MG :~pyaar~~ pt 10 ,11 pg 31,33 apr 22 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
awesome part soo geet is in delhi now n jay is giving her gyan n alll
waiting to know kya batan achaie maan ko from his mom
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chalo finally maan ne geet k baare me sochna to shuru kiya ...i hope hsailja jaldi maan ko sab bata de ..i guess jo bhi baate he wo geet k baare me hi hogi ...plz try to update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
part 8
nice...
Maan should regret and repent so much...
poor Geet...
what are his parents talking about?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
what is truth
waiting to know that
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
awesome, nice, amazing part
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what is the truth hidden from Maan...

why patents hide some truths from their children...they are family and whatever concerned with family should be open to every family members...

at last Maan is thinking about Geet...he is such a selfish person... whatever was she Geetanjali or Geet but she was his wife and how could he leave her like this...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
nice one loved the update
would wait for other 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Super part its just mind blowing and I m loving ur work
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~~PYAAR~~


PART 9

There was something that was hidden from him and that was the thing that his parents never wanted him to know it once had destroyed him and know pushing him on the same way will be fatal…

Shailja: yash hume maan ko sab kuch bata dena chaiye… kahin bahut der na ho jaye…

Yash looked at his wife intently she was hiding her tears and was trying to all her mighty strength to say him these words which she herself denied once for the sake for her son.. step son maan..she was his step mother but never in these years he realized it infact she was the one who fought with him for every small needs of him since he was one…

Yash turned her to him and wiped her face….

Yash: ye tum kya keh rahi ho shaija kaise bata den maan ko ki uski gee tab duniya me nahi hai… humne use usi accident me kho diya jisme maan ne apni zindagi ke wo teen saal bhula diya jo use yaad hi nahi hain…

Shaija looked at him with questioning eyes..she knew all this but still what about the rage and aggressivess that maan was facing that actually they were facing of him….

Shailja: lekin maan ki aage ki zindagi ka kya.. wo toh geet ko bhulane ke liye taiyaar hi nahi hai..usi ke yaadon me khoya rehta hai.. kuch kehta bhi nahi hai..na kuch puchta hai..ek uljhan hai uski aankhon me,

Yash nodded and accepted her fact…

Yash: theek hai kal hi maan ko sab sach bata denge..kal geet ki barsi hai… aur hum wo yahi karenge… tum taiyariyan karo…

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Geet was attending her college she was trying to focus on her life instead of maan but he was a integral part of her life..she feels him in her..her was an integral part of her life..she breathes for him..

Geet was sitting lonely with her books open in her lap in the college garden when her friend silky came running towards her she was huffing and panting..geet look at her with her broad innocent eyes.. she open the cap of her water bottle and offered to her… silky gulped the water making herself calm..she sat beside geet and closed her book….

Geet : kya hua hai… aren't you having any other work silky other than closing my books… dekh I need to study you just go..she spoke rudely..silky was well aware of geet's condition she knew that geet was married and was now completing her studies so she assumed that she must be missing her family and her husband..how many times she tried to not to wear those marital symbols but still she cant stop herself…

Silky: are you missing jeej.. call him… you wont feel bored geet..

Geet gave her a glare and continued doing her work…when silky again pulled her book and chirpily said to geet…

Silky: I got a part time job..abb ghar se paise mangwane nahi padenge ….i can bear my expenses..i have to take tuitions of four students and five thousand they will give me… that's enough for me….

Geet kind of liked this so she further enquired…

Geet: what about your studies wont you lack in these…. Then what's the need of that money …

Silky looked at geet with annoyed eyes..she mocked her…

Silky: are yar pure din ke liye thodi na jaana hai… sirf do ghante after classes..and the time I waste roaming here and there I can use that aur jyada dur bhi nahi hai… tujhe pata hai..papa has taken loan for my studies and further I know how do they manage my other expenses so its better I should do it ….

Geet nodded she thought for a while she doesn't seems to be a bad idea…she even can take tuitions..she don't have to ask money from jay…

Geet: kya main bhi tuts le sakhti hun silky…

Silky : kyun nahi le sakti I am taking eleven and twelve standard maths batches… tu bata tu kya padayegi…. I can ask some of my friends..waise geet there is a tution..for a girl.. she needs home tutor uske ghar jakar padhana hoga..she is physically disabled and is going to give boards but use sare subjects main guidance chahiye and they wants a lady teacher moreover a handsome fees… tu kahe toh baat kar le…but its for only some months

Geet nodded..she knew that she had to start from somewhere so she had to take this part time job… but still she was having doubt that why she didn't take this opportunity…

Geet: par tune kyun mana kiya… if they are offering a nice fees..

Silky looked at geet..she knew her eyes were doubting but she calmly answered …

Silky: because my dear geet..they needs a tutor for all subjects…and I cant manage that.. tu dekh le if you are comfortable than only I will speak to them…

Geet looked at her and nodded…

Geet: ask them I am ready for this job….

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NEXT: a face to face…




waiting for readers review


Edited by maanlovesgeet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooohhh yeh kya mystery h lolz
ek geet dead ek jinda :O
waiting for face to face
plzz this tym update soon

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