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Posted: 11 years ago
omg he just left her on the road all alone
get together was so nice loved the way they teased each other
it seems like abhijeet's advice is working
hospital scene was nice liked arjun's concern & fear
poor riya she is still taking sleeping pills
cont soon
Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant update :) loved it
scenes at sam's house were lovely
awww arjun drank salt wali chai and didn't even complain
riya was playing guitar and singing :) great
and arjun was staring at riya
love how everyone was teasing chotu
the song chotu dedicated was so funny
and they even teased arjun
omg how could arjun leave her like that yea she asked the wrong question but still
i am glad abhijeet was there for her
arjun was feeling bad for what he did to riya
loved riya's anger on arjun
omg riya got hurt
loved arjun's concern for riya and he even hugged her
how sweet he made her eat the food and also gave her medicines
love the part when she opened her eye to check if arjun is there or not
continue soon
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Next Morning:-

Arjun is taking his breakfast..Riya comes from her room..she is also ready for office..

Arjun(turned back):-Riya?tum ?kaha ja rahi ho..?

Riya:-Office aur kaha..

Arjun:-what?tumhe rest ki zarurat he..chalo jao..apne room me wapas jao..

Riya:-nahi..muze office jana he..

Arjun:-Why don't you hear me..?jao..

Riya:-nahiii..

Arjun walked towards her..

Arjun:-tumhe meri baat manani padegi..I am you boss

Riya:-woh office me… "Sir"..office ke bahar aap muze order nahi de sakhte..

Arjun:-Ofcourse ..de sakhta ..I m ur …(he stops ..He is about to say that he is her husband..)umm..dekho me jo kuch bhi keh raha hu..tumhari bhalayi ke liye keh raha hu..

Riya:-mein ghar me bore ho jaugi..

Arjun:-nahi..mein sonali se baat karta hu..woh tumhare pass aa jayegi..

Riya(loudly):-no..no..no..me office ja rahi hu..

Arjun:-(uff ye ladki kabhi nahi sudharegi..)ok mein tumhe drop karta hu..

Riya:-ok..(but suddenly she remember how he leave her on the road that day)no..no.not ok..mein aap ki gadi mein nahi aaugi..

Arjun:-Riya..tum fir se suru ho gayi…yaad he..kal tum meri hi gadi me ghar aayi thi..

Riya:-woh to aap ne zabardati se muze..

Arjun:-are haa..mein toh bhul hi gaya tha..thik he..(he come close to her)toh fir aaj bhi waise hi tumhe office bhi lekar jauga..

Riya:-no..

Arjun(move more near to her..now they are so close to each other):-haa bilcul..

Riya:-aap aisa nahi kar sakte…

Arjun:-mein bilcul aisa hi kar sakta hu..

He is about to lift her.

Riya:-ok ok ok..mein khud hi aati hu..

Arjun:-that's good..par agar tumhe chalne me taklif ho rahi ho toh mein..gadi tak tumhe..

Riya(hurrily):-nahi nahi..mein toh bilcul thik hu..now I can run also..

Arjun smirk..

 

ETF Office:-

Rathod:-Riya..muze laga tha kit um aaj chutti logi..?

Riya:-nahi sir..mein ab bilcul thik hu..

Shree:-tu ne aaj dressing kiya ya nahi..?

Riya:-haa..Office aate waqt hum hospital gaye the..

Chotu(slowly):-muze toh yakin nahi hota..Arjun sir teri kitani care le rahe he..

Riya:-haa..muze bhi yakin nahi hota..

They start working..After sometime..the office attendant come..& give her a bouquet..that are her favorite pink colour roses..she love them..

Shree:-Ritz..kisne flowers bheje he..?

Chotu:-kahi Arjun sir ne toh nahi..?

Riya(surprisingly she look to chotu) :-kya..?nahii..aisa nahi ho sakta..suraj west se aa jayega..par aisa nahi ho sakta..

She took the card on bouquet..

