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Mohan and Megha have FB at their respective places.

Megha was confused and worried when she received a call from Mohan asking her to meet him. She wanted to believe that Mohan is in Indore bringing good news for their life but not sure how and what. She was excited about their meeting after long time and she couldn't control the butterflies in her stomach. When she finally met him at the park, the image of Mohan with a baby, terrified her. Before she could near Mohan, in those few seconds, her world whirled around her.

"Mohan, Are you ok?" She was in tears by the time she uttered those words

Mohan was out of words as well and he wiped her tears off. He hugged her along with the baby. As Megha relaxed in his arms, her fingers tingled with the little one's skin. She just realized the baby's presence and moved out of him. Mohan forced himself out of the cheerful mood to get into the serious conversation that he wanted to have with Megha.

"Megha, in one of my anti-crime operation, there was a huge attack by the criminals thus losing most of the victims. This is the only one survived and I didn't have the heart to leave it out with some orphanage" Mohan was emotional while he explained further about the incident and how bad the kids' parents were killed.

Megha was filled with tears and took the baby into her arms. The picture of this image made Mohan's heart contented and he registered it in him with a smile.

"Megha, I was sure that I don't want to leave the baby anywhere but I am not sure what I am going to do next"

"Mohan, I am so proud of you! I am sure you know what you want to do next" Megha smiled at him knowingly.

"Yes Megha, I want us to adopt this kid" Mohan's voice was amused

"And then?"

"We will be her parents"

"And then?"

"Then what, Megha?"

By then the baby started crying, to which Megha attended by swinging her in her arms. Mohan rejoiced as if he is a proud father for a new born. He couldn't understand the strange feeling formed in him from the moment he held the baby in his hands.

"Mohan, are you sure you can do this?"

"Megha, I don't know but I want to"

He held her hands in his and was trying to communicate what he feels inside. He wanted to say so many things about how he gets connected with her through this baby; how he wanted the baby to be the symbol of their love for the rest of their life; how he wanted his every sense of missing her and his family, to be filled with this little life around him. How he wished that he could put them all in words to describe his sentiments attached to the baby. But Megha did not need his feelings described through his words to understand. She could see them all in his eyes; feel them through his touch; sense them by his body language. Her happiness in knowing the sentimental man hidden behind his carefree outlook, reached no boundaries. Her lips fluttered to say something but in vain. All she could mumble was "I am falling in love with you all over again"

"Huh?" Mohan though failed to read those mumbling words, was lost in that love filled eyes of hers.

"Did you say something?" He asked again.

Megha immediately wore a teasing smile on her lips and said in a casual tone "Just wondering about the problems that my Mr. Musibat brings to me"

Mohan chuckles through his tears and relieves himself from the pressure by resting his head on hers. That was a perfect image of an extended family of theirs.

"So, what should we name you, little angel?" Megha picked those soft pink hands to her cheeks.

"Jhilmil! Isn't she sparkling like a star?" Mohan was full of pride for his little wonder.

"Yes, she is! But Jhilimil'" Megha wrinkled her eyebrows showing her disinterest in the name.

"Rimjhim!" Mohan jumped up in enthusiasm for coming up with something just perfect and right. He couldn't help relating it with the name 'Megha'.

"Ok! Rimjhim it is!" Megha agreed to it.

"What next, Mohan?"

"Megha, as you know, I don't know ABC of baby care. Guru is still roaming around in his half pants"

Megha grins at a helpless Mohan and his genuine confession on his fear of handling the baby. She says to herself 'How I wish I am near you in every walks of your days and how I want this baby to be our own little bundle of joy'. Mohan jerks her out of her daydreams.

After much discussion they come out with a plan. Mohan rents out a room in Indore, for 20 days where Megha can visit them during the day, to get a routine set for Mohan and Rimjhim. Meanwhile they completed the adoption formalities where Mohan and Megha signed as the proud parents of the sweet package from heaven. Rimjhim was a few months older than 1 year when they adopted her.

"Oho, baby, Come to Mummy!"

"No, No, Come to Paapu!"

