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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update di 😊 maan dnt u knw how to talk to gals 😡 poor my geet loved it Lovely update di 😊 maan dnt u knw how to talk to gals 😡 poor my geet loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is really good
meera and geet became friends
but mann he is really hyper yaar he shouts on geet she got so much scared
and also started crying
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome upd. loved it...fab...superb...tfd pm...dii...cont.soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
he made her cry💔
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part

emotional one

poor geet

waiting for next

thnx for pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry 4 late comment
awesome update😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear...Uff Maan aur uska gussa
one request dear - try to update more regularly...such a long gap breaks flow of the story...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 4

  • Staff announces for various activities for whole week
  • Sports
  • Music( instruments n singing)
  • Dance
  • Painting.. so on

There was hustle bustle in whole college..

Pinky , Geet , Meera decides to register their names according to the interests..

Pinky enrolls in dance, Geet in music and Meera in sports..

Aadi wanted to enroll in painting but Pinky forces him to participate in dance..

Yash was a true sportsman.. He enrolled himself for sports.. vaise bhi uske paas koi option to tha nahi coz Meera participated in it.

Maan was all-rounder but deeply in Love with Music.. every other student Knew him as a good football player but only Yash and Meera knew his love for Music.

Teachers put the lists of all the students with their respective pairs on the notice board..

Meera , Yash knew aboot them.. Pinky however managed to make Aadi her partner.. pinky was too excited..

Geet was just shocked to see Maan her partner. The feeling was same for Maan..

Geet goes to mam to request to change her partner.. "but no changes can be made" was the sentence from the teacher.

Maan ko ye baat pata chalte hi, vo aur gussa ho jata hai.

Maan : vo samjhti ka hai apne aap ko..

Yash : geet are bhai, vo geet hai to apne aap ko shaktimaan to nahi samjhegi naa..

Maan: kya bakwaas karra hai.. aaj kal kiske sath jyada ghumra hai? Meera to aisi nahi hai.. kahi vo peeche wali chinky to nahi na..

Yash laughs : nahi, " mai patnivrata pati hu "

Maan : aya badaa, mujhe batayega.. mai kya tujhe janta nahiii

Yash : but tujhe geet ke sath hi ab participate karna padega.

Day 1

All the students starts practicing for the competitions.. except Maan and Geet.. both of them were not involving in the practice..

Geet was sitting in Classroom and Maan was as usual busy in his ownself.

Meera: geet tumhe practice karni hogi, college ke khatir.. mujhe pata hai ki u r nt comfortable, but u have to dear..

Geet : mujhe mann nahi hai,,

Meera : but u hv to, tum janti ho ki koi aur raasta nahi hai

Geet nodes with sad face.

Maan : mujhe to koi aur ladki chall jati yaar, itni beauties hai college me.. but Geet kyon?

Yash: yaar , achi hai vo, bholi hai yaar.. meera kha jayegi mujhe nahi to mai hi pata leta geet ko..

Maan with a bit of jealous expressions : ooyyy ye kya bolra hai ? .. tu aur geet.. nahi ho sakta.. vaise bhi vo tumhe ghaas bhi nahi dalegi.

Yash : tum bade jaan gaye geet ko, vo bh ek hi mulakat me ..

" pal me hui mulakat,

Jaan gaye hum tumhe

Tum hamare siva kisi ki nahi ho sakti,

Balle balle , balle balle'"

Waah waah kya baat, kya baat , kya baat..

Maine shayari likhi hai, vo bhi itni achiii..

" mai shayar to nahiii ,

Magar aee hasseenn'."

Maan : buss karr yaar, kitna pakayega.. kuch to soch tere na sahi but mere image ke bare me.. tu mera dost hai,

'MAAN SINGH KHURANA' kaa

Yash : acha jaa ab practice ko, jaa.. vo wait karri hogi aur sunn pareshaan mat karna use, achi ladki hai..

Maan talks to Geet : heyy !!! m Maan.. Wats ur name ?

Geet : kya aap nahi jante ? aur haan mai janti hu apka naam..