" This is just for you..my dear

     Get well soon ..Ritz..

      Stay safe..

      I will be always with you…

      Miss You..dear..

                          Yours,

                             Jeet   "

Riya(smile):-tumhare siway aur koi ye bhej hi nahi sakta.. jeet..

Riya to Shree:-iss me uss flowerpot me arrange kar deti hu..

Shree:-ok..

She turned to the flowerpot which is placed on behind there table..chotu leaves from there as Rathod call him in his cabin..Shree get a call..he goes outside of conference hall to receive it..

There is only Riya..Arjun comes to the room..he observe she is doing flower arrangement & humming a song happily..

His sight get shifted to the files on table..he realize there is a card…he slowly move & read the card..He feel anger is filling his heart..

He is about to throw the card..but he realize Riya is turning back..he put the card as it is..

Riya who is in nice mood & have smile on her face..see Arjun is looking to her..

Riya:-Arjun sir..look these flowers are really cute..aren't ?they can make smile to anyone..

Arjun(mutters):-yaa(yeh flowers ke liye khush ye..ya Abhijeet ne bheje he isliye..)

Riya:-don't you like them?

(Arjun lost in his thoughts)

Riya:-mein aapse puch rahi thi ke..

Arjun:-kam pe dyan do Riya..

He leaves…

 

The 2-3 days go hectic for them..they have lot of work to do..but the good thing was Riya's wound get cured..& she is feeling fine..

 

They all reach to office at 9:30..it was Rathod who urgently call them..

Rathod:-guys..ek bahot hi complicated case hamare pass aya he..kuch terrorists ne kuch baccho ko kidnap kar rakha he..aur woh unke badle me ek terrorist ki rihai chahte he..aur ye case hame sopa gaya he..

Riya:-sir..unhe kis ki rihai chahiye..?

Rathod:-"Farhad khan" ki

Shree:-OMG..wahi Farhad khan jisko pakadane ke liye bada mission hath me liya gaya tha..aur jisme 20 soldiers "shahid" ho gaye..

Rathod:-haa..ye wahi he..

Riya:-par usse kaise chod sakte he..?jo itana bada terrorist he..jis ke wajas se 20 soldiers ki jaan gayi..usse ham aise kaise chod de..

Rathod:-You are right Riya..aur isiliye..guys..ye case hamare pass diya gaya he..hame unn baccho ko waha se nikalne ki koshish karni hogi..& the real problem is..ki hame ye bhi nahi pata ki waha kitane terrorists he..?

They all are thinking about he case..

Chotu:-waha par kitane bacche honge sir..?

Rathod:-unn terrorists ne toh 40 baccho ki baat ki..

Riya:-aur unhe kaha kidnap kiya gaya he..?

Rathod:-school me..aur unke sath 4 teachers bhi he..samaz me nahi aa raha ki kya kare..

Arjun:-simple he Rathod…hum me se kisi ko waha jana hoga..lekin kisi ko shak nahi hona chahiye ki ham ETF se he..

Aur sari information yaha par shift karni hogi..taki hum apana agala plan bana sakhe..

Riya(excitedly..)wow..thats great plan..

Arjun smrik at her..

Riya who is very excited to do this job..

Riya:-sir mein ye kaam karugi..

Arjun:-what?

Riya:-Rathod sir..I can easily do it..

Rathod:-ok..

Arjun:-it's not ok..

Riya get angry..as she know what he is going to say..she will come to I some difficulty…blah..blah..blah..

Riya(angrily):-why?ab aap kahege ki mein jaha bhi jati hu musibat me fas jati hu..& all such..

Arjun:-mein aisa nahi keh raha hu..mein kehna chahta hu ki tum khud hi musibat ko bulava deti ho...

Riya(angrily):-what do you mean by this..?mein jaan buzkar problem create karti hu…

Arjun(angrily & get up):-what the hell Riya..?mein tum issue kyo bana rahi ho..

