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Chapter-30

At Juneja Office

Prem was working on his laptop with full of his concentration as he was on leave from last week because of his Engagement'.but it time to catch up all the work which he missed from last week. As he continuous his work'just then his phone rang

Prem (while looking at the laptop):- Hello, yes Anita

Anita (Prem's PS):- Sir Mr Rishab Rampal is here to see you

Prem:- Rishab Rampal???...oh ya just send him in

Anita:- Ok sir

Prem (thought):- Rishab Rampal'.sanjana' elder brother'wo London se kab aya

Just then

Knock! Knock!

Prem:- Come in

Rshab entered his cabin with smile

Rishab:- Hey Prem!!!

Prem smiled first shook his hand with him then hugged him

Prem:- Rishab!! How are you???

Rishab:- Bas bardia'tum sunao

Prem:- Main bhi thik hun. Tum London se kab aye???

Rishab:- Kal raat ko hi'

Prem:- Oh acha'to How's work??? Or india kaise ana hua???

Rishab:- Kam acha chal raha hai'India ek important project ke silsile mein aya tha'or kuch hasil karne bhi'ab to us chiz ko hasil karke hi jaounga'

Rishab said while thinking about Heer

Prem finds Rishab's tune little bit strange

Rishab (coming out of his thoughts):- Anyways..Sanju ne bataya tumhari or Heer ki sagai ho gai'.congratulations to both of you'

Prem (smilingly):- Thank you so much

Rishab:- Heer kaisi hai???

Prem looked at him strangley

Rishab:- umm mera matlab tha ki'tum dono ki sagai ho gai hai'tumhare sath sath Heer bhi bohot khush hogi is rishtey se right???

Prem:- Ya right'jahan tak muje pata hai'wo bhi bohot khush hai.

Prem said while smilingly this about Heer. Rishab that smile on Prem's face Rishab balled his fist in anger.

Rishab (controlling his anger):- so shadi kab hai???

Prem:-well abhi to engagement hi hui hai'ab dekho'shadi ki date kab nikalti hai'humare gharwale to piche parde hain jald se jald shadi karne ke liye.

Rishab (with fake smile):- chalo acha hai'tumhe to congratulate kar diya I wish mein Heer ko bhi congratulate kar pata

Prem:- Han wo '

But rishab cut him in between

Rishab:- Ya ek kam karte hain tum or Heer mere ghar aj raat Dinner par kyun nahi ate???

Prem:- Umm rishab dinner???

Rishab (insist):- Please Prem mana mat karna'is banana mein Heer se milke usse bhi congratulate karlunga'please prem'yeh meri taraf se ek choti si treat hogi tum dono ki engagement ki khushi mein please'

Prem (smiled):- acha thik hai'lekin aj nahi ho payega..acutally I am little busy kal raat ko dinner pe milte hain..what say???

Rishab:- umm thik hai jaise tumhe convenient lage'muje koi problem nahi hai'ok so kal raat ko mere ghar dinner..tum or Heer pakka arhae ho done!!

Prem:- Ok done!!!

Rishab:- Acha ab mein chalta hun'

Prem:- Arre lekin tum aise kaise ja sakte ho'atleast chai ya coffee to pee kar jai..wait let me order

Rishab:- nahi prem iski koi zarurat nahi hai..muje jana hai'actually adhe ghante mein hi yahan pas mein meri ek meeting hai'muje wahan jana'to chai coffee phir kabhi ok..bye

Prem:- Ok byee

Rishab left from there.

Prem sit on his chair and thinking about Rishab's invitation'He found Rishab's behavior little bit strange..dont know why'

Prem (to himself):- shayad mein kuch zyada hi soch raha hun

He decided to call Heer and inform her about Rishab's invitation

Prem (to himself):- Isi banana madam se baat bhi ho jayegi!!!

Prem started dialing Heer's number

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In Maan Office

Heer was sitting in the conference room with rest of the board members along with Balraj discussing about their new project.

Just then Heer's phone started vibrating. She looked at her phone'it was prem. Heer looked at Balraj and others who was busy in listen the presentation. Heer again looked at her phone helplessly'she wanted to attend the call but'she can't as she was in the meeting. She unwillingly cut the call.