Maan : vo toh sabhi jante hai, mai itna famous jo hu..

Geet :hum kal se practice start karenge.. mai chahti hu ki aap bhi time pe aye.. is it ok with you?

Maan :ya ok.. bt ek baat yaad rakhna ki mai majburi me tumhare sath hu..

Geet looks at Maan .. for a sec Maan jus looks at her and her beautiful brown eyes suddenly with a noise he gets distracted and moves his sight.

The day ends..

Day 2 :

Yash and maan enters auditorium.. Meera was waiting for Yash, as he was late again..

Geet was standing besides Meera.. Geet was in blue colour dress with silver bangles and small earings.. she had applied kajal and a light pink colour lipstick with gloss..

Yash : geet ur looking stunning today.. kya yahi sabko maar dalne ka iraada hai..

Geet with shy smile: thanks Yash..

Meera : aur mai.. mai kaisi lagri hu..

Maan : tum to hamesha hi the best lagti ho.. meers

Geet looks at Maan the same time.. Maan looks at geet and they had an eyelock and then Maan puts his head down for a sec..

Pinky enters with Aadi in hall..

Pinky : chalo chalo chalo.. practice time hai

Geet : aaj kal to mere sath aana hi band kar diya hai tune /

Pinky softly : arre yaar abhi to gadi patri par chadhi hai, thoda aage to badhau.. firr aati hu na, mai kaha bhaagi jari hu.. aur tu to meri sabse achi dost hai..

Meera : haan chalte hai..

Everybody left the hall.. maan n geet were left in that hall with other few competitors..

Maan : aaj ka kya plaan hai ?

Geet : hume pehle song decide karna padega, solo and duet dono..

Maan : ye decide vagre karne ka kaam tum karo.. I will just sing and put the stage on fire..

Teachers : we want that all students should know each other well, because in duet songs , there should be a good comfort level..

One random student : sirrr date pe lee jaye kya ??

Teacher shouts..

Geet : mai ye date vagre pe nahi aane wali..

Maan : to mai kaha tumhe leke jane wala hu, mai sochra hu ki Pari ko le jau.. jo hamare class me hai..

Geet looks at him with anger..

Then they starts practicing..

Day 3 :

Geet was standing besides Pari.


Maan : hey sunshine.. goodmorning..

Geet : mujhe nahi pasand ki aap mujhe aise sab bulaye..

Maan : par maine tumhe kaha hi nahi.. I said it to Pari

Maan : goodmorning sunshine..

Pari : u said it to me ?? she gets flat totally..

Maan was in white t shirt and blue jeans with black shoes..


Geet gets annoyed and disappears from there..

Maan goes close to Geet.. geet starts shivering slightly..then Maan turns n asks her.. ready darling ?? tumhe MAAN SINGH KHURANA ke sath gaana hai, its not a joke..

Geet : I have selected songs for both of us. If you feel ok, then u can sing that.

Maan : ok, shoot

Geet : for you " RAABTA " from Agent vinod movie and for me " SUNA SUNA LAMHA LAMHA " from Krishna Cottage

MAAN : wait wait wait jus a sec.. It's not MSK style..

That song doenst suits MAAN SINGH KHURANA.. kuch mere type socho.. ya phir agar mujhe janti nahi to, mere kareeb aao aur jaano mujhe.. I M HOT

GEET : aap honge HOT, mai jalna nahi chahti to hum duur hi thik hai..

Aur vaise bhi mai bhi aapke type ki nahi hu jaise ki ye song..

Aapke liye " I HATE LOVE STORY " ok now ?

MAAN : perfect.. tum to boht jaldi jaan gai mujhe

GEET : aap jaise logo ko janne ki jarurat nahi hoti..

MAAN holds her hands tight, griping her shoulders.. he was angry now//

MAAN : jab tak kisi ko jante nahi, tab tak unke baare me faisla nahi lete.. u dnt know me, dnt dare to judge me..

Duet ka kya ??

