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Red Drops On Black Heart



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The concept revolvs around mostly on Vampires, werewolfs and vampire hunters. Zeo the one and only existing human vampire , whose life is at stake as the evil ones trying to reach her.

This story also revolvs around the equation of this little princess with Arjun, the most agressive vampire of the vampire clan and her mother Riya, the newborn vampire.

The story also focuses on the relationship between Arjun and the princess of werewolfs sakshi.

At a common point everyone will put their effort to save the precious life of zeo, and save her from the evil ones .

The story centered on the events of past, and happeneings of present! Some mystries and extreme thrill.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prolouge


He was running in the heavy deep dark forest...usually he is unstable ..bt today it isis become more n more uncomfortable for him...

The oozing red blood drops was making his throat dry.. Its so esay for him to control over his thrust..bt what happens today..

Some dark memories are flasing in his mind, bt he is unable to memorize anything.. What was happening with him...

He was still running as if only the end of this eternity will stop him..
He got a sudden telepethy n his mind told him to stop..

His pace of running is now slowing rhythmically n he seems to be at peace...


His bare upper half body , his dark blue eyes , bt no thudding heart..
Is now looks calm..
Before it was looking as a thunder storm in this deep dark forest...


But still its uneasy for him... It feels like red drops are oozing out from a heart..
A black heart..
Without any emotions , without any passion , since the black things doesnot reflects any thing..

But this thing reflecting only harted..
He can bear anyone's harted bt nope not this time..
He can't afford this harted...



Suddenly he felt someones hand on his bare shoulder ...

''Sakshi''- the first thing comes out from his mouth...

She flashed a smile..
He looked at her head to toe..
She was claded in a long white goun ...
Looking like an angle ...bt not exactly tht...

He thought , what made her to come here in this time..

'' you'' she answered...


' may be arjun, there was something which throws the red drops in ur blank heart''...she told him...

Arjun turned to her ..
N nodded..


tell me guyz how is this.. In VQ style na???
Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Character sketch-finally maine diya lol


Arjun- He is a vampire. Working in the ETF as second in command. He still have problem with himself, couldn't control his thirst. Still he is with sakshi. Have special attraction towards ria, attraction of harted. But still something is hidden from from him.

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Sameer - he is also vampire. Chief of ETF. He is here to protect his clan from exposing themselves. He works for humanity, against evil vampires
and a tough fight with vampire-hunters.
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Zeieo-the one and only human vampire . Have supernatural powers which is different from normal vampires. She is unknown of her real identity that she is a human vampire. She is now with ria, her lady devil. And only drinks watermelon juice. She loves her angry man aka sam .

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Ria-she is a newborn vampire. She is here to protect zeieo. Hates arjun , but also have attraction towards him. Have a good relation with rathod, her mentor and guide. She very special for maria, the queen of vampires. Have good friendship with the team. A caring mother, and loves her zeieo.

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Sakshi-she is the princess of werewolf. Helping the vampire clan, and have a secret mission. She is in love with arjun. But she is also aware of the relation between arjun and ria. Unpredictable girl.

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Maria-queen of vampires. Working for humanity. Have a special affection towards ria and rathod and arjun. Always took fair desicion. Have dangerous/horrible past. Still this past is paining .


All other characters are same.
Like shree chotu, liza, and ayesha.
They have some equation with these vampires, but they are unware of the fact that they are vampires.

And two more characters will also be introduce.





[BRR]

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept and
nice prologue...
continue soon...
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Waooo vamu update soon..
cant wait for a single second...
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Part - 1


He rushed to the conference room banging the door behind..making the another guy even more shocked...the other guy is his mentor , his guide bt he never respected him... The the man also hate him... But its the rule of their clan and he have to handle arjun..

Yes the other man is sameer. The person who cared for him more than himself now giving only harted to him...


Sam goes to his cabin...
Rj (arjun) was standing there crossing his hands ...

