VriMar OS: Realization

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REALIZATION

"The number u r trying to call is not responding" amar was calling Charlie from past one hour… "wat the hell.. where the hell is she?" amar tried for the last time hoping dat she will attend his call this time… "hello amar" Charlie said finally picking up the phone… "where r u yaar Charlie?? Kabse call kar raha hoon.." he asked.. "awww.. sorry amar woh na hum sab bff ke shooting ke liye bahar aaye the aur yaha bohot masti chalu hai.. so phone pe dhyan hi nahi gaya.." she replied while laughing.. "Charlie aaj hume nb ki rehearsal karni thi… tumhe yaad hai ya nahi.. aur agar tumhari shooting khatam ho gayi hai toh tumhe nb ke rehearsal ke liye aana chahiye tha na.." he said in little bit angry tone.. "sorry baby mein ek kaam karti hoon mein abhi nikalti hoon.. aadhe ghante mein aa jaungi okay?" she asked… "okay.. bye" saying this he cut the call.. he was at d3 set sitting on stairs… just then vrinda noticed him n went near him… "hey amar wat r u doing here?? Pack up ho chukka hai sab chale gaye hai aur tumhari toh aaj nb ki rehearsal thi na?? phir??" vrinda asked curiously… "tumhe yaad tha?" amar asked surprisingly.. "haa… kyun?" vrinda asked… "nahi kuch nahi.." amar answered… vrinda sat beside him n asked "kya hua amar?? Hum dost hai na??? toh tum mujhse share kar sakte ho.. tum kuch khoye khoye se lag rahe ho.. kya baat hai??" amar looked at her with small smile on his face "tumhe kaise pata ke main khoya khoya hoon??" he asked.. "areee dosti ki hai toh nibhani toh padegi na" she said with a wide smile.. "yeah right" he said while smiling… "waise tum mujhe bohot jaanne lagi ho haa" he continued… "haa rey ki gf hoon na.. toh amar ko bhi thoda bohot jaanne lagi hoon" she said while laughing.. "ohh toh yeh baat hai haa.. good" he said.. "btw Charlie kab tak aa rahi hai?" vrinda asked.. "omg tum sach mein itna kaise jaan leti ho mujhe?? Deemag toh nahi padhti na?? hmmm??" he asked.. "naa.. dil padhti hoon" she said wid a cute smile.. n amar was lost in her for a moment.. "kya hua?" she asked him.. "haaa??? Nahi kuch nahi" he said… "waise ek baat batao tumhare liye pyaar kya hai?" he asked… "pyaar..hmmm.. agar aap kisise pyaar karte hai aur yeh na bata paaye ke kyun pyaar karte hai toh who pyaar hai mere liye.. pyaar ko samjha thodi na jaata hai.. use toh bas mehsoos kiya jaata hai.. tum soch rahe hoge ke kya filmy baatein kar rahi hai bt seriously pyaar toh aise hi hota hai.. full on pagalpanti boss.. aur sabke liye pyaar ki definition alag hoti hai bt sabka meaning ek hi hota hai.. agar aapke liye koi raat ke 3 baje ice cream laaye toh woh bhi pyaar hota hai aur usi ice cream ko khane ke baad itni raat ko ice cream mangne ke liye galiya de toh who bhi pyaar hi hota hai.. aur kya batau.." she stopped n saw him…. He was so lost in her talk dat he didn't notice when he started staring at her.. "amar? Kya hua? Itna bura kaha kya maine?" she asked wid a cute pout.. amar came out of his trance n said "are nahi.. bohot achha kaha yaar.." virnda smiled at him n said "chalo main nikalti hoon.. Charlie aa jayegi abhi don't worry" she stood up n started walking.. "nope.. she won't" amar said.. "huhh?? Vrinda turned back while asking.. "woh use kuch kaam tha toh woh nahi aayegi… uska msg aaya hai abhi" he said.. "ohhh.. okay thike toh tum bhi chalo ghar.." vrinda said.. " no main thoda dance karunga n then I'll go.. btw vrinda ummm tumhe jaana hai kya kahi?? Agar nahi toh thodi der ruko na.. mujhe achcha lagega" he said.. "okay… rukti hoon.." vrinda agreed.. "btw tum kaun se gaane pe dance karne wale ho iss baar??" she asked… "pata nahi.. wahi toh decide karna tha.. par shayad aaj bhi nahi hoga…" he replied wid a sad face.. "awww.. kyun nahi hoga.. tum na pehli baar mohobbat ki hai song pe dance karo Charlie ke sath woh slow wala hai na uspe.. " she said.. "kaun sa I don't know yaar" he asked.. "areee tum ko yaad nahi?? Ruko mere mobile pe hai who song abhi play karti hoon she said n searched the song n played it..


Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.

he looked at her n she looked at him too..

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.

(she smiled but he was lost in her eyes..)


Dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai

(she felt his intense gaze on her n blushed.. b'cuz of his intense gaze her mobile fell down n both bent on their knees to pick up that mobile so their hand touched while picking it.. n at the same time both looked at each other..)

Aankhein doobi doobi si surmayee madham,
Jheelen paani paani hai bass tum aur hum,

(both felt uncomfortable so tried to stand up bt their forehead collide wid each other.. n again they looked at each other..)

Hmmm baat badi hairat ki hai,
[Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai] – (x2)

Finally vrinda succeeded to turn off the music player… both were embarrassed n awkward silence was killing both of them so vrinda said while breaking the silence "main chalti hoon.. bye" she ran from there…

Now amar was in deep thoughts… "kya hua tha mujhe.. main aise kaise kar sakta hoon.. I love Charlie right… par kyun haa kyun ke woh bohot achchi hai.. sweet hai, cute hai bt vrinda ne toh kaha tha ke hum kisise pyaar kyun karte hai iska jawaab na mile toh iska matlab hai ke hum pyaar mein hai.. bt main kyun jo vrinda keh rahi thi woh nahi mehsoos kar paya Charlie ke liye.. she is a very good girl then why..?? abhi bhi yaad hai uss raat Charlie ne mujhe phn kar ke kaha tha 1 baje ke use chocolates khane hai bt kyun maine bina soche kaha ke mujhe neend aa rahi hai kal dunga.. kyun main daud ke nahi gaya… aur aaj vrinda ke sath aisa kyun tha main.. I was staring at her man.. like wat will she think about me.. bt mujhe ho kya gaya hai? Kyun vrinda mujhe itna samajhti hai.. kyun aaj Charlie na hoke bhi main vrinda ke sath khush tha aur toh aur use jaane se rok bhi raha tha… kya ho gaya hai mujhe.. kahi yeh kisi cheez ka realization toh nahi??"

at the same time vrinda was walking on a road.. "amar.. bahar se rey jaisa nahi hai bt dil se bilkul rey.. d3 mein rey bhi agar taani ke sath kuch mu or jhagda hua toh upset ho jata hai aur yaha amar bhi charlie ke sath jhagda hua toh upset hota he.. par amar he bohot achcha.. kabhi kisi ka ghussa kisi dusre pe nahi utarta.. mujhse kitne achchese baat ki abhi.. par woh song play karne ke baad mujhe kya ho gaya tha.. main amar ko aise kyun dekh rahi thi.. tujhe aise nahi karna chahiye vri aakhir amar ki gf hai charlie aur tu.. par maine purposely kuch nahi kiya woh toh bass pata nahi kab amar ki aankhon mein kho gayi.. vri arghh stop thinking about dat.. par par kya yeh yeh kisi cheez ka realization toh nahi??" she asked herself..

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so this was it guys... how was it??? i dun knw why bt i really wanted to write this OS... guys i'm so sorry if i did anything wrong... i'm not at all against charlie jus i thought this concept n wrote it.. so really sorry if i hurt anyone...


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Angel-luvs-s thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey it was really nice..though I really love Charlie and charmar I still liked it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelitha98

Hey it was really nice..though I really love Charlie and charmar I still liked it a lot

thank you so much i was so worried actually while posting it... bt thank you so much... n sorry if i hurt you..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow such a sweet os kady tai ...luvd it to d core keep writting mre on vrimar 😊
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Awww.. This was so damn cute n sweet.. I so loved it!! I really don't know if we can make OSs on, you now, the artistes.. But this was AMAZING! It was so damn beautifull.. Though I didn't get which song it was.. Please post the link.of the song if possible! Being a die hard VriMar fan, I completely loved it!! Please DO write more.. Muaahh. Love you for this!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow awesome! I like charmar aswell but really liked this os... Nice thinking... Awesome work!
Luved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it soo muchh <3 it was jus amazing =D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW !! Now this is what you call different and I really enjoyed it being a hard-core TaaRey/VriMar fan ... Really nicely done work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really like it. if only this would happen i would be the happiest person in the world!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey pumpkin it was really pretty nice yaar... Aww I tou top to bottom in love with your this ff... Dil ki baat keh di tumne tou yaar... I always think this whenever I watch Vrimar's interview ... Sachi mein... I know that is not possible but sochne mein Kya jaata hai... R u going to update it or not ... But Plz-2 update jaroor karna Sweety :)

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