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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey me Maria here previously XxDeansChickxX...
This is my another try on AsYa.this coupe some how had made way to my heart not the place of KaJen,JeRan but yeah I am liking them ..
I had write the some how same OS on AR,ArHi..but thought of writing on them

Saiyara Mai Siyara.Saiyra Tu saiya


OS Saiyara

Entering into the big hall.I saw a huge crowd of people are wandering here but the strange thing is in all these I feel myself alone because the one who can fill my heart and life with her warmness is not here.Moving around I try to locate my family.Here she is, my wife Ananya and also my best friend.She smiles at me I smiled back.I went to her and meet her parents.I saw my parents smiling at me but I simply ignored them.They are responsible of my pain and agony and now they are smiling at me.And than why suddenly I am feeling calm.She is here I can feel her.Turning around I saw her with her husband."Husband" I could have been her husband if fate had allowed us.And then our eyes met and for while I forget all my miseries.


Asmaa tera mera hua
khuab ki terha dhua dhua
Asma tera mera hua
Sans ki terha rua rua

I didn't believe i am seeing her after 2 years...but soon i felt a hold on my hand got tight and heard ananya"Asad what happen??".I quickly avert my gaze and went from there.I felt suffocated there i want to go out from but i cant.I just met my parents meekly but my eyes never leave the sight of her.She is wearing black saarre with red work looking as beautiful as always,her hair open,She is standing with her hub and.How i wish i could get that place...hopelessly i look down..
..as the dance started I saw her husband holding her hands and dancing with her..I saw partners changing as the partners changed I got the chance to hold her hand which I want to hold but I can't. Though i can't be with her,I am sure one day or the other we will meet...and that time there will be no hurdle between our love...the thought of meeting her again fill my heart with strange warmth ,we both kept swinging and kept staring into each others eyes ..till the partner change,while we both are moving away from each other I saw her looking at me,I gave her a smile and she returned teary smile..may be a last smile till we meet again...
Saiyan ye mera tujh mai samya
Saiyara mai saiyara
Saiyra tu saiyara tu sayara
sitaro k jahan mai mila ge ab dubara


Zoya pov
entered into the hall looking around the the crowd present.I was never afraid afraid of crowd because i was grown in this environment but now now these crowds make me afraid.Because in so much people I felt myself to be alone,empty.A lone tear escape my eyes. I felt a hand holding mine.I saw Ayan standing there my husband.I gave him a week smile.He nods and remove my tears.We both enter into the hall and as soon as we enter into the hall our eyes met..We both enter the hall,in the thousands of people some known and some unknown.Suddenly my eyes caught the glimpse of him.Finally after 2 years i was seeing him but then I saw ananya standing right behind him and i look away as I don't even had the right to see him any more.

tu jo mila to you hua hogi pori adhori se dua
tu jo gaya to sang le giya mera jina ki her waja



Soon the dance,Ayan hold my hands to the dance floor,I kept my hand on his waist,but i didn't feel the spark which i use to have with him...The partners keep changing finally i felt the same touch which i was dying to feel,I look up into his eyes ,he stare into my eyes but then I look down,now our ways are different...That brought the unbearable sadness in me,but can i do some thing about it no I cannot ,I certainly can't..I was helpless,I was coward and i am still the same..That time i didn't stand by him and now I can't.He gave me everything and I can't even stand by him...

tum pe mati..tum se banni
tum se hua hai ha khud pe yakeen...

I felt him moving away from me,I look up and stare into his eyes,his eyes were promising ,he was looking at me as if conveying ,What if we didn't be able to together here we will soon together not here then in heaven.I return the teary smile.I know may be we are not together we can feel the warmth of each other


To jo nai to na sahi ..mai ho yaha tu to bhi hai yahi kahin


Both kept on looking into each other conveying a silent massage
*Though the war of two families had separate us but still we will be together not here then in the heaven*

Leave your precious comment love maria:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome.
but there are a lot of mistakes with the names in the first part. try and edit please.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nicely written. Got a bit confused with the names though but it was awesome nonetheless!
Saiyara is one of my all time fav songs <3
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thankx for your commments although less but ass thankx for ikking it guys)

yu i saw two mistakes and corrected it i dont know if others resent or not actualy i am use to write on AR so i saw it but dont change it sorry for that..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww that was beautiful..but sad.do write more..
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thank you soo much for your comments guys)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am just reading this again and again.love it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was soo touchy...very nicely written dea...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written and so emotional. Loved it!
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i am in love with this os seriously i read this before i was a member and i have reading it almost everyday
.Heart touching story.
I have no words to describe this.
in short i am speechless.
Amazing work.
Touched my heart.
I was crying while reading this😭
you write so well you should definitely write more!
Edited by delena_ - 11 years ago

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