Riya(angry):-am I creating issue..?or you are creating it..?aap hamesha muze underestimate karte he..

Arjun:-what?mein ne kahi bhi tumhe underestimate nahi kiya..

Riya:-nahi kiya..yad kijiye..aapne pichale mission me bhi yahi kaha tha..aapne Sikandar ke case me bhi yahi kaha tha..aur aap aaj bhi yahi keh rahe he..balki meine uss case me aur Sikandar ke case me bhi apna kam bilcul perfect kiya tha..par usaki tariff toh durki baat he..lekin fir se wahi sab aap bol rahe he..

Arjun is thinking..why he should tell her that he don't want to underestimated her..he has faith on her abilities..

Rathod:-Riya..Arjun is not trying to underestimate you ..He is just care about you..

Riya:-no ..he don't care about me ..he just care about his mission..he has fear that I will spoil all your plans.

Arjun(angry):-Riya..stop it now..

Riya:-you also stop it then..

Rathod(loudly):-you both stop it immigiately…kya ho gaya he tum dono ko..baccho ki tarah zagad rahe ho..

Arjun & Riya still angrily looking to each other..

Rathod:-Riya..tum jane ki tayari karo..

Arjun:-par..

Rathod:-we don't have any choice..shree ka yaha hona zaruri he as he is technical expert..agar hame unpar attack karna pada toh chotu ka yaha hona zaruri he..

Arjun:-mein chala jauga..

Rathod:-nahi..(put his hand on her shoulder)Arjun..muze dar he ki kahi tum gusse me sab plan kharab na kardo..Riya will handle it..

After some time she get ready..& come to conference room..they all start discussing case..

Rathod:-ok Riya..tumhe samaz aa gaya he na..?

Riya:-yes sir..

Rathod:-ok go..best of luck..

Chotu & shree also wish her..

She walked towards gate of room..suddenly she look back..her eyes meet to Arjun's eyes..they stared each other for a while..she turned back & move out of room..

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Posted: 11 years ago
wht an amazing update dr.

nok jhoks btwn ariya is cute.

waaaoo arjun feels jealous.

continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
haha! both are like small kids... riya is annoyed abt the late night incident of being left on the road for asking abt his bandage... arjun is annoyed that riya is arguing with him for almost all matters... poor arjun and poor riya... i pity them in their own terms... both doesn't try to understand the other... if they did, they call it as sympathy or something else... but i am totally liking how the story is moving... please update soon! hoping for some good arjun and riya moments... both seem to be quarreling all the time... just can't wait to read more! please update soon! already excited to read more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update yr...
ariya scene at the home was funny...
omg kya nok jhoks h dono ki lol... cool arjun jealous haan
aww arjun ki fight ke piche uska concern dikh rha hai...
riya going inside the school... hope she will be safe...
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg riya is still angry about that car incident... lol dono bacche ke tarah argue kar rahe hai...

loved how arjun threatened her... arjun is getting jealous..

am happy he almost said i am ur husband!!
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She reach to the school..now it's her responsibility that they can't understand she is ETF member..

She open door of school room..in there almost 50 people are sitting with fears..most of them was 5-6 years kids..

She shout loudly "aaah"

One man comes & point a gun to her..

Man:-kaun ho tum?

Riya(act as she is shocked & feard):-mein..mein..

Man:-sahab..dekho ye ladki..

Sahab who seems to lead them..

Sahab:-aye..kya kar rahi he tu yaha..kaha se aayi..?

Riya:-mein toh..mein toh..iss school me kaam karti hu..kabse washroom me hu..par aap log kaun he..?

Sahab(angrily):-chup..sawal puchna hamara kaam he..jawab dena tumhara..samazi..?

Riya:-par..

Sahab(angrily to the man):-aye tu..?kya dekh raha he isse aise...jaise kabhi koi ladki dekhi hi na ho..

Isska icard check karo..purse check karo..

The first man check her id & purse..& throw her purse in a corner..