Guru was filled with laughter on seeing Mohan and Megha in the room, fighting to get the attention from Rimjhim. When Megha entered the room that morning, after giving a well-planned explanation at Vyass' house, she met an exhausted Mohan and Guru. From their looks, it was obvious to her that Rimjhim gave a tough time leaving them sleepless in the night. Mohan looked like a complete disaster with scattered hair, tired body but his eyes never missed to twinkle in sparkles on spotting Megha. He was happy for both Rimjhim and the time he got to spend with Megha, though as a temporary arrangement.

"Come to Paapu" Mohan was all energetic to play with Rimjhim

When Rimjhim chose to cling to Megha, Mohan pretended to be angry showing a pout. But he adored the image of Megha and Rimjhim together, swallowing in every detail of the image, for his memory.

"Give me, I will feed her" Mohan took the bottle of milk from Megha. He wanted to learn everything before the days could fly off. And he never missed to observe the mummy-daughter duo in action anytime. He looked in greed to take in such scenes, as much as he could to fill his empty spaces in the future. He saved all those images as photographs in his mind.

"Jaan" He muttered while he was playing with Rimjhim

When Rimjhim responded to it cheerfully, Mohan found no limits to his amusement.

"Megha, look at this" He replayed the scene with his endearing address to Rimjhim.

"Mr. Bhatnagar, do you have any time for anyone else, now?"

"Hello Mirchi Madam, are you jealous?"

"Naah! I am happy that I got my freedom now"

"Oh! Is that so? Then here it is, enjoy your freedom fully" He pulled her into his embrace along with Rimjhim, squeezing her tightly. As his hair tickled through Rimjhim's soft skin, she started giggling. The proud parents were amused and filled with happiness for their life.

"I am hungry, will you feed me?" Mohan asked Rimjhim. She fed him her food from the bowl. Those little hands applied food all over his face with little food getting inside his mouth. Mohan was all smiles and his stomach filled with the smiles of the little angel. Megha admired the whole scene and filled herself with those memories as well.

The other day when Megha visited them a little early, she found Mohan sleeping with his face flat down. Rimjhim who was sitting next to him was playing with his hair. Megha smiled at them and took in her into her arms. As Rimjhim showed her hands at Mohan, Megha made her sit on his back. The kid started jumping up and down as if she is on a ride, triggering laughter in Megha. Mohan woke up to see the beautiful scene of laughing Megha and Rimjhim.

"Are mom and daughter having fun at the cost of me?" He mocked an angry look

When Megha squeezed his nose to taper his anger, Rimjhim reflected the same action with her little hands.

"You too, Jaan?" Mohan hugged her and wished all his mornings are like this forever.

Those 20 days were so eventful making Mohan filled with memories for the years to come. The bonding between Mohan and Rimjhim formed very naturally but he felt that Megha played a major role in the process. He tied everything related to him and Rimjhim, with Megha because he wanted her to be part of them even after she is gone.

FB ends.

Megha and Mohan wipe off their tears in their lonely night. Mohan carries a sleeping Nanhi back to her room and kisses her good night before retiring into his. Megha who was holding Rimjhim's hands on her bed did not feel like moving away from there.


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Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
its was sooo awesome.. loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
OMG...that was just soo beautiful! I am speechless 👏

I could actually visualize Mohan aka Kunal playing around with a baby...God, that would be so cute!! Hope we get some FB scenes with Mohan and his Jaan in the show too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Aww beautiful part!!

