We Belong Together - LAST CHAPTER pg. 51 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
absolutely brilliant totally loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
u r d best karina
just luvd d update so much
viren didnt even boder about jeevs bruises
i know jeevika is hurt
hope she is fine and viren realises his mistakes
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was damn good
loved it
amazing
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update kays...loved it
nicely written
It was so heart wrenching to see jeevika in so much
I kind of angry at Viren...hope viren comes soon to get jeevika out of depression
can't see jeevika like this😭😭
can't wait to read more
continue soon n thanx for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
You r an amazing writer
I luv this story
This was an amazing update
Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago



wow that was amazing
feeling too bad for jeevika
viren is leaving her alone
felt my heart aching for her
amazing update btw
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read all the three parts.
They were absolutely brilliant.
The way you've expressed everything is simply beautiful.
Aw! I pity Jeevika. And the thing she's doing is definitely wrong. Viren's so busy to realise all this. I hope he gets to know it soon.
Keep up the great work. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

*** chapter 4 ***

virat - "Manvi control yourself. Right now we have to think and be there for bhabhi. Gosh how I wish bhai was here right now"

viren - "Virat, Manvi whats going on?"

Manvi and Virat saw Viren at the entrance of the Vadhera Mansion. Manvi's emotions were out of control. She ran to Viren and hugged him. Viren was confused but just comforted her unaware of what was going on.

viren - "Virat what is wrong? Did you say something to Manvi?"

virat - "Actually bhai its'.

Just then Viren's phone interrupted again.

Manvi let go letting Viren take the call. Virat comforted Manvi in the meantime. It had been several hours since the incident this morning and it haunting the two of them more than ever.

v - "Virat Manvi I'll be back in half an hour. I need to go pick up some files from office"

Viren was about to leave when Manvi held his wrist.

manvi - "Jiju you cannot go. I need you here" he said thinking it was one of their silly jokes again.

Viren - "Manvi this is important. I promise I will be back as soon as possible and we will sort Virat out"

Virat - "Bhai you have to stop. Do you even know what is happening. You are forgetting about your first and for most priority. Something is wrong with bhabhi and we can't figure out what"

Just then Viren started remembering the night before and how he saw those scars on his wife's hands. He suddenly realized what a horrible husband he was. How could he not remember to question her, or remember that. He ran to his bedroom to meet and comfort his wife. He didn't know what was going on, all he knew was he had to make it better before it worst worst. Or was the damage already too far done to be controlled now. He tried opening the door, unable to. Locked outside was Viren with Manvi and Virat. Manvi was now in bad shape. Unaware of anything going on with Jeevika in the first place, she was now disheartened. What had her di done now? Viren and Virat kept banging on the door to come to no response, no conclusion. They had no idea but to break in. Viren's strength was seeing by him pushing to get to his wife, yet his inner strength was vanished. What had he done'. She was his responsibility and he had his priorities all wrong. They eventually were able to get in and all six eyes, four of them being wet were scanning all over the room to see nothing. Where was she gone' Where was the most perfect wife gone? Where was the most caring sister gone? Where was the most loving bhabhi gone?

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Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Remembered to un-res 🤣

Dude You dont know how much I'm in love with this update like seriously, it's amazing 👏

I'm glad that they stop Viren or else he would have left 😔

Everything you wrote is just described perfectly... You made us feel that moment going on with your story 👍🏼
Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

unres

Karinaaa i cant even count how many times i read this SS
its just a fab one...your too good yaar
this update was so touching too
Thank God Viren remembered about last night
i really hope Jeevika is fine..im so desperate to read the next update
i dnt even know what to say honestly
im short of words keeni meany😊
hope we get the next update sooner
cant wait to read more <3 love ya <3
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo😃
Edited by jeevi7 - 12 years ago

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