Sahab(hold a man from hostage..drag him to Riya):-aye bata ye ladki tumhare school me kaam karti he ya nahi..?

Man:-maine pehle isse school mein kabhi nahi dekha..

Sahab point gun to Riya..

Sahab:-kya bol raha he yeh..?tu iss school se nahi he..?

Riya:-mein toh issi school me kaam karti hu..par mein inhe nahi janti..

Man:-ek minute..ye shayad..school ke office me kaam karti he..isiliye shayad mein ne isse kabhi nahi dekha..mein  ne suna toh tha ki koi bahot kubasurat ladki 3 din pahle hi office mein appoint hui he..

Riya:-haa..toh aapne mere bare me hi suna he..aur thanks for calling me "khubsurat"

Sahab(angrily):-bas karo..aur ye batao ke humne 1 ghante se baki school ko khali kiya he..toh tum itani der washroom me kya kar rahi thi..?

Riya(act as she is blushing):-woh..mein apne boy friend se baat kar rahi thi..isiliye pata hi nahi chala ke yaha par kya ho raha he..
Sahab:-accha..aye..isaka phone check kar..
the Terrorist(take her purse & check her mobile):-haan ek gante ki baat to hui he..
Sahab snach the phone from his hand & look in it..
Sahab(to Riya):-yeh " jeet " yeh he tera boyfriend..isse baat kar rahi thi..
Riya:-haa..
(in ETF Office..Arjuns eyes fill with anger)
Sahab:- baitho..bilcul..chup rehna..

He forcibly make  to sit  Riya..

 

In ETF Office:-

They all are hearing the voices coming from the microphone given to Riya..Riya can also hear there conversation..

Arjun:-Riya..waha par kitane log he..?

 

Riya looked around..she starts counting..there are 6 terrorist, 45childerns, & 4 teachers..but how she is going to say it to her team..they make her sit..in first row..2 terrorists are standing more near to her..She start thinking..

 

Riya:-dekho tum hum sab ko chod do..itane 50 logo ko maar ke tum logo ko kya milega..par agar tumne hame chod diya..toh mein god say pray karugi ki woh tumari zindgi 6 guna bada de..plz hame chod do..

Sahab:-aye..chup..bola tha bakbak mat karana..agar fir se mu khola na toh..hamesha ke liye teri bolti band kar dunga..

She act as she feard of him & keep quite..

 

ETF Office:-

Rathod:-isaka matlab he..waha jyada se jyada 50 log honge aur 6 terrorists room me..ho sakta he ki 2-3log aur bhi ho jo dusare floor pe bhi nazar rakh rahe ho..Oh my god..She is so smart..

Arjun nodded who also impressed by her work..

Rathod (to Riya on microphone):Riya,very good work..agar hum ab unpar attack kare toh..kya aisi emergency me waha se baccho ko bahar nikal ne ke liye koi rasta he..?

 

Riya start thinking.."iss baar toh pichali bar ki taraf nahi kar sakhti kya karu..?"..she kept thinking..one lady who sitiing next to her start chatting to her..but one of the terrorists recognize it..

Terrorists(to Riya & the lady):-aye..kya bate kar raho tum dono..bola na..ki baat nahi karane ka..par ye ledies jaha bhi jaye waha gossiping suru…(now only to Riya)aye..chal tu khadi ho ja..ja udhar kone me jakar baith..

He make her sit in a corner..now she is surrounded by childerns..

The boy next to her is sobbing..

Riya:-hey..beta..tum rona mat..sab thik ho jayega..god sab kuch thik kar dega..

The boy(innocently):-kya god sachmuch hame bachene ayege..

Riya:-haa..baby..aayege..

She don't get how she is going to answer her team..suddenly she got a idea..

Riya(to the boy who is sobbing):-beta..meri mom kehti he..ki..agar hum jorase roye..toh god hamari pray jaldi sunate he..

The boy:-really..

Riya:-yes..

The boy started crying loudly..