Prem was surprised when heer cut his call

Prem:- Heer ne phone kat diya mera??? Kyun??? Humara beech to aisi koi baat bhi nhi hui jisse wo mujhse nazar ho gai ho'to phir kya hua??? Dobara try karta hun.

Prem again dialed her number. Heer again looked at her vibrating phone'and again she disconnects his call.

Now Prem got shocked

Prem:- Yeh kya ho gaya hai heer ko'bar bar mein phone kyun kat rahi hai'ab kya kardiya maine???

Just then he received the text message from heer

"RIGHT NOW I AM IN MEETING'TALK TO YOU LATER BABU'LOVE YOU"

Prem smiled after reading the msg

Prem:- Thank God meri chatter patter mujhse gussa nahi hai'nahi to mein to khamkha tension mein agaya tha.

Then Prem replied

"OK SWEETHEART'CALL ME WHEN YOUR MEETING GETS OVER'LOVE YOU TOO BABY"

Heer smiled reading prem's reply. Balraj looked at her and saw her smiling. He nudged her. Heer looked at him. Balraj raised his eyesbrows asking her what the matter??? Why you are smiling??? Heer nodded her head saying nothing'Balraj give a strange to Heer and then again started concentrating on the presentation. Heer stuck out her tongue in embracement and started concentrating on the presentation.

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At the shopping mall

Kunal and Preet were busy in shopping. They were at Men's showroom..Looking out for some casual dresess.

Preet (whiling looking at some T-shirts):- Kunal Bhai..muje to kuch samjh nahi araha'muje to sare T-shirts hi ache lag rahe hai..please bhai thordi help karo na. bhai'bhai'.kunal bhai'

When preet didn't get response from Kunal he turned around to look whats wrong with him

And he was shocked to see that Kunal was at the corner of the showroom busy in flirting with one of the beautiful sales girl.

Preet:- Hey bhagwan'Kunal bhai ka kuch nahi ho sakta'ek achi lardki dekhi nahi ki bus..Flirting shuru.

Preet come near to kunal

Kunal (to sales girl):- Apki ankhen..apki ankhen kitni sundar'

The sales girl blushed

Kunal:- Tumhe pata hai..tumhari ankhen mujhe kiski yaad dilate hain

Sales girl (blushingly):- Kis ki???

Kunal:- Meri dadi ma ki..unki ankhen bhi bilkul tumhari tarah bohot khobsurat thi

Sales girl:- Really how sweet

Kunal:- ya..i know very sweet'.mera mann kar raha hai..mae bas tumhari ankhon mein doob jao

"Doobne ke liye peeche se mein Dhaka dun" said Preet

Seeing Preet there the sales girl immediately left from there

Kunal (to sales girl):- Arre kahan ja rahi ho'ria..sia..nia..uff kya naam tha iska'han tia'ruko to

Preet (smilingly put his arm on kunal's shoulder):- wo chali gai bhai'

Kunal frustratedly jerked his arm off his shoulder and gave a killer look

Kunal:- Preet ke bache teri hamesha galat time pe entry marne ki adat kab jayegi..huh'faltu mein mere 15 minute waste karwa diye tune

Preet:- oh c'mon kunal bhai..grow up'ab bhi na'kisi bhi sundar lardki ho dekhte ho..to bas flirting karna shuru kar dete ho.

Kunal looked at him disbelief

Kunal:- oho dekho to yeh sab bol kon raha hai..the great Preet juneja'jiske school, college or coaching center mein shayad hi koi aisi lardki bachi hogi'jiske sath inhone flirt na kia ho'huh'tu muje bol raha hai'jaise kit u barda dood ka dhula hua hai'

Preet:- Kunal bhai..meri baat or hai'or apki baat or'meri to age hai yeh sab karne ki..agar mein ab nahi karounga'to kya apki umar mein ake karounga'

Kunal (shocked):- Meri umar mein matlab??? Tu kehna kya chahata hai'mein kya budda ho gaya hun..huh

Preet:- Or nahi to kya'is umar mein ap yeh sab karenge'acha lagta hai kya'chii'

Kunal:- Preet ke bache!!! Now you are dead'.akhari baar yaad karle tujhe jisse yaad karna'.

