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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an awesome one...
Still there is a mystery lingering to the story...
Its so true even in these times that a girl is blamed for things going wrong... Its never the guy, its always the girl who is wrong and who is accused...
This is harsh reality at many places and u had explained that in a perfect way...
So Dev is dhokebaaz... eager for their meeting... Abhi am wondering if maan will be back or not...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 4

But she couldn't deny the belonging she felt with him. She took a deep breath as the inspector let her to the place where she could meet Dev.

It was so difficult for her to walk into the jail like that. She had never seen police station in her life forget stepping into one. Her heart trembled in fear but she had to do it. Do it for her Maan.
No one had visited Dev & he was not expecting anyone to either. He didn't recognize the person who came to visit him. He couldn't smile because his guilt was stopping him. He couldn't imagine himself looking at a girl ever again. But his eyes slowly raised to read her concerns. She looked worried for him. A lady dressed in white with such hair do.. so pale looking & concern oozing he couldn't understand.
Dev ' app
Geet didn't know how to introduce herself. Her devar - typically it should have been a sweet relation, thoda teasing thoda masti.. & Maan or Daadi should have introduced them but then.. she shrugged all those thoughts away. Daadi ne hume
Dev closed his eyes & turned his face in shame. He didn't want anyone to know abt his deeds. His heart feared wat if his bro learned abt all this. He would just kill him with his bare hands.
Dev didn't want to talk he just wanted the ground consume him rt now.
She couldn't miss the innocesne in his eyes. It didn't take her long to figure out that Nt had forced him to agree into this fooling a innocent girl act. She also found the girl to be Meera.

Geet met Meera & learned that Dev backed out at the madap before the pheras & accepted his mistake. But by then the whole village was aware of their almost marriage.
Nt divorced Dev while he was sentenced for cheating a girl & also trying to marry when he was already married. Since he had accepted his mistake even before committing it, he was in for a year for fraud case. Geet visited him regularly & told him all abt daadi's health & he needed to come home soon. Dev tried to tell her to speak his brother for which he got a very blank painful look on her face which he couldn't understand.

After Dev got out of jail Geet arranged his marriage with Meera who was facing agony because of that almost marriage. Geet could so understand her plight. Meera's family was willing too since they just wanted to some how get her married after almost a yr of badnami. Wedding seemed so perfect solution.

Hell broke lose when Dev learned the dismissal of his bro from Daadi. Another heart wrenching truth was Geet being his bhabi. He had assumed she was working for Daadi.
Daadi asked meera & Dev to take blessing from Geet
Geet almost stepped away & ran to her room
Daadi ' Dev yeh Maan ki biwi
Dev ' lekin bro?
Daadi ' sab humari galti hain
Daadi broke down ' humne hi Maan ko force kiya tha
Dev ' lekin bhai yanha kaisen? Unhe tho India aane main koi diljasbhi nahi tha
Daadi sunk down on the couch ' wo aapko dhunth ne aayen the
Dev hit the wall in anger ' na main Nt se shaadi kartha na yeh sab hota
The respect he felt for Geet increased 10 fold learning the truth.
Meera was taken a back ' Geet bhabi, Maan veerji se khabhi mili bhi nahi hain?!
Daadi accepted defeated.
Dev ' yeh kaisa rista hain Daadi?
Even Daadi could never understand.
Daadi didn't even want to mention the torture she had gone through.
Latter Dev went to meet Geet, who was staring endlessly at Maans pic. Like she was telling him proudly abt Dev & Meeras wedding & Dev is finally home.
Dev ' bhabi!! he was not sure if he wanted to bind her in that relation but the respect he felt for her in his heart he couldn't call her anything else.
Her heart filled with millions of excitement like she was newly wed dhulhan getting introduced to her family members. Emotions had become a strange element in her life lately. She had stopped feeling happy, sad.. anxious .. anger.. anything for that matter. But since she met Dev she had started feeling little more emotions. May be he was close to Maan & that meant a lot to her. It made her feel close to Maan. Her Maan.. her husband.. oh god she felt butterflies in her stomach with that thought itself.
Her expression softened & she looked at maans pic again
Dev ' yeh bro ki 12th grade graduation ki pic hain
Geet was so excited. She wanted to ask him more. Know all abt Maan, but she didn't know how to ask. She felt so shy. She knotted her pallu nervously.
Dev ' agar bro ko pata chaltha tho woh mujhe kabhi maaf nahi katen
Geet was brought back to reality
Geet ' wo gussa karten the? She asked innocently
Dev smiled ' arren Geet tum nahi jaanthi.. he paused I mean bhabhi
Geet smiled ' aap hume Geet hi bulayin
Dev nodded ' aaren Geet tum nahi jaanthi bro ko gussa ek min aa jatha hain
unhe har cheez jagah pe chaiyn hoti hain
ek tum time ke paken
perfectionist the..
tears rolled down from both their eyes
Dev left instantly not able to bare t pain. Geet sunk down on the floor curling her feet closer to her.

Dev cried in Meera's arms. He couldn't stop himself. Maan had brought him up since he was 9yrs old, after their parents dismissal. Maan was his everything - father, mother, brother, philosopher, guide. It wouldn't have been easy for a teenager to take up the responsibility of a little kid. But Maan did!! he sacrificed all his teenage life bringing him up. Taking care of Dev's small small needs.
Thanks for the lovely comments
I am in a flow with this FF.. u know how it some time strikes me..
thanks again for being patient & so supportive
- PART 3 PREV NEXT PART 5 -
lots of love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god hw cm dev be like this
hope he wont lust on geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet gets little happiness from dev and meera😊
geet to learn about maan from dev

Edited by ameeranalikhan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update di...

it was soo emotional...dev was not at fault...he may got blind for his love to NT and she just used him...and he realized wht a bi*ch she was...at last he was left out to regret and accepted all the charges against him by law...

and is just tooo sweet...bring back dev to his family and yet never to him abt her pain and maan's demise...fixing his marriage with meera understanding all the thing society throw on a poor helpless girl...and settled both of them...

just by listening maan's name frm dev her heart flutter and the chance to know abt her deceased husband give her a new hope to life and live, which she lost as a shattered dreams with maan's death...

i think maan has just planned his accident part...as his dead body was not shown to anyone saying tht it was in worst condition due to the accident...

loved it di...
continue soon...
Edited by manikka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsem update geet making dev meera married after his punishment and dev respect toward her awsem
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg social issue ..No maan in this story but still i feel his presence thanks to your writing plus its such a sensitive issue i cannt think more than that ..
geet life is so painful and lonely
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Posted: 12 years ago
What... you made me cry badly throughout the update...
its so heart wrenching story... upper se your writing doing the rest of work to make us cry...
lovely writing dear... no words for you... all words will fall less... I have commented in other pages too, pg 25-24... please check...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update
Wow!!! This story really has different which makes me to read more n more
love u so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
I cant believe maan is dead waiting for his comeback
HAPPY VISHU to you and ur family

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