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superb update !!!!!
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Dear all,

Please find part 5 posted below.

Hopefully, some of the confusion will be cleared up...but then again, there may be more confusion😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 5

Geet tried to remain calm as she was led by Maan towards the lift. Her heart was pounding in her chest. "He doesn't recognise you Geet...but that's okay...probably for the best...remember Geet be brave...you are doing this for your freedom" she reassured herself silently.

Geet awoke in unfamiliar surroundings alone. She was in the middle of a large bed which was messed up bearing evidence of last night's activities. She tried to stretch her aching muscles, but when she tried, she became aware of the soreness between her legs as well as her curves. She let a soft moan escape her lips and closed her eyes, thinking of what had happened last night.

Flashback:
Maan had led her out of the nightclub towards the lift, leading to the bedrooms in the hotel. He held her very close, possessively. She was his; he was making that clear to everyone that passed them by... his, at least for tonight. In the abandoned lobby, he leaned in to kiss her, but stopped when an elderly couple came and stood beside them making small polite talk about the weather. The lift came after a few minutes and both couples piled in. Maan pushed Geet to the back of the lift and he stood in front of her, so she was out of the couple's vision. He looked at her intensely. She was his prey tonight. No one else would have the pleasure of looking at her except him. Geet looked at his lust filled eyes, feeling that she will go up in flames any moment due to their intensity.

''What floor, son?" the elderly man asked.

"Penthouse please" Maan replied politely without turning around or taking his gaze off Geet.

The elderly man and woman looked at each other with understanding. They had been young once too... but probably not like this!

When the lift reached the 10th floor, the couple got out. Once the doors closed, and he was sure that nobody had entered the lift, Maan pushed himself against Geet. He looked into her eyes and saw the desire for him. Seeing that, he smashed his lips against hers without any warning or permission. He continued kissing her making her breathless, nipping her lips, biting the corners and probing her mouth with his tongue. Geet took some time to respond but eventually matched his passion. Maan's hand roamed up and down her back, pushing her into him so she could feel his arousal. She gasped when she realised, but didn't let it deter or scare her from her mission. At least she knew he was interested in her and found her attractive. They continued kissing and grinding against each other until the lift doors opened to the penthouse floor. Maan left Geet's lips and pulled her out of the lift. After entering his security pass code he showed Geet into the apartment. It was beautiful. There was a large lounge diner which was furnished in a modern style. Floor to ceiling windows on one side provided an unobstructed view of Delhi by night. Geet was in awe. She didn't even know this place existed. But then again, why would she.

Maan saw Geet mesmerised by the view and said "Nice isn't it" huskily into Geet's ear. "Pity you won't get to stay and enjoy the view" he said as he swept her of her feet and led her into the bedroom.

Maan made quick work of both their clothes and soon they were lying naked on the bed, with Maan on top of Geet.

Gazing into her face Maan said earnestly "You are beautiful".

"Where have you been hiding?" he murmured as he kissed her face, chin, neck, chest moving down to her curves. He was an experienced lover. He knew where to kiss and where to touch to make a woman feel pleasure. Geet on the other hand was new to all of this, but tried to remember what Naintara had told her.

She tried to let go and enjoy the feelings Maan was eliciting, but found it difficult.

Sensing that Geet might be a virgin due to her hesitancy, Maan said "New to all this? Are you sure you want to continue? I mean we can stop anytime. Though, I will be disappointed if we do."

Geet was surprised at what Maan had just said and looked at him with shock.

"What? You don't believe I would stop?" Maan asked sensing her shock.

''Wo... No... I never would have thought you would ask" Geet replied.

Maan stayed in position lying on top of Geet unmoving, waiting for her answer. Both looked into each other's eyes, lost. After some time, neither had said a word, so Maan broke the silence asking "So?"

"Hmmm?'' Geet responded confused at what he was asking.

"So, do you want me to stop?" Maan asked.

Geet raised her hands, which had been idle by her sides and tangled them in Mann's hair pushing his face down onto hers. She smirked at him, before raising her head to meet his in a deep and passionate kiss. That was it... there was no stopping them after that. Geet gave herself wholeheartedly to Maan, while Maan brought himself and Geet to pleasures that neither had ever experienced before. Maan had offered to use a condom but Geet denied saying it was her 1st time and she was on the pill. Maan was more than happy with that response.

Present.

Geet fluttered her eyes open and thought "He didn't recognise me...I suppose it's been a month since he saw me, and I look a lot different now...now that Di has re-styled me into my modern avtaar...and it was a month since I last saw him. A whole month without seeing him was like living without food or water. I don't know how I survived Babaji. But then seeing him last night, made up for my Maan drought. He looked so hot and sexy. And when he came towards me, I thought my heart would explode. He found me attractive that was obvious. Good job Di... Oh God, his reaction when I ignored him was priceless. He's obviously not used to that. But it did the trick, just as Di had said it would- it seemed to arouse him more. Then once I was in his arms, Maan didn't leave me alone for one second... last night...or should I say this morning...God that man is insatiable...but he took me places I have never been and possibly will never experience again." Glancing over at the bedside clock, she saw the time was 8.00 am. "I wonder where he has gone...he must have either gone to Khurana constructions or home...he could have said goodbye. But Geet, why would he? You were just his girl for last night. It's not as if you have started a relationship... Babaji, I hope I managed to get pregnant last night, varna..."

Suddenly her phone rang breaking her reverie. "My phone. Where is it?'' she thought. She looked over the side of the bed and saw her purse on the floor and groaned. "It must be Di. I better answer it. But Babaji, how will I get up from the bed to answer it? I ache all over" she whined to herself. She slowly and carefully got out of bed, and realising she was naked, quickly pulled the of the bed sheets around her. The way she draped the sheet, it barely covered her curves and rear. She picked up the phone and looked at the caller ID. "Maan?" she whispered. "Why would he be ringing me?"

She answered the phone "Hello, Maan"

"Geet?" Maan said. "Why can I hear his voice in stereo", she wondered.

Suddenly she found herself spun around looking into the very angry eyes of Maan, who spat out the words "WHAT THE HELL"

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Posted: 12 years ago
😊

Very interesting twist to story

EDITED___
Super update!
She has been away from him for a month
The makeover must be wow since he did not even recognize her.
There was so much passion in their being together.
The way he could not leave her alone in the elevator nor the room
She is not going to be able to escape him that easily.
The last line was what I call a cliffhanger.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Why is he calling her after a month?
Oh Gosh, if she is still working for him, I can't wait for the fireworks!😊
Sorry I was away so could not comment properly due a bad network connection.
what should I say th...s for updating...😆
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update finally maneet became one



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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE WHAT A TWIST LOVED IT MAAN CALLED GEET ON HER PHONE AND SHE ANSWERED NOT KNOWING HE WAS IN THE ROOM LOVED IT WICKED UPDATE THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan recognize geet waiting 4 next

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