Preet:- Akhari baar matlab???

Preet saw Kunal coming towards him folding his selved. Preet sensed what coming next and start moving backwards

Preet:- Kunal bhai apke irade muje kuch thik nahi lag rahe

Kunal:- Mere irade kya hai.. tuje abhi pata lag jayega

Then Kunal started chasing him'Preet was running here and there in showroom. All the people who were there in the showroom along with all the sales girls looked at them confusingly..Trying to understand what's going on.

As preet immediately run across the main door of the showroom and Kunal was little bit far away from him trying to catch him..but soon he collides with someone..and that someone was a girl who was just entering the showroom. Kunal immediately catch her by the waist as he sensed at the person with whom he collided was about to hit the ground.

The girl closed her eyes in the fear, as she realizes that was going to fall. After few seconds Kunal realized that the person with whom he collided was a beautiful girl'and not only that'she was right here in his arms. He was completely lost in her beauty. He unknowingly smiled at her innocence as she was continuously chanting god's name closing her eyes in the fear'holding onto him tightly. Soon the girl opened her eyes and saw herself in someone's arm, who was looking at her like an owl. All the people there in the showroom along with preet looked at the flimy scene disbelievly.

Preet (smirking):- Kunal bhai ki to nikal pardi.

Girl gets irritated the way Kunal was smilingly looking at her.

Girl (irritatedly):- Excuse me!!!

Kunal:- no respone!!!

Girl:- Hello mister'main apse baat kar rahi hun

Kunal came to his senses

Kunal:- Huh!! Kya

Girl:- kya..kya 'ap please muje chordenge..

Kunal realized their position and immediately make her stood on her feet

Kunal:- Wo I am so sorry..wo actually

Girl (angrily):- Listen an yeh sorry worry kehke faltu mein formalities karne ki zarurat nahi hai..ok..tum jaise lardko ko mein achi tarha se janti hun..

Kunal:- excuse me!!! Muj jaisa lardka matlab???

Girl:- Jee han tum jaise lardke'koi achi khasi'bholi bhali lardki dekhi nahi ki bas yes girne girane ka natak shuru.

Kunal:- Dekhiye madam ab galat samjh rahi hai' main to

Girl:- Han han bol do, main to kiska peecha kar raha tha..or uske piche piche bhagte bhagte apse galti se takra gaya..haina..yahi bologe na

Kunal:- Ya exactly..main to

Girl:- Bas bas rehne do'tum jaise lardko ki waje se hi humrara desh kaha se kahan ja raha hai'huh..bloody sick people

Saying that the girl angrily left from there and Kunal's mouth was wide open. Preet came there.

Preet (smirking):- Kunal bhai..aj pehli bar'apki takar''ap hi ki takar ki lardki se hui hai'dekho to kaise bolti band karwadi apki'ap kaho to number lekar aounga uska apke ke liye

Kunal (angrily):- Preet tu ruk tujhe bata hun mein

And then again Kunal started chasing Preet

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In Maan office

After meeting gets over all the board members left the conference room except Balraj, Mr Mehta (Balraj's manager) and Heer.

Balraj:- Heer I think hume yeh project ka kaam jald se jald shuru karwa dena chahiye'

Heer:- Ji papa bilkul thik keh rahe hai. or waise bhi humare current project ka kaam to almost pura ho hi gaya hai'

Balraj :- Hmm to Mr. Mehta ap jald se jald team ready karwaiye..or is project ke details ki copy har employee ki pas honi chahiye jo is project ke under kaam karenge ok'and Heer you're going to manage this project ok.

Heer:- Ok papa

Mr.Mehta left from there now only Heer and Balraj was there

Balraj:- Ok beta its lunch time now'go and have your lunch

Heer:- Ab lunch nahi karenge papa.

