IPKKND: 30 Days - Day 31: Page 71

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

it was superb!!...

read all chapters in one go!!...

OMG!!...Arshi r so naughty in dis one!!...😳😳

all family members saw dem kissing!!...omg!!...poor khushi!!...she thought no body had saw dem!!...😉😉

beautifully written dear...

just loved it...

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@.Boss.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Really nice cute SS it was! Loved it!

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@..mrinalini..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Woah😛This was something!!😃

This is one amazing FF😳

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

fab story..!!

loved every bit of it..

the way you wrote...expressed every single feelings of Arnav and Khushi from the beginning to end...

awesome...!!

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Hello Nayika!

Well you've been bookmarked for the LONGEST time. I finally sat down and read quite a few of your works one after another and now I am here to comment! :D

This had me blushing in every chapter for one reason or the other! Hehe.

Yet you made it passionate and a wonderful read, not vulgar or displeasing as some mature OS, SS, and FFs out there.

Towards the end I was wishing for more days in a month... along with more rooms in that house! Hehe. I'm completely shameful, I know it, but this it fully and completely on you my dear!

When I read FFs like these I wish I could have been there from the beginning commenting on every part, but alas I wasn't :(

But I'm here now. So here are my comments! :D

And as per my recent obsession a quote for you -

"When we read a story, we inhabit it. The covers of the book are like a roof and four walls. What is to happen next will take place within the four walls of the story. And this is possible because the story's voice makes everything its own." - Keeping a Rendezvous.

And you most certainly trapped in the four walls of this story through my computer. :)