GEET pushes him aside and answers : hum tumhare style wala hi gaayenge nahi to fir se tumhe problem hogi.. to we wil sing " ladki kyon naa jane kyon ladko se nahi hoti "

MAAN : I m impressed aahaaan.. tum to mera mind bhi read karne lagi ho..

SIR : boys nw stop flirting and start practicing..

BOYS : inko to hamari khatiya khadi karni hai, boys to SIR : arre sir , boys ka to janm sidh adhikar hai flirting..

They all starts practicing..

DAY 4 :

Day starts with the whole group..

Now coz of competition, all of them became friend except MAAN n GEET.

They were all chit chatting.. GEET was also talking to all and also doing masti, meera was observing her..

MAAN entered very dashingly..

He was surprised to see GEET active and talking to all..

Maan said to himself " ye ladki to mujhe pagal bana degi.. jab sochta hu ki mai ise jaan gaya tab iska alag chehra samne aata hai " he gets drove in her smile ..

MEERA saw Maan too, she smiled and called him..

" MAAN come here, we are waiting for you.."

As soon as Geet sees Maan, she gets quiet.. and doent talk a single word, she only answered when something was asked.

Everybody got dispersed , for there respective works.

GEET was practicing : " Suna suna lamha lamha

Meri raahein tanha tanha

Aa kar mujhe tum thaam lo

Manzil teri dekhe rasta"

MAAN gets closer : mai to kab se ready hu.. tum hi nahi aati mere paas..

GEET gets angry and she decides to shout on him.. she turns to him and says

" aap na " bt then she sees, Maan was actually

Actually saying those lines to Pari..

Suddenly Geets anger changes into jealousy..

Maan was observing Geet with His corner of Eye..

Someone calls Pari, so Maan comes to Geet..

Maan : subah to boht khilkhila rahi thi aap, jab mai samne aata hu to kaapne kyon lagti ho ?

Geet : mai nai kaapti..

Maan moves more close to her.. she moves back ( away from him ).

Maan gets more close to her and catches her shoulder with one hand.

He keeps a finger on her lips..

She gets melt and goes into Him.. Maan holds her more close to himself and says " tum to kehri thi ki tum kaapti nahi, firr ab ??

Geets breathing goes higher and higher..

Maan : " tumahri to dhadkane bhi tej hori hai " iska matlab kya samjhu ?

Geet was still quite..

MAAN : tumhe jalan hoti hai na, jab mai Pari ke kareeb jata hu tab ??

Geet forcefully pushes him back side.. she gets rid off him..

Geet runs back to the main auditorium, where others were practicing..

She sees back , but Maan doesn't appears there.

The Day ends..

Precap : Geet and Maan practice duet

Previous Part: 3

Next Part : 5(below)


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Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago
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PART 5

At night :

Geet was sitting in her bedroom ( window side ) and Maan was walking in his garden.. they two were into their thoughts..

Maan was thinking about Geet's sweet and innocent smile which makes him also smile'

Geet was thinking "Am I jealous No No Never"

Day 5

Day starts with pinky, aadi , meera and yash.. now pinky and aadi were officially couple.. aadi was holding burger for pinky and pinky was talking continuously..

Meera : ye dono to laila majnu hai..

Yash : bichara aadi.. kaha pehle books me tha, ab burgers and pizzas me dooba rehta hai..

Meera hits yash : chup kuch bhi bol rahe ho , pinky boht sweet hai..

Yash : haan sweet to rahegi hi na, itne sweets jo khati hai..

Geet comes in pink colour dress with golden border.. and wearing few golden bangles..


Maan was just looking at Geet, when she was entering. Meera teases Maan n says : kyu kaha kho gaye.. setting laga du kya ? achi laadki hai..

Maan : maan ko achi ladkiya nahi pasand.. vo mere type me nahi aate..

Meera : can you tell me what is ur type ? Till then Geet reaches there.

Maan : some one Hot, someone not shy, someone who wears minis and jeans.. and I know one of them..

Geet ye saari baate sun leti hai.. aur vo upset hojati hai..