Sam comes infront of him..
Sam- u can't loose control like this damn it!!
Agar mai waha na hota toh sayad aaj tumhe queen se koi nahi bacha sakta tha...

How can u just loose ur control Rj..

Hum iss crime world mai iss liye hai kyun ki hume yaha apni pyaass par rakhne k liye bheja gaya hai...

N most important thing hume yaha humanity ko bachne k liye bheja gaya hai ..na ki usse tabah karne...


Now this is the limit the he can bear..

Rj- just stop this ur bullshit..
I know wht i have to do n i know what i will do..
Samjhe ya samjhaun...


Sam gets more angry n he comes out of his cabin...


He saw sakshi was there , bt today her face lost her usual charm..

He asked-
u r ok?

Sakshi- oh..ya ..ofcourse..
Usne kya kaha..

Sam- he is out of control..
Kuch pata chala...

Sakshi- no..
Sam- ok , agar kuch pata chale toh bata dena..

Sakshi- well he never lost his control like he does today..
There is somethng...
We need to check it out...

Its the first time i hav seen him so thursty for the drops...



Suddenly aisha enters the room..
Aisha- sir, autopsy reports r here..
Its more like wild animal attack..

Sam - ok, report me the full info..
Aisha- yes sir,
waha jo body hume mili thi, aisa la raha tha ki kisine usk sare blood choos k nikala ho , like koi janwar..
Aur usk body k paas ...

Suddenly another girl enters the room...
'' its of no use''... She said..

Aisha- ye tum kaise keh sakte ho ria..

Ria- simple it may an animal attack..i mean to say tht..

Ria signalled sth to sam n sam nodded ...

Then arjun comes out...

He saw ria.. Now his its getting more uneasy for him... So samething with ria..

Sakshi can understand their situation so she goes to arjun...

Arjun was murderously lookin at ria...

Sakshi touches his cheeks n said, hey hoty just calm down...
Aaj kahi bahar chale..
Arjun looked at sakshi, some how his anger lowers a bit..


Well sakshi is the only lady who can control his wrath..

She kept her hand around his waist n lead him out of the conf. Room...


Before going she signalled sth to sam n he nodded...

Sam told aisha to go back to her cabin n she goes..


Ria comes near sam n said..
'' its the hunters''...
Sam- may be..
Bt hum kisi bhi haal mai unhe ye pata lagne nahi denge...


Sam- n wo arj...
Ria- no sam ..not now..
Its only hate from me which he wll get... Forever

N u knw why i m here !
Only for humanity...



Out of the conf.room.

Sakshi n arjun was in parking...
Sakshi- hey , i will drive...
For the devil's sake its a car..
I don't want create tornado in the streets of bombay...

That made arjun laugh..
She looked at his face...
Yeah he is back..

Then he moved close to her..
She feels uncomfortable...
Arjun just peaked on her cheek..
N she blushed hard...

Sakshi- hey wht r u doing..
Arjun- you really don't know..
Sakshi- ah ..wo..
I mean parking mai ...koi dekhlega toh..

Arjun- toh gadi mai chalo..
Sakshi- plan changed..
U wll drive..
Warna tum mujhe drive nahi karne doge...

Arjun- ok my lovely lady...

They both got into car n left the parking..


Shree-liza-chotu was watching this all...

Shree- love birds..
Ye arjun sir sakshi ko kabhi akela nhi chod te..

Liza- nhi sakshi arjun sir ko nhi chod ti..

Chotu- parking mai cctv cam lagana padega...
...


Pre- info abt vampire hunters..




guys tell me its rocking or nt..
Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vampuuu first part dooo jaldyyy ab or sabarb nahi ho raha...
Prologue was supub...
i can imagine every think in front of my eyes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum
lov it
grt title
thanx fr d pm dear..!
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Originally posted by: Piyarani

Vampuuu first part dooo jaldyyy ab or sabarb nahi ho raha...
Prologue was supub...
i can imagine every think in front of my eyes



thank you di,
update kar diya..

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