U explained MM feeling soo Beautifully ,

loved each nd every bit or ur writing
I'm deeply in love with this FF

Plz cont soon
Nd Thanks for the PM.. :)


Edited by Ridz.Instigator - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Super awesome Poo and thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
👏 👏 👏 I just loved d bonding of RJ with Mohan-Megha ❤️ Bond tht comes to d core n bonded with life ❤️

Poo amazing update but i couldnt notice where d FB starts or ends 😆 Bcz all i was reading, nah was feeling, is d Bond 👏 N i really felt every bond u described here...like hubby-wifey bond, father-daughter bond, mother-daughter bond, most of all one kid's bond with her parents ❤️

Thanks for this lovely update 🤗 Thanks for d PM 😳

Now i demand next part ASAP😳 Not my fault...I m kinda addicted with ur write-up now 😛 So keep giving us d doses 😳 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
OMG!
How did i miss such gr8 piece of writing??
Hats off poo :)

I mean their separation makes sense ..!
They are part of each other lives yet far away

Loveddd itt

Cont soon

Plzz do PM me next tym u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful..i loved how u wrote the FB scene..its so adorable...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Addu was not sure whether he is ready for the challenge in front of him. For the past few months, when he felt himself as a failure, he was much upset for everything that he had turned out to be. He was not happy and he wanted to prove something out of him. The more he thought about his emotional imbalance state, the more he wanted to come out of it. Now with fate bringing him back in Mohan's presence, he wanted to face it with courage. He decided to be a different person and wanted to be a man.

"Hi Ragi, Hi Buvi" Addu wished the girls when he met them at the office

"Hi Aditya!" Buvi responded while Ragini just ignored him. Addu was disappointed and upset on this response but managed to recover soon.

"Where are the boys?" Buvi asked him

"They are still getting ready but I came off thinking that we will start the day early"

"As if it's going to make big difference!" Ragi gave an insulting look at Addu which made him feel inferior.

It has been Ragini who made Addu's life changing moments both in good and bad ways. He went crazy for her within those initial few months of togetherness. Though Ragini initially encouraged his attentions for her, she couldn't move on easily with him for many reasons. He wasn't the usual energetic, lively, carefree boy that girls normally got attracted to. He was too sensitive and obssessive, which were beyond her imagination. His attachment to every trivial thing made him difficult to handle. She started ignoring him which hurt Addu's feelings. He decided to do something about it and move on in life as a different person. Though he did not know how, he wanted to give it a try.

"Hi boys and girls!" Karan welcomed them with a bright smile.

"You will be reporting to me during your training period here" He started explaining them the agenda of their training and the various departments that they will be visiting during their tenure there.

"Will we be meeting the Chief Editor of the company as well?" Addu did not know what he wanted to hear.

"May be or may be not! It depends" Karan continued his lecture on other things

Mohan in his cabin recollecting his morning in his office. He just could not believe his eyes on spotting Addu in his office premises. As he got to know his intention of visit here, he was proud of his little Piddi! But concerned at the same time, to imagine what would happen if he gets to see him here. He felt joy of happiness inside him knowing that his kids are around him so close. All he wanted to believe is that life is taking a good turn for himself and his family. He opened Megha's picture on his mobile "Megha, I know what is going on inside you. I too want to make things easy for you, my dear but I just don't know how!" He holds her picture on to his chest and closes his eyes lost in her thoughts.

"May I come in?" Mohan's thoughts were disturbed by a voice.

"Yes, Come in" Mohan brought himself back to senses

"Bhai, It's me" Karan walked in casually

"Tell me, Karan"

"Are you ok, Bhai? Shall I come later?"

"I am fine, Karan! What's the matter?"

"The training students" The moment he said that Mohan stared at him confusedly.

"They would like to meet you! Do you have time for them?"

Mohan's emotions saw no boundaries and he wasn't sure what to expect but he wished that the time just freezes there. He nodded in agreement. As much as he wanted to go through the moment, he also wanted to leap through it. When he entered the conference room where the students were assembled, he just gazed through them all. He hoped he don't recognize Addu in the group but he failed. His eyes caught at the sight of Addu whose head is bend down looking at the notepad in his hand. As Karan asked them to introduce themselves, Addu gave his name just as Aditya without any surname.

As Mohan delivered his speech looking everyone in the room he glanced through Addu few times. Addu's face was blank and expression less. Mohan then had the question whether Addu wanted to be recognized by him. It appeared to him that he was happy that Mohan did not recognize him. And Mohan decided to play it that way from his side. He wasn't clear whether this takes them somewhere but he wanted to believe that it would.