Riya:-sir..ham 2nd floor pe he..yaha par sirf ek hi room he ..jise 2 gate he..room me 4 log he…dono gate pe 1-1 aadmi he..aur niche ke floor pe bhi 1-1 aadmi he jinhe pehale khatm karna hoga..

Arjun & all ETF team hearing her..

In the kidnapping room..

Sahab get irritated by noise made by the boy..

Sahab:-aye..chup karao usako..warna fir se kabhi ro nahi payega…

One terriorist come to the boy & shout on him..the boy become quite due to fear..

 

In ETF Office:-ok guys..Riya ne jaise hame bataya he woh log yaha par kaid he..school ka cultural hall(he is pointing to a map of school)toh ab hame 2nd floor tak pahuchna he..iske liye pahle hum in niche ke floor ke aadmiyo ko marna hoga..usake baad..room ko do door he..to Riya..jaise hum 1st door pe jo aadmi he usse marege..tum apni gun se 2nd door pe khade terrorist ko maar dena..shree usake baad tum immigiately 2nd door pe jake bachho ko bahar nikalne me Riya ki help karoge..aur chotu tum unhe sahi salamat school ke gate ke bahar tak chodoge...ye dekhkar woh Terriorists shayad baccho pe hamla kare..par woh unpe attack akre isse pehale Meinaur Arjun unpe 1st door se attack karege..jo unko busy rakhega..aur Riya sare logo ko bahar nikal sakhege..Ok..

 

 

They discuss the plan..Riya also hearing them through her microphone..

Rathod:-ok guys..toh ab hame nikalna hoga..unn logo ne "Frahad " ko chodne ke liye..2 hours ka time diya tha jis me se 1:30 hours ho chuke he..

They all leaves..

They reach to the ground floor..where a man with AK-47 is walking & staring everywhere..but before he can realize chotu break his neck from behind…on the 1st floor Shree kill the terrorist..

Now they are about to reach 2nd floor..Arjun who has also wear a microphone mutters so that Riya can hear him.."don't worry..we r here "

 

Now Riya knows anytime the firing will start..she look everywhere..& smoothly..without making any noise he take her gun which she hide in her shoes..

It was Rathod First..who fire at 1st door..suddenly Riya fired from behind to the man at 2nd door..&

Riya(loudly)come on..baccho..jaldi…jaldi bahar niklo..

She starts sending all the hostage from 2nd door where Shree is standing & helping people to come out..

The terrorists from room recognize this..but before they start firing to children..Rathod & Arjun starts firing them from 1st gate

Riya(shouting):-jaldi..jaldi..yaha se..iss gate se..

She is pushing childerns toward gate..

Sahab(shouts to his man):-inn baccho ko roko..

Before the man can shoot on children ..Riya shoot him..

Rathod shoot a terrorist who died on the spot..now there are only two remains..but they still continue fighting..

Arjun is trying to shoot Sahab..Rathod is busy with another man..& Riya is busy in sending all hostage outside..

Sahab get a chance to shoot Riya..she get hurt on her shoulder..

Arjun see this & shout.."Riyaaa…."

Rathod shoot Sahab..Arjun..who is shocked as he see Riya get shoot..come out of it with the deadful scream of Sahab..

Arjun start firing to the last man..Riya..who is holding her shoulder by another hand..is still trying to make out last remaining hostages…

Arjun kills the last terrorist..& run towards Riya..upto this time..she has also finished her work to send each Hostage safely..

Shree & Rathod also run towards her..

Arjun(hold her both hand):-Riya..tum thik ho..goli kaha ..oh shit..Shree..ambulance bulao..jaldi..

Shree start making call..

Chotu runs to them..

Chotu:-rathod sir..sab hostages ko bahar nikal diya he..Inspector patil is taking care of them..(he recognize something is wrong with Riya)Riya..sir kya hua..kya hua Riya ko..?

Rathod :-usse goli lagi he..

Shree:-sir ambulance aa rahi he..