Balraj:- Nahi beta muje ek meeting mein jana hai to mera lunch bhi wahi hoga..tum lunch karlo..ok

Heer:- ok papa

Saying this Heer was about to left from there just then

Balraj (smirking):- Or han Prem se bhi yaad se baat karlenga' tumhe meeting ke beech bar bar call kar raha tha'zarura kuch important baad karni ho usse..thik hai

Heer went all red. Balraj started laughing seeing her blushing.

Heer smilingly left from there and went to her cabin

She took her phone and dialed Prem's number

Prem: (pouted):- To ab mila hai time meri Jhansi ki rani ko muje phone karne ke liye

Heer:- Premmm'mein meeting mein thi na'to batao mein kaise baat karti tumse hmm

Prem:- han han ab to muje se zyada important to tumhari meeting meeting haina..

Heer:- Prem ab tum aise baat karoge na to mein phone rakh rahi hun phir

Prem:- Arre mein to mazak kar raha tha jaan'I know meri jagaha tumhari zindagi or tumhare dil koi or nahi le sakta..am I right madam???

Heer (smilingly):- Right!!!. Anyways'tumne phone kyun kiya tha

Prem:- Arre han..jis baat ke liye call kiya thaw o to batana hi bhool gaya'wo tum Rishab ko janti hona..Rishab Rampal

Heer:- Rishab Rampal??? Han wo sanju ke bahiya right??

Prem:- Han wahi'unhone hum dono ko kal dinner pe invite kiya hai

Heer:- Hume??? Dinner par??? Kyun???

Prem:- Arre humari engagement ki khushi mein'actually hum dono ko personally congratulate karna chahte hai..isiliye.

Heer:- Hmm acha thik hai

Prem:- to kal tum koi plan mat bana ok

Heer:- ok baba..(smirking) waise tum barda utawle ho rahe ho Rampal house jane ke liye'wahan sanjana hai isiliye???

Prem:- Heeerrr

Heer:- Arre baba mazak kar rahi hun..kyunki muje pata hai ki meri jagah tumhare zindagi mein or tumhare dil mein koi or nahi le sakta'am I right sir???

Prem (laughed):- acha bachu mera hi dailoge mujh par hi mar rahi ho..

Heer:- tumne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya

Prem:- Heer muje is sawal ke jawab dene ki zarurat hai kya'

Heer (smilingly) :- Nahi..is sawal ka jawab mein janti hun..lekin phir bhi main tumhare moh se sunna chahti hun

Prem (smiled):- Heer tumhari jagha meri zindagi or mere dil mein koi or nahi le sakta

Heer closed her eyes feeling each and every word said by Prem

Prem (teasingly):- umm siwaye ek ke!!!!

Heer opened her eyes

Heer:- kiske?? Maa ke??

Prem:- Nahi maa ki jagha to hai hi hai'but mein kisi or ki baat kar raha hun

Heer:- Prem chup chap batao..tum kiski baat kar rahe ho'

Prem:- umm main na'umm kyun bataoun'jab tum mujhse milungi tabhi bataounga

Heer:- Preeem batao na please!!!!!

Prem:- Nope!!! Maine kaha na jab tum milungi tabhi bataounga'ok chalo..ab phone rakho'or abhi lunch time haina'jaldi se lunch karo..or mujhe bhi karne do'bohot bhook lag rahi'thik hai

Heer:- ok..byee love you

Prem:- Love you too baby

They disconnect their call and started having their lunch

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[So guys here is next chapter..i hope you all now enjoyed it as this chapter contain some of premeer scenes and little bit Kunal and preet's masti'.well honestly speaking I don't know when will you get the next chapter..becoz I am really busy In my college as my 2nd semesters are approaching and plus my mom is not well so I have to take care to her also'so please wait patiently'I'll update whenever time permits. I hope you all will cooperate with me. Thank you']

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update ...🤗
it was awesome ...loved it ...
waiting for the next update ...
please update soon ...
and thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry kiran tumhare last kuch chapi nahi parhe, free time milte hi parhun gi or comment kar dun gi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW loved the update
But this rishab makes me scared
Looking forward to the next part
thanks for the pm

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