Practice time

Geet was a bit upset to uska mann nahi lagra tha.. unhe duet practice karni thi..

Maan : " ladki kyo naa jaane kyon ladko se nahi hoti,

Sochti hai jyada, kum vo samjhti hai'

Geet was unable to sing at that moment.. so she takes a break and goes to another place..

Maan goes there.. Maan : tumne mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya ?

Geet : kaunsa sawaal ? Maan : jo tum kal adhura chodke bhaag gai thi ..

Geet : mujhe nahi pata.. and she tries to run.. but

Maan catches her hand and holds tight and gets closer to her.

Maan : tumhe koi farak nahi padta, mai kuch bhi karu usse..

Geet : nahi mujhe koi farak nahi padta.. Mr maan singh Khurana..

Maan leaves her hand at that time..

Geet : aap jao apne pari ke paas , jo chote chote kapde pehnti hai, minis , jeans pehnti hai, aur HOT bhi hai..

Maan smirks looks aside and again looks at Geet " to yeh problem hai"

They again goes for the practice.. she faints there, as she had nothing since last night..

Maan gets worried.. he picks her up and rushes to Rest room ..

He waits there for Geet to wake up..

Geet : aap yahi pe hai, aap gaye nahi ?

Maan : mai tumhe yaha aise chodke kaha jaa sakta hu.. sab apne practice me busy hai.

Geet : aapki pari bhi waitkarri hogi naa..'

Maan keeps his finger on her lips and say " sshhh " chup bilkul chup "

Tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya jo tum faint ho gai ?

Geet : khaya hai naa.. chalo ab practice karte hai..

Maan comes to her close to help her get up from bed..

Geet : aap rehne do.. Maan : chu bola naa, tumhe meri madat ki jarurat hai..

Maan holds her from back and catches her hand with his another hand.. and at that time they have a eyelock.. ( maahiii moment )

Day ends'.

Day 6:

All were busy practicing hard, as next day was the competitions..

Maan and Geet were full ready to hit the floor with their musical voices..

Maan : kuch khayi ho aaj , arre roj nahi utha paunga, boht moti ho tum..

Geet says haaawww : tum mujhe moti bulre ho ?.. moti hogi tumhari Pari..

Maan smirks again n says : har baat pe pari ko bich me kyu lati ho?

Baat to tumhare mere bich ki hai.. u know, hamare bich ki hai ..

Geet repeats : hamare beech ki' hamare beech ki kya ? ek min.. mai aur tum HUM kaise ho gaye

Maan : u hurt me a lot.. mujhe laga ki ab tak hum dost ban gaye hai..

Geet : tum aur mere dost, oo pleasee ' haaahaaa ( she laughs a lot).. majak mat karo..

Maan melts when sees her laughing..

Maan: ek baat kahu ?

Geet : I know, mai boht acha hasti hu..

Maan : nahi' tum jab hasti ho to boht sundar dikhti ho..

with this Geet gets shy.. and looks down..

Maan doesn't like that geet was not looking at him, so to get attention, he moves more closer to her

Maan : haan sahi to kehri ho, hum dost nahi ban sakte kabhi..

Geet stops laughing and looks at him with wide eyes..

Maan: hamare beech dosti se kuch jyada hai.. hum sirf dost nahi ban sakte..Ye kehkar Maan uske aur kareeb jata hai.. itne ki dono ek dusre ki saanso ko mehsus karte hai..

Maan use puchta hai firr se : sach me koi farak nahi padta tumhe ? Jab mai pari ke kareeb jata hu tab?

Geet gets sad and looks down.. Maan holds her chin and make her look at him ..

Maan : tum boht achii ho geet to kabhi udaas mat hona, kisi ke wajah se nahi, mere bhi nahi.. mujhe nahi pata ki hum kya hai , ekdusre ke liye kitne important hai but haan hume ye competiton jitna hai aur hum jarur jitenge.. ye mera wada hai tumse' ( Mahiii moment )..

End of the day'

Precap : the day of competition'

Previous Part: 4(above)

Next Part: 6


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Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago

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