In Ambulance:-

She is feeling that she is in very deep sleep & she don't want to wake up..but some one is calling her..but her ears don't want hear..He again call her..this time she recognize that it is very familier voice..

Arjun:-Riya..open your eyes..

She forcibly open her eyes..

She find it's Arjun..who is calling her..she can feel his hands warmness on her hand..his another hand is moving through her hairs..

Arjun(come near to her):-Riya..plz..don't loose hope..plz don't close your eyes..tumhe hosh me rehna he..talk to me..

Riya(slowly):-kya bolu?

Arjun(eagerly):-kuch bhi..kuch bhi..bas bolati raho..tumhe hospital pohchane tak hosh me rehna he..

Riya(slowly):-kamal he..jab mein bolati hu..toh aap kehte he ki mein bahot bolti hu aur kam nahi karti..ab chup hut oh aap keh rahe he bolo..

Arjun not answer her..he is looking very worried..

Riya:-sir..i  know aap kya soch rahe he..yahi na ki ye ladki ek baar fir se musibat me fas gayi..ya fir ye soch rahe he ki meine fir se ek nayi musibat ko bulava diya he..

Arjun:-nahi..mein aisa kuch nahi soch raha..

Riya:-oh…got..it..aap ye soch rahe he ..ke agar muze kuch ho gaya toh fir aapko muzse aaram se chutakara mil jayega...

Arjun:-Stop it Riya..

Riya:-par abhi to aapne muze bolne ko kaha..

Arjun:-maine tumhe marne ki baate karne ko nahi bola..

Shree who is also sitting on next side

Shree:-Ritz..aisi bate kyo kar rahi he..tuze kuch nahi hoga..

First time she get that Shree & chotu is also there..

Riya:-hey shree,chotu..tum bhi yaha ho..chotu..ab tuze koi chidayega nahi uss ladki ko lekar..mein to bilcul nahi..aur Shree..sorry yar tuze apne liye khud hi koi ladki dundani hogi..

Chotu:-Ritz..aisi baat mat kar..hum bas 10 minutes me hospital pahuch jayege..

Riya:-alright..

She look to Arjun..who is worriedly looking to her..she continue staring to him..

She again start fainting…

Arjun:-Riya..Riya..aakhein kholo..Riya..

She tried to open it again..

Arjun:-mein ne kaha na bolti raho..

Riya:-accha..sir..shree..tum logo ko aisa nahi lagta ki mein ne unn terrorists ko kitani aasani se bevkuf banaya..

Shree:-haa ..woh to he..

Chotu:-u r amazing..

Riya:-aur ek baat batao aap sab log yaha he..toh rathod sir ke sath kyon he..?sara kaam kya rathod sir khud karege?

Chotu:-nahi..woh bhi apni car se ambulance ke piche aa rahe he..aur unhone sara kam inspector patil ko sop diya he..

Riya:-oh…

Arjun get worried why she stop talking..

Arjun:-Riya..

Riya:-sir samaz me nahi aa raha ki kya bolu..aap ek baar apne"samze ya samzau" style me samazaye toh me samaz jaugi..

She smiles..Arjun also smiles..she stared at him..thinking how cute he look when he smiles..

Riya:-sir..jab..jab aap smile karate he toh…

She fainted..

Arjun:-Riya..Riya..Shree..abhi kitani der baki he hospital aane me..

Shree(looking worriedly & almost teary to Riya):-2-3 minutes sir..

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hey dr super duper fantastic updates.

riya is in danger n arjun is worried fr her.

please save riya.

i want to read more i want to read more.

why u stop at th most exciting point. 

thts not fair at all.

please continue soon.




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Posted: 11 years ago
kewl update!!!!
waah apni riya toh bahut daring and intelligent hai...loved her char!!
so Arjun cares for Riya haan...nice:)
ayyo Riyain danger now...!!!!!!want to read more...
cont soon...wil be waiting for the next update!!!:)