"Sir, Do we get to meet you often while we are here?" Addu's question took him by surprise

"Yeah sure, you are always welcome!" He did not want to sound too excited about it

As Mohan walked out of the room, he could sense Addu looking at him intensely and he wanted to believe that there is no hatred in his eyes. Before he entered his cabin, he felt a motion behind him and turned to see Addu standing there.

"Nice meeting you, Sir" He extended his hands for a quick handshake. And this is when Mohan found a smile on Addu's face. It looked like there was a relief on his face, may be his disguise gave him that.

"Pleasure is mine" Mohan meant every word of it. He controlled his urge to share a hug with his Piddi

By the time Mohan sat on his chair, he was in turmoil of emotions mixed of everything. He just remembered all those uneventful moments with Addu and felt a pain spread inside him. He said to himself 'How I wish I could revert them all back'. Just then a knock on the door and Karan's entry got his normal form.

"Good that you met them"

"Why do you say that?"

"Oh! This boy, Aditya! He was just pestering me from the moment I started with my discussion with them. He was so keen on meeting you and it looked like he will run into your room on his own"

Mohan could not make out anything on this description of Addu's act. He wanted to think that it is for good and not otherwise. He smiled to himself at the thought of his Piddi running into him any moment.

"You let him meet me anytime when he wants to"

"Are you sure?"

"Cent percent!"

Addu was in high spirits after his meeting with Mohan. He was happy that he was able to hide his identity from Mohan. He wanted it to keep it that way to make things easy for him. He was not there yet to revive the relationship with Mohan. He expected it to grow on its own with a push from his side in every possible way. He thought this as the perfect opportunity to start his make over to be a different person. He retired in his room happily and called Megha and Nanhi with enthusiasm.

As Mohan entered the house, he heard the bell ringing. He saw a smiling Nanhi on the bell waving her hands at him. As she walked towards the swing and sat there, Mohan tried his stunts around the sofa and tables, as if he is doing his Spiderman way of reaching his Chavvani. Nanhi laughed at this action but was enjoying it. As he reached her they greeted each other with their usual gesture. Mohan settled himself on the swing as well.

"What happened, Spiderman? Looks like you are in a very happy mood!"

"Yes, you can say that!!!"

"Even I am happy and have a good news for you!"

"About Piddi and his Training Program?"

"WOW! Very right! How do you know that?"

"He is doing his training in my company"

Nanhi couldn't help remembering the same situation with Mohan and Megha, during their working together at PL. She laughed at first and then looked worried.

"Is he ok?"

"Looks like it! He even insisted on meeting me, you know?"

"Oh! Is that good or bad, Spiderman?"

"Hey Chavvani! Tension not. Everything will be alright" He wanted to believe his own words as well.

"Sachchi?" Nanhi extended her hands in front of him

"Muchchi!" Mohan assured her with his hands. Nanhi hugged him with a happy smile

"Shall we go out to eat icecream?" Nanhi asked him like a child

"Haanaa, I would love it! Come let's go!"

Mohan put his arms around Nanhi and took her out to a near by Icecream parlour.

When Megha ended her call with Addu, she was just left with a sigh of relief. He did not talk anything about his encounter with Mohan but he sounded very enthusiatic and alive. Megha was proud to hear him like that and trusted that everything will be alright.

"Boohhooo"

Megha alarmed and jumped out at the sound. When she met a twinkling Rimjhim near her with full of laughter, she joined in her laughs.

"Ohhoo!!! It's you Jaan? You scared me, you know!"

"But you are Jhansi ki Rani, remember the brave woman in my paapu's stories?!"

"Yeah, you are right! Thanks for reminding me that" She winked at the little girl

"Can I ask you something?"

"Anything, beta!"

"Will you take me out for an icecream?"

"Ofcourse I will!"

Megha held Rimjhim's hands in hers and walked towards the near by Icecream stall.
Pages to be Continued...
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Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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poo..i want you to keep continuing dis and nt stop ...i so love reading dis..i wish addu was lyk dis in NBt too..bt yes atleast he is in ur story..again a nyc one😊

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