?)

"Ji koi nahi!" He answered!

( None sir)


"Tumney bola ki humbhi hain sath Rani saa ke?" Arnav asked again.

(Did you tell him I am there with her highness?)

"Ji Sarkar ne mana kiya thaa bolney ke liye per oo kahath rahey unhey patha hain rani saa yahan hain!"

( The Master[Shashi Singh] forbid any of the staff to mention it! But he is adamant and says he knows Her Majesty is visiting here).


"Accha ley aavo unhey!" ( Ok! get him in)Arnav decreed!

The man left...


"Shit@#$%!!! "Arnav swore he quickly opened the door drape and hid behind that saying,

" Khushi bath karo!!!"

( Talk to him)


"Arnavji aap?"( You?)Khushi was busy arranging her dupatta!

"Shhh Bath karo!" ( Just talk!) He told Khushi!

he just vanished behind the drape!

"Ram Ram Rani Saa !!! Hum aap sey milney aaye hain badi dur sey!" Vijaykanth Rane the MLA of Chalsa walked in chewing pan.

( Greetings Your Majesty!I have come to meet you and from far!!!)



Edited by anukat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is cute to see then argue not about some other thing but to force each other to confess. I was actually waiting for her to get back as its fun to watch how a wife can also turn into a queen when he can switch from the Arnav to ASR mode.

New character... Good or bad guy ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chap 20
Khushi is more stubborn in this ff. there is a factor
Of jethwa pride where she will
Never confess first.
Loved the update!
Awesome.
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Posted: 12 years ago
uff mr. Akdoo and mrs pride chin .. I luv da conversation between them.. I think bhairav sent that man .. Luv da update .. And waiting 4 next part hopefully..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice way they argue with each other and blurt out unknowingly...
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Finally! Now let's see what she does... Nice update!
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Tu-tu mien-mien...still going on who will give in first..? Who is other new character MLA...?

